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Ananya

@horizontwilight

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

awesome chapter!!!!

I am getting vibes that this ff is gonna be amazing!!!

beautifully penned down!

and I must say you have managed all the characters well!!

everyone is connected with each other properly!!

Seriously telling I am an anti-hindi-serial watcher!

so I am only addicted to MaNan!

no one else at all!

but then also I loved what you wrote!!

just superb!!

go for it!

thanks for the pm!

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diya

@diyaNarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Nice yaar

So cute they all

Are look good

Together

Yaah the house is

Really very haunted

And the way

you Express each and

every emotions

It's really amazing

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting

for next part

Love

Diya😛😛😛

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jai18

@jai18

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Prologue was damn good! ( nandini style 😛 )

The update was equally awesome 👍🏼

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Arunima

@jesse93

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Very very nice start dear,
loved it a lot.

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Tishyy

@Tishyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

That is one good start ... Just read the character sketch and first chapter ...
It looks so promising and I am sure this one will be damm interesting and full of mystery
I had goose bumps while reading Nyo Nd Garima's convo ... I'm just so excited what would happen now
Gal you have a very awesome plot and I am sure you are planning to scare the hell out of us ...
Wishing you all the best

Edited by Tishyy - 10 years ago

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Wow...
Awesome update...
Girls packing...then the boys ...hehehe
Haunted palace...
Very interesting...
Thnkz 4 the pm

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anya

@anya21

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

there r so many characters, which r my fav...

nd haunting story...

yupee ...

i love those kind of stories...

wtng 4r d nxt part...

update soon...

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Sandy&Kavya

@parthholic

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Okay!! Firstly I don't know any characters accept Fab 5 NavNi Aryaman Abhi and Nyo!! But no worries i will try my best and see who they are and no fear when google is there!! Okay okay enough!! I like the first chapters bonding between the characters and I am sorry for replying late!! But next time i will try and comment fast!!