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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Hey
Some of the characters are my Favourite ( But MaNan are always the best )

Interesting prologue

Looking forward to read the next part
Cont soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Hey please give manan more..nice start
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Very very interesting n mysterious...
All my fav characters in one story...superb...
Eager to read more...
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woah woah woah! What a concept boss! Love how you joint the lives of the different television characters together! Plsss continue it soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woowww..interesting yrrr 😉 ...full on dark, nasty & scary types... 😆
And arshi & manan being my all Tim favourite makes it even more interesting for me yrr..
Thanx for bring 4 of them together in one story 😊
And thanx for pm too
Continue soon dear.
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb concept
loved how you included all the current and past favourites in this ff
can't wait to read more
update soon and keep up the good work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Character Sketch

Manik (The Greek God) - A 24yr old, He could be called the dream of every girl, with all the perfection in him, no girl could stop falling for him. But for him, his passion for love was only for Nandini. Yes ! he was hopelessly romantic, his eyes were full of passion ! He was guy who cracked sarcastic jokes joining his friends, who was so much of positivity, a true friend and an amazing brother. He shared an amazing bond with his twin brother Abheer.

Cabir (The Sarcastic) - A 25yr old, The prankster, if he joins Abheer then no one can stop from being tricked ! Cabir has always his own way in getting things done ! He was a guy who pitied on people who were madly in love, until he found her... Navya, his only MADHUBALA !

Dhruv (The Talkative) - A 24yr old, the most talkative person among the boys ! This behavior of his always lands him up in trouble. But, still he never learns from it. He is the most weirdly boyfriend in the whole planet according to his girlfriend Alya, he never believes in turning up on time which irritates her the most ! Yet he has the most funniest ways of making her laugh!

Abhimanyu (The Optimistic) - A 24yr old, who never leaves a single moment to make everyone happy with his never ending cheesy talks ! He is Nandini's cousin and shares and great bond of friendship with her, which made him land up between all the engineer people. He has always had a soft corner towards Mukti. He is the one and only guy who brought Mukti back to life after her breakup with Harshad.

Aryaman (The Broken) -A 25yr old, He is a guy who was always happy, but as the colour of his relation with Soha, his first love started fading way, he started becoming a quiet and mysterious guy with a lot to say and share but is restricted by the own boundaries he created.

Arnav (The Shy) - A 27yr old, business man who has climbed the success of ladder in such a short span of time. He is a reserved and shy type of guy, who believes in talk less and work more, and keeps on lecturing Dhruv when he always ends up trouble. He has never let his friends realise that he was their boss. He found his soulmate in Khushi, who is exact opposite to him.

Swayam (The Lover Boy) - A 23yr old, , he is a simple guy with hidden qualities who also is a brilliant dancer. Everyone is aware about the soft corner Swayam has for Sharon. In spite of being humiliated more than thousand times by Sharon, he never stops his attempts in impressing her. He considers Manik as his love guru, and has constantly been trying to make Sharon his.

Randhir (The Arrogant) - A 25yr old, He shares a very bad relationship with his mother Renuka Sanyal whom he even refuses to speak to as she was too busy in his childhood to spend time with him. He is rude, arrogant but possesses a heart of gold and can go to any extent to protect the one he loves. He bickers a lot with Sanyukta and always tries to prove her wrong but end up falling in love with her.

Abheer (The Playboy) - A 24yr old, He is happy- go- lucky person unlike his brother Manik, who is sensitive. He always plays around pulling others legs, and tricking others with Cabir is something that is a part of his daily routine. Once a weak student in studies, Abheer falls in love with Meher, who was the topper in his class. He may make fun of relations, but he can never stand someone insulting his friends, brother, or Meher.

Arjun (The Unromantic) - A 26yr old, Suave businessman, He is a cool and calm casanova who dislikes women and refuses to believe that 'someone somewhere is made for you until he met Arohi. He is Arnav's soul brother and business partner and has always stood by him in difficult times. After falling in love with Arohi, he attends Manik's love guru classes along with Swayam as Arohi considers him "Unromantic".

Nandini (The Traditional) - A 23yr old, she was a mix of simplicity and traditionalism. A young hard- working girl who had to power to capture a crowd's attention with her idealistic views. She could be called the most lucky girl in the gang, as she had Manik with her, to share her sorrows and happiness.

Navya (The Dreamer) - A 25yr old, She is a girl with full of dreams, she always loves being in her own Alice and Wonderland. She can be called the most stupid in the group as she can be easily tricked. But, the fact is, the most brilliant Cabir always gets caught by her. Her unconditional love for movies gained her the name MADHUBALA.

Mukti (The Angry bird) - A 23yr old, She is an angry young women. After being cheated by Harshad, Mukti almost lost herself to Anti-depression pills. That's when she joined Build World Lmtd. and met Abhimanyu.

Alya (The Barbie Doll) - A 24yr old, Sweet girl, she is a typical girl, who always boasts about her boyfriend and busy in gossip. She loves shopping, and her world revolves around accessories and makeup.

Khushi (The Fashionsta) - A 26yr old, With a life full of luxuries where Khushi has got everything she desired, she believes only in the best and has never settled for anything mediocre. With all the money and brands at her behest, she is a little stubborn and has no clue of budgeting or managing finances. She is a complete opposite to Arnav to is far more matured than her.

Sharon (The Spoil brat) - A 23yr old, She is a veritable spoilt-rich-kid, Sharon is actually Sharanjeet Kaur. Like many things in her life, her name is also designed to get attention. Daddy''s girl, she's had mostly everything go her own way. Even though she has unknown feelings for Swayam deep inside, she always tries to suppress it and act like he meant nothing to her. Insulting Swayam is her way to hide her feeling inside herself.

Sanyukta (The Head Strong) - A 24yr old, She comes from a family where the girl is only meant to get married and be a housewife, mother, and a daughter in law. She is very smart and inspirational, she has reached heights in her career due to her head strong attitude.

Meher (The Hard-working) - A 24yr old, She is a hard- working girl, coming from a middle class family, Meher has always tried her level best to give all the facilities her mother wanted, and has always tried to stand up to her family's expectations. Once a topper, Meher fell in love with her class backbencher Abheer who carefree and jovial unlike her.

Arohi (The Soft-spoken) - A 25yr old, Simple rooted in family and is driven by a clear moral compass. She stands for what she believes in, and never lets go of her inculcated values. She will not change herself to conform to peoples shallow expectations. She is righteous, intelligent but slightly naive at the same time.

Riddhima - She is Khushi's sister, unlike Khushi who is quite materialistic, Riddhima is different. She loves keeping herself lonely and hardly speaks to people. She is quite mysterious, and lives in the dark side of her life.

I'm glad about ur responses, i'm personally too exited ...!

I would mostly like to focus on Ky2 cast so, other characters character sketch some what from IndiaForums itself ! I guess u can understand ! Coz this is Ky2 forum 😃😃😃 1st chapter update will be soon, as I'm working on it 😃


Again thank u alll 😃


Edited by SaraSharon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sara!! A new ff!! Yaay congrats!!! I am a die hard fan of horror thriller and supernatural stuffs!! Hoping for the best!! Make me proud!! Characters were beautifully described...
Edited by parthholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1

It was dark stormy dawn, with fox's howl increasing each and every passing minute. Storm was taking away with it the pretty white snowflakes that mounted the dry ground. It was 5 in the morning and none even dared to walk through the way of Rani Mahal.

Once a brightly lit up big cottage, now Rani Mahal was dark and faded. Howling had become just like a bird's song in and near the surrounding of the bungalow, as even birds terrified being around this Bungalow. Unknown screams, cries and talks was so usual making the Bungalow so unfit for living. Being locked for 15 long years, Rani Mahal was known for to be haunted with occasional appearance of mysterious people.

@ Rani Mahal

Tic- tok - tic, the only audible noise in the big room was of the clock hitting. Cold vibes shivered her thoughts making her toss from her bed. She walked off her room only to see her elder sister who was in her middle 50's reading a magazine in the luxurious hall.

"Garima Dii" Nyonika jerked, seeing her sister in the hall which was quite unexpected.

Garima turned to see Nyonika who's face had perfect expressions of terribleness. Garima went not to interfere Nyonika and let her complete her interrogation which was indeed expected.

"Aap soye nahi ?" Nyonika shot her question against Garima.

"Neend nahi aaya" Garima said coldly.

"Aapse baat karni hai mujhe" Nyonika continued and Garima just hummed.

"Aapko seriously lagta hai ki hume Khushi ki shaadhi iss ghar mein karni chahiye ? Coz I don't feel so its perfect" she stated her point against Garima's decision on choosing this house as the wedding venue.

"Just because you can't overcome your fear you think I will shift the venue Nyo?" Garima again said in a perfect cold tone.

"It's not because I can't overcome my fear, I because this house is actually haunted !" Nyonika tried defending herself.

"This house costs approximately 1crore ! And it has been shut for 15 long years ! You really think I would keep it shut for even long and waste my money ? Nevertheless you believe in such stupid thoughts just like these commoners here, it doesn't mean I will change my decision at this point of wedding !" Garima threw her utmost attiude and answered Nyonika.

"Dii, this house is not fit for any sort of auspicious occasions ! It's not just the commoners... I do feel the blood smell !" Nyonika tried proving her point.

"I hope you haven't forgotten we have closed the discussion on this topic ! Better you not get interested in my decision Nyo" Garima was now warning Nyonika.

"And as of incidents people and you believe, don't forget Riddhima has been living here for quite a while now and she hasn't experienced any sort of such rubbish ! Things are not as you and your so called "Panditji" think. And allow me to take decisions regarding my children Nyo" Garima said and walked back to her room, leaving a helpless Nyonika behind.

@Silver Apartment,Floor 21, Mumbai

"Sharon... Kya tumne mera hair comb dekha hai ?" A pretty girl around 23 shouted from the left side of the bedroom.

"Offo Nandu ! Why don't you always keep a check on your stuff ?" an angry Sharon replied Nandini, as it was the 15th time Nandini was asking her about her so called "stuff".

"Relax Sharon ! Relax ! vaise bhi Manik ke alava Nandu uski koi cheez ka dhyaan nahi rakhta !" Mukti cracked her line and all the girls in the room broke out to laughter, except Nandini who was now folding her hands and giving her deadly glare to all !

"Mukti ...! Tumhe nahi lagta Abhimanyu ka kuch zyada hi asar tumpe pad rahi hai" Nandini gave tit for tat answer, changing the topic "Manik" and hiding her embarrassment.

"Very true...! Yeh baat bhi sahi hai" Meher quipped in covering up Nandini.

"Malhotras ki bacchi ek hogayi !" Navya cracked her piece of joke and gave Mukti a hi-5

"Shut up people !!!!" a girl shouted and as expected it was none other than Alya.

"I again lost my count on my nail polishes" an agitated Alya continued.

"And if it continues like this, then don't blame for reporting late at the bus !" now Alya was threatening her friends to shut their mouth.

"Alya ! don't worry yeh lok baakwas nahi karega. Tum apna kaam continue karo" a pleasant sound intervened them, hearing the melodious apology any one could guess it was Arohi who was talking.

"Dekho its almost 5:45am ! aaj 10 baje we have to leave, stop gossiping and get back to work naa!" and this was Sanyukta completing the girls gang that was present in the room.

Getting a check on time, all girls again started getting engrossed in their works of packing. Suddenly Nandini was struck by the thought of Manik.

"Manik ne packing kiya hoga, ya nahi ? I hope ki woh apna saara saaman rakhe ! Vaise woh packing mein bohot bura hai...! Kya karro ??? Aiyappa ! Phonne ...! Nahi... so raha hoga. No he can't sleep, agar packing complete nahi hai toh ..! I need to call him" Nandini kept on murmuring to herself.

She took her phone and started dialing Manik's number.

@Silver Apartment,Floor 24, Mumbai

A tall handsome, with Greek god features were lying on the bed, and having his sound sleep while his sleep was disturbed by continuous rings on his phone. Yet, after continuous rings he wasn't in any mood to attend the phone, as he did not see the caller ID.

Suddenly a guy comes and taps on his shoulders "Manik ! Manik...! Your phone is ringing ...! Uth naa ! Nandini ka phone hai !" even before Arjun could complete Manik had jumped off his bed and snatched the phone from his hand.

"Hello ...! Meri Jaan" Manik tried covering up himself for not attending her calls.

"Kon Jaan ?! Manik, kabse I'm trying your phone aur tum kyu phone nahi uthaya?" Nandini started her KBC session with Manik.

"Woh me so raha tha" Manik answered innocently, only to anger Nandini who was on the other side of the phone.

"You were sleeping ? Manik kyaaa ! tumne apna packing kiya? I had given you that list naa ! list mein tumhara important things hai , according to the list sab kuch rakha tumne" Nandini has become impatient.

"Chill Nandu...! Meri baat sun" even before Manik could complete he realized Meher had snatched the phone from Nandini and she now ordering Manik to give the phone to Abheer.

Abheer tries to escape but then Manik stops him "Bro ! Kaha bhaag raha hai ? Pata doon Meher ko ?" hearing Manik's words Abheer punched him and took the phone.

Manik was about to leave when tall lean boy pulled him towards the cupboard. "Buddy ! Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai which to choose. Pata nahi Sharon ko konsa dress pasand aayega ! Sab rakhdoo" the boy asked Manik with a confused face. Yes the boy was Swayam. Manik could not control his laughter and started laughing out "Arrre pagal ! usse tujhe pasand karna hai ya tere dress ko ? Koi problem nahi na agar woh tere tshirts ke saath ek relation mein ho" Manik taunted Swayam. Hearing Manik's taunt, someone was really impressed, who else it could be other than Cabir, "Manik ! great job ... Mera assar pad raha hai tujpe" Cabir commented, only for Dhruv to reply in the ever stupid manner "Manik ne toh sahi bola na ! iss mein khush hone ki baat kya hai ? Waise Swayam, ladkiyon ko shirtless ladke pasand hai, so I suggest ki tum clothes hi na rakho, whats say guys" Dhruv turned to others for support, but like every time he sounded as stupid as possible.

"Chup kar ! Saale" Abhimanyu shushed him. "Boyz ! I think hume ab packing karna hai, coz Arnav ne mujhe 17th time call kar rahe hai, hamare preparations ke baareme pooch ne ke liye" Randhir said, and all went to pack their stuff.

"Waise, uska tension dekh ke mujhe lagta hai ki aaj uska suhaag raat hai" Abheer joined the boys after he had finished with Meher's scolding sessions.

"Aryaman, tub hi kuch bol" Abheer commented, to which he just got a smile. Aryaman had changed a lot after Soha had ditched him.

@Rani Mahal, 9:00pm

Garima - Teja, sab kuch tayyar hai na ? Khushi ki doston athe honge. I don't want any mess in the last moment.

Teja (Servant) - Rani sa, aaj bachon ko hotel mein rehna teekh hoga. Bahot der ho gaya aur yaha itne der aana hume teekh nahi lag raha hai. (Said in a polite tone)

Garima - Naukar ko apne jagah hona chahiye. Just go according to my orders.

"Mom", a girl shouted and came to Garima. "Kya hua mere beta" Garima asked her with utmost care. "Mom dekho na, this dress ! Its colour combination sucks. Call the designer no itself and ask him for a change" Khushi, Garima's elder daughter said.

"Sure, my princess. Anyways, your friends will be here at any moment na?" Garima tried diverting the topic.

"Yep mom! They will be picking Arnav and then be here" Khushi exclaimed with joy.

"Pretty good Nyonika came joining the Mom- Daughter duo.

"Hooonk Hooonk" all the 3 were disturbed by the honk outside.

"Ohhh god ! they are here" Khushi started jumping with happiness as her friends were here to celebrate her marriage.

Outside Rani Mahal

"Woohoo, what a Jovinisilating place" Dhruv commented seeing the big and Palace like features of Rani Mahal.

"What ? Jovinisilating ? What does that mean ?" Cabir asked hearing Dhruv use such big words.

"God knows ! Anyways it's a heavy word na so just used. How is it?" Dhruv had started off with his foolishness, which made the girls laugh, except Alya.

"Dhruv, Please do behave yourself in front of Khushi's relatives" Randhir reminded him, to which Dhruv frowned.

Teja suddenly came and opened the huge gate of Rani Mahal, and the driver was about to drive when a big tree fell off, restricting them go any further.

Nandini clushted tightly to Manik's shirt, at the sudden jerk of the bus. Manik just smiled and caught her tightly.

"What the hell !" Sharon screamed with the sudden jerk of the bus.

"Relax Sharon, its just a tree. It fell down" Swayam tried consoling her.

"What? Just a tree, you actually don't know it almost took my breath" Sharon continued and Swayam was out of words.

Manik saw the situation between the duo getting worst and gestured Swayam to back off.

Teja - Rani saaa ! { Shouted on top of his voice}

Garima, Khshi and Nyonika ran towards the gate hearing voices.

"What is happening here ?" Garima frowned.

"See this was to happen" Nyonika commented to which Garima gave her deadly glare.

"Not at this point of time Nyo" Garima spoke with a cold tone in her voice.

Khushi waved to her friends and started blushing hard after seeing Arnav.

"Awww ! Yaha romance shuru" Cabir commented.

"Chup kar sale" Arnav bet hard on Cabir, which made other laugh.

"Mujhe lagta hai, yeh lok ped(tree) ko kood ke aana chahiye" a girl said with utmost coldness in her voice.

"What an idea Riddi" Khushi appreciated her little sister Riddhima.

She was a pretty girl in a single glance. Her hair flying in the cold wind of the weather, calmness in her attitude.

She was not gone unnoticed by Aryaman, who was watching the whole scene in silence.


This is the first update people...! hope you all like it ... Sorry for the delay.

Please do post ur valuable comments and suggestions

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Nice start
With my fav couples ❤️

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