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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 11 B


"I am sorry..!!"Manik said crying like a kid. Nandini composed herself because she knew if she will cry then it will become impossible for her to control Manik. She need to be strong.


"Mani..!! Kya ho gya baby..!! Tum tou itny strong ho..!! Then why are you crying..!"Nandini said lovingly and patted his head.


"Main haar raha hoon Nandini..!! I am losing..!! It feels main bilkul bhi strong nahi hoon..!! I am losing it..!!"Manik was still crying hiding his face in Nandini's lap just like a two year old kid.


"No..!! You are not losing it Mani..!! You are strong..!! Tmhy pta hai..!! Why I am alive in spite of those four long years..!! You know why are you alive? Why we both are alive?"Nandini said lovingly and Manik look at her she was smiling.


"Why?"He asked in a babyish tone.


"Because kahen na kahen we both had a hope in corners of our heart that we will meet someday..!! That hope na Manik..!! Unknowingly helped us both to live..!! Mani..!! Haan I know that we can't just delete those four years from our lives but at least we can start everything with a happy note..!!"Nandini explained lovingly and Manik had stopped crying. Nandini again wiped his tears.


"Tum mery sath ho na?"Manik asked holding her hands tightly.


"I am with you Mani HAMESHA..!! Tum meri aur Manvi ki strength ho..!! We both are totally dependent on you..!! Tum he kamzoor par jaoa gay tou hamara kya ho ga?"Nandini said smilingly and Manik nodded.


"I love you..!!"Manik whispered near the corner of her lips and she without any further delay fused her lips with him for a promising kiss.

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"Chacho..!! These ale(are) Donteys(donkeys)..!!"Manvi once again shouted angrily and Cabir palmed his face. After leaving Malhotra Mansion Cabir came to Zoo with Manvi and they both were enjoying alot.They both painted their face from a painter. Cabir had rockstar written on his cheek. While Manvi had written princess on her cheek. Then Manvi asked to eat an ice cream and so they were licking ice cream they came across the cage of Monkeys. Manvi became excited seeing them.


"Look Chacho..!! Donteys(donteys)..!"She exclaimed and run towards the cage. Cabir who was smiling all the time his smile faded away as soon as he heard Manvi calling Donkeys to Monkeys.


"Baby doll..!! These are not donkeys..!! These are monkeys..!!"Cabir said lovingly and stood beside Manvi who was busy in waving to Monkeys. She gave Cabir a deadly glare as if telling him that he was wrong.


"You ale wlong(you are wrong)..!!"She said angrily. From last 10 minutes they both were fighting on it. Cabir was trying to make Manvi realize that those were monkeys.


"Baby doll..!! I am saying the truth..!! Ask these monkeys..!! They are monkeys..!!"Cabir once again tried to clear his point.


"Uff Chacho..!! Ab ko na kuch bhi nai pata..!!"She said angrily slapping her forehead. "Animals can't talk..!!"She told sadly and Cabir wanted to laugh loudly but he controlled. "They can't talk..!! How will they tell that they ale(are) Monteys(monkeys)..!!"She again said angrily and Cabir sighed. So many people were standing there and watching the Chacho Bhateji duo fighting.


"Baby..!! These are monkeys and that's final..!! Now come..!!"Cabir said as if trying to sort out the fight but Manvi was not just Manvi she was THE MANIK MALHOTRA's daughter.


"No..!! I will not come..!! Pehly ap mano that these ale(are) Donteys(donkeys)..!!"She said angrily crossing her arms on her chest and turned her face. Cabir look at her and again sighed. "Why are you forgetting Cabir that she is Manik's daughter..!! As stubborn as Manik..!"Cabir thought helplessly.


"Ok..!!! Sorry..!!"Cabir accepted his defeat but still he didn't said that those were donkeys. Manvi look at him angrily and shook her head.


"Sholly not accepted Cabeel Chacho..!! Pehly ap bolo jo myny bola..!!"She said angrily.


"Baby..!! These are monkeys..!! I can't lie..!!"Cabir said naughtily.


"Tou I am also not coming..!!"Manvi said angrily and sat on a near by bench. Manvi's mood was really flopped now. Cabir thought of an idea and went away to start his idea. Although Manvi was angry with Cabir but she look here and there to find Cabir she was nowhere. Suddenly he came in front of her and there were lots of kids of her age with him. Suddenly Cabir started a random song and Manvi look at him angrily


Chaka Raka Chi Chai Cho Chaka Lo Rum
Gando Vando Laka Raka Tum
Akko Takko Iddi Giddi Giddi Go
Iddi Pai Vidi Pai Chiki Chaka Cho

(Cabir sang patting the heads of all kids..!! Manvi look at him cofusingly and all kids laugh Cabir too laughed with them)


"Shhh...!!"Cabir shushed all kids but Manvi was very angry.


Dekho Dekho Kya Woh Ped Hai

(Cabir sat beside Manvi and pointed towards a tree..! She turned her face)

Chadar Ode Ya Khada Koi

(Cabir came in front of her and pointed toward a kid who was standing there wrapped in a shawl)

Dekho Dekho Kya Woh Ped Hai
Chadar Ode Ya Khada Koi

(Cabir repeated the same gestures and Manvi turned her face again)

Baarish Hai Ya Aasmaan Ne
Chod Diye Hai Nal Khule Kahin

(Cabir splashed some water on Manvi from a nearby fountain and this time she smiled)

Hum Jaise Dekhe Yeh Jahaan Hai Waisa Hi
Jaisi Nazar Apni

(Cabir sang and Manvi jumped of the bench...!!He kneeled in front of her and held his ears..! Asking for forgiveness..)

Khul Ke Sochein Aao

(Cabir dragged Manvi in side the kid's crowd and all jumped with them)

Pankh Zara Phailaao

(Cabir stretched his arms. Manvi and all kids copied him..!)

Rang Naye Bikhrao

(All jumped and clapped with Cabir and Manvi)

Chalo Chalo Chalo Chalo
Naye Khwaab Bun Le

(Cabir made a train of kids which was lead by Manvi and they all run here and there in the zoo..!! All parents were looking at the smiling at them..!! Most of the people recognized Cabir..!)


Bum Bum Bolemasti Mein Dole
Bum Bum Bolemasti Mein Tu Dol Re Hey
Bum Bum Bolemasti Mein Dole

(Cabir danced crazily. Manvi was now very much happy and she was laughing with all the kids. All kids joined Cabir. And at the end they all hugged Cabir and he fell on the floor with the kids.)


"I love you Chacho..!!"Manvi said to Cabir as she was now riding on Cabir's shoulders and they were coming out of the zoo.


"I love you too Chacho ki jaan..!!"Cabir said smilingly. "Bhook lagi hai meri doll ko?"


"Yes..!! I am hungly(hungry)..!! But main Mama Papa kay sath khaoan ge..!!"Manvi said happily. "Chacho Mama Papa pass jana hai..!!"she said softly. Cabir smiled and nodded.


"Abhi chalty hain Mama Papa pass..!!"Cabir said and they both sat in car and drove back to Malhotra Mansion.

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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 11 C


Nandini was busy in kitchen and Manik was still beside pool side. He was much relaxed now and was busy in composing some new symphonies. Nandini was time to time looking at him from kitchen window wether he was ok or not? Manik was very well knew of her gaze which was very much comfortable for him. Suddenly two tiny hands palmed his eyes and he smiled knowing that his doll was back. Although Manik was sitting on the floor but still Manvi was standing on her toes to reach his eyes.


"Guess who?"She exclaimed and Cabir sat beside Manik. ManBir smiled on her cuteness.


"Umm..!! I don't know..!! Kon aa gya?"Manik acted like he didn't knew anything. Manvi laughed excitedly and came in front of him.


"Booohh..!!"She tried to scare Manik and he acted like he was really scared. Manvi again laughed loudly at her success that she succeeded. "Papa haal (haar) gye..!! Mano jeet gai..!!"Manvi shouted excitedly. She clapped and jumped on her place. ManBir too clapped for her to appreciate and now her face was glowing with victory.


"Acha..!! Idar aoa na Papa kay pass..!!"Manik said lovingly and pull her in his lap. She hugged Manik and kissed his cheek. "Mery baby nay kya kya kiya?"Manik asked caressing her cheek.


"Ap ko pta hai Papa..!! Me and Cabeel Chacho went to zoo..!! Wahan itnyyy shary(sary) animals thay..!!"She told Manik and stretched her arms to emphasize that they really saw so many animals.


"Acha?"Manik asked lovingly.


"G..!! And wahan we saw cage of donteys..!! And Cabeel Chacho is saying that those were monteys..!!"Once again Manvi was back on that fight.


"Manik..!! Main sachi bool raha hoon..!! Wo monkeys ka cage tha...!!"Cabir said sadly and Manik understood that Cabir was right but how could he let his daughter down.


"Oye Cabir..!! Jab meri princess bool rahi hai kay wo donkeys thay tou wo donkeys he thy..!!"Manik said angrily and the smile on Manvi's face was priceless. She clinged to Manik and showed her tongue to Cabir. Cabir acted like he was scared. Manik winked at Cabir and he winked back. Manvi was about to say something when Nandini came with the juices for all. She put the tray on the table.


"Mama ki jaan aa gai?"Nandini said and sat beside Manik. Manvi hopped in her arms and hugged her tightly. Nandini gave the juice glasses to ManBir and one glass to Manvi. All were talking and laughing together when suddenly Manik noticed Manvi's cheek which was painted. It was all red now. He put the glass back in tray and leaned closer to see her cheek.


"Nandini..!! Look na..!! Her cheek is red..!!"Manik said worriedly. CabiNi too look at her cheek.


"Oh God..!! I didn't noticed it..!! Manvi is allergic with this face painting and

all..!!"Suddenly Nandini panicked and Manik felt his heart stopped beating. He can't bear a little scratch on his love and here her whole cheek was red. Cabir became embarrass.


"Sorry..!! I didn't knew it..!! Warna main kbhi bhi face painting na karwata..!!"Cabir said in a low voice.


"It's ok Cabir..!!"Manik said smilingly.


"Chalo doctor kay pass..!!"Manik said and picked up Manvi in his arms.


"Papa it's paining..!!"Now it was hurting Manvi.


"Abhi hum doctor kay pass jayen gay na then everything will be fine..!!"Manik said running towards his car while Cabini too followed him. They all reached to doctor in no time.


"So..!! What's the matter with this sweet girl..!!"Doctor asked smilingly as Manvi was sitting in Manik's lap. While Cabini were standing beside Manik.


"Doctor..!! Wo actually my daughter is allergic with this face painting..!! But we forgot..!! Ab usy allergy ho gai hai..!! We need your help..!!"Manik explained and tried his best to keep himself calm.


"No worries Mr.Malhotra..!! Bachon ki skin bohat sensitive hoti hai it happens..!! I will write prescription..!! Just take care of your doll..!!"Doctor said smilingly. Doctor was about to write prescription but to fill the prescription paper he must be known of the girl's name so he turned towards Manvi. "What's your name sweet heart..!!"Doctor asked patting her cheek.


"Manvi Malhotra..!! Mama mjy Mano bulati hain..!! Papa jaan bulaty hain and Cabeel Chacho baby doll..!! Aul(aur) I am Papa's stlong(strong) baby..!! "She explained in a serious tone and Doctor smiled. MaNanBir in spite of tension smiled. After buying medicine MaNanBir came back home.


"Meri princess nay khana khaya?"Manik asked sitting on the dining table for lunch with Manvi in his lap. Cabir too sat beside him.


"Bhai bola tha teri princess ko kha lay khana but she said no Mama Papa sath kahaon ge..!!"Cabir said laughingly and Manvi made a face. Nandini served the food to three of them. Manik feed Manvi and she kept munching quietly. While MaNanBir were talking to each other.


"I must say Nandini..!! Tum khana aj bhi utna he acha bnati ho..!!"Cabir said smilingly.


"Thanks Cabir..!! Ya sweet dish try karo na?"Nandini too replied smilingly and offered him the sweet dish. Manvi was sleepily rubbing her eyes now. Nandini noticed it and picked up Manvi from Manik's lap to make her sleep. Moreover she had to apply the medicine on her cheek.


"Mano..! Thora dard ho ga..!!"Nandini said applying medicine on Manvi's cheek. After applying medicine Nandini cuddled Manvi in her arms and she instantly dozed off. Nandini tucked her carefully in bed and came out after switching off the light. ManBir were sitting in the lounge.


"So gai?"Manik asked as Nandini sat beside him.


"Haan..!! Thak gai the..!"Nandini too replied smilingly.


"Phr kaisa raha Nayonika say face off..!!"Cabir said smilingly.


"Cabir..!! Let's just not talk about this please..!!"Manik said sadly.


"Ok Bro..!!"Cabir said patting his shoulder. They kept talking to each other after sometime Cabir left. And MaNan too went in their room for a nap.

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Chapter 11 is done..!! I hope you all will like it..!! Thanks for your immense love and support..!! Means a lot..!! I hope you all are satisfied with Nanyonika thing..!! Let me know by your comments..!! Love you all..!! First song is tum hi ho..!! Second in bum bum bole..!! Manvi was extra cute ni? Hahaha..!! Ok enough of my buk buk..!! Keep smiling..!! Keep shining for your love ones..!!

Lots of Love..

Mawara

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow
beautiful
amazing
no words to define
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Posted: 10 years ago
Simply amazing..
Manik ne finally neonika ko ghar sebahar fek dis.. Acha Kia..
Cabir n manvi donkey monkey wala scene was hilarious.. Haha..
Continue soon dear..
Bye.. Tc..
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update
loved it
nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome hope the next update is sooner
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice and strong and cute for manvi😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow very nice chapter that zoo wala scene and manvi, cabir and the kids screen was very very nice...
everything was perfect again
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyonika kicked out

And Manik didn't panic like before. It's progress
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Posted: 10 years ago
So finally we got update...
Update was awesome dear...

Manik loves his daughter upto core...
Manik and nyonikas face off was must...
And it was heart wrenching to see...that nandini got through the same...

And manvi...hahaha donkeys...
Same stubbornness like Manik...
I really love her character so so so much...
And cabir...i am so overwhelmed to see his care towards manvi...
Just perfect in relations...


And nyonika...she deserves to be in this situation ...btt I wish all to settle sooon...

True said...love cures everything...



U penned it so beautifully...

Keep updating...
Loves and regards...
God bless uhhh
Edited by yash7717 - 10 years ago

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