manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 8

Very nice update it was..!!

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

nandini is so cooo l

manik tough time handling his emotions

wow next update soon pls

Originally posted by: HTA111

Nicely depicted fantastic update

Finally manik get to know about Nandu but her secret life is still hidden from him which will be revealed soon as sooner or later she will get caught by him

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Loved the update!!

Originally posted by: yashu_varshney

Very nice update it was..!!

Very interesting..

And so many questions are there..

Why nandini behaved rude to fab 5 when she come to know they are from mumbai..??

Why she told them to follow rules and herself broke them..??

Who was the person she said love u>??

And who was the guy standing waiting for her??

Oh god is she in a relationship??

Plz no..

Thanks for the pm..

And continue soon..

Keep writing..

Stay blessed..

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

very nice update...😊

but what happened to nandini all of a sudden??why was she acting so rude??

lets see whats the reason behind this😊

thanx for pm dear

update soon

tc😊

Originally posted by: parthnitiholics

<font size="4">OMGGG SOO MANY QUES...</font>

<font size="4">M SORY I WAS NOT AWARE AS I SAW IN SHOW ABT MANGLORE...M WRITING IT...😆</font>

<font size="4">N I ONLY KNOW HINDI AND ENGLISH THATS Y M WRITING IN THAT..LOL😆</font>

<font size="4">WOW U NO KANNADA..THATS NICE</font>

<font size="4">THNX FOR APPRICIATING MY FF SO0 MUCH😳</font>

oh no no..u dont need to b sorry sakshi!! Its okay..i understand...i too kno only hindi english n kannada which is my mother tongue...v kno our own lang. n dont kno other lang. that's normal!! So yeah no need to be sorry...:)))
anytime:)))
continue soon:)))

😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

oh no no..u dont need to b sorry sakshi!! Its okay..i understand...i too kno only hindi english n kannada which is my mother tongue...v kno our own lang. n dont kno other lang. that's normal!! So yeah no need to be sorry...:)))
anytime:)))
continue soon:)))

Recap-fab 5 saw nandini sneaking out of gurukul...

Part 4

c-are yeh ho kya rha hai..gurukul mein rules tod rha h koi..infact khud guruma ki granddaughter..or hm to students hai...

he smerk...evryone give smile...dey all throw the saree rope down and climbed one by one and warned rama not to tell this to anyone...

rama nodded unbleiving once fab 5 were all down-ayipaa..tanna to bach jaiegi..in logo kya hoga...he shok his head and went to his room...

fab 5 saw nandini..running with a boy..in her full spead...

m-guyzz wo rahi...lets c...sneak out krke kaha jari h..ho skta h ..pub kya disk...

dey all follow her...nandini stop and turn she thought someone is following her...she saw...a shadow of a someone...she shush the guy with her..and hide behind a tree...cabir sneak out of the place dey were hiding to look at nandini

c-abe vo gayab ho gayi..

all-kya...

they all come out..and started seachig for her..then nandnini saw..its fab 5..who was following her...

m-kaha chli gayi...

mu-cabir..age dekh k aa...

n(slowly)-in logo ko to mi kal dekh lungi...chhodungi nahi..she slowly took other way and run from there...leaving fab 5 searching for her

nandini's side

guy-nandu bht late rhe h..ye rasta to or b lamba hai...

n-mgr rohit hm waha se nhi ja skte the u no na...

then a car came ..the windows pull down a guy was sitting in car..nandu and rohit both sit in car...and car run from there

n-thnx sagar...agya tu verna aj to bht late ho jate..jldi chl ab..sirf 10 mint bache hai 12 bajne mi...

Fab5's side

c-yr ye to aise gayab ho gyi jaise bhoot ho...

mu-chl yr hm nikal ae hai.to manglore ki night lights b dekh lete hai..yaha kuch h b kin hi...

dey all laugh and throw gprs started searching...

nandini's side...

the trio reach a house...dey secretly sneak in the house...there were 15 small children in the house...nandini signal them abt someone..dey all indicated...and all slowly move towards the direction ..it was 5 sec left for 12...dey count on theirfingers..and all shouted

all-happy birthday rishabbb...wohooo...sagar and rohit make sound with bday booper...al started clapping...jumping...for rishab...

a small little guy..whose bday it is..for whom nandu run from her house...just to make his bday...

rishab run towards nandu...nandu kneel down and hug him-happy bday my baby..she kiss on on his cheeks...

all the 15 kinds and rishab hug nandu with their small arms...while sagar and rohit..get cake for rishab...nandu arrangrd wafers...coke...sandwiches...

rishab cut the cake everyone should birthday song for him..he feed nandini..and all other...they danced..do all the masti played with cake...

on the other side fab 5 didnt find anything...their bad luck..gprs tell themsomething and again n again they directed towards jungle or beach..:P

m-god m tired...

mu-same here...

they all were on one beach...dey decided to sit here only then dey will go back to gurukul...

c-mgr smjh nhi aya..yenandini gyi kaha...gayab kaha ho gayi

a-kuch mt bol kabir...bolne ki hmmat nhi h ..she put her head on dhruv's sholder...

nandini's side

all the children were hell tired..crash on their bed...nandini, sagar and rohit made them sleep...cover them with duvet...and turn saw a lady standing there..with a smile on her face

n-jenny anty...ap..soi nahi...

j-jab mere bacha log..itna shor krenge to kaise so skti hu..u knew it tum hi ai hogi...sagar rohit..smriti..tum log baki batho ko ache se sula do..and indicated nandini to come out...

nandini took last glance of the kids with a smile and come out with jenny

j-nandini..tum q itna risk uthati hu...vo b in backo k liy..jinka tumare sath koi rishta b nahi hai..guruma ko pata laga kisi din..to bht data padegi tumhe...

n-jenny anty na pata lage isliy to ratko milne ati hu...she wink on her...

both laugh n sit in linving room...

j-sch mi nandini...ye bche bad tumhara hi w8 krte h...or jis din tum nhi ati us din to inhe smbhalna itna mushkil ho jata h ki bas kya btao...kya adat dal dal di hai tumne inka

n-jeeny anty

j-nhi nandini ...sch mein..ye bache kabhi apne maa baap ko nhi pochhte tumhe pochhte hai..ki nandu didi kab aengi...isliy hi to mujhe aj tk unhe reality batni nhi pdi ki ye log orphan h or ye ek orphanage...ye log sochte hai ye hi inka ghr hai...or tum inki sab kuch..i don't no kya ans dungi inhe agar kisi din Inhone pochh lia to...

tears come in jenny's eyes...nandini clear her tears-jenny anty jb tk mi ho na..ye log kabhi orphan nhi h ..dey r my kids...both hug..n suddenly saw watch its 3.30

n-ohh god,...mi late ho gayi...ams uth jaengi mujhe jaldi hr jana h

nandini..pic her back...she take out her track suit which he has put in her bag before leaving last night..changed her self..giving kiss to jeeny on her cheeks she run out of the orphanage...

j-pgl ladki...god bless her

nandu run from the orphanage saw fab5 always going towards gurukul -mujhe follow kr rhe the na..now w8 n watch...

nandu incidently ignoring then run to their direction..fab 5 saw nandu but nanu was acting as if she didn't saw them..

m-guyz...nandini...

c-ye yaha is time...

they all didn't notice her track suit

m-now lets c kaha jati h

n-beta...glt insaan se pang alia h ..late na kara dia na to mera naam nandini nahi...

nandu was running here n there..to make them late ..they all were following her..n was hell tired..c saw his watch-guyz 4 baj gaye..lets go yr...guruma khacha chaba jaengi...

they all agreed and saw nandu again dissapeard..they all run towards gurukul..when they were abt to entr in gurukul dey heard a strn voice

voice-wahi ruk jao...

dey all saw ams standing there..they all were shoked..look at each other h gulp...

c-ab to gaye...lgta h Mumbai k liypacking krni hi pdegi...

all-hmm

ams-kaha gaye the tum log sab...

m-vo..hmm..(he glared at cabir)

c-vo hmm..(glared to mukti)

mu-hmm...

ams-hm ke age bologe...

m-pta nhi(in one go n look down)

when nandu come from behind fab 5...-ams..good morning...she hit cabir and manic sholder by her sholder..they were standing together glare tfab 5 angrily and went to ams...

ams-tanna good morning..agyi jogging se...

n-ji ams..agyi jogging se...

when they all noticed she is wearng track suit...but she was wearing jeans and top last night...how did she got changed...they all were confused

n(looking towards fab5 and asking ams)-ams...apke students..dey started breaking the rules ryt...inhone nyt out mara tha kya...

ams-pata nahi..bolte q nahi tum log kaha the tum...

nandu was folding her hand on her chest and glaring at them...angrily...

m-hm log b jogging gaye the..

n-jeans or t shirt mi...jogging..ryt

dey all gulp.

c-manik jhoot mt bol..plss...(to guruma) sory guruma vo ..vo

m-hm apki grand daughter ka pichhe kr rhe the rat ko...u no she sneaked out last nyt(giving look to nandini and then ams)

ams-what

n-what the hell...what do u means...mi subh gyi hu yaha se...

m-really..fr vo tumhare room mi window se...kaun gaya tha...

n got her trick-tum mere room mi kya krne ae the(giving him look now ans)

c-shit manic chup hoja...

m-no dude hm iski waja se fase hai...(giving look to her)

n-ams ap btao...mi ratko kaha jaungi..vo b track suit pehn k..ab ye bolgea ki mi track mi nhi jeans or top mi gayi all bullshit..fr kya maine raste mi change kia...

m-excalty..ye jeans or top mi nhi gyi..

n-look...dekha ams...lagta hai...apne Mumbai wale students..ne rules break krne shuru kr diye hai...and as usual Mumbai comers kit rah apni glti dosro p dal rhe h...(giving angry look a to manic)

ams-stop it all of u...manik what proof u have ki nandu ratko bahar agyi ti...

m-guruma check her bag isme jarur iski dress hogi...

n gave angry look to him and smerk

n-ams..koi bag jogging p leke jata h kya...

all look at each other she is not having her bag but she was having last nyt...dey all were again stuck...

n-ab mipochhti hu..tum log kal rat mere room mi kab ae..kyu ae...

they all look at each other

m-guyzz.ise to mi chhodunga nahi...we have to tell the truth(to ams)-guruma kal hmne khan skip kr dia tha..we were hungry and hme khane ki smel nandini k room se ai ti..waha gaye ..she gave us food...

n-haww..ams..maine kabhi gurukul ka rules toda h kya...what proof do u have...

m-rama...(to rama)...tum btao..tumne dekha than a sab kuch...

ra-ayio..hme to subh jldi uthna hota h hm 8 baje so jata hai...

nandu look at manic with a smerk

m-ams..beliv me..she is breaking ur rules not us...i can prove it

ams-s0-prove...

manic took ams to nandini's roomfab 4 followed him n nandini too...

m-vo khana yahi chupati hai

manic took stool and climb started searching above almira ..but he found nothn-(to gab 4)..guyz..tum log dhondo kuch to milega...manik give them smerk they start finding..but found nothn ..they were hell tired of their finding...

n-kuch mila not even wafers(with smerk)ams maine kaha na ye Mumbai comers sirf apni glti dosre p dalna jante hai..dey must have sneaked out last nyt...or subh pakde gaye to mujhpe hi naam laga dia...coz m ur grand daughter...

ams-prove...(all look at ams)

manic nodded no-sry..but beliv me...

n-haha..beliv on Mumbai comers...

ams now get angry on fab 5-all of u (to fab 5)-meditation room..ready for ur punishments..give them dealy glare...and went from there..fab 5 come out of nandu's room when dey saw ..nandu is coming out with a wafer packet in her had and was chewing wafers..they all were shoked dey didn't find anythinh then where this wafers come from..dey look at each other

n-kya hua...ohh ye soch rhe hoo ye wfers kaha se..ae..what do u think hai..last nyt..tum logo ko khana ki jaga dikha kr...mi bhool jaungi u guyz know abt that place...and rako jb tum log mujhe follow kr rhe the..mi tumhe aise hi chhod dungi...(nodded no with a deadly smile)..tch tch tch...nandini se panga leke achha nhi kia...she shake her head with a smerk..she turn abt to go when she turn again-or ha..aj apni meals skip mt krna..coz...u will not get anything...from me this time...u Mumbai comers...or ha...age se ye dhyan rkhna...kuch ulta seedha mere sath kra..to mi to bach jaungi..tum logo ka kya hoga..tum log nhi jante...w8 a sec..i have something for u guyz...u guyz will njoy it..

she took out her fon from her track pant n showed them a pic..they all widen their eyes with shok and see nandini-ye kya h ...

n give confuse look to them and then look at picture-are tum log hoo.pehchna nhi..kabi pana face mirror mi nhi dekha ky...ye logo ki jab khechi h pic jb tum log kal gurukul mi drink kr rhe the...bs ye kahna h ki age se kuch kia...ya mujhe follow kia..ya mere pas b ae..to kya kr skti hut um log shayad smjh gaye hoge..mumbai se hoo..itna intelligent to hoge hi...

while manching wafers she went inside her room n lock her door..

fab 5 look at each other hit their head with their hand and c, mu, a, d ggive deadly glare to manik..manik gulp now he is gone...

precap-ams punishment...

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