manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 11

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Amazing update

Loved it

Update the next part soon

Awesome..competely amazing..
I just have read all chaps in one go..
I must say ur story is damm amazing..
Loved nandu's character, her attitude..but seems like she have some bad past from mumbai tabhi vo har baar vo fab5 ko mumbai wale bolte he or itna chidti ha..
Update soon..waiting.
Love...mini

Originally posted by: miniagrawal

Awesome..competely amazing..
I just have read all chaps in one go..
I must say ur story is damm amazing..
Loved nandu's character, her attitude..but seems like she have some bad past from mumbai tabhi vo har baar vo fab5 ko mumbai wale bolte he or itna chidti ha..
Update soon..waiting.
Love...mini

Awesome update!! Seriously...instead of hitting the like button i feel like hitting nandu head!! Huhh...kya mumbai wale yeh..mumbai wale woh..blah blah blah...as if mangalore wale bohot great hai!! Bullshit...!! M'lore wale are so dumb!! But love to see d opposite nandu!! Like nandu bullying Fab 5!!! Great!!! Kya fasa dia usne fab 5 ko!! Manik...tu toh gya ree...nandu kya...tere frnz hi tujhe zinda gaad denge!!! Lololol...
Lovely update...!!
One question...is ur ff wholly located in mangalore??? Coz if its located in mumbai too...toh it will be so much fun...nandu's entry in SPACE n fab 5 infront whole SPACE hi nandu..ek newbie se darenge!! Wah wah!! This will be fun!! Plzz take them all to mumbai aftr 10-15 chappys atleast!! Only if u want to!!
Update soon!!
Thnx fr d pm:)

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

Awesome update!! Seriously...instead of hitting the like button i feel like hitting nandu head!! Huhh...kya mumbai wale yeh..mumbai wale woh..blah blah blah...as if mangalore wale bohot great hai!! Bullshit...!! M'lore wale are so dumb!! But love to see d opposite nandu!! Like nandu bullying Fab 5!!! Great!!! Kya fasa dia usne fab 5 ko!! Manik...tu toh gya ree...nandu kya...tere frnz hi tujhe zinda gaad denge!!! Lololol...
Lovely update...!!
One question...is ur ff wholly located in mangalore??? Coz if its located in mumbai too...toh it will be so much fun...nandu's entry in SPACE n fab 5 infront whole SPACE hi nandu..ek newbie se darenge!! Wah wah!! This will be fun!! Plzz take them all to mumbai aftr 10-15 chappys atleast!! Only if u want to!!
Update soon!!
Thnx fr d pm:)

wahh yr.. mst updt h... cont soon

Originally posted by: pritivirman

wahh yr.. mst updt h... cont soon

Recap-fab caught red handed by ams while coming back to gurukul...

Part 5

Fab 5 move to their rooms...but it was locked...they look heren there ..to find someone who will unlock their rooms...they found rama passing from there

m-rama ji..vo room ki keys dedijiye.,,

r-nahi milega...

fab 5 look at each other n all say-kyu

r-ye ap logo ka punishment hai aj ap log gurukul k bahar garden mein rahenge full day may be full night...ap logo ko apka keys kal subh mill jaega...

m-but aise kaise...

r-amma ne kaha...hai yeh punishment ka first part hai...

all-first part...mtlb

r-age ka punishment ap logo ko dinning hall mein milega...8 baje dinning hall..verna no breakfast...

rama went from there...evryone look at manic with angry look..cabir hold his neck from back

c-saale tri waja se room mein nhi jana..kya jarurt ti..usse panga lene ki..ab kaha jaenge..bahar itni garmi mi bahar baithenge sari din ...

a started cryig- I want chocolates...vo andr hai..manik q kia aisa...

d-aliya..ro mt plss..(he hug aliya)

mu-u guyz..we r stingking...ewww..manikk(give deadly glare to him)

m-shut up guyz...ek din bina change kiye..bina chocolates k nhi rah skte kya..us nandini ki waja se huah ye sab...(glare angrily )...ab dinning hall chle..verna brkfast milne ki waja se mujhe hi bolna...

dey all angrily went to dinning hall...saw nandini and ams already sitting there and the two boys..sagar and rohit...when they entred nandini look at them with a smerk...they al give her angry look...

ams-aoo khana khao..mein khana se kisi ko punish nhi krti...

all happily sit there..coz they thought...they even don't get any food...all sit on dinning table...n start having breakfast...nandini was angrily looking at maniklike she will eat him up..they all start their brkfast...when dhruv said to manic

d-manik sun gautam ka bday aspas hai na...

fab 4immidiately look at dhruv-shit...uska bday to aj hai...its 30^th aug...today...

m-koi nhi bad mein wish kr denge pehle brkfast to kr lo...

ams and nandini get alert on something...nandini was continuously loking at her plate...she close her first tightly and crush the tissue paper which is in her hand...manik look at ams to ask for the keys...

m-gurumaa..vo room keys...

but ams didn't listen she is continuosly worriedly looking at nandini...manik got confused...and then look at the direction ams looking at ..he saw nandini..she is continuously lloking at the plate...and crushing the paper with her hand...manik got more confused looking at her

m(thinks)-ise kya hua...itna gussa hai kya mujhse(got lil worried coz of his own thinking)...are manic chup kr ...tjhe kya vo gussa h na ho..

but still looking at her...when rama put glas of water in fron of her...nandini...pick up the glas and drink it in one go..and hold the glass..more tightly...ams was very worried for her..she kept her hand on her sholder...nandini hold the glas more tightly..and the glas crush into pieces...

everyone got shoked...and see her hand which was bleeding badly...manik was abt to get up..when cabir hold his sholder and told him to sit and not to do anything

ams-nandu..ye kya kia...

nandini too look at her hand..but there was no expression on her face...tears was abt to come out...but she cleard them before they comeout and everyone saw it...

ams-rama jaldi se first se lao...nandu(looking at anndini who was sitting expressionless)

when rama bought first nandini got up from her seat and about to go when ams hold her hand...-tanna...

n-ams m done...excuse me...

ams-khana to pura kha le...

nandini look at ams...and nodded no...and move out of the dinning hall..ams sit on her hair...put her hand on the forhead...looks like she can start crying anytime..but she didn't...all the scenario was notcedby manik while everyone strt eating their food...

ams-ap logo ho gaya ho to..so back to practice...

r-amma...vo punishment

ams-garden ki safai krwa lena ...uske bad ye log practice krenge...

ams too went from there...manik told everyone he'll be back and he follow ams...ams go in front of nandini's room..was abt to knok but didn't...she close her eyes...long tears fall from her eyes..manik was hiding behing the pillar noticing evrythin...ams again gain courage..and knok her room..

ams-tanna...darwaja khol...

no ans...

ams-tanna...plss beta ...darwaja khol(her voice choked due to crying)

n-ams plss..i wanna be alone...aj plsss..mujhe kisi se bt nhi krni...kal bt krenge ams...plsss...

ams-take care...she wipe her tears and went from there...

m-ye kya ho rha h ...guruma rori hai..nandini room lock krke baiti hai bt kya hai...should I go n ask her the matter..chup kr manik..pagl hai kya...waise hi subh bht tamsha ho gaya...but she was crying...bt kya hai...ufff this girl..mujhe isse dur rahna hoga...she know how to attract anyone...

manik joing fab 4 while cleaning the garden they all were damn angyr on him..giving him amgyr glare

m-comeon guys..koi ek nahi sabko ye punishment hai..sory na...age se nhikruga...

he innocently look down..when fab 4 shok their had and hug him ..they all were cleaning the garden when manic saw a girl running...out of the gurukul...he was shoked to see its nandini..who was again sneaked out of the gurukul

m(think)-aj to mi pata krke rahugia..kaha jari h..mujhe fasaya than a subh...

he abt to go behind her when someone hold his hand...

m-abe jane de...aj to use chodunga nhi(without turning)

but when the hold was still when manic turn back and got biggest shok...he saw ams holding his hand...evryone too look at ams and manic and towards them,...

c-aj to ye gaya

d-god plss save manic

a-ab or kya punishment milni baki hai...

mukti hit her head with her hand- packing shuru kr do...m going back..i cant handle this torture anymore

ams-kaha jare ho...

m-vo..mi...mi...apne kaha than a apki nandini...glt kam nhi krti..dekho..vo frse kahi jari hu..she just sneaked out...i have proof...come with me...

ams-no..tum apna kam kr..

m-mgr maine use dekha hai sachi...

ams look here and there saw fab 4 ..drag manic inside..

c-are..ye lo..aj to pta ni kya hoga iska

all crossed their fingers

m-ap mujhe kaha le jari hu...vo bahar gayi hai mi sch kah rah u...

she took him to her room amd lock the room

ams-mujhe pata hai..vo bahar gayi hai...

manik was shoked ..he widen in eyes...

ams-mi janti hu..ki vo ratko bahar jati hau...apni window se...mi janti hu..vo kaise jati hai..kaha jati hai..kab kab jati hai...tum bacho kya lagta hai..mujhe kuch pata nahi hai..tum bache jaha per rakhte hai..mujhe pata hota hai...kal ratko tum log ne nandu k room mein kahna khaya mujhe vo b pata hai...nandu ratko chup k khana kahti hai..kaha rkhti hai vo b pta hai..chlo mere sath...

ams took manic to nandini's room open the room with duplicate key and...show himsecret locker...nad open it"ye raha uska khana..jo vo kahti hai..jb apne meals skip krti hai...

manic was damn shoked now...not able to say anything...

ams-tum log kal gurukul mein drink kr re the..mujhe vo b pta hai...

manik's eyes . and mouth was open ...-vo..mi...

ams-yaha bache kya krti hai..kya nahi sab pta hota hai..ye pta hai kal tm log nandu k pichhe gaye the ratko...

m-apko sab pta hai..ki apki granddaughter sare rules todti hai...to ap use kabhi punishment..ya fr kahu punishment sirf apke students k liy..granddaughter k liy...

ams- vo jo b kr ri hai uski ek punishment hi hai...pata nahi kab khtm hogi uski ye punishment(lost somewhere)

m(confused )-mtlb...

ams-chlo mre sath...

manic and ams sit in car n went somewhere..fab 4 saw them going..

c-ye kaha gaye...

mu-lgtahai guruma use koi badi punishment dene gayi hai...

d-god plss save manic

a-hme unke pichhe nhi jana chaiy...

they all look at each other ..rush to their car and follow ams...

here...ams and manic reached the house where nandini used to come...

manic was confusingly looking at house...and then ams..ams hold his hand n go to the entrance of the house...

ams-awaj mt krna...peep inside...

they both saw nandini inside the house...playing with small children...her eyes was blindfold ..and trying to catch the children...

ams- ye yahi ati hai..har bar...kl ratko bhi yahi ai ti..in me ek bach ka kal bday tha..

manic was shoked and look a nandini...and then ams

m-mgr agr apko pta hai to vo yaha chhup k q ati hai...or jaise vo ati hai..it's very risky...

ams-qki use pta hai ki mein use yahaa ane nhi dungi...tumhe pta hai tum jis ghr k bahar khde hai..vo kya hai...

manic nodded no

ams-ye ek orphanage hai...ye sare bache orphan hai...

manic shoked ...he llok at ams..and nandini who was searching for kids blind folded...

precap=nandini slap manic..and fab 5 baack to Mumbai and fab 5 back to mumbai

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