MANAN SS~You become my story Chapter 11-136 PRO-148 NEW THREAD-151

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maddy98

@maddy98

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#961

nice update eagerly waiting for the next part 😊

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saman

@Samanf3

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#962

Update waz just superb...

Full on tashan between...

Manik and nandini...

Poor nandu...trying to be strong but still got trap in maniks charm...Ahhh

Dis man iz every girls death...hehe

Yarr..I really want to kno...why manik left lyk dat...

What is waz da reason dat he never contacted back..

Plzzz reveal dat part too..

N do give some maink points too...

Waiting desperately for ur next update ..

Thanx for da pm

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#963

Nice update

Loved it

Update the next part soon

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Kavita31

@Kavita31

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#964

Awrsome update...
Speechlesss...
Thank u soo much for d pm...
Update soon...

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vaish11

@vaish11

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#965

Well Written!!

The icing on the cake was the last line "you know what Manik I hate and as you said you hate things which you are scared of..so yes I'm scared of you..."

Can't wait for the next update! :)

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#966

nyc update

manik want to start fresh

hw nandu gng to react for his actions

continue soon

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love_manan

@love_manan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#967

heya...see this time i am not that late haan...so finally u pm.me also...well yes i have read all your scraps too...

let me come to the story...oh.my my..i simply loved it...And of course the best part was...when manik put his hands on her waist and nuzzle his nose.. wow...it was magical...m just waiting waiting and waiting...to see how nandini is going to be convinced by manik...well u can show some romance between them..u know hamanra manik bilkul sidha to hai nai.. so before confession agar thoda sa chota chota romance hoga to maza aayega.. so update nxt part soon...and pm me also...see you

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#968

Nyc update...u r an amazing writer dear
Nandini v apne point pr sahi hai...pr manik to manik hai kese v karke wo nandini ko mnaa lega...hehehege
Pr manik chod kr q gea tha aur ab kh rha hai usse nahi pta tha ke tum log v hoge...u penned it really beautifully...lovd it...thnks for pm me
Continue soon

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estherzac

@estherzac

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#969

Nice update...
But y Manik didn't contact her all these months...& now he wants to start afresh...
Anyways,the update was really amazing...
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm..