MANAN SS~You become my story Chapter 11-136 PRO-148 NEW THREAD-151

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kiranmai_angel

@kiranmai_angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#941

nice update n i love tht manik still understands nandini vry welll 😉😉😉

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Nitisharma

@Nitisharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#942

U rocked again yrrr...
Amazing updatee...
U penned it so beautifully...
Loved it...
Continue sooon...

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maniknandiniky2

@maniknandiniky2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#943

Manikkk!!!! How will u manaofy nandu nw???? Ab kya ho ga bechare manu ka😆 but I'm sure he is up to the task... excited to see ab kya ho ga... update jaldi ok??🤗

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#944

Beautiful

Update

Yaar kavya

Ab kya karne

Wala ha

Manik

...hehe...

Scriously poor

guy

but he deserves

this yaar

continue soon

eagerly waiting for Next part

Love

Diya😛

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#945

kavya...

awesome part...loved manan scenes a lot...u penned nandini's emotions brilliantly...
loved each one and their dialogues a lot...
good work dear

coming to my favorite lines from this chapter...

Strange when I didn't knew what I feel for him I kissed him..and when somewhere there in middle of highway to truth I slapped him..

But that's what it is about na Do what you feel like doing...

The moment I saw them..actually frankly not them but him..his eyes again started to cast thier spells as whenever I look into those eyes my little heart goes wild..it becomes more lighter
than 360 grams!!

God I swear if he does something it bothers me and when he doesn't it bothers me more...

And someone said its hard to understand a girl..he surely needs to Meet Manik Malhotra...!!

Manik will turn his world too up side being the strangest stranger...

Manik-High in the sky looking at the land below and than more below at water..will surely make us alive...

You know than actually shit guys imagine just from there up in sky when we will look at the beach water how it's gonna shine thanks to the sun above us..

I looked at Manik and he gave a smile like he just was sitting on Hot seat opposite Amitabh Bachan and has won the jackpot..than I looked at Arymaan..

Now I was at fix..if I said No that termed me as if I'm weak..which I won't ever get happen but if I said Yes..I'll be weak eventually...

But have I ever been on my senses around him..

Seeing his Smile It seemed like he was kind of challenging me..

As his Smile was less a smile but more like a smirk...

squeezed my eyes again..I wanted to protest but my will had died long back..

I felt like running away but at the same time freezing this moment...

I had many emotions inside me but yet none..

I opened my eyes when I felt cold water on my feet...

We had reached down..and thanks to him I had missed the shinny water now as it was long forgotten...

Me-you know what Manik I hate and as you said you hate things which you are scared of..so yes I'm scared of you...

continue as soon as possible...
take care of ur mother...!!!
stay blessed...

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Chocolava14

@Chocolava14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#946

👏Beach fun...ahahahah😉😉

Manik nd d slap den nandu's inner turmoil...it was so verryy realll😊

The emotions portrayed by u as nandu's dilemna nd thinking is so very real nd practicalll...i enjoyd it so much while reading 😳👏👏

The parachutee ride...manan hve to together no matter wat...heehhh😉😆

The best scene was d nuzzling scene when nandu felt dat she wanted to puch manik away but then her will was gone...hehe..it actually happenss😊😳

Luuuvdd dd updatee too muchhh😉

Always keep writing😊

PS- story's talking an exciting turn...manik vows to grt nandu back,..madness dn craziness awaits ...haayee😉👏

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Glara

@Glara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#947

wow superb update
But manik deserve more than slap
i really enjoyed it
thank u so much
update soon
cant wait to see nandhini's blast on manik
And how she s gng to handle her emotions

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Naj91

@Naj91

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#948

Awesome update Kavya.it was quite different.I thought may be they will be together now but it seems u wanna play some games...ok bring it on...

Ok so Mukti Manik scene was nice.Mukti became the lioness...hehe..morning beach scene was lovely.specially MaNan scene...

I loved ur that line..."And someone said its hard to understand a girl..he surely needs to Meet Manik Malhotra...!!"...seriously his character is totally different and complicated.

Loved MaNan romantic scene so much.Manik can never let go a single chance to be romantic with Nandini.I loved Manik's each romantic word.
I like the confrontation between MaNan.now atleast may be Manik got to know Nandini's feelings.
Eagerly waiting for next update
Please update soon
I will pray that ur mother will be totally fine soon...don't worry.take care

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mishti5

@mishti5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#949

Nice update

enjoyed it

continue soon:):)

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music_manan

@music_manan

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#950

Hi,I became really big fan of yours. It's vry awesome. Hmm my fav parts r bahut Sara. First there is a beautiful understanding n protection between nandini n mukti. 😳Then I like aryaman 's plan to say no. Their expressions from helpness to shyness. Then there intense encounter with each other. I loved it. She told her feelings in his way. The path shown by him is become a question for him. Now he has to giv answer. Bt still I want nandini to little strong. One thing I liked it u nvr make aryaman in negative shade,bt cupid no 2. Tht is vry nice n different.😉

Edited by music_manan - 10 years ago

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