#2 *ITS COMPLICATED* MaNan ff (UPDATED PART 35) Pg138 13/10

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S.h.e.e.t.a.l

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Posted: 10 years ago

#371

I'm speechless!
the way penned it down is really amazing!
Right from the nandu alya faceoff nandini's shattered soul manik's restlessnes his assuring words to their love making!
beautifully written!
continue soon as I really want to know their first reaction after waking up in morning!

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anshika garg

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Posted: 10 years ago

#372

Very nice part
Continue soon

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unnatishukla241

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Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Awesome

Finally they are together

I am so happy

Their lovemaking is superb

Amazing work dear

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imlovingit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#374

It was beautiful..

AND THEY REALIZED THEIR LOVE FOR EACH OTHER.

continue soon. 😊

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amrutha.shetty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#375

OMG did I read it write ...u ssly penned it ...for the 1st time I guess ..infact u aren't bad ..u r ROCKING...u should Penn down coz ur good at showing emotions ...I loved the flow u showed ...there wasnt urgency there wasn't need it was jst a delicate & leading phase of LOVE ...previous parts were amazing I loved how maan & nyonika were trying their best to lighten situations every now & then ..nyonika is a good mother who loves her both child ..she could feel nandini's pain ..nandini despite of such situation managed to overcome them & handle her office duties ..their growth which was slowly & steadily was a treat to watch ..manik's concern for nandini when she met her client in cafe ..hehe ..typical husband .😆..so clearly there was even a Want of completing each other & decrease the meer distance ..ya they still haven't confessed anything bt it wasn't wrong though..I don't want alia to b so bad yaa she's a part of fab 5 I hope she doesn't stoop so low after this & realize her mistake ..coz nandu has even been her well wisher always ...bt after wht she did it was benefitable for MAnAn only bt still I want her to know her tricks ka ulta asar which led them together anyhow may b love bite or any hint bt still ..tht would b a slap on her face & she better deserve it ...keep writing :) & if possible give a update sooner for this 1 ..may be today or anytime ur free ...:)

Lots of love❤️

~isha

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pujadas187

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Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Lovely..update...nd romantic too...
Finally the misuderstanding is solved... Manan r together now...
Continue soon...

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Sm0405

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Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Wohooo ... What an update ...

So hot n sizzling ... Matlb Manik Nandini finally gave in, in this mutual weird but lovely feelings of their ...

They finally shared their most beautiful moment together nd the song was jst the "cherry on the cake" ...

Alya is such a nonsense person ... How dare she treat Nandini like tht ... Bt only becoz of her words our manan got this amazing moment with each other. ...

At first when they finished their dance ... They were embarrassed n lil uncomfortable ... I hope after their romantic encounter ... They don't feel any tht kind of thing ...

Bt u have penned the whole scene so beautifully ... It never crossed the line of being vulgar ... Bt was magical ... Seriously ...

Nandini was so broken after listening Alya's words ... She was feeling an unknown pain thinking Manik would never love her ... Their marriage was jst a mercy of his on her ...

Bt all her misunderstandings were clear when Manik said her his LIFE ... His WIFE n his SHINING STAR ...

Really loved this update ...

Nd waiting fr the nxt update tooo ... U know now I'm falling more n more in love fr this ff ... Seriously ...

Plz plz update sooonnniishh ...

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ashima1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Ohhh emmm geee...

This ought to be one of the bestest updates I have read

Beautifully written m how beautifully u explained their turmoil state m feelings n that song sequence... Gosh m speechless

Would love to read more of it

I WS a silent reader but ur this part forced me to pen down my comment for uhh

N thanx a ton for continuing the ff for our sake

Thnqq so much dear

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ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#379

Omg... Super duper hawwttt...
Kuch bolne ke liye hi nahi hai ab toh...
I loved it...

Cabir n mukti's teasings...
Then MaNan's thoughts...
I hate aaliya... What does she think of herself...
Manik finding nandu...
Then consoling her...
And their hot romance...
Hayeee...

Thnkz 4 the pm

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samiksha singh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#380

I always lyk ur update
But never comment on ur update
I know u r feeling bad...
But sorry here is a network problem
Thats why kv lyk hota h kv nai
But u know what
Ur this update na
Made me crazy
I was waiting for a long long tym for this
Their closeness
N u penned it so beautifully...
I lyk this update sssooo muuuccchhh
Hats off to u dear
N yeah last but not lleast
That song really suit on that situation
N that raining
Omg
Jitna likhu utna km h
Is amazing update k liye
Now m so curious to know that
What will happen wen they will awake
Will they accept it
Or thought that it was a mistake

Pllls don't seperate them
N once again
U r amazing..