manan dark ff:u r mine,only mine!!!note on pg 40 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

interesting story...when will u update? cant wait dea...plsss update soon...desperately waiting

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

nice update...

Originally posted by: Tishyy

That was some update ... U rocked ur first update ...
I like ur Manik as in the way u described obsessive dark selfish ... U did total justice there
Nandu our sweet gal ... She is so pissed with Manik but still you can see the caring part just as u described she can't see anyone hurt be it the people who has done bad to her ... And here Manik is at its worse ...
Now that was not enough that you had the bouncers thrown at us ... He killed Abhi, Alya and Cabirrr his best friend ...
Eagerly eagerly waiting for the next update ...
U gave full justice to ur story
Don't forget to take a bow :D

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Manik to full on pysco hai

Originally posted by: princypriya

nice update

the way u pinned nandu emtions was super

manik is cmg to mad abt her

totally intersting story

continue soon

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

Wow!! what an amzing update...
i jus loved it...u penned it so nicely...n thanks for the wonderful story...the way u write is jus outstanding...hats off dea...keep writing
ur such an awsm writer...plsss update soon...eagerly waitin for next part..