MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE INDEX ON PG 1 - Page 14

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Thanks alot for all your comments guys it really means alot to me. So here is the next update for you all hope you all will like it.
PART 51 :

As soon as she feels his lips on hers she closes her eyes tightly. Tears were still flowing from her eyes and he slowly wiped them continuing his contact with her lips. It was not a deep and passionate kiss. They just placed their lips on each other and got freezed. He opens his eyes and after making sure that her tears were no more rolling out slowly moves back and looks her. She slowly opens her eyes and looks him.

NANDINI : tum bas yehi chahthe ho na

MANIK : nandini

NANDINI : tho tumhe sirf iski zarurath hain

MANIK : ye kya bolri ho tum

NANDINI : tumhe hamare beech bas ye sab chahiye hain na

MANIK : nandini hosh main aao ye kaisi bathe karri ho

NANDINI : yaa right hamare beech kitni bi badi ladayi ho chahe hum ek dusre se bath bi na karre ho par tum, tum koyi na koyi bahane se mere paas aake

MANIK : just shut up nandini aisa kuch nahi hain

NANDINI : goddd how stupid I am right

MANIK : listen just stop it

NANDINI : main kuch samaj hi nahi paari thi

MANIK : nandini ek baar sochke tho bolo ye tum kya

NANDINI : tumhe sirf mujhse ye sab karna hain aur isliye jab man kiya mere paas agaye aur jab

MANIK : just stop it or else

NANDINI : aur jab man nahi kiya chodke chele gaye

MANIK : enough now and once again pulling her close places his lips on hers. She tries to push him away but he holds her so tightly that she won't be able to move even an inch. She doesn't respond to him and continuously try to push him away. He soon moves back but holds her tightly pulling her more close.

Nandu was about to say something but manik interrupts her.

MANIK : mujhe tumhari bakwaas sune main koyi interest nahi hain aur agar tumhe phirse wahi sab bakwas karni hain tho am sorry main aisa tumhe bilkul nahi karne dunga aur tum chaho ya na chaho main isi tharah tumhe kuch bi bolne ka mauka nahi dunga

Nandini looks him angrily and doesn't say anything.

MANIK : good tho ab tum meri bath suno

Nandini looks aside and manik turns her face to his side.

MANIK : kya kaha tumne yehi na ki main sirf ye sab chahtha hoon ha

Nandini looks him seriously

MANIK : haan main ye sab chahtha hoon par uss vajah se nahi jaise tum samjri ho

Nandini looks down and he makes her look him

MANIK : pehle tum ye bathao ki chahe kitni baar hi hamare beech ye sab hua ho par tum uska hesab kyu rakhri ho haan

NANDINI : main koyi hesab nahi rakhri hoo

MANIK : tho tum kaise bol sakthi ho ki main har baar sirf iske liye koyi na koyi bahana karke tumhare paas atha hoon

Nandini stays silent

MANIK : miss nandini moorthy school ki sari ladkiyan mujhpe marthi hain aur agar main chahu tho ye sab kisike sath bi kar saktha hoon aur am sure hazaron baar karne par bi koyi bi ladki mujhe nahi rokegi

NANDINI : main ache se janthi hu ki kitne ladkiya tum pe marthi hain aur tumne mujhe ye sab bathe pehle bi bathayi hain

MANIK : lekin kya maine ye bathaya ki main kyu ye sab kisi aur ke sath nahi kartha hu

Nandini looks him and he continues jawab bahuth simple hain kyuki main ye sab sirf tumhare sath karna chahtha hoon sirf aur sirf tumhare sath

Nandini's anger gets vanished listening to this and looks into his eyes.

MANIK : main ye jaan buchke baar baar nahi kartha par kya karu tum ho hi itni zidhi ki mujhe ye sab karna padtha hain

He places his both hands on her waist and continues kabhi tumhe hosh main laneke liye tho kabhi tumhare dard ko kam karneke liye mujhe aisa karna padtha hain

NANDINI : kiss karne ke alawa aur kayi rasthe hain

MANIK : haan bilkul hain par un sab main tumhe rokni ki himmath kaha hain

Nandini nods her head as no and says kuch bi

MANIK : acha chelo ye batao agar main abhi tumhe kiss nahi kartha tho kya tum meri bath manthi apni bakwas bandh karthi nahi na

NANDINI : mujhe iske bare main kuch nahi bath karni hain

MANIK : jab bath tumne chedi hi hain tho sab katam karke hi bandh karthe hain

NANDINI : kya bolna chahthe ho tum haa

MANIK : main tumhare paas kuch aur karne ki chah main nahi balki isliye atha hoon kyuki mujhe tumhare sath rehna acha lagtha hain

Nandini heart melts listening this

MANIK : lekin haan ye sab karne ke peeche meri ek aur vajah hain

Nandini looks him confused

MANIK : aur vo ye hain ki main jab bi apne lavzo se apni feelings share nahi karpatha hoon tumhare sath remember this sirf aur sirf tumhare sath apni khushi ho ya dard ho usse mehsoos karvane ke liye ye sab kartha hoon

Nandini totally falls for him after listening this.

MANIK : aur vaise bi main ye sab karne ke liye na hi kabhi regret feel kiya aur na hi kabhi karunga

Nandini slightly smiles looking him.

He sees her and then ek aur bath tum ye galath famili main bilkul math rehna ki tumara ye jo bakwas tha usse sune ke baad main tumse dur chela jaunga.

She looks down hiding her smile and seeing her smile he pulls her more closer

MANIK : aur, aur ye bi math sochna ki main ab tumhare sath kuch aisa vaisa karna chod dunga kyuki aisa kuch hone vala nahi hain aur main ab bi jab bi chahu tumhare sath kuch bi kar saktha hoon you know kuch bi aur tum of course mujhe rok nahi sakthi

Nandini looks here and there

MANIK : seeing ur face I can easily say that all your doubts are cleared tho ab jaldi se bathado ki tumne mujhe maaf kar diya

NANDINI : controls her smile and kisne kaha ki maine tumhe maaf kardiya

MANIK : arrey par everything is clear naa

NANDINI : acha are you sure

MANIK : haan ab dekho maine tumhe hurt karke galthi ki aur tum ne mujhe bina kuch bathaye chele jakar galthi ki aur phir uske baad ek dusre se dur rehke even I was missing you badly & you were too missing me badly tho sab barabar hain aur sab clear hain tho phir problem kya hain

She slowly moves his hands from her waist and problem kuch bi nahi hain bas bath ye hain ki mujhe tumhe maaf karne ka mood abi is vakth nahi hai and smirks

MANIK : ooo tho ye bath hain fine not a problem kyunki mujhe ache se patha hain ki kya karne se tumhara mood teek hoga

NANDINI : kyaaa

Manik smiles raising his eyebrows and starts walking towards her making her walk backside.

NANDINI : listen koyi bi aa sakta hain tho yaha se chelthe hain

MANIK : tum busy thi aur isliye ache se notice nahi kiya hain shayad you know what just look around properly

Nandini looks around and then closes her eyes.

NANDINI POV : ayyappaa mujhe bi isi kamre main aana tha kya ye tho ye tho

MANIK : hamara kamra hain

Nandini opens her eyes and makes them wide

MANIK : arrey matlab humesha hum yahi par ladthe hai jagadthe hai aur patha nahi kya kya karte hain right

NANDINI : woo and could not walk anymore because she was leaned to wall and before could walk away manik was in front of her placing his hands on either side of her.

MANIK : so know I gonna help you to bring that mood jisse tum mujhe asani se maaf kar sakthi ho

She was looking here and there without looking him and then wo

He places his left hand on her stomach.

she makes her eyes widened and then manik says "haan kya hua"

She couldn't utter a word and looks down blushing.

He smiles and slowly brushes his fingers on her bare stomach and then says in husky voice "bolo na"

She pushes him smiling and try to leave but manik holds her and pulls her back making her collide directly on his chest.

He brushes his nose on her neck and "am listening". She feels his warm breadth on her neck and closes her eyes tightly blushing.

He blows air on her neck continuing playing with her waist. She slowly turns her head towards him and her expression make him go crazy.

He turns and pulls her towards him making her crash on his chest and sharing a side hug accidentally. He makes her stand straight, holding her arms and caresses it making butterflies flutter in her stomach.He smiles at her innocent face and slowly leans towards her.

She turns her head sideway and manik slowly places his lips on her neck closing his eyes. She too closes her eyes and slowly moves her hands towards his shoulders. He gives a long kiss on her neck and she holds his shirt tightly crushing it.

He slowly opens his eyes and kisses her ear lifting his head.

NANDINI : manikkk!!!!!!

He turns towards her and "repeat it"

NANDINI : manikkk!!!!!!

MANIK : I was dying to hear this from you.

Nandu pecks his nose & "too filmy". He smiles and bites his lower lip.

Nandini couldn't control herself seeing him and goes to peck his lips. She fastly touch his lips and was going to pull back herself but then manik pulls her closer and gently rubs his tonge on her lips making her gasp breathlessly. He fondly smiles at her reaction and places his lips on her soft ones kissing her fully. Though She was reluctant at first she reciprocated with same fervour as they deepen the kiss. They kissed each other hungrily until they were out of breath and pull out panting.

She looks down blushing hard and he makes her look him lifting her head. She couldnt look into his eyes for a longer time and biting her lower lip places her head on his chest closing her eyes.
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PART 52 :

Here in the party FAB 4 and abhi were sitting together & continuing there chat session.

MUKTHI : so abhi itne din kaha reh gaye the tum

ABHI : wo mukthi bathaya na jaan nahi aari thi school tho mujhe bi aane ka man nahi kiya

MUKTHI : kaafi gehri dosthi lagthi hain tum dono ki

ABHI : aaa hamare beech jo bi hain wo dosti se badkar hain you know hum family relatives bi hain tho

MUKTHI : ooo

KABIR : hoo tho family relatives bi hain nice par nandu ne kyu nahi bathaya

ABHI : shayad mouka nahi mila hoga kair patha nahi wo ab thak ayi kyu nahi

KABIR (slowly) : tujhe kya lagtha hain matlab isse dekh kar

DHRUV : aisa lagtha hain ki ye nandu ko pasandh kartha hai right

KABIR : hmmm

ABHI : guys I'll just check her & come

DHRUV : relax abhi wo ajayegi

ABHI : haan par patha nahi itna der kyu lagra hain usse

KABIR : arrey der tho of course lagega hi saath and looks dhruv and again saaf saaf Jo karna hain usse wo pura juice thu tension math le ajayenge

ABHI : haan yar par I just wanna check her once so I'll just be back

DHRUV : arrey par abhiii and he leaves

MUKTHI : guys I guess he loves her

DHRUV : shayad

ALIA : common yar is main galath kya hain bachpan se ek dusre ko janthe hain aur family relatives bi hain tho problem hi kya hain

KABIR : kisi ek ke chahne se kuch nahi hotha alia

ALIA : Matlab

KABIR : matlab ye ki mujhe nahi lagtha ki nandu abhi ko us nazar se dekhri hogi

MUKTHI : haan shayad mujebi yahi lagtha hain

ALIA : guys par ye bi tho ho saktha hain ki usse kuch samaj main nahi ara ho uske feelings ke bare main kyuki wo abhi ke sath bahuth close rehthi hain

DHRUV : kisike close hone ka matlab ye nahi hain ki wo usse pyar kartha ho

MUKTHI : yesss

KABIR : vaise chodo yar kya bathe leke bait gaye hum bi

ALIA : vaise mukthi tuje bada interest hain abhi se bath karne main haaa

KABIR and dhruv laugh

MUKTHI : hoo shut up yar

MANAN ROOM :

Manik smiles and holding her tightly kisses her shoulder. She holds his shirt tightly smiling. He slowly moves his hands on her waist and caresses it.

NANDINI : manikkk!!!!!

MANIK : hmmm and continues caressesing making her breath heavily.

NANDINI : manik please...

He smiles and slowly moves his left hand towards her back while his right one still held her waist. He slowly moves his index finger down from her neck to her waist playing with her dori. His touch was making her shiver like hell and she couldn't tolerate it more so pushes him away and turns back to run.

He holds her and pulls her close. She looks down blushing and he slowly caresses her arms saying "kya hua main tho bas mood bana neki help karra hoon". She smiles and slowly looks him.

He starts caressesing her bare stomach making electricity run her entire body. She bites her lower lip and closes her eyes. He smiles and continues to torture her for few minutes. Temperature was becoming hot and hot between them and she could no longer control so holds his hands and

NANDINI : ok ok your apology is accepted and looks down blushing

Manik smiles and "pakka na"

NANDINI : haan and leaves his hands and turn to leave.

Manik again pulls her back and holds her waist tightly.

MANIK : jab maaf karhi diya hain tho der kis bath ki haa and giving a naughty smile leans forward to her lips.

Nandini nods her head as a no and slowly hits on his lips saying "tum na"

Manik holds her hands & "main na"

ABHI : jaan jaan jaan

Nandini widens her eyes and honey

MANIK : not now yarrr please

NANDINI : manik leave

MANIK : naaa & nods his head

NANDINI : manik chodo please wo andar aa jayega

MANIK : nahi ayega

NANDINI : manik wo ajayega please

MANIK : relax darwaza bandh hain

Nandini looks at door and then manik

NANDINI : tumne lock kyu kiya

MANIK : arrey mujhe laga tum meri bath nahi sunogi aur bahar cheli jaogi tho

NANDINI : tho tumne lock kardiya

MANIK : arreyyy chodo na kya tum

NANDINI : tum pagal ho kya log kya sochenge jab unhe patha chelega ki hum door lock karke andar ek sath the tho tho

MANIK : shhh kisiko kuch nahi patha chelega

ABHI : jaan jaan kaha par ho tum teek tho ho na

MANIK : iss kuthe ko koyi kaam nahi hain kyaa

Nandini slowly hits him on his cheek and "uska naam abhi hain"

MANIK : tumne mujhe maara us us kut

NANDINI : shhh chup bilkul chup aise kisiko bi nahi bulana chahiye aur aage se tum honey ko hi nahi kisi aur ko bi aise namo se nahi bulaoge

MANIK : aur tum usse honey nahi bulaoge and turns his face

Nandini smiles and make him look her

ABHI : jaan!!!!!

MANIK : goddd!!!!!

NANDINI : vaise kyu kyu nahi bula sakthi main usse honey

MANIK : kyu ki wo honey nahi bejta hain and gives her a sarcastic smile

Nandini smiles and quickly peck his lips saying teek hain.

She runs towards door and tries to open lock but manik too runs fast behind her and holds her hands from opening the door.

Nandini was leaning to door and manik was leaning on her.

MANIK : ye cheating hain kiss dena hi tha tho and rubs his nose on her neck.

NANDINI : manikkk

ABHI : jaan kaha ho tum

Nandini pushes manik to corner and opens the door quickly but only half.

NANDINI : main yaha hoon

Manik from backside keeps his left hand on her stomach. she tries to remove his hand but fails so hides behind door keeping her half body outside the door

ABHI : jaan kya hua thab se tumhe awaz dera hoon aur tum ye door ke peche kyu chupri ho

NANDINI : wooo and manik presses her stomach tightly making her close her eyes tightly.

ABHI : jaan kyaa hua

Nandini with great difficulty replies "main pura ready nahi huyi na isliye"

Manik enjoys seeing her and hence to tease her more bends down and kisses her waist.

She makes her eyes widened and to hide her blush places her hands on her face covering it fully

ABHI : jaan tum apna chehra kyu chupari ho

Manik smiles and starts giving her wet kisses on her waist making nandini feel dead

Abhi tries to come forward but nandini quickly closes the door and jerking manik hand looks him

Manik starts laughing like hell and nandini gets angry seeing him and shouts "tum" going near to him.

ABHI : jaan kya hua kaun hain

Nandini looks towards door and hits her head slowly.Manik pulls nandini close & continuing smiling whispers in her ears "bolo bolo"

Nandini gives him a angry look and then kuch nahi hua aur koyi nahi hain

ABHI : jaan pehle door open karo

Nandini looks door and then manik

Manik smiling signals to open the door

NANDINI : tum chup chap kade raho aur mujhe chuna math

Manik nods as yes controlling his laughter.

Nandini opens the door and stands like before itself.

NANDINI : wo actually mere dress main kuch problem hain

Manik goes forward and kisses her neck making nandini again change her face expressions

ABHI : jaan tum teek ho na

NANDINI : aaa woo

Manik caresses her back placing kisses on her neck

Nandini closes her eyes and pleaseee!!!!!

Manik smiles but still continues to caresses her back

ABHI : jaan please kyu bolri ho

Nandini opens her eyes and says in one breath "give me some time I will come" and again closes the door quickly

ABHI : teek hain main wait kartha hoon

Manik leans back to wall and laughs like hell holding his stomach

Nandini gets angry and goes and starts hitting him hardly

Manik was still laughing but soon holds her hands and makes her lean on him. Nandini tries to push him in anger but then stops & pouts

ABHI : jaan am waiting

NANDINI : yaa

Manik takes her to the another end of the room and pins her to wall.

NANDINI : chodo mujhe leave

MANIK : ooo gussa

Nandini looks him seriously

MANIK : arrey teek hain baba rok diya isle na fine now I'll continue and leans forward to her

NANDINI : Manik nahi chodo mujhe

ABHI : jaan jaldi karo

Nandini looks door side and manik kisses her left cheek. She turns and sees him. He kisses her right cheek. She turns red and looks down.He kisses her nose and turns her to lean on him making himself lean against wall.

NANDINI : manikkk

He kisses her earlobe and whispers "haan"

ABHI : jaan jaldi please

NANDINI : jane do

MANIK : itni asani se nahi

NANDINI : please

MANIK : you need to pay back

NANDINI : for what

MANIK : for leaving me and staying away for 7 days

ABHI : jaannn!!!!!!

NANDINI : ok fine I promise after party we will be together again

MANIK : pakka

NANDINI : haan so let me go now

MANIK : par

ABHI : jaan your coming out or

Manik leaves her and she slowly walks towards door smiling.

Manik looks her and then suddenly runs towards her and stops her.

NANDINI : manikk!!!

Manik puts his fingers on her lips and then slowly places her entire hairs her backside making her back completely hiding behind her hairs so that no one could see her skin

Nandini looks him but doesnt say anything.

He turns her completely opposite to him and makes sure that her bare back was not at all visible anymore

MANIK : perfect

Nandini feels very happy and looks him with love

ABHI : jaan please yar

Manik pushes her towards the door and nandu takes few steps but then again stops and looks back him.

MANIK : kyaaa huaaa

Nandini slowly walks towards him and moves her hands from his pocket to chest making him drive crazy

MANIK : your are forcing me to

Nandini places her hands on his lips saying shhh. He looks her and gets lost in her eyes. She slowly keeps her hands on buttons of his shirt. He looks down and holds her hands.

MANIK : listen ye tum

NANDINI : kya hua sirf tum hi ye sab kar sakthe main nahi

Manik smiles and blushes

Nandini moves her hand and slowly caresses his chest making him hard to control himself. He closes his eyes tightly.

NANDINI : kyaa huaa manik while caressesing his chest.

MANIK : woo woo and stops

She smiles and slowly moving her hands closes his shirt buttons. He opens his eyes and looks his shirt and then her.

ABHI : jaan tere pair padtha hoon aaja please

NANDINI : haan aari hoon and starts to leave but manik holds her.

MANIK : ye kyun kiya tumne (pointing his shirt)

NANDINI : kya maine pucha ki tumne ye kyu kiya(pointing her hair)

MANIK : main ladka ho

NANDINI : main janthi hoon

Manik again unbuttons his shirt and looks nandini. She gets angry and again starts buttoning his shirt.

He smiles and holds her hands.

MANIK : arrreey mujhe aise hi pasandh hain

NANDINI : par mujhe nahi pasandh

MANIK : par kyun

NANDINI : mujhe tumhe explain karne ki zarurath nahi hain

MANIK : par

She finishes buttoning.

NANDINI : tumhe salman khan ban neki zarurath nahi hain and turns her face.

Manik smiles and to tease her again tries to open his buttons but nandu hits his hands and pulls him closer holding his collar.

NANDINI : dubara ye karne ki sochna bi math & listen mr manik malhotra am warning you apne kapde teek se pehena zyada show of karne ki zarurath nahi hain

He places his hands around her waist.

MANIK : kyu iss main problem kya hain vaise thab se tumhare samne bi main tho

NANDINI : mere samne jaise bi ho usse koyi farak nahi padtha par bahar sab ke samne

MANIK : acha tho tumhare samne main kaise bi dikh saktha ho par sabke samne nahi aisa kyu haa

NANDINI : wo isliye kyuki tumhe kisi bi haal main dekhne ka hak sirf mera hain

Manik smiles looking her and she continues "tho isliye ache bache ki tharah meri bath mano hmm"

Manik nods as yes and smile looking down.

She continues vaise bi tumhare hottness ko mere alawa koyi aur jel bi nahi saktha hain.

Manik looks her and abhi shouts once again.

She quickly pecks his lips and runs away shouting "aari hoon".
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nice update
loved it
finaaly threr differences r cleard
continue soon
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Amazing update...
Naughty manik and blushing nandu...
Finally manan are together...
Just loved it...it was wonderful...
Update soon
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Beautiful story nd beautifully written...read almost all chapters in one to... Superb update dear... Ipude soon... Waiting
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Amazing
Superb
Finally they solved
There
Differences
And the way
you
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It's ausom
Now I really
Want to knew
How they confessed
Each Other
Love
And what happened
When mukyabhi knew
about it
Continue soon😛😛😛
Eagerly waiting for it
Love
Diya

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Hi dear when will u update the next parts waiting eagerly pls update soon pls
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PART 53 :
Manik smiles rubbing his hair and closes his eyes thinking all those things which happened few minutes back.

Here Abhi & nandini start walking.

ABHI : jaan tumne itni der kyu laga di agar help chahiye tha tho mujhe bol dethi na

NANDINI : woo chodo na ab tho main agayi na

ABHI : haan vaise manik bolra tha ki usse koyi kam hain aur bahar bi jara tha tho isliye maine usse tumhe dress dene keys dedi

NANDINI : haan teek hain na

ABHI : vaise jaan tumne ye kyu pehna

NANDINI : kyu

ABHI : nahi matlab traditional look hain na aur hum tho party main hai

NANDINI : ooo par mere paas kuch aur nahi tha change karne ke liye

ABHI : chel teek hain chod

NANDINI : main achi nahi lagri kya

ABHI : nahi jaan achi lagri ho

NANDINI : sach sach bolo am looking good na

"You are looking beautiful"

She knew who it was and wearing a huge smile turned back to look him

"Beautiful more than a star" and he looked her eyes.

Listening his words her eyes started shining, shining with happiness brighter than a star.

He felt happy seeing her eyes shine and smiled hugely seeing her.

She too smiled and looked down blushing. Manik was lost looking her.

ABHI : manikkk

MANIK : heyyy & walked near them.

ABHI : tum yaha

MANIK : haan wo actually kuch kam tha par tum log yaha

ABHI : hoo haan jaan ko change karna tha na isliye

MANIK : (looking nandu) hoo par main ne tho bahuth der pehle diya tha na tumhe dress

NANDINI : haa

MANIK : tho phir itni der kya karri thi haan and smirks

NANDINI : wooo der hogayi bas

ABHI : acha guys chelo

MANIK : yaa yaa chelo

Abhi walks first and nandini follows him while manik was behind nandu

Manik holds nandu from back and slowly whispers "what did u say while coming out of the room"

Nandini removes her hands and "I don't know what you are talking about" and goes infront of abhi

Manik smiles and they soon reach to hall where party was going on.

Manik and nandini were smiling looking each other for ever few seconds and doing the same reached near FAB 5.

KABIR : (looking manan) arrey kya hua itni jaldi kyu aa gaye mujhe laga tumhe aur thodi der tho pakka hoga

ABHI : ye kya bolra hain kabir

KABIR : kuch nahi tujhe samaj nahi ayega hain na nandu

Nandini smiles and looks down

KABIR : hai hai kya muskurahat hain

Abhi looks nandu and kya hua jaan

NANDINI : kuch nahi bas aise hi

ABHI : ooo vaise kabir tu ne jo kaha

DHRUV : arrey abhi ye pagal hain kuch na kuch boltha rehtha hain tum log baito na kade kyu hoon

Everyone sits and this time manik sits beside nandini due to which abhi sits beside mukthi facing opposite to nandu

KABIR : manik tu itni der kaha laga diya patha hain hum kitna pareshan hore the

MANIK : wo kaam tha tho

NANDINI : arrey aisa kaunsa kaam tha jiski vajah se tumhe itni der lag gayi haa and smiles devilishly

MANIK : Sochlo sach batha dunga phir mujhe kuch math bolna

MUKTHI : ye chel kya raha hain

MANIK : wo darasal mukthi bath ye hain ki main aur nandini

Nandini makes her eyes wide and signals no

ABHI : tum aur jaan????

Nandini looks manik with pleading eyes and manik smiling at her says
Wo main aur nandini jab mile the upar jab main usse dress dene gaya tha tho patha nahi kaha se iski friend aa gayi aur mujhse chipak gayi. Maine usse kaha bi ki mujhe kaam hain tho phir bi mere sath ayi aur mere kaam katam hone thak wait karke mujhse bathe ki aur bath karthe karthe itna vakth lag gaya

Nandini got relaxed listening this.

ALIA : jab itna hot and handsome ladka dikh gaya ho tho kise chodne ko dil kartha hain

NANDINI POV : dekhliya ayyappa sab apki galthi hain kisne kaha tha isse itna hot and handsome paida karne ke liye and turns her head pouting.

Manik notices this and smiles.

MUKTHI : vaise thi kaun wo

MANIK : chodo na mukthi

Manik slowly holds nandu hand & looks her.

MANIK : (slowly) tho bolo

NANDINI : kyaaa

MANIK : jo tum kamre main keh gayi aur jo thodi der pehle apne dimag main kehri thi

NANDINI : maine kuch nahi kaha

She tries to free her hand but he holds it tightly and doesn't let her to free it. She gets tired and so doesn't say anything. She turns her face and he starts caressesing her hand with his another hand. She slowly smiles and turns towards to him. Soon they both get lost in each other.

KABIR : do dil mil rahe hain

DHRUV : magar chupke chupke

Manan come out of their world and look kabir & dhruv.

KABIR : kya hua disturb kiya

Nandini frees her hands and looks down hiding her smile. Manik gives a serious look to kabir.

KABIR : kya hua gana acha nahi hain kya

ABHI : lekin ab ye gana kyu

KABIR : bas aise hi man kiya tho

ABHI : hoo yar ye party itni boring kyu hain

MUKTHI : well abi kuch shuru nahi hua hain tho isliye bore hora hain

ABHI : kuch shuru matlab

MUKTHI : har saal yaha par kuch games kele jathe hain and am sure is baar bi kuch na kuch interesting zarur hoga

NANDINI : wowww games and suddenly seeing mukthi becomes silent

MUKTHI : haan kyu tumhe pasandh hain kya

ABHI : pasandh kya pagal ho jathi hain games ke naam sunthe hi

NANDINI : abhi

ABHI : kyaa

NANDINI : kya hua

ABHI : kya kaha tu ne

NANDINI : maine kya kaha

ABHI : tu ne mujhe "abhi" kaha

NANDINI : haan

ABHI : par kyu

NANDINI : woo and looks manik & then kyuki wo tumhara naam hain

Manik smiles and kabir & dhruv notice this.

ABHI : arrey wo nam sabke liye hai tere liye nahi

Manik gets a little bit angry but soon calm downs himself.

NANDINI : offoo ye naam main kya rakha hain aur tu itna serious kyu hora hain

ABHI : nahi kuch nahi lekin achanak se ye naam badlav kyu

KABIR : badlav ache ke liye hotha hain dost relax

ABHI : haan par jaan wo

"Hellooo guys and girls"

All turn and look at stage

ANCHOR : you all might be getting bore right

All shout "yesss"

ANCHOR : okkk so let me make you all enjoy the party

All shout wooo and clap

ANCHOR : so guys would you all like to play a game

All in unison yesss

MUKTHI : kaha tha na maine so here you go with the game

ANCHOR : since its a yes let me explain you all.

Some people come and place a table and two bowls on it.

ANCHOR : so guys as you can see a table and two bowls on it let me explain you why are they placed here.

NANDINI : its very interesting.

MANIK : abhi thak kuch shuru bi nahi hua hain

DHRUV : yar common thuje in sab main interest nahi hain tho iska Matlab ye nahi hai ki kisi aur ko bi interest na ho

NANDINI : tumhe in sab main interest nahi hain

MANIK : not at all

ANCHOR : so guys you all need to write your names on a chit and all the girls chits will be placed in one bowl and all boys name will be placed in other bowl.

All look confused

ANCHOR : confused???? So let me explain you clearly. once all the chits are placed in bowls I will pick one one chit from both the bowls. Since there would be one girl name and one boy name they both will be partners tonight and shall perform together in the game.

NANDINI : wowww

MANIK : nonsense

Nandini gives him an angry look

ANCHOR : so common guys what are you all waiting for just write u r names in the chit quickly.

ALIA : manik please at least this time you play naa

MANIK : no waysss

Nandini looks him with pleading eyes but he nods her no.

ANCHOR : so guys am sending this bowls to you so carefully place the chit inside it.

KABIR : yar manik kya karra kel na maza ayega

MANIK : guys you play na am not interested.

ABHI : common guys you can't force him like that aur jaan kya hua tu kyu apna naam nahi likri

NANDINI : nahi mood nahi hain kelne ka tho bas

DHRUV : arrey nandini baki sab chodo aur game par dyan do

MANIK : thodi der pehle tho uchalri thi na tum phir ab kya hogaya

NANDINI : main Jo bi karu wo meri marzi

MANIK : cool

ABHI : jaan enough now main tumhara naam likri hoon and you will even play the game

NANDINI : nahi

One boy comes taking chits and all place their chits in bowl

NANDINI : abhi nahi nahi

ABHI : ye raha mera chit aur ye hain jaan ka

NANDINI : kyu kiya tumne

ABHI : shhh now just wait

ANCHOR : so here are the chits. Let's see whose the first lucky couple. So first couple is abhi & mukthi.

FAB 5 shouts loudly wooo

Mukthi and abhi smiles.

ANCHOR : next one is dhruv & alia

Once again FAB 5 shout loudly.

ALIA : thank god

Everyone smile

KABIR : thank God par kyuu

ALIA : arrey agar koyi aur miltha tho kitna problem hotha just imagine sara vakth uske sath goddd

MUKTHI : yaa acha hua ki kam se kam hame wo partners mile jine hum janthe hain

ABHI : yes partner & they both smile

NANDINI POV : ayyappaa ab main kya karu mujhe tho zarur koyi aur milega kyuki ye janab games main koyi interest Jo nahi rakthe and holds her head.

Anchor announces few more names.

ANCHOR : so now its kabir & navya

KABIR : yarrr ab ye navya kaun hain

NAVYA : hey matha rani hamari raksha karna

ANCHOR : guys here are the last chits and mean while i open it i request you all to come and join me on the stage.

All start leaving while nandu was still sitting holding her head.

KABIR : nandini chel utja

NANDINI : arrey par mera naam

ABHI : last chit tera hi hoga of course chel chel and drag her with him without even giving her a chance to look manik.

KABIR : pakka na

MANIK : kyaa

DHRUV : tu nahi aara na

MANIK : nahi

MUKTHI : dekh abi bi vakth hain

ALIA : haan

MANIK : guys tum log jao

Mukthi and alia leave.

KABIR : mera dil kehtha hain

MANIK : kyaa

KABIR : wo tu bi jantha hain aur main bi and winks.

Kabir and dhruv too leave.

ANCHOR : so the last girl is nandini

NANDINI POV : chel nandini thayar ho ja patha nahi kiska naam suna padega tujhe

ANCHOR : The one who gonna join this beauty tonight is wooo give a huge applause guys he is already on the stage and pointing towards the person he is none other than the cute and hot and handsome and heartthrob of all the girls who is THE MANIK MALHOTRA

Nandini smiles hugely and jumps in excitement.

KABIR : control meri maa control koyi dekh lega

NANDINI : haan haan and smiles

He walks towards her and stands beside her.

MANIK : all the best miss murthy

NANDINI : all the best mr malhotra

They both smile looking each other.
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It was fabulous update .please update the next part soon. Thankyou dear.pm me next time if possible .😊

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