#2//The Impulsive Soul-Mates// Ch-31 on thread 3 link updtd on pg 150 - Page 53

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Posted: 10 years ago
that was awesome..
awwee manik talking to the baby thinkung he lost it.. sooo cute..
nandini us thinking all negative abt him..
manik busy in impressng evryone.. but looks like his mothr in law is like his love.. tough nut..
lol cabirz funny.. manik is doing everythng to get her back.. good going boy..
the cockroach scene was funny n cute..
and that retrning the kiss line was epic..
seriously only manik can say somethimg like that
n the truth is fynally out that shez engagrnmnt..waiting to read more... update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yupppiiieee...
Finally u updated ... I'm sooo hhaapppyyy ...
Seriously u jst dnt know how much I was waiting fr this nxt update ... U know I'm soo much in love with ur ff ... I was stalking this place every day n every hour ...
Thank u sooo very much fr the update ...🤗
Okay now coming to the update ... I totally loved ittt... From the strt to the end ... Each n everything ...
I always fell short of words to describe abt the update ... I dnt know frm where to strt ... There r so many things I have to say ...
OKay ... So Manik is trying, trying hard n everything to get nandini back ...
He came near her n firstly he apologized his baby fr losing him/her ... Though he dnt know tht he still has their baby with him ... Nandini felt bad fr tht moment to hide the truth frm manik ...😔
I also think the baby wants her dad to know abt her existence...
Mukti's sarcastic comment ... "Yes she wanted to puke on ur face bt thn thought u r nt worthy of tht also" .. He he he ...🤣🤣
Mukti dragged manik frm nandini's room or he would have fired all his questions to her ...
Nandini really needed to talk to manik ... Coz wht she thinks is not true ... Manik was only looking at her n the rest of the world least bothered to him ...
So finally manik told her why he was there n how he realises his mistakes ... He was trying to make her understand wht he feels fr her n how much guilty he is fr his deeds ...
I really liked those lines of manik when he was holding her hand ...
How sincerely he said I love u to her ... Coz he really meant it ... Bt this time he has to work really hard becoz the damage is bigger n deeper ..."It took me sometime to understand what perfect match these make." ❤️
Nandini's mom is suspicious abt manik n nandini ... She really sensed tht somethings fishyy ...
Manik won hearts of nanu n nani easily by his intelligence n sweet talks bt her mom was nt tht easy to get impressed ...
Manik was around nandini 24*7 ... Always having a look at her without caring abt the surrounding n people ... His morning n night everything is nandini ... He doesn't bothers her bt is around her everytime ...
He is trying his level Bst ...
My favorite was the whole cockroach thing ... Manik is also scared of cockroaches ... He was telling her to deal with it as it was her cockroach ... Ha ha ha ... 🤣 🤣 🤣
Really loved the end part with all cockroach drama ...
And his EPIC choice of punishment ... Tht kiss thing ... He was looking at her cutely thinking it to be the best punishment ... As then it will b equal fr both ...😳🤣😆
Sooo finally manik got to know abt nandini's wedding ... Another shock fr him ...

Now have to see wht will he do nxt ... How will he get to know abt their baby ... How will he handle this wedding thing ...
I dnt have to say it bt u know can't help it ... U r an amazingly awesmmm writer ...👏👏 And I love ur writing ...
Seriously loads n loads of love n wishes to u ...🤗❤️👍🏼
I know u have ur work n personal life n personal probs bt thn also u r giving us updates ...
All I want to say is ... Take ur time to update bt plz plz plz dnt stop writing this ff plz ... N if possible only thn update the nxt part jalldii ...
Thank u again n waiting fr the nxt part ...
Edited by Sm0405 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg epic outstanding mind-blowing awesome update

Manik still dint get the hint that she is still pregnant as he is so much engrossed in trying to convince her to forgive him or punish him as much as she wants he wants to be close to her to hold her kiss her touch her but he couldn't as she wont let him do anything and yet he still dint get to know that she is getting married and now when he knows what he will do next as he is impulsive and wants to kill the guy who wants to marry his Nandu

Now manik will come to know that Nandu is still pregnant and he wont let go of her

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
i m in a crappy mood so i'll only give a tiny review
your fic made my day.and put a smile on my face.

manik is so immature.literally a bachcha.sometimes i feel like hitting him hard sometimes feel give him sweet smacker like nandu did.but he is adorable...

and good nandu is still strong.gadha manik thinks he can get away with all that,that easily.

anyway loved the mukti,cabir,manik convo.

loved that saying sorry to the kid he thought he has lost and admitting he won't ever lose nandu.and i felt butterflies everywhere when manik said he can't control himself around nandini and wants to make a football team.dayum ☺️

shit pata lag gaya manik ko.ab ayega maaza.please pm me next time you update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Manan Garden nok-jhok...

ohh god usski mom ne sach me toh inhe ni dekhaaa shyd isliye shak kiya hoo...
Bichara Manik...

Cabir Manik n Mukti discussion how to manofy Nandu...

"She is not ready to listen anything yaar..she is very angry and hurt..sab.. sab tum logon ki galti hai..couldnt you guys stop me when I was being a jerk" "What the hell!!!!!", both Cabir and Mukti rested their palms on their hips and glared at Manik as if they would chew him alive. "Fine!!It was my fault", Manik quickly took his allegation back, "but just tell me guys how do I get her back please"

hehehehe lol 😃 😆
seriously that was the scene i laughed alot oh god ur fault then my fault rofl... 😛

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Mom n Nani's talk

hmmm kuch to gadbad hai - mom

isss ka dimaag ghoom gya ya fir pagal ho gyi ye ab toh pkka - Nani 😃 😆


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Awww how cutely he kissed her tummy n talked with that that making me fall for uh yaar how someone make this much cutie part loved that sooo much...
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ok ok back to story
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hehe lol again Manik ..
The Manik Malhotra was scared of Cockroaches ohhh OMG mai vahi sochu yaha ye gussa h or isse Romance dikh rha but ni Isse Cockroach dikh rhaaa oh god sooo cute he was in this part...
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this is the long cmnt first time in this story...
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love you yaar
tc ty for pm
keep smiling always like me 😊 😉 😛
stay blessed
and plz update soon not actually soon but update ASAP can't wait more plz plz plz plz plz plz plz... 😉 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Eagerly waiting for what will manik do to stop this wedding
Plz update the next part soon
Edited by mairaallauddin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Utimate ...just luved it ...lamba walla update ...liked it ...continue soon n take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks please help me Iddo not know how handle if
Ihave nno friends how can receive a friend request 🥱 🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part loved it updated soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey its osssmmm loving urr ff 😊 nandu ki mom ko shak ho gyaa nd manik being manik he will not losse nandini at any cost nd for his suprise or shock nandu is going to marry but he will not let this happenn...!!😊😆Thnx for PM 😊😊

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