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Hi guys... I can see your 1000 volt smile
Because i updated it really early unlijr me...i know...tganqu for all ypur cmments...really appreriate them all...

CHAPTER 23 - CHAND ASMANO SE

"Oye...let's go what are we waiting for..why are you walking so slow...are you listening me...Cabir I am hell tierd " said Navya turning around and she was shocked seeing all other's settling behind the bushes.

"What the hell...what are you guys doing her...why are you hiding here...come let's go let them enjoy their date"

"Ohky kiddo...take this car keys and drive back home... " said Cabir passing her keys.

"Shutup...I am not going without you...hawww!!!! You are going to watch them hiding behind these bushes..."

"Well yes Einstein!... Ohky stop wasting my time and sit her if you want to but I am not going anywhere."

"Shutup guys!!! Look nandini has arrived she is looking so beautiful" said aliya dreamily.
"Itna bura haal to hamare kanpur ke cinema hall mein bhi nahi hota tha.." Mummered Navya.
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As nandini entered she was surprised. She was about to keep her first step when she noticed a jar with fireflies. As she raised her gaze she forgot to breath as she saw fireflies jar all around. She picked a jar in her hand and bought it to her face level so that she could get better view of it. She smiled seeing the fireflies.


Her attention was suddenly grabbed by the golden light flashing on her face. Nandini was awestruck as she saw hundreds of fire balloons in the sky covering whole sky. She was mesmerised by the beauty.
" its magical"nandini whispered as she was mesmerised by the beauty around her.


Nandini heard rhythm of guitar making the view even more alive. She searched for the source and started taking small steps towards the rhythm. Nandini's eyes meet with manik. She felt the world around her swirling and she realized she had forgotten to exhale. he smiled looking at her as if her face had given her away or he had heared my hearts crazy stunts.

Manik started taking measured steps towards nandini while playing guitar playing. she could hardly even blink! Never in her life till now she might have seen such a man with perfect and influencing body shape. Forgetting everything around her, she shamelessly scanned him from top to bottom, as he was clad in a black formal suit with white shirt gosh! He had a creased purple pocket square properly tucked in contrasting nandini attire, complimenting cher completely. the sexy subtle adding to his perfection, and that intense pair of eyes were enough to make a girl go weak in her knees! He was nothing, but a perfect creation of God she had and can ever come across.
( please guys... I have fished all the attire with lot of efforts and please if you don't like imagine anything you would love to see them in but I don't want any critisim for the outfits... No offences please)

Chand aasmano se laapata ho gaya
Chal ke mere ghar mein aa gaya, aa gaya
Main khush kismat hoon bakhuda is tarah
Ho jaye poori ik dua jis tarah

As lyrics fell in her ears Nandini's eyes grew wider at the choice of song for the moment. (Can this place get anymore romantic...gosh! Its heaven...couldn't ask for more... I could have given my whole life for this moment...)thought nandini.

Tere bin meri jana kabhi
Ik pal bhi guzaara nahi
Teri aarzoo ne khud se begaana kar diya

Manik was awestruck by her beauty.Her face looked so beautiful ,her creamy skin glowed in the golden light ,the long dark lashes and those tempting full rosy lips--at that moment .manik looked unearthly .He felt desire surge through his body.Her slender figure looked so delicate and delicious in that saree. He slowly and silently moved towards her. He could here his heart pounding in his chest.

Chand aasmano se laapata ho gaya
Chal ke mere ghar mein aa gaya, aa gaya

Nandini instantly dropped her gaze and waited for the blush to come. She secretly wished that he should not look at her but her luck he started coming close to nandini with measured steps. Her breath started to get irregular and blush deepened . she looked up only to find his piercing gaze on me. Manik was only inches away from her.

Maine tujhe tohfe mein yeh dil diya
Tune mujhe badle mein yeh jahaan diya

Manik saw nandini standing shyly with her hands clasped. He noticed as he moved closer nandini didn't move back. He went really close to nandini when their eyes met. He was happy to see nandini turning in crimson red. It is always a treat to see nandini blush. He felt like he fell for nandini all over again.

Main hi janu, tu hi jane jo hai darmiyaan
Tujh se hai meri jana ghar yeh aashiyaan...

He removed a few strands of hair from her face and gently moved his knuckles across her cheek. She felt so smooth and soft. Then he touched her lips with the tip of his thumb.He was amazed how such a small and innocent act fuel such wild desires in him.

Tere bin meri jana kabhi
Ik pal bhi guzaara nahi
Teri aarzoo ne khud se begaana kar diya.

Nandini closed her eyes feeling the touch that she was craving for so long. She opened her eyes as she saw manik slowly moving behind her while singing. She don't have the courage to turn around to face him. She keep her eyes closed to feel his warm voice and a shy smile played on her lips.

Chand aasmano se laapata ho gaya
Chal ke mere ghar mein aa gaya, aa gaya.

she literally felt his chest vibrate against her as She felt warm hand on her waist. She suddenly turned around out of nervousness only giving manik a access to slip his hand completely around her waist.Manik slowly lifted her face with other hand. Nandini looked into his eyes.
Manik softly kissed her forehead and her cheeks. Another tingle of excitement danced the length of her spine. She smiled nervously with closed eyes forgetting the world around her.

Tune mere raston ko manzil kiya
Tujhe paake zindagi ko hasil kiya
Tere liye hai yeh saansein, tay kar liya
Tu hai toh hai yeh kahani, mere sathiya

Manik slightly brushed his lips with her. Nandini grabbed manik's coat tightly in her fist. Manik noticed his effect on her. Manik could fell that nandini could clasp any time so he hardened his hold on her waist and twirled her lightly making her back facing the gate.
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Aliya Cabir mukti dhruv and Navya were at lose of words. The never in there wildest dream thought that things would they did will come out like this.

"That's completely magical" said aliya in aww...slipping her hands around dhruvs arm and clinging to his a to which dhruv smiled and tilted his head to place it on hers.

"I never knew manik is so romantic"said Navya with a smile.

"I know... Nandini is really a lucky girl"said mukti with genuine smile.

"Hey, I am not able to see anything...why manik facing his back towards us..."

"Coz kiddo!!! Adult film has started...close your eyes every one..." Said Cabir placing his hands on Navya and aliyas eyes.

"Shutup cabir... Moreover we are not her to see all this we have to concentrate on the only thing we are here for...I think may be manik knows that we are still here" said mukti.

"No ways... " to which mukti nodded
"Please tell me no"
"It can be... Than why do u think he is gonna turn around suddenly?."
"Ohky ... I don't wanna think about it... Let me have few moments in peace..." Said Cabir, bit nervous.
Cabir, dude if what mukti is saying is true...them please make me invisible tonight...hey Navya ki devi maa...bacha Lena...apka hi lal hu...please...pretty please) thought Cabir looking towards the sky.
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Tere bin meri jana kabhi
Ik pal bhi guzaara nahi
Teri aarzoo ne khud se begaana kar diya

Chand aasmano se laapata ho gaya
Chal ke mere ghar mein aa gaya, aa gaya

He held her face and angled her head to one side and placed his lips on hers. Slowly he nibbled her lips. He kissed her top lip then her bottom lip slowly drawing out the kiss. Her hands slipped around him, kissing him back. As their tongues danced with each other, taking them to some other world. Nandini was bombarded by the sensation. She slowly raised her hands making them slide towards his neck and clasped

Nandini's finger gazed his hair and pulled him, bringing him more closer. Manik's hand moved towards her bellybutton and he pressed it softly.she gasped lightly. Sensing his chance he quickly moved his tongue inside her mouth stocking his tongue with his. Nandini started trembling in his arms as her legs had almost given up. While manik made love to her mouth his hand which was on her belly button second ago started traveling upwards to which nandini's eyes opened immediately. She gasped and whispered softly "Manik" placing hers on manik's hand which was on her. Manik losses his hold around nandini and turned around for nandini to straighten herself. He mentally smacked himself for loosing himself.

He turned around and looked at nervous nandini. So to clear the air.

"Dinner is waiting, sweetheart!" Said manik gesturing her to which nandini obeyed by wounding her hand around his bicep.
As they walked towards the table. Nandini's jaw almost touched the ground seeing the view in ffront


Of her.

"Waaoo" was the word nandini whispered analysing the place.

she saw a white table with a champagne bottle and two glasses lying on it. Layout of the table was not so classy and not so simple.. It was simply perfect.
Manik pulled chair for her and helped her in adjusting in.

"Here you go...you don't have much choices... This is first time I am making someone eat food made by me"

"You made it!!!" Nandini's eyes grew wide as saucer.

Yup!! Whenever I used to visit dad...my dad himself made it for me...I always loved these paranthas... So I learnt from him.
When I was in London... I thank dad for it...because I am so not a seafood lover...so I just tried making this with what ever I could remember and ended up with this"

"You mean, you made it correctly in one go!!"

"Naaah!! Actually first time I nearly burnt the kitchen. And the second time I couldn't make the perfect dough...but I tried it till the time I get it perfect..." Said manik with a wide stupid grin.

"Typical manik-ish!!" Said nandini shaking her head slightly.

( for reader who haven't seen it... @glara...akka this ones for you)

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Its looking so yummy" said Navya.

Manik cooks!!!!!" Said shocked mukti.
Yes...you know what I also came to know about this talent of his , this evening only when I saw him in kitchen.
He slaped my hand when I was going to pick up one parantha. Not that I was stealing... I just wanted to taste if its good or hot"

Means you will eat whatever seems good to you... What if he made it to kill rat in the kitchen adding poison in it...then" said annoyed Navya.

It would have been beat day of your life... Isn't it?" Said cabir .

Oky...peace both of you... You guys don't even see the anything around and get started anywhere with your non sense bickering..." Said mukti.

And about cooking...manik is going to pay for it for not even telling us about his hidden talent" said dhruv to with everyone smiled wickedly.
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She dugged into the parantha. Manik was curiously looking trying to judge her expression. Nandini was surprised and amazed by the taste.
"Manik, seriously this is perfect... I mean I never had this Punjabi dish but I can still say that this is one of best parantha anyone can make"

"Sweetheart, buttering parantha will be better than buttering me"

"Indeed it will" said nandini dipping her spoon in curry.
And there was sudden silence around
She looked at manik and broke it fits of laughter seeing manik's -shocked+ surprised+ unbelievable- look.
"Aww!! You are ..." Said nandini between her giggles to which manik's face lightened thinking that she is gonna praise him.but his expression soon was changed into annoyance listening to the later part f the sentence " such a dramqueen"
Manik was mesmerised seeing nandini laughing.
Manik couldn't keep his expressions intact and he too broke in fits of laughter.
And later completed the main course.

That was awesome... Wooh I am full...its like
I am eating after ages"

"Really, you are full this early...I was thinking of giving your surprise now...but its alright"

Nandini was shocked and annoyed at same time. Manik don't wanted that so without fussing around he went away.

Nandini was so angry and started to mummer all the names she could give manik in annoyance while looking around the venue. The very next moment she saw something that took her by surprise.
She couldn't help but scream in glee " payasam!!!!"

"Yes payasam for the beautiful lady... But don't have it all alone...I don't want my girlfriend to look like a beach ball"

"I am ignoring the last comment because I have better things to do which includes eating payasam for now" said nandini and started gulping down as fast as she can.

Manik was amazed at the view in front of him as the girl just few moments ago couldn't have another bit of her food claiming that she was full is eating like she has been starving since medieval period.


"I thought the sentence ' I am full' means we can't eat anymore, right?"

"Yes!!! But that isn't a case with sweetdish...that to payasam..." Said nandini with the brightest smile and animating it with her expression which made manik smile.

"So how's it?"manik asked

"Its awesome...no no...i don't have words to describe it...out of the world... Even i cant make payasam like this...like i would have kissed the hands of the chef... "said nandini said innocently with wide eyes.

"Oh! Like that... Here you go" manik pulled his hand in front of nandini.
Listening to manik nandini gave him a questioning look but soon the spoon fell from her hand.
"You made it"
To which manik nodded like a obedient child but soon smirk played on his lips.
"I can't believe it"

"Aww... You believe it or not... But I made it myself...with help of our godfather 'google'...BTW my hand is paining"

"What?" Gave nandini a questioning look but seeing manik's smirk getting even wider she understood
She was trapped in her own words.

"You won't be getting anymore payasam if you don't do what you said... Come on my hand is paining"

Nandini took manik's hand in her hand and kissed it softly. The touch of her lips against his skin alone raised his raw desire. Nandini let her lips linger there for long time than required. She raised her head slowly to meet manik's eyes. She could feel the raw desire and passion in them . she felt her skin burning under his gaze.


She left his hand and started looking everywhere except him.

"Manik we need to talk..."

"Not now nandini... I don't want to spoil my as well as my date's mood...so your TALK can wait right"

"Manik, try to understand we need to talk..its really important and moreover""
"Shhh!!"manik said keeping a finger in her lips and coming dangerously close to nandini. His hot breath fanned above her lips making her stomach twitch.
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"Don't tell me another adult scene... Hey devi ma!!!.. Why they have to do all this publicly" said Navya, earning disbelief and anger look from others.

"If you haven't notice...they aren't doing anything in public...we public have invaded their privacy...and how can you say its second adult scene when you never saw first happening..."said Cabir, stating a fact to Navya.

"Shutup both of you...play your tom and Jerry games back home..." Said aliya.

" Moreover we are not able to hear everything clearly" said mukti.
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Manik slowly held her wrist and whispered on her lips.
"Come with me" to which nandini closed her eyes and let manik hold her and take her.

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Read now...all wanted a lambaa update... Here you go...
I want maximum comment this time...because this is the best way possible, I could make a date come out.

Please do comment ( lambaaa lambaaa this time...) And silent readers too please...even a word would give me a conformation about your existence and you being my reader...

Really excited to read your view...
Comment fast...as I still have a surprise to open ... And I am really anxvious as well as excited about it... But it will be uploaded when I will get best response from you guys...
Critisim about my work is more than welcome...

Please buddy me for further updates...
But I will be not accepting requests from any silent reader... Only the active readers will be receiving pmz from next update...

Plz don't think manik's friends saw anything...that was something really comical...manik is far more clever then them...;)

Gosh...I am gonna pass out... Bye guys...will be sending pmz bit late thsi time...sowwiieee for that ...

Love u tons...
Stay happy stay blessed...
Mishshergill


Edited by mishshergill - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Awesome chapter
Loved the song by the way

And MANIK COOKED!!!!!

It was the best surprise for nandini

Fab 4 + Navya watching manan was bad
but then har ekk friend kamina hota hai!

And I loved the tom and Jerry fights

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
awsm update misha.
cont soon dr.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Manik cooked really now this was surprising but he can do anything for nandini btw i loved how you
described the entire date especially the fireflies and fire balloons but the most interesting part apart
from manan obviously was how his friends were watching his entire date 😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
it's Awesome update👏
wow ... aaj kal esa romans dekhne ko kaha melta hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Waaoo!!! Congo for ur new thread. Loved the date. Wats cabir upto ??? Amazing update loved it ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Awesome update
Loved it so much
Lovely picture
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
just love it
thanks for adding pictures too
wonder what nandain wants to talk abt
waiting eagerly for ur next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
That was the Best Date Ever!!
And thankyou for adding those pics. The other thing is manik's dress. I imagined parth in it and couldn't stop blushing and felt the butterflies. He would have looked smoking hot in it.😊
Edited by rimsha01 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Superb fantastic update dea. ...
Loved it
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm

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