#2 !!MANAN ff!! Selfish and Selfless[ LINK TO THRD 3& index/pg140] - Page 11

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Gosh!!!!! You are 4 chapters late...

This time... I will kill you Anu...

I don't want any excuses...

Don't you dare give me any...coz I am not gonna buy any of them...

And now u have ended up with 2 penneding punishments...

Shivani and mish horror dreams...

Mishshergill

plz dun kill me.. otherwise mere commentz tujhe nhi milenge :p :p
thik h thik h.. hum haste haste tere har punishment ko cmplt kr denge :D :D

Fabulous update

Awesome

Awesome...
Loved it
Specially fab 5 part...naughty cabir...seriously loved it
Update soon

Hey iam new to dis and have just started reading your story. Highly appreciate d creative touch u have put for this story...its just amazing...please let me know how can i reader d further chapter

ohh god!! fab4 n navya kya kr rhe h bushes k peeche chhup kr?? :o :o
hahahahah :D :D kanpur k cinema hall me shaayad isse v zyada bura haal hota hoga..
awww.. the decorations were perfect.. jar of fireflies.. hot balloons.. dinner table.. evrythng.. ofcourse perfect toh hona hi tha.. aftr all manik ki gf k liye jo fab4+navya ne decorate kia tha <3 <3
nandini ka reaction.. i cn vry well imagine her expressions :) :)
yaar.. manik itna smoking hot, adorable, cute, handsm hunk, sexy n muscular q h?!!
outfits perfect h.. atlst me toh criticise bilkul v nhi krungi..
wohi me sochu dat manik simply nandini ko adore kr hi nhi skta!! ofcourse desirez honge (heheh)..
wwwaaattt!! manik cn cook :o :o
kya manik ko pta h abt fab4+navyaz presence?? bdw fab4 wahan kon se kaam k liye ruki hui h??
cavya.. kuch nhi ho skta inka..
nandini smart ho gyi h kaafi.. manik ko usne praise nhi kia :D :D
the best funny scene.. payasam wala (hahahah)..
c.. dis tym jaldi comment kia..
thank uh pm k liye.. isi tarah jaldi jaldi update kia kro ;) ;)

Awsme part pic were awsme. Does manik know about the gang present there. Waiting for the next update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.

U really penned v beautifully every emotion hoping 4 best