#2 !!MANAN ff!! Selfish and Selfless[ LINK TO THRD 3& index/pg140] - Page 54

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

Sorry..!! hehehehe..!!

Kaan pakar kay sorry for late comment..!!

Chapter 28 A

Karan hahahaha Super flirt..

And Arushi's poetry hilarious..!

Manik"Such a desperate attempt" reminded me of that scene..! Oh God..!

Then the introduction and leg pulling scenes were too good..!

That Sali wala joke..! Cabir:Yahan hum complete wife bnana chty hain aur ya adhe pay khush..!! hahaha

Yaar Aryaman hahahaha poor boy..!

Har jgha maar he parti hai is ko tery FF's me..!!

Nikhil and Jiya are too good..possessive boyfriend..

And Navya the planner cool..!!

Ceremony was too good..

Chapter 28 B

Nandu the intelligent guessed something..!!

Aryaman boy you shouldn't mess with miss Nandini Murthy..

Yaar i would love to see a destination wedding..

Again Poor Aryaman that Crab joke hahahaha 🤣

Crab in the hall..!! God..!! Aur Cabir a protective daddy..!! Call the manager hahaha..!!

And Lastly the MaNan scene awesome,hot romantic..!! Nandu ka I love you..!! hyee..!!

Superb update..

Loved it..

Love you mishu..!!

Okay i kno m very bad..i broke my promise too...sorry mishu...u kno na wt i ws doin aftr 10pm
chapter 28 was freaking awesome!! Loved it tooo much!! Evry character ws superb!! U wrote it all beautifully mish!!
28 a-karan tacker!!! U kno m a huge fan of his!!! In saas bahu dramas..he's my fav actor!! Such a cutie n hotty he is!!! I love u so much fr bringing him in ur ff mish!! Okay his flirting wid nandu...typical karan tacker!! Arushi's shayari...which ws urs...i ws ROFLing so much!! I read that line so mny times n laughed lyk crazy!!! "Such a desperate attempt it was"...one more thing which made me laugh...u make me cry u make me laugh...u make crazy..u make me insane...gosh! Mish ur FF drives me crazy!!
Intro was lovely...manik didnt say abt navya n she complained abt that dustbin thingy..!! Lol...does jiya kno abt her dad's deeds??!!! Nandu's intro...manik's sali..adhi gharwali...naughty manik! Cabir's line was amazing!!
Navya...yo navya!! Superb plan!! Nandu touched all the shagun b4 arushi!! Loved it vry much!!
28 b-aryamann...poor soul!! Tere dono ff mein yeh bechara death door pe aake khada hota hai!! Ek baar manik toh dusri baar nandu!! "Like manik,like nandini!! Totally made for each other!!" I second him! Nandu just burst over him!! I use this line "dafaq just happened?"...completely same line!! Destination wedding!! Udaipur!! Royal palaces..!! Woww!! Incredible!! Now...crab..wild crab bit aryamann...LMAO!! Manik knew it...heheh...cabir became all possessive towards his princess...aww possessive daddy:)...manik noticed nandu smiling like a fool...if no1 notices manik will always b der wid his eyes fixed on her 24*7...!!
MaNan romance...no words!! Hawtt!! Sizzling!! Sensuous!! Prove it...u r uneffected by me!! This is impossible!! Literally no words!! Idk wt to say!! I Love You Manik...it froze me too!! Manik heard those words frm her mouth for d first time na!! I loved it so vry much!! Checking iut my lips..that line ws just so good! It gave me goosebumps!!
Loved d chappy...waiting fr part c!!
Solly fr late comment mish...!! Kaan pakadke sorrieee

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

Okay i kno m very bad..i broke my promise too...sorry mishu...u kno na wt i ws doin aftr 10pm
chapter 28 was freaking awesome!! Loved it tooo much!! Evry character ws superb!! U wrote it all beautifully mish!!
28 a-karan tacker!!! U kno m a huge fan of his!!! In saas bahu dramas..he's my fav actor!! Such a cutie n hotty he is!!! I love u so much fr bringing him in ur ff mish!! Okay his flirting wid nandu...typical karan tacker!! Arushi's shayari...which ws urs...i ws ROFLing so much!! I read that line so mny times n laughed lyk crazy!!! "Such a desperate attempt it was"...one more thing which made me laugh...u make me cry u make me laugh...u make crazy..u make me insane...gosh! Mish ur FF drives me crazy!!
Intro was lovely...manik didnt say abt navya n she complained abt that dustbin thingy..!! Lol...does jiya kno abt her dad's deeds??!!! Nandu's intro...manik's sali..adhi gharwali...naughty manik! Cabir's line was amazing!!
Navya...yo navya!! Superb plan!! Nandu touched all the shagun b4 arushi!! Loved it vry much!!
28 b-aryamann...poor soul!! Tere dono ff mein yeh bechara death door pe aake khada hota hai!! Ek baar manik toh dusri baar nandu!! "Like manik,like nandini!! Totally made for each other!!" I second him! Nandu just burst over him!! I use this line "dafaq just happened?"...completely same line!! Destination wedding!! Udaipur!! Royal palaces..!! Woww!! Incredible!! Now...crab..wild crab bit aryamann...LMAO!! Manik knew it...heheh...cabir became all possessive towards his princess...aww possessive daddy:)...manik noticed nandu smiling like a fool...if no1 notices manik will always b der wid his eyes fixed on her 24*7...!!
MaNan romance...no words!! Hawtt!! Sizzling!! Sensuous!! Prove it...u r uneffected by me!! This is impossible!! Literally no words!! Idk wt to say!! I Love You Manik...it froze me too!! Manik heard those words frm her mouth for d first time na!! I loved it so vry much!! Checking iut my lips..that line ws just so good! It gave me goosebumps!!
Loved d chappy...waiting fr part c!!
Solly fr late comment mish...!! Kaan pakadke sorrieee

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Hehhehe!!!! Thanqu tosh...

Yeah... Jiya ko koi batoa uske dad kya kya karta the...

Areee!!! I too love karan tackar... Year his dressing sense his style..his down to earth nature... Him plating parnks... His obsession for shoes... His smile... Killer!!!!! Yaar jab who blush Marta hai...I litrally stop breathing... He is so hot!!!!

Aryamann... I find him cute like aliya does... USSe Bali La bakra banane mein bahut maza ata hai...

anytime fr u mish:)
aree...i too love his blushing face a lot!! Sachii...evrythin just stops wen he blushes!! Dont ask my condition wen i ws watchin odani n EHMMBH...gosh! That scene i still remember it!! His body wet...only in a towel n d BG music!! Oh man..! I cant stop blushing!! Literally hot!!
Aryamann...i always enjoy seeing him on d death door...lolol...
Now jaldi update karo!! Cant wair fr part c!!

Haye Mish...

Ohh Mish...

hey..i came through this ff yesterday bt i hve completed all the parts despite i had so many assignments to complete... 😊
its because i luved ur ff nd most imp thing is that u hve made it very practical...even nandu isnt wrong bt because of the fear of seeing her love, manik all alone after she will be no more,she losed precious 7 years of her life without manik.. 😭 so i m hoping that nandu will let go of her fear soon nd accept manik to be with her nd live with positivity that nothing will happen to her till they r together...waiting fr that day 😳
till then i m luving nd enjoying all the masti,fun nd surprises...update soon... 😆

Sweety part-c kab update karegi ??? Eagerly waiting for The new update yaar ..abhi toh maja start hoyi hain ... So jaldi jaldi update kar meri jaan waiting waiting waiting ...love u itna Sara ...with lots and lots of love and hugs

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

Sweety part-c kab update karegi ??? Eagerly waiting for The new update yaar ..abhi toh maja start hoyi hain ... So jaldi jaldi update kar meri jaan waiting waiting waiting ...love u itna Sara ...with lots and lots of love and hugs