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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill


Are!!! Jaan... I am working on that chappy only..but its going longer than I was expecting... I will be updating it before 3 today...sorry for the delay sweetie...

ur chapters are way worthy to wait ... We can wait for ur beautiful updates ...koi baat ni... Bolte hain na sabhar ka fal mitha hota hain so take ur time meri jaan and give us a wonderful update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello beautiful ladies...
Lovely day isn't it...

Ohky.. Many of you had a question in there head which you guys peneed down in your comments.." Is nandini mad... She is drinking..."
Guys!! That was a light cocktail with least amount of alcohol content in it... It is like for getting all lossen up and energetic... People don't get tipsy or dizzy with it... Just a bit loosen up... And Aryamann as I mention added less amount then asked by nandini... Don't worry ... Its safe for nandini and one of my favourite drink... And nandini is not drunk... Yaar I am a kachra writer but soch samaj kar likhti hu...

CHAPTER 28 C ( HEY YA)


"No... You have probably gone mad" said nandini.

Hey ya!! I wanna get closer to you

Hey ya!! I need to be closer to you
Hey ya!! I got to tell you how I feel
Hey ya!! Oh baby you're the only one for me

"If you say so... Acha, you know what are the duties of an ideal salli" said manik placing his hand on either side of nandini on the wall. Nandini's heart had jumped in his throat and was beating widely. He could hear his every heart beat drumming against his ears.

Tumhe kaise main bataoon, kya main paa gaya hoon
Tum jo mere saath ho
Mujhko duniya mil gayi hai, zindagi badal gayi hai
Tum jo mere saath hooo hoo ohhooo hoo.ohh...


"Hmm maybe" said nandini giving manik's question a serious thought with a pout that made him fall for her all over again. "No... I don't know" the fact was nandini's mind had gone numb. She couldn't think properly as her senses were lost in his masculine Cologne.

"That's okay...I expected this from you... " said manik shaking his head lightly making her pout. Manik couldn't help but smile seeing his effect on her.

Hey ya!! I need to be closer to you
Hey ya!! I got to tell you how I feel
Hey ya!! Oh baby you're the only one for me

"I would have told you but it will be just a waste of time because you will not be able to do it" said manik.

"You gotta challenge me" said nandini timidly.

"Maybe" said manik twisting his lips.

"I am in... Go on" said nandini.

Tumhe kaise main bataoon, kya main paa gaya hoon
Tum jo mere saath ho

"I am telling you na... You won't be able to do it" said manik shrugging his shoulders irritating nandini

Mujhko duniya mil gayi hai, zindagi badal gayi hai
Tum jo mere saath hooo hoo ohhooo hoo.ohh...
Heyyy yaa.. heyy yaa..

"So first of all... Ideal salli that is you have to take complete care of their 'jiju' and fulfill his every wish" said manik to which nandini looked at him
"I mean each and every" said manik in a husky voice making nandini weak at knees.

"No... That's not fair.. I am not gonna do anything sort if of this" said nandini with frown.

"See I knew you won't be able to do... I have not even started and you are giving up already.. I told you its not your cup of tea"

"No! You are no one to decide what I can do or not... Nandini murthy can do anything and everything don't challenge her" said nandini proudly poking her soft finger on his chest.

Kahin kahin to dhoop hai
Kahin kahin hai saayee
Zara zara tum ho mere
Zara zara paraye

"If you say so... Saali means adhigarwali right?" said manik to which nandini nodded her head.

Main pagal pagal sa rehta hoon
Har pal har pal yeh kehta hoon
Mujhko duniya mil gayi hai, zindagi badal gayi hai
Tum jo mere saath ho ..

"She has half of the rights of wife" said manik confusing her. Seeing which manik said" I will explain... See, Saali is Beauty,
Wife is duty" said manik trailing his fingers against her milky waist.

Haseen haseen hai ye safar
Sajji sajji ye raahein

"Saali is passion,
Wife is tension
Saali is patakha," said manik pinching lightly at her waist making her hiss "Wife is sayapa," making a sad face.

Jhuki jhuki hai ye nazar
Khuli khuli ye bahein

"Saali is cool,
Wife is fool,"said manik biting her ear lob and immediately sucking it making nandini laugh shyly not looking into manik's eyes resting her head on his chest lightly.

"Saali is tuty-fruity,"said manik placing wet kisses on her jaw line pressing his finger deep in her belly button making her suckout all the air out of her lungs

Haule haule dil ye gaaye
Mujhko duniya mil gayi hai, zindagi badal gayi hai
Tum jo mere saath hooo hoo ohhooo hoo.ohh...
Heyyy yaa.. heyy yaa..

"Wife is qismat futi," said manik raising his head with pouted lips that nandini was drooling at few moments back made her laugh.

"Saali is fresh cake,
Wife is earth quake..." said manik trailing kisses all over her face which were openly welcomed by nandini.


"That is why god made saali to make married mans life a bit colourful" said manik peaking her nose.

"Hmm... Interesting!!! So what all I have to do" said nandini to which manik's eyes go wide in surprise with a smirk which made her realize how she sounded.

"As..i...as in duties" nandini fumbled making manik's smirk even more wide.

"I think I just told everything just now... Assuming that you are intelligent enough to improvise my words... I take you a leave" said manik dropping a wet kiss on her cheek.

Hey ya!! I wanna get closer to you
Hey ya!! I need to be closer to you
Hey ya!! I got to tell you how I feel
Hey ya!! Oh baby you're the only one for me

"Your challenge starts now"whispered manik in her ears teasing her ear lobes with slightly touching it with his lips. Nandini squeezed her eyes tightly trying to chunk off dirty thoughts Making manik smirk seeing his effect on her." I would love to lose it" said manik at her lips hearing which nandini's eyes wide opened hearing his last words. Manik almost laughed knowing what see is thinking according to her past record of perverted brain.
He slowly placed his lips over her and lightly sucked them trailing his fingers up her bare back. He found nandini getting cold beneath his touch.he left her lips kicking himself mentally kicked himself for losing himself.

(Manik, control man!! You can have her for yourself all your life... Not now!!! Control man!!) Manik scolded himself mentally and walked out leaving nandini behind in her thoughts.

"So you want to play... Let's make it fair then Mr malhotra for both of us" said nandini with a smirk cooking something in her head and walked out if the room towards the hall finding everyone chilling out and pulling each others leg.

"Acha Cabir, last question... Agar aapki biwi aur saas par koi tiger hamla kar de to aap kisko pehle bachaayenge?"

"Beshak tiger ko, aakhir bechare bache hi kitne hain." Said Cabir making everyone roll in laughter except Navya who was glaring at him mentally killing him with fork in her hand.

"So karan, tune toh sabki band Baja di with your question game... Now your turn" said mukti while laughing.

"You free to ask anything mukti!"

"What is your preference? Arrange marriage or love marriage" said mukti.

Mukti... See,Arrange marriage is...
"While you are walking, unfortunately a snakes bites you"

"But love marriage is...!" Said karan standing up from his place have each eye on him

And said "Dancing in front of cobra and singing
"Wanna be my chammak challo" while doing signature step making everyone roll in laughter.

Yeah right!!! But on second thoughts... Aren't all marriages kind of gay?

"Please enlighten us, how come?" Said manik.

"See,As a man, when you get married, essentially what you're saying is, "I will never touch another woman as long as I live, now let's put jewelry on each other and dance." cabir Cabir dramatically making everyone break into fits of laughter.

"Manik, Aaj Ka cabir baba ka special Gyan only for you... After all you are going to dance in front of cobara" said Cabir cheekily to which everyone laughed and mukti hi-fived with Cabir.


"Dost aur biwi ko kabhi yaqeen dilane ki zarurat nahi hoti." Said Cabir dramatically to which manik gave him 'what' look.

"Kyun ki Dost kabhi shak nahi karte aur
Biwi kabhi yaqeen nahi karti." Said Cabir controlling his chuckles to which manik shook his head and muttered " as expected" under his breath.

"Gyan Samaapt" said Cabir proudly making everyone roll in laughter at him antics and kids clapped their hand feeling vibrant in the happy atmosphere.

"Manik, Arushi told me to prepare guest list from tomorrow's engagement function... I wanted to ask is there anyone from your side which I might have skipped" asked karan. Manik's face slightly lost the charm that was a moment ago thinking about family.

"Aree!! First of all right my name ... Navya navali in broad letters on the top... I am his favourite Bhabhi" said Navya making everyone smile and manik too.

"And I am from the arushi's side" said mukti giving Arushi a side huge.

"Me too" said Aryamann.

"Me too" said nandini joined them smiling at manik.

Manik bit his lip while smiling back.

"Then I am from my buddy's side" said dhruv with a smile.

"Me too" said aliya cheekily.

Manik was overwhelmed by the love his friends have for him till date. How the understood his inner turmoil without saying anything.

(there are relations beyond blood relations... I believe it now) thought manik smilingly.

"What about you karan" asked dhruv. To which karan replied
" of course... My only jigar ka tukdha... Abh iski barbadi par mein nhi nachuga toh aur kon nachega" hearing which Arushi gave him a deadly glare making him gulp in fear.

"Bro forgive me for this... Nokari ka saval hai... I am from Arushi's side" said karan fearfully making manik roll his eyes.

"I am from manik's side... After all my girlfriend just ditched me in public." said nikhil raising his tiny hand in air indicating his presence in discussion getting an angry pout from nandini.

"And I am from my Rockstar's side... Right Rockstar" said jiya walking towards manik.

"Yes of course princess" said manik engulfing her in his arms.

Only one was left in the room to answer. Everyone's eyes was on him. Yes! That's Cabir. He let out a nervous laugh seeing everyone's expecting
Eyes on him.

"Hmm... I am from manik's side" said Cabir to which manik threw a victory smirk towards nandini with a 'I won' look which irritated nandini to wits.

"Urghhh!! Cabir..." Said nandini out of frustration just when her cell rang which bought a evil smirk on her lips.

(Manik malhotra, very happy that you won... Let's make it fair for me also)

She whispered something in Arushi's ear to which made her smirk and approve her with a thumbs up.

(Cabir... Now you will know what happens when you mess with wrong person) thought Arushi with smirk.

Nandini excused herself to attend the call.

"So... Manik, you won man!!! An unsaid challenge... I must say" Said dhruv.

" Thanks to the kids and most importantly Cabir... They Saved my ass from getting embarrassed today in front of nandini" said manik with a sigh.

"Arree!! Manik... What's the hurry... Let me take good care of your happiness...like ideal saali" said nandini with sweet smile.

"We have someone who is from your side... Don't Wanna meet him, manik?" said Arushi standing beside nandini.

Manik could sense something fishy behind the extra sweet tone of murthy sisters.

"Who is it.. Tell fast I am dying to know" said Cabir sipping his drink. To which nandini and Arushi looked at each other with a knowing smirk and said in union "Come in"
Yaar... Bas I have assignments to do.. Leaving you in suspense .. But I am not that cruel... Will be back with update by tommorow night with a d part to it..which I don't want to make... It will be shortbut will definetly make you laugh like hell...
Enough of me now... Now its your turn...
Please comment lambaa lambaa... I lovw reading them...and I am really happy to know many silent readers are coming up with their views on my work...

I m sorry I know that's short ... please bare with it
I would love to get motivated by your lovely comments to come up with more entertaining updates giving them my 100%.. Don't kill that excitement in me by not commenting...

Stay happy stay blessed...
Mishshergill

Edited by mishshergill - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res :D
finally URES..!
hahahahaa..!
Wah yaar tu poet qni hai haan?
That fresh cake nd earthquake..
tutti fruity and kismat futi hahahahaha hilarious... 🤣
What should I say About KT yaar...Gosh he is amazing..!
Cobra and snake joke...🤣
aur Cabir aur us k gyaan hahahaha..!
Phr g kon ho larki ki side say aur kon larky ki side say...My majnu Manik won..! Yupieee..!
Now who's the new braati..!
So curious to know..!
Loved the update Mishu..
Lots of Love..
Ur MAo..
Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Stopping here
I mean hw cn u do this yrr
Ur suspense n killing me
Nw who is this ufff
Btw awesome update h
Nd tht rhymes describing biwi sali
Was really amazing
I laughed lyk hell reading tht
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Superb update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
loved it
suspense
update soon
eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for the update!
Hey loved this convo!!!
Manik smirk and challenging Nandini!!!
The description of 'Saali''!! aawww but Nandini gonna be his wife, anyway it will apply also for her since it is Manan!!!
And Nandini also wants to play.. so this is gonna be more interesting.
God I'm missing them so much!!!! I wanna cry!!!

Cabir and Karan rocked it!!!
Was dying of laugh!!!
Manbir convo------ missing them!!!!

Heartfelt thanks to you, cause I know it's difficult to write on Manan.
By this story, you are keeping them alive and I'm so grateful to you for that.

Awaiting for next update eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Feeling happy update n relaxing
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Posted: 9 years ago
A full on entertainment chapter
Loved it

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thnk uh soo mch fr d pm. ...
d update was seriously very naughty. ... seriously yaar
firstly manan talk...
saali n wife comparison. ... hahaha
that was awsmmm...
n d romance...
n then those... bkwaas pjs of cabir... omg
n lastly nandinis khurafati dimag...
curious. ...

keep writing
Continue soon

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