#2 !!MANAN ff!! Selfish and Selfless[ LINK TO THRD 3& index/pg140] - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...awsumm
Nandu's attire...gud
Thank uh for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really amazing... great going... the story is taking a really interesting turn... the plot is really nice... loving it...thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it...please continue soon... will be waiting eagerly... keep up the wonderful work... best wishes
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!! Excited for Navya's bollywood plan!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
So Arushi knows all about it but still she agreed!!! Hope this will make Nandini realise her mistake to let Manik mary someone else.
I really loved the way you penned about Mukti concern and understanding Nandini. So much loved and maturity in her words... really beautiful update.

And now Manik and his ''Damn you! Nandini... Nandu me aiiappa, how much more stupidity you daughter will make me handle"
This shows how much this is difficult for him but still he is doing this for Nandini, for something he already proved, his love 😭 Really hope to see Nandini's jealousy, this will be awesome 😆

Please continue writing, waiting eagerly for the next chapter

A kind request-- please pm me for the next update

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nooop.. Manik and nandini will marry not manik and arushi.. Please.. Pretty please... And u know nandinis attire is more prettier than arushis...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazinggg ... Mukti n navya actually understands Nandini's insecurities n stitutions ... Specially mukti as she has seen her suffering during her tuff times ...nt only physically n mentally bt also emotionally ...
She has seen her facing the pain of loosing the love of her life ...
N now she doesn't want manik to face all those things again ... N tht to alone ...
She only wants manik to get all the happiness he deserves ... Bt little did she knows tht all his happiness r with her only ...
Bt her frndsss will mpnot let her do any stupidity this time ... They will make sure that manik n nandini becomes manan forever ... Humesha ...
Nd last bt nt the least ... Manbir convo ... EPIC ...
Manik tujhe Tera pyaar le duba n cabir dialogue to navya " who invites a groom to his own pre wedding ceremony with a tag plz do come ... " EPIC it was ... 🤣 🤣🤣

Plz post the nxt part soon ... I'm sooo excited fr this perfect Punjabi wedding ...
Really want to know wht their frndsss will do nxt ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsomeee part loved it
noo manan seperation
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi! I am new to this forum. I read all the chapters it was sooo amazing. I love you and your lovely ff .You are such an awesome writter.
Pleaseee! accept me as your friend 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiee!!! Guys...that's a writers note for all my readers...

See I don't have anything for you its just that I m not being rude...its just a open disscusion...

Why you are not liking the track... You are not liking Arushi...you think nandini is doing some kind of sacrifse... You cant expect me to provide you with all lovey dovey stuff... I don't know what you are want...
I picked up a really different topic for my ff...
It is really a very sensitive issue... I have read many ffs in which such topics are taken up but wiry baseless ending...the heroine is detected some chronic disease she doesnt tells the hero and just before her operation the hero comes to know about it and he rushes to her there due to some unknown mirical heroine is alive and the hug each other with promise of always being together... Which is completely absurd...
In this ff I have came up with something different...its how thing comes out and how you go through the phase after recovery...

It is a medically proven fact CANCER IS A DISEASE WHICH ONE CURED DOESNT GIVES THE GURANTEE THAT IT WILL NEVER HAPPEN AGAIN...

This is the point on which nandini's insecurities stand.. What's wrong that nandini wants manik to have a stable family... Nandini has seen manik how he craved for family which he couldn't get from nyonika or his father...

There was no one with nandini... When she was lying on the hospital bed to look upon as her family... Nor Arushi..nor chacha chachi..neither amms...not even her love manik...

This phase made nandini realise that pyaar bahut kuch hai par sabh much nhi ... At last its family that matters...

SHE IS NOT DOING ANY SACRIFICE... Even if she gets married to manik than she will live every second in guilt and insecurity... NANDINI IS RIGHT AT HER PLACE...HER LIFE HAS FORCED HER TO THINK RATIONALLY...

I don't believe in writing complete fairy tail fiction ... I want to write something which make readers think logically about life... I want readers to think rationally about it..and come up with their take as nandini...

I don't write anything even a single name waigly...I have to do lot of drill work even when I have to cone up with any attire too... Not that I am complaining...I love to do that work...but I want readers to read and analyise what I write..

In this ff its like my stand for gay...I don't show Cabir and Navya married... Its a social thinking thatcgays don't survive they have to live like straight one by compleleting there family... This is my stand for it...that gays do survive...that have the freedom to do anything...

And my other stand is for...living relationship ...which is lived by aliya and dhruv with their adorable kid nikil...

And in mukti's case, its the true love... Showing that its not easy to give on love...memeories are enough to cherish the loveable bond they shared than living with someone in a fake love relation... Butvstill that hurts...that pain doent lives her...so she doesn't want manan to go through it...

I tried my level best to keep check on the amount of romance thrill suspense humour emotion is provided in my ff... So that my readers don't get bored of only crying or laughing in my ff..

Frankly speacking...I am not liking this that i have to provide you a writers note to explain my take... Its like I failed in my work somewher...that I couldn't bulith a sense if trust relation with readers that they can think before bashing on the character... First of all...you would have known that mish can't handle villianious characters at least after reading what I did with pandit and Harshad... Arushi is not a villianious character...

Last night I decided that I will discontinue the ff coz people here are so insensitive and only want lovey dovwy stuff 24*7 ... Which I can't give... Its not like I don't want manan ... It will defibetly manan.. Ibam a manan fan how can I separate them in my own ff... You just have to he patient and wait for upcoming updates...

This time...I mean first time ever I want to give updates really early but your responds is killing that desire in me...

I really wantvto know what you would have done if you were at nandinis place...if someone thinks she should have run in manik's arms and as him to marry her. Then probably I am a fool writing the ff...lol...

Tell me your idea what you are not liking in the ff... Wht would you do if you were at nandini's place... If I get a majority response I will mold the ff in that direction...dont doubt..because I am very much capable of doing that... And if still you are not liking the story and fishing some faiytale scene out of my ff then you must stop reading my ff... Because I beleive in making love moments magical not fairytale.

Please do drop your views...
I promise I will give a thought to evey idea of yours...
Sorry of you found my words rude at any point but its that I feel low about the fact...
Please do give a thought to my words at least once... And logic behind nandini's doing...it will be an open disscusion everyone is allowed to keep their take on it...

Stay blessed.
Mishshergill


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Posted: 10 years ago
Mishu..!! You killed it Man..!! I am with you..!! I trust your writing..!! Myny tjy raat me bhi bola tha kay if i would have been at Nandini's place na ma kasam i would have done the same..But God kise ko aise situation main he na daly...and yeah CANCER is a bitter reality with no guarantee...You write whatever you like to...and guys those who are saying na don't separate MaNan and all oh come on guys just chuck it haan i mean it's a MANAN FF..!! You have to trust the writer..!! Don't be so impatient..!! It really annoys the writer..!! And MY MISHU is right..!!
I love You Mishu..!!
I trust your skills..!!
Keep writing..!!
Lots of Love..
Mawara.

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