New manan ff as I love u updated part 25 pg 53 29/4/16 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...i jus loved it yr
but i fell bad for nandu...manik ne aisa kyoon kiya... meri taraf se manik ko tight slap dena ...
nandu aasani se manik ko maaf nahi karegi...i want to see manik jelous scene...plsssnext part make it jelous scene...i jus love to read jelous scene
plsss update soon...cant wait more
eagerly waiting for ur update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Promo part 14

Manik: Believe me nandini it was the reason so I left u there i didn't want to hurt u
Nandini: Manik for this silly and stupid reason u left me how can i trust u u didn't want to hurt me but u hurt me the most

Manik: Nandini m accepting my mistake na then y dont u give a chance to explain

Nandini : For the person lyk u there is no chance

Manik: Once listen to plz forgive me and I really dont

Nandini: Go away manik

Manik: U Have To Listen To Me NANDINI


(Shocking or SURPRISE REVEL)


I m really excited to write this part it is a turning point to both of them life more than readers reading m excited for this chap
Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bang bang dr ... 😉 😉
Yep I agree wit u dr ...
a relationship must need some ups and downs then only it will grow stroger day by day... 👏
Nice update awesome one ... 😳 😳 😳
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome promo
Plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhh its going to be interesting nd i lyk ur chngd title ... Its really nice...

Plz update the part soon dont make us w8...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello peps how are u all u know guys i m really excited to write this part i was thinking how to write as i ve the idea about the story line but anyhow m writing too fast I zst can't wait to know ur reaction by this part and after this part plz give ur views.



Part 14

(Shocking or Suprise)


Nandini couldn't sleep whole night she was tossing in the bed what she was thinking it cannot be known by her blank expression . On the other hand her mother was worried about her daughter behavior she have not shown like to any how she was a happy and chatter box who don't know how to sad but she was looking like a lost soul who didn't utter a single word . Her mother decide to leave to her what is bothering her she will say to her mother itself.


Next morning nandini was still awake when she heard her room door was opening and close her eyes she knew who was that person.
" Good morning nandu wake up beta look ur late for office"Her mother keep tea tray aside her table and ruffle her hair . She slowly opens her eyes and give her a faint smile " Good morning morning " and hugs her

"Ok chalo get ready ur late for office " Her mom says

" Ok mom" she goes from there and after having the breakfast she goes to office

Office...

She slowly opens the door of her cabin as her heart beat start to increase she don't want to face him but also she have to " Come on Nandini u can face him " she consoles her self. When she opens the door she don't find anyone there her heart ache by keeping all the thought aside she start to do her work .


Whole day passed she tries to engrossed in work but any corner in the heart she was expecting him but he didn't came.
After completing the work when she was about to leave the office her phone rings she looks at the caller id but it was unknown number

" Hello" she says

"Hello nandini" the voice came that was enough for her to be shattered the courage she was trying to build up was gone.

"Why did u call me manik now is there anything left between us " there was hatred in her voice

" Nandini listen to me once I want to meet u now" he tries to convince her

"Why do u want to meet me now to broke me more " she tries to control her tears

"Nandini zst once come to my flat plz zst once " he again tries

She was about to say no but again thought to face him and know the answer y he done this

"Ok i will come " and hung up the call

...

"Excuse me can tell me the flat no of manik malhotra " She asked to the watchman of the Manik society

"yes man flat no 109 " the watchman replies her looking at the register

"Ok thank u " she faintly smiles

She goes to his flat and rings the bell but no response again she try. but again no response she knocks the door but it was already open .

She goes inside the flat but it was dark " Manik where are u Manik " she shouts but she was afraid of dark

"Nandini " she hears a voice and turns but couldn't find the owner of the voice again " Nandini" she heard but due to dark she can't see anything

"Manik stops playing the pranks and tell me y did u call me here" her voice was full of anger

" BECAUSE I Love U " she hears and froze in her place before if he said this she would dance but now she was numb

Suddenly lights came Manik was standing in front of her with a smile in his face and hands in his ear. He slowly move towards her she was still standing lyk frozen " I M Sorry Nandini i know i have broken ur heart and behave lyk a jerk to leave u like that "

"Why u did that manik " her voice was as cold as ice

"Nandini listen to me " he holds her arms but nandini immediately jerk it off
"Say manik malhotra y u did that " she shouts on the top of her voice

Manik was shocked to see her in that much anger but he was prepared because he knew it was coming

FLASHBACK

Nandini and Manik are sleeping peacefully in each other arms when manik sleep was distributed by the vibration of the phone .

He searches his phone everywhere and finally found it without opening the eyes he answer the call.

"Hello" in sleepy tone

"Hello Manik" from another side his voice came

By listening to the voice he immediately wakes up without distributing her sneaked out of bed

" Yes boss any problem every thing is fine right " he asked in a worried tone

" No not at all Manik there is some pending work left could u plz come to Mumbai today as soon as fast " his boss says him

"Ok boss i will leave in morning flight " he says with a slight smile and up the call

He goes inside the room and sees nandini sleeping peacefully with a smile in her face and he also smiles at her innocence. He goes to her peak on her lips " This is the best moment in my lyf I really love u nandini and I know u also love me i have seen in ur eyes now I want u to be mine forever" he said to himself

After looking to her and admiring her he goes to take the shower . When he came out also she was sleeping and he start to pack his back but only his half luggage .
He thought to get up nandini but again thought leave her lyk that because she was weak and he made her more weak by his wildness he immediately blushed remembering all things how he lost control and she gave him to her

He thought to leave her a note that he is going now and she is weak so she must rest after that she can come in evening flight . He pick up the red rose from the vase and going to start to write a letter but his mind thought something mischievous and wrote that he was regretting for the night.

He place the note and rose in the table and goes near her " Sorry Nandini i know after reading this ur heart will broke but i promise i will mend it I want to suprise u and that moment when i say i love u i want that spark in ur i know u will be angry on me but zst one day i will u to forget all the sorrow from ur lyf and U can say it is a small revenge for irritating me I want our confession moment will be special where all the stars and moon will take vow to keep us forever " he says to her and peck her forehead and leaves from there.

FLASH BACK ENDS

"So this was the reason " he says with a guilty feeling " But trust me it was all a prank i didn't want to hurt u I Lo..."

Ttthuuudd...

Manik was shocked he couldn't believe she actually did " Nan..." Ttthuuudd...
again he couldn't complete his sentence he got 2 tight slap from nandini.

His both hand was in his both cheeks.
Nandini catches his collar " What do u think haa manik malhotra is this any kind of joke to u u have any idea in that moment which i was cherishing and thinking that was the perfect moment of my lyf after reading that ur stupid prank note how i felt how many times i died at that moment after realizing my love to u when i read that the moment i was feeling complete without any guilty ur that stupid prank make me regret to my decision do u have any bloody idea that time when i gave u everything without the proper name to our relation that means i trust u but u broke my trust after reading ur note also i didn't hate u that much now m hating myself to loving u .U dont deserve my hatred also manik malhotra i feel disgusted now that u touched me and ur saying believe me how can i believe u huh that was the actual reason " she was yelling at him she left his shirt and start to cry.

Manik head down he didn't have any idea that his stupid prank will heart her that much he can't see her crying and broke down.

"Believe me nandini this was the reason so i left u there i don't want to hurt u " after gathering the courage he says to her

"Manik for this stupid and silly reason u left me and u don't want to hurt me but u hurt me more " she was controlling not cry

"Nandini m accepting my mistake plz give me one chance to explain " he was having hard tym to explain to her

"For the person lyk u there is no chance " her anger was rising

"I m sorry nandini zst listen to me I really dont " but cut by nandini

"Go away manik " she was saying in her high pitch tone

"U have to listen to me nandini " without giving her chance her to speak he drag / her to his room she was protesting but he was not giving Damon

Soon they reaches his room the front view left her stunned.
His room was beautifully decorated with candles and and her favorite roses . In his room there was only her photo which he decorated in every corner from the day 1 to now many of the photo she don't know when it took she never imaged that she is so beautiful and cute she was falling in love to herself.

"All this my photos here " she asked absent mindlessly looking at her photo.


"U know nandini when i feel in love with u " he asked her

"No " she answered looking into his eyes

"When i saw u for the first tym." he was also looking at her with same intensity

She was again surprised that he loves her from past 1 yr and she has no idea about this because he was always rude to her

Manik continue " For the first tym i listen to my heart beat when i saw i have never seen such cute and beautiful girl in my whole lyf ur chatter box nature and ur care free attitude for which i feel more and more but i have to hide my feeling because i know u hate me i m scared of losing u nandini so i always carry anger and arrogant to hide from u. Without ur knowledge i used to click ur photo but u never noticed me but i never stop loving u . That day when u came to give me dinner in the office i was flying by seeing u dancing in the rain i too wanna come and dance with u and hold u but if i came in rain then i will not able to control myself so i didn't came but that day i saw that spark in ur eyes which i had for u . Going to pune trip when i propose u it was not a game but my word are real i thought if i will not do now i may never ever in my lyf . I dont liked when rohan touch u i want to kill him but when u vanished i thought i have died but again when i saw u after that worst hour I couldn't control myself and kissed u to know ur fine. Nandini i never regretted that night it was indeed the best experience i have ever had in my life to have ur love lady beside u in ur arm it was most bleesfull moment i want to make our this moment special but due to my stupid prank i have hurt u to the large extent . When u urself surrender to me i know u love me more than i love u .
Plz forgive me nandini human only do mistakes I Really Love u i don't wanna lose u plz come in my lyf " he was kneel down in front of her and joined his hand

" I Want some tym Manik " she says with expressionless and leave from there leaving a baffled manik behind.



So how was it i know i know that was really a silly reason for his action
Manik got tight slap from nandini . Should she forgive him easily so see should take the tym ? Manik deserves that slap or not ok give ur lovely view i know many of u r shocked or surprise bye have a gud day
Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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Oh god! Phatakkk?, that too twice! Together! I feel bad for him but he deserved it!
Who pranks someone like that!
I think Nandini should think for sometime and give him one last chance!
It will a make it or break it situation for Manik!
Continue soon!
Love, Pari :)
Edited by DWJensenackles - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it
He deserved a slap
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
he need morre slaps
idiot

,,how could he😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww r so cute manik was actually in love wid her from 1st day m so happy yaar love dem...

Plz update new part soon nd plz PM me

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