MORE THAN FRIENDS..!? - PART 12 PG 63 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

hilarious


Barbie malhothra awesome

so Nandini be ready for the punishmnt


thanks alot dearr😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

thank you...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riyana7

Well I want all the trio but now I only want MORE THAN FRIENDS ...
PLS UPDATE SOON
I am OBSESSED with this...
Loving like Manan 😉



thanks alot for lovin my stry so much
really means alot
thank you dearr😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagupur

It's a very cute story.

I don't know how it is escape from my eyes.
I just read all chapter in a one go.
I liked the all parts equally.
Your writing skills are very good.
Now both friends are feeling some new changes.
Nandni prank was very funny.
But waiting for maniks punishment to her.
I'm liking your all stories equally.
Please try to update soon.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks for sharing this young couple, friends story.


thank you so much dear for loving all my works😳😊😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

okay so im back with an update

a crappy update actually

and im so ver sorry for that... but before that... i want a little help


does anyone know how to make it only a members post???

please tell me... i need help


and thank you so much for your love... i hope not to disappoint you

enjoy reading...


CHAPTER 9

"So... ready for the punishment MS MURTHY??" he said huskily in her ears which sounded almost like a whisper and made her shiver. He had her hands held in a firm tight grip while his body was pressing against her. And she was sandwiched between the wall and him. She was wriggling under his hard tough and rugged body trying to escape but failed miserably every time. She knew now that there is no escape no matter how hard she tries. She can't fight this giant BARBIE MONSTER who right wants to take revenge for making him face this condition. And so finally after having no more choice left she finally decided to surrender.

"Okay my Monster, I'm ready for the punishment."

"Wow..!! That was fast."

"Hmm.. so tell me what I have to do?"

"You have to do nothing...you only have to stand here quietly and rest leave it on me." He once again whispered in his ever so seductive tone melting her insides and creating unknown feelings and desires inside her.

And she just "Humm"ed in response and closed her eyes not wanting to get lost in his hazel brown orbs which usually take her to a completely another world.

"You had put makeup on me na? Now it's my chance..." and without giving her a chance to ponder over his words he leaned in and placed his red tinted lips on her eyes one by one allowing the color of his lips to settle on them in a slow and steady motion.

His next target was her already reddened cheeks, well they didn't practically needed more red color to add but he didn't wanna miss the chance to tease this petite fille (little girl) in front of him. And so he slowly brushed his lips on both her cheeks one by one in a slow motion dragging his lips from one end of the cheek to another which completely made her loose her senses. Being done with her cheeks too she anticipated his next move to be towards her lips and she felt a sudden shiver pass through her spine. Her eyes were still shut tightly and her lips parted.

She could feel him approaching towards her lips with his hot breath fanning over her face, his grip over her hands tightened and his body pressing more into hers. All of their features and parts aligned perfectly together creating havoc in their senses. His rugged and hard torso against her delicate feminine frame. It felt like a perfect combination. They looked like two perfectly fitting pieces of a two pieced puzzle, completing each other like a perfect match and she could feel her insides melting under his alluring touch. They paused in the same position for a few seconds feeling even the world stop around them. But then finally after not feeling any movement taking place from his side she opened her eyes only to find him looking at her with an intense gaze. The intensity of his eyes was making her go numb and not able to take it anymore she again forcefully closed her eyes only to feel him come more closer to her. And this time she was sure he won't stop. But she wasn't sure if she wanted it, if she was ready for it, if it was even right to do it claiming to be just friends. But right now she didn't care, cause she knew that no matter what their current relationship status is, he won't ever fail her, he would never let anything come in between their friendship, then may it be this or even any damn thing in the world. She had complete trust on him and she would never lose this faith no matter what.

She had her lips parted already, waiting to be claimed by him but what she got in return made her shocked to the core. That monster instead of kissing her had bit her on her nose and that to so hard that it had turned red now. And now she was looking like a complete joker with that red tomato-ish nose standing on the same position like a statue with her mouth hung wide open providing a free entry to all the insects. While on the other hand MR BARBIE MALHOTRA was having the time of his life seeing her in this condition. He was laughing his guts out and showed no signs to cease. And she just couldn't pull herself out of the trauma.

Suddenly he stopped on his tracks finding her still standing confused in the same position and decided to tease her a little more... Why would he miss the fun after all...!

"So miss nandini murthy was expecting something...???" he said with a smirk playing on his lips and slowly moving towards her again... while she shifted uncomfortably not knowing where to hide that flushed face of her.

"No..no.. not at all!! Why would I expect you to kiss me.. no...!!" and that's it... she blurted out everything and bit her tongue for doing so. While manik stared at her with an amused expression as he had not expected her to really say that out loud. But she did... and now even he was blushing thinking about all the possibilities if he would have really done so. And without saying anything he just left from there not wanting to create a more embarrassing situation for the two of them.

Nandini's POV:~

What the hell just happened??? Was I really expecting a KISS from my BEST FRIEND??? What's wrong with me? How can I be so stupid...??? But why was I disappointed when he didn't do it? Have I really started feeling for him??? Do I really LO...no no nandini... what are you thinking... this just cant happen!! But why not? Why can't I love my best friend?!!Of course I can... In fact, I know that if anyone in this whole damn world can take the best care of me, can love me the most...then it is HIM and ONLY HIM.

Yes nandu... it is HIM... YOUR MANIK... your best friend... Who will now turn into your boy friend... but wait a minute... for him to be my boy friend... even he needs to love me... But does he?? Does he love me?? How am I supposed to know???? Oh god nandu think...!!!!



to be continued...


alright i know it was complete shit and you might all feel like killing me right now but i m really sorry

my mind stops working at times and then i come up with such things


please leave in your comments suggestions likes and whatever it is to let me know if your liking it or not,,, if im going too fast? to slow??? whatevr you feel

pls guys comments are much needed...!! i request...!!



THANK YOU...!!

Edited by apps33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
You updated at we so long... Was really missing your story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

You updated at we so long... Was really missing your story


AWW thank you so much dear😳
that was really so sweet of youu
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Posted: 10 years ago
They do all that and still claim to be just best friends???

Really amazing update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar that was too short...
But indeed too good...
Waiting for more...
Make manik also realise his feeling fast...
Cant wait more...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear...
The update was really amazing...
Thnx for d Pm...
N yeah if uh wanna make a post Members only then [MEMBERS*ONLY] then write this in your update but do not put * this mark on it...
N your update will be members only...
Hope it will help uh...

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