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Chapter 1-⭐️

"Chachi pls na...main pakka apna dhyan rakhungi aur padh bhi lungi."
C-Bilkul nai Nandu,mujhe pata hai tu kya karegi.
N-Chachi pleasee na chachi...Nandu promise..!! Main last time jaisa kuch nai karungi...pakka
C-Iss baar main tere ye promise vomise kuch nai sunungi.Pichli baar bhi tune aisa hi kya tha,main sirf ek din k liye gayi thi aur tune pure ghar ki haalat badal di thi...aur toh aur apna dhyaan bhi nai rakha tha.Kitna bimaar pad gayi thi tu..aur khaana bhi time pe baraabar se nai khaaya tha.
N-Chachi par mujhe tab banana bhi nai aata tha na(little annoyed)and pichli baar bhi jab colony trip thi tabhi mere exams the.Har baar aisa hi hota hai😭!!
C-Haye Nandu dukhi kyu ho rahi hai...chal main nahi jaati.
N-No no Chachi..aap ye miss mat karna,waise bhi aap kitna kam vacations pe jaati hai...(changes expression to annoyed)Par phir bhi ye kya hai!!! clg waalo ko bhi abhi exams rakhni thi...
C-Isi liye toh main tujhe Nyo aunty k bharose chod rahi hoon k tu pichli baar ki tarah bimaar na ad jaaye..waise bhi hamari nandu toh abhi bhi bachi hai na(lovingly pats her cheek nd says)wo bhi toh dekhe nandu k nakhre😆.Wo tera dhyaan bhi rakhegi.Aur Manik bhi toh hai..wo tera senior hai na...padhai mein bhi madad karega teri.
N-Chachi,Nyo aunty kuch kyu nai kar sakti thi.Wo toh clg ki trustee hai na,mujhe un logon k saath kyu nai daala..?!
C-Aree acha hi hai na tujhe hel bhi mil jaayegi manik se.

The rest of the members were goin for the Annual Colony trip that is organised every year for 2 days and 1 night and they would be back on the 3rd day early morning.Last time too Nandu had exams and she couldn't go.She was staying alone nd she didn't take care of herself and fell sick.This time Nyonika had some work and she wasn't joining them.Now Chachi too was relieved k now Nandu was in safe hands nd would be taken care of as this little girl of hers forced her to go this time too..(emotional blackmail with a cute pretty face always triumphs😆😉).Though she wanted to go but she was mature enough to let her Chachi go..And ya our Mr. Manik Malhotra was also not going.He gave an excuse that he wasn't doing well and had migrane.But frankly speaking the truth is that this young Malhotra didn't want Nandu to be alone and fall sick..as he knew Nyonika would be with her only while having meals and his Nandu too was very stubborn to listen to anybody else when Nyonika wouldn't be home(she'd order her servants to give her something to eat every few hours..but nandu wasn't gonna listen nd Manik knew her atleast this much).


NEXT DAY MORNING AT 4AM :
All were ready and all set to leave.Here Chachi was giving all instructions to Nandu k beta ana dhyaan rakhna,Aunty ki baat maanna,Zyada nakhre mat dikhana,be a good girl...and Nandu was paying all ears as she was gonna miss all of this for 2 long days.
On the other side all friends had gathered and Nandu nd Manik were seeing them off with their last session of goodbyes and takecares.Abeer,Cabir,Navya,Nandu,Ananya were on with their bubyee session nd wer discussing abt the trip;Manik was standing beside them leaning towards the wall and yawning🥱😛 (Subha subha roz thodi na uthta hai wo😆);Dhrulya were stealing glances of each other lovingly nd talking with their eyes..luckily no one noticed it.Ananya was busy adoring Manik who was listening to all making cute sleepy faces😳.
Ananya(A)- Manik tum kyu aaye,u should have taken rest na..tumhe sojaana chahiye tha (caringly).
Manik(politely)- It's okay Anunya.I'm fine.Kal raat ko i took atablet na..toh abhi I'm much better.
Abhi-Toh why don't you join us bro...there is still time,u can pack u your stuff quickly.We'll help you if you want.

Anunya's face lit up with this😃and Manik's turned into an Oh-God- Now-What!!?
N-Bilkul nahi!!Waise bhi tumlog jaa rahe ho na leaving me alone..Manik nai aayega.And I'm thodi na forcing him,he only said na "Ek baar commitment kardi toh kardi"(mimics him).😆

Listening to this that to from Nandu...Manik Malhotra ki neend khul gayi aur uski ki khushi ka thikana hi nai raha.He was dancing nd jumping with joy on the 9th no no 11th..100th cloud☺️.
Cabir-Seedha seedha bol na k u need help in studies(low murmer) nd u are scared to be alone raat ko.

But Oops..!! Too late..Nandu already heard it.😆😡nd Cabirrr saying this she smacked him.And all had a heart laugh at it.
N-(a bit slowly)Haan toh..ye toh sabko pata hai na ki mujhe darr lagta hai.
C-Awww...!! saying this he pulled her cheecks.
N-Aur Manik ne hi bola he doesn't wanna go ab he can't go back on his words.(looks at him with a smile).
M-Guys I'm fine right now ar agar phir headache chalu hua toh...u know na migrane once it starts toh phir jaldi nai jaayega,it takes time.And then i won't be able to enjoy too.
(Cabir looked at him with a "way-to-go-Mr.Liar Malhotra-but-I-caught" you look).Ananya's face turned sad hearing this.
Muku-Okay bro!! takecare..nd Nandu u too.Don't worry tumlog k hisse ka bhi we will enjoy😉😆.

Till then someone calls the as it was time for them to leave.
Abeer-Okay Nandu,takecare and don't fall sick this time..hmm!!
N-Okay uncle😛
Ab-Uncle haan..!!Saying this he advances towards her.
N-No no no...sry sry!!
Ab-Hmm...u better be.
And both of them smile and hug each other,the rest of the members too join them.Nandu goes to Chachi for a final goodbye and I LOVE U...nd then all of them leave the colony and Manik nd Nandini go back to their homes after deciding to meet at breakfast...

PRECAP-Breakfast and studies with nautanki Nandu and awara majnu Manik bana bechara😆


Done guys...!!Quite a long update,isn't it??😊 Well this is what me nd macy99 do in our economics class😆😛.Now i hope aap log comment karoge.This time I have sent PMs but plz buddy me for PMs of next chapter.Hope you guys like it.And don't forget to hit the like button nd comment.😃
Also check out this captivating FF MANAN:Love Birds by Macy99. #okaythanksbye..!!😛
Edited by Dhingli44 - 10 years ago
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Guys waise toh I sent PMs to all who commented,but agar kisi ko I missed then i'm sorry.Nd ya kisi ko do baar chale gaye ho toh bhi I'm sorry.Actually my Net is troubling me...so agr koi mistake ho toh plz bear with it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm start
loved it
nicely written
cont soon
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The story plot is superb 😊 WELL DONE
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Guys I'm sry for the delay.I will ulpoad by night.Trust me I was going to post in the afternoon only but my internet connection was having problems.Just a while...I will upload today itself...😊
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#26

Chapter 2 A-

After a few more hours of deep and peaceful slumber Manik woke up and got freshened up.On the other hand Nandu was still sleeping like a baby.Manik and Nyonika were waiting for her at the breakfast table.After a while,

Nyo-Manik I think you must go and check on her.
M-Mom she would be sleeping,I bet.Lets start,I will ask her to have when she gets up.

Nyo-No Manik go wake her up.

M-Mom but usko uthana is such a tough task.

Nyo-Whatever it is but just go now...even I'm getting late.

M-Okay fine...!!(a bit annoyed)

Nyo-Here take the spare key(chachi had given)

He reached Nandu's home but what Manik saw there left him mute...She was just a little baby girl whom he could look at for an eternity he thought.A room with walls painted in a lighter shade of pink,filled with pretty girly stuff-soft toys,wind chimes that twinkled with melody with the movement of wind,baby red designed curtain dipped in a shade of white and a vase of beautiful artificial flowers (made by her) and the stickers pasted at certain places.She was sleeping on the bed like an adorable angel smiling in her dreams.Manik drowned in her comeliness mesmerizing her,but just then reality struck him that he had to wake her up.So unwillingly he started the uphill battle.

M-Nandini(no response)...Nandu get up.(Nandu stirred in her sleep) and said "Manik please mujhe sone do na" and threw a pillow at him.

M-(slightly shaking her)Nandu get up,mom aur main kabse tumhara wit kar rahe hai.

N-Uff Manik tum mere dost ho ki dushman...

M-Nandini...!!

N-TUm jao na Manik,main baadme uth jaaongi...

M-Are you sure

N-Haan

M-Okay you answer Chachi then...😛

N-Nooo...Acha thik hai uth rahi hoon...

M-Good girl..!!😃

N-Humphh...!!(Manik smiles)

Manik's POV-

Oh God !! How cute can someone be..I really wish I could see her sleeping like a 6yr old for a longer time...

End..

M-Chalo now get ready fastt...mom is waiting

And in a while both of them headed towards Manik's home.When they entered Manik nd Nandu could not see Nyonika anywhere.

M-Mom..!!

Nyo-Manik I'm here in my room...yahaan aajao.

M-Mom what happened why are you packing...?/

Nyo-Manik,Maya aunty k yahan se phone tha...she is really not well..she has been hospitalised.

N-Aunty,Maya aunty...your best friend right...??
Nyo- Yes beta..dats y I'm going to Delhi.I'm sorry...I'm afraid I'll have to leave you both alone.

M & N- It's ok Maa/Aunty..we understand.

Nyo-I know u both do.😊And listen before I go I'm setting some ground rules that you both have to follow.

1. You both have to be together nd not argue but adjust with each other's choices. 2. Both of you will eat on time,properly. Nandu especially you OK. 3. Nandini you will not go to college alone or for that matter anywhere 4. Nandu u will sleep on time nd Manik will help you study and last but not the least 5. Nandu you will be staying here. Nd remember both of you I will take all the updates from kaka...nd if I get to know that you have broken the rules...I will punish you.

Both Manik and Nandu were listening to her like obedient toddlers...coz they were more hapy about the freedom they were going to get.😆😛

N-Agar mujhe ghar jaana hai toh toh main akele jaa sakti hoon na aunty...!!

M-No I will come with you (Nyo smiles)

Nyo- Byee kids take care...saying this she kissed Manik's cheek and Nandu's forehead

M-Mom(frowns)...!!

Nyo nd Nandu giggle...Nyo-ALL THE BEST Nandu...

N-Thank u aunty

And she leaves...

M-Ab chale breakfast karne...

And the finish their breakfast deciding about their time table for the day..


Hey guys here's another Chapter.Sorry for such a bore update...But next update complete MANAN...Promise😊😊.PLZ guys comment,It really motivates us..!! plzz plzz plzz...😃

Edited by Dhingli44 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc update...
Manan r goin to b alone now.. Wll b interesting...
Waiting to read further...plz cont soon
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Originally posted by: Humzy

awsm loved it

cont soon

Thank u😊
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Originally posted by: apps33

Nyc update...

Manan r goin to b alone now.. Wll b interesting...
Waiting to read further...plz cont soon

Yes akele😉...I will try to make it as interesting nd better as much as I can.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice
loved it
Thanks for PM
waiting for nxt Full manan wala update

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