MANAN:Anything For You ❤️ Chapter 20,Pg 68

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: Ashmita18
Last both updates were really great... I'm really glad that anunya realized her mistake and apologized to both nandini and manik... and then manik manoyfying nandini... hahaha and their tom and jerry fight... really cute and funny... I really enjoyed every bit of it... it was just amazing... great going girl... thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it... please continue soon... will be waiting eagerly for your update... keep up the great work... best wishes... :) :D

Than you so much. I'm glad u liked it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: Alisha_Seth
Nice...but thodi speed badhao..!

I'm trying dear

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Dhingli44

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Originally posted by: cutypie04
awesome update dea...
continue sooonnn
tnx fr d pm

Tysm cutypie 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: Danny92
Nice update
Continue soon

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#215

Originally posted by: vaishnavigarla
Nice update
cont soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

wow..such a lovely update...
i jus loved it yr...
u pendown so nicely...tnqu u so much for such a wonderful nd lovely update...
the way u write is just awsm
iplsss update soon
eagerly waiting for ur update...
cant wait so long continue ASAP

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Dhingli44

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#217

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95
nice update dear...😊
this was a much needed talk between manan...
it was all so pure, so beautiful😊
thanx for the pm dear
update soon
tc😊

Thank you so much dear 😊

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#218

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1
wow..such a lovely update...
i jus loved it yr...
u pendown so nicely...tnqu u so much for such a wonderful nd lovely update...
the way u write is just awsm
iplsss update soon
eagerly waiting for ur update...
cant wait so long continue ASAP

Thank you dear...glad you liked it 😊

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Surprise surprise..!! 😃 Too early right..but the truth is that I will not be able to update till next Tuesday atleast as there is rakhi and uske baad mera Birthday [:D/]..and guys jab main compensation chapters de rahi hoon toh pls aap log bhi respond karo for the updates...it feels like you guys are not liking it and I'm going on uploading...so buck up guys warna mereko bhi baaki writers ke jaisa karna padega...dhamki 😆 I don't degrade it but now I too feel ke it was really needed kyuki u guys don't respond only...atleast ye toh comment karo ki nai pasand aara n kyu nai pasand aara..Okie enough of my rantings...here goes the update..

Chapter 13 ⭐️ -

It was the last day of the camp..everyone wished they could be there for more but it was clearly not possible...they had their families and many other things waiting for them back home..But a memorable end toh banta hai na 😉 They arranged for a small party..the guys with all the organisation and the girls with the help of Chachi baked a cake with some snacks...each and everyone enjoyed to their fullest..just when a kid came to Nandini.."Didi" and gestured her to bend and kissed her cheek "Aap bohot beautiful ho..ap next time bhi aaogi na..!? Toh man bhi aaonga.."
All went Aweee with it and our Mr.Malhotra was jealous...yes!! from a kid..
C-Yaar shanti..ankhon se hi jaladega us bechare bache ko...I agree tera mauka le gaya but still...he's a kid ya 😆
M-Shut up Cabir!!
Mu-See babydoll kids are not soo badd..!!
N-Who told they are... 😛
Abhi-Ohoo really...
N-Hmm...
All burst out laughing..The party ended and all kids left to the station.Our gang also got on the bus with Chachi..It was again the same in the bus...all fun and all happy nd gay!! It was night time and maximum of them slept..except
C-Manikk...!!
M-Haan...kya hua aisa frustrate kyu ho raha hai..
C-Yaar kya karu..I am.Are you gonna tell Nandu in this life time..ya door se hi ghoorega lifetime.
M-No Cabirr I will...with twinkle in his eyes and happiness visible clearly in his voice..I will when I'm sure..
C-School se you have a crush on her...a serious one(quoting with his fingers) and you're still not sure..
M-Duffer..I am sure.I will when I'm sure about her feelings for me and that it will not effect the group.
C-Manik yaar she doesn't even know about your feelings how will she be having any idea about it and see Ananya came and asked you directly na...you do the same..and tu bol what did she say when you told her about Ananya...!?
M-(thinking) She told me to...to give it a try and think about it.
C-Exactly do it yaar...and what problems would the group have...tum dono single ho and Ananya thing is also over toh koi vomplications ka question hi nai uthta.
M-It's not so Cabirr..It's that..(Self thought-He's Cabir's brother..should I be telling Cabir..!!? No I guess..hmm)
C-What do you mean by that...wait a minute...u mean someone from the group is...matlab likes either of you..!? 😕 Ab konn...
M-Nothing yaar..
C-(he takes Manik's hand and says) swear on our friendship and chup chap bol..
M-Don't blackmail me ya..
C-So you are not my true friend na..main bhi..(with crocodile tears 😛 )
M-Aise mat bol yaar...I..
C-Rehnede...(same nautanki 😆 )
M-Okay fine...!! Sunn...I ...I
C-You...!!Tu hakla kya raha hai yaar...
M-I think Abeer likes Nandini...he says in one breath.
C-(took his own time to register Manik's words and gave a late reaction but full of power) Whatt...!!?
He shouts...and Manik is startled...
Mu-Yaar tujhe neend nai aarahi toh mujhe toh sone de..chilla mat yaar..
M-Dekha dats why I wasn't telling you...
C-Tu kya pagal ho gaya hai...and gets up
M-Kahan jaa raha hai..
C-Driver ke paas gaadi ghumane ko bolne..u have left your brain and senses in the camp..
M-Bro shut up and sit downn!!
C-No wait what made you think so Manik...!?
M-Yaar have you seen them..so close always..you 3 were a group before me and the rest joined..remember tab se lekar aaj tak...have you ever seen them fight or not co-operate..they understand each other so truly.They just compliment eachother by being together. Hamesha there for each other..every damn thing about each other they know..The ironic friends yaar..Aaj party mein bhi I saw how he loojs at her with those feelings..
C-Manik..!! Ur being so irrational and illogical.We are bachpan se friends and don't you care about Nandu...don't you know her..aren't you there for her...!? Same way wo bhi hai...coz he's happy when she's happy..just like you he can't let her cry.. Four of us are the oldest in the colony yaar..
M-I care yaar not only for her but also the group and I also feel that Abeer doesn't like me...
C-Ye just tera illusion hai..Wait a minute let us ask him..
M-Cabirr no...!!
C-Shut up!!

And Cabir calls him..All move towards the front as they don't want to be disturbing the rest..

C-Bro mujhe tujhse kuch puchna hai..directly puchta hoon..First-Kya tujhe Manik se koi problem hai kya..
Ab-What..!? Ye kya puch raha hai..are you fine bro..
C-Just answer me... (Manik was just standing there silently)
Ab-But why all of this suddenly..!?
C-Coz Manik thinks that you don't like him...
Ab-Bro to be honest...kinda don't coz sometimes when he stares at Nandu...I don't like it..!!
C-(chuckles) Because he likes Nandini...and he also thinks that you like her..
With this both the twins burst out laughing and Manik was staring them not knowing what to say)
Ab-Bro what makes you think so...Nandu is my buddy a part of me in all things..she's my love n my babydoll but I don't like her the way you think and neither does she..
M-Oh..!!
C-What's Oh Manik...ab toh ye keeda nikal gaya na tere bheje mein se.
Ab-Oh..you like Nandu haan...hmm hmm...aheee...kab se
M-Wo..school se (ruffling his hair and with a flushed face) 😳
Ab-Dudee...!! Iss janam mein bolne ka irada hai kya..!!
C-Mane bhi wohi kaha...Manik college is gonna start and there's college ball like every year...just ask her..Baat karle ab!!
M-Hmm...
Ab-Hmm nai ab agar you don't say na in the ball then I will tell her..phir jawab dena use..
Abhi-Hey guys what's going on. Aren't you all tired.
C-Ya hum..sone hi aarahe hai..!!

Ho gaya..!!.again no Manan but guys aage Manan hi Manan 😉 I love Cabir too so I gave him the all time cupid role again 😉 Like and comment dil khol ke...!!
#okaythanksbye

Edited by Dhingli44 - 10 years ago