MANAN:Anything For You ❤️ Chapter 20,Pg 68 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice update... I'm loving it yrr... it's sooo amazing... abeer and cabir are great friends... they were sooo worried about nandini... and anunya... she is really a chipkoo... she is good as a friend, she too cares for nandini and wanted that things should sort out between manik and nandini but also find didn't like their closeness... and then seeing those marks on manik's hand and saying ill about nandini just made manik mad... and then manik meeting nandini... he was super worried for her after all he can't see his love like this all scared and shivering... he didn't even let hia pain out because he doesn't want her to even fell guilty...he is such a sweetheart... how well he knows her... he knew understood that she wants him to stay... and she too is caring as she didn't ask him to say because maybe he too was tired... great going... really awesome... thank uh sooo much for the pm... really appreciate it... please continue soon...waiting eagerly...keep it up...best wishes... :) :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">awww..Manik doesn't want Nandu to feel guilty...that was really cute.😊</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">but plzzz ye chipku ko jldi hataao yrr beech mein se😡and make nandu realize her feelings soon.😊</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">nice update dear...can you plzz pm me next time??</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">tc😊</font>


Thank you 😊
Stick on to the story for more
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashmita18

Really nice update... I'm loving it yrr... it's sooo amazing... abeer and cabir are great friends... they were sooo worried about nandini... and anunya... she is really a chipkoo... she is good as a friend, she too cares for nandini and wanted that things should sort out between manik and nandini but also find didn't like their closeness... and then seeing those marks on manik's hand and saying ill about nandini just made manik mad... and then manik meeting nandini... he was super worried for her after all he can't see his love like this all scared and shivering... he didn't even let hia pain out because he doesn't want her to even fell guilty...he is such a sweetheart... how well he knows her... he knew understood that she wants him to stay... and she too is caring as she didn't ask him to say because maybe he too was tired... great going... really awesome... thank uh sooo much for the pm... really appreciate it... please continue soon...waiting eagerly...keep it up...best wishes... :) :D


Thank u... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 9 ⭐️-
Nandu was feeling really suffocated in the room so she decidedd to go to the terrace.Mukti and Navya were already in the room n they were not allowing Nandu to go alone.But coz of Nandu's requests they both went to bed as they were also very tired with the day's activities...She headed straight up to the terrace and was drowning in the wonders of the nature..cold winds,shinning moon,twinkling stars...She got startled by the sudden voice of someone saying something...but when she turned to see who that someone was...she got into peace.

M-Room mein andhera ho toh darr lagta hai madam ko par raat ke andhere mein nahi..!!?
N-Cause Manik yahan..
The stars are twinkling..
The moon is shining..
Cold winds are blowing..
Taking away all my worries and giving me solace!! 😊
M-Wow..!!That was really good..I didn't know even you love stars soo much like me. 😳
N-Thanku...ya I like them.They are just like my fireflies..!!
M-Fireflies!!You like them...but they cannot br seen easily na..bohot mushkil hai une dhundna.
N-Hum nahi Manik wo hame dhoondte hai...They find true love and symbolise it. 😊
M-Really..that's deep.Acha tum upar kya kar rahi ho...u shld be sleeping na.Tomorrow is gonna be a busy day.
N-Woh I was feeling suffocated so I came up..
M-Your fine na..and she just hmmed

Both were standing there leening on the railing and mesmerizing the stars.Silence was all that was present there but it was as good as each other to them...being together!!
Nandini decided to go and just when she bid bye to him and took a step ahead...she felt some dizziness and fell back on him.Manik freaked out.Why won't he...he was as it is really worried for her and now this...
M-Nandini..!!are you okay..!!?What happened.
N-I'm okay Manik...I was just feeling dizzy.I think I shld go to sleep.
M-Okay chalo I'll drop you till your room.
N-No it's fine.I'll go by myself.
M-Thik se khadi nai ho paari ho tum..kaise jaogi.Chup chap chalo mere saath.
N-Okay and saying this she held Manik's hand that he offered for support.But just as she held it he winced in pain.But this time she directly moved the jacket's sleeve a bit and saw..
N-Manik yeh kya hua...kitne deep hai ye...kisne kiya.
M-It's nothing Nandu.Thik hai...Come let's go.
Nandu thought for a while amd she then suddenly shrieked.
N-Manik ye maine kiya hai na...jab ham lock hue the.Manik I'm so sorry I didn't mean to par wahan andhera tha aur main darr gati thi..tumhe pata hai na andhera mere oast ka sabse bura memory hai...par tum mere paas baithe the toh tumhe lag gayi...I'm sorry(allin one breath)
M-(held her by her shoulders)Relax ya Nandu.It's ok.Ho gaya na.I'm fine..
N-Tumne dressing ki..?
M-Nodded in a no
N-Kya..!!?Chalo tum abhi mere saath I'll do it.
M-No main kar lunga..ur not feeling well na tum so jaw.
N-Promise on our friendship.?
M-(smiles)Promise

With this they went down and Manik held Nandu's hand for support..And Ananya saw them in the corridor..both were talking but more it seemed like Manik was consoling her.She went to them.Seeing her Nandu asked Manik to leave her hand...but he didn't.
Anu-Hey Nandu kya hua.Y you looking so dull..
She wasn't able to sum up words to speak all she did was looked at Manik.
M-Actually she's feeling dizzy...let me drop her to her room.Aur tum itni raat ko akele kyu ghumvrahi ho corridor mein.
Anu-I was just going to get water..(She was very happy with this caring geture of Manik)
M-Bahar jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai..main Nandu ko drop kardu then come with me I'll get you water.Mere room mein hai.
Anu-Okay.How's ur hand by the way..(looking at Nandu.She was very jealous seeing them together.)
M-It's fine.
Anu-Nandu don't you think tumhe apne aap ko control karna chahiye tha...Your not a kid ya anymore.
This line of hers had different effects on Manik and Nandu.Manik eyed Anu angrily but she ignored it.Guilt quotient increased in Nandu.She again muttered a sorry to him from beneath her eyelashes.
M-No need Nandu..I told you na it's okay(as if consoling a child)

Nandu's POV-
Na na na na na na(imitating Anu's words 😆 )Humph.!!.mere aur Manik k beech ki baat hai. Use kya isse..maana k wo dono trial relationship mein hai par Maik mera bhi toh dost hai na..Aur maine jaan bujhkar thodi na kiya.Use kya pata ke kyu darti hoon main darkness se itna.Jab na pata ho na tab nahi hi bolna chahiye..Bechara Manik.
End

M-I'll drop her inside and come..(with this he left without waiting for any answer from Anu)

Anu's POV-
Itna kya attention deta hai Manik use.Wo choti bachi thodi hai.Darwaze tak toh choda na..andar tak wo khud ja sakti hai..
End

He tucked her in the lower bed of the 3 storied bed set.He gave her teddy in her hand..whispered a Good night with a agar kisi cheez ki zarrorat ho toh call me wala patent line and left 😆

Manik and Ananya were going towards his room for water.
Anu-How is she now(with sarcasm)..Oh wrong Question after so much of attention how will she be na..!!?
M-What the hell Ananya..kya zaroorat thi tumhe wo baat chedne ki..I told you na..it's about me and Nandu.
Anu-Chal kya raha hai tum dono ke beech Manik..
M-I really don't wanna answer that but still listen. .dare not name our friendship anything else.it's pure.Not like you forcing your friends into relationships when they have cleared that it's gonna be one sided..
Anu-Look Manik...
M-No Ananya now you look..don't you dare drag Nandu into all of this..
Anu-Back to Nandu..she isn't your girlfriend Manik..I am
M-Really you think so..then you are highly mistaken Ananya.You are marking urself as my girlfriend.You(pointing towards her) are not my girlfriend.I cleared it in the very beginning...But after all of this we're done.

Saying this he left and Ananya too ran into her room crying all the way...

NEXT DAY MORNING:
All gathered at the breakfast table.Manik didn't even look at Ananya...Ananya felt like crying n crying but she was also a strong headed girl...she controlled herself and did not let anyone come to know about her turmoil..she was behaving normally with everyone but mentally made a note to talk to Manik and sought out the issues...

Ab-Babydoll you are fine na!!
N-(smiles)Hmm...
Al-The whether is so awesome na guys..
Mu-Haan haan!! Hoga hi na..jab Dhruv saath ho..
Both blushed at this n the rest chuckled.Just then Chachi came...
Ch-Hello bacho...
N-Hie Chachi Good morning..Chachi aap yahan kaise..
Ch-Nandu tere kehne pe maine chutti toh leli thi.Par main itna bore hori thi aur tum log bhi nahi the toh maine yahan aana socha .
N-Chachi yahan aap rest kaise karoge...ye bache kuch nai karne dete..bas dimaag khaate hai..(irritatedly)
Ab-Aur Nandu ko pareshaan karte hai..
N-Toh..kitne badmaash hai saare..

Just then the old incharge came.All greeted her...she had come kyuki parents were complaining that they also want western dance along with classical.So she wanted to ask if they would teach or she would have to arrange for another tutor.Cabir,Abeer and Chachi eyed each other and then said ke they will only teach..
Al-Guys but hum kaise..All of us are having classes at that dance timings except Nandu and Abhi..
Ab-Exactly...
N-No no no...Main nai karne wali.
Dh-Nandini tumhe dance aata hai kya..
C-Aata nai Dhruv..stage phaadti hai jab wo dance karti hai..
Na-Really...!!

All were surprised with this info.Nandu danced only in front of Abeer Cabir and Chachi so she was very nervous.
Ab-Chal Nandu ek demo dikhade inhe..after breakfast.
N-Bilkul nahi...mujhe koi dance vance nai aata..(eyed him angrily)
Ch-Aree Nandu tu karegi thik hai...mai bolrahi hoon..tu meri baat bhi nai maanegi..

Donee...!!This was longg.I hope you like it.Guys one of my reader told me ke you guys are getting multiple PMs...I'm sorry for bugging you all..I will see to it. 😊
Also those who don't want PM pls tell me.Bohot effort lete hai hum log likhne mein nd Pms mein..if you are not liking it pls tell me I will stop.And about Ky2 ending fiasco...I have only one thing to say..don't lose hope till you get a confirmed news...
#okaythanksbye
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing update ...
Nandu dancer too good
continue jldi
waiting ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc update thank god manik got over she is really a pain in head uff. Update soon sweaty and tysm fo r pm waiting fot nandu's dance.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey..doll!!..kashi aahe??..hehe..!!
Marathi language if you know hhaha!!..nhi..nhi..mei gujrati hun!!..okay coming to update...it was really cute one..the description of night I loved it..The moon the star's and wind..actually my night is incomplete without stars..moon na meko itna pasand nhi hai..you know it comes and goes but star's they are forever ^-^

Well I loved all seens..Nandu is actually such a kiddoo..hehe..Annya too needs to grow up!!..
And chottu si complain can you add Mukti more..you know na how much I love her..hehe..may be you know she can make nandu realise her feelings..kuch bhi chalenga!!..haha..

uff mere manik ko hi sab tang krte hai..wesse if nandu dance manik ko kya bhahri jatka lgega na..!!

chal continue soon!!
And thanks for pm!!

Ps-Mera update bhi check kr le ^-^

Love Kavya/Kavu :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww...😳
that was sooo cuteee...manan scenes are always a bliss to watch😊
yrrr i know ananya likes manik...but i just hate these kind of girls who kind of force themselves on boys...i mean she should also think about manik's feelings...and moreover, when that guy clearly wants you to stay away, then you should do the same, atleast for your own dignity & selfrespect.
and plus, i want her out of manan yrrr..har baar beech mein aa jaati h😡😆
i know u would soon bring manan together.
tc.😊
thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm

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