SPACE: A COLLEGE FICTION Chapter 2 Page

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Posted: 10 years ago
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(Edited: Omfg I keep trying to put the pic in and it won't work ughhh I'll just put the link in I guess... stupiddd forum anyways I hope you like the edit I made it was my first time ummm thats all I have to edit I guess) Link:
Oh oh sorry the first link I put here didn't work but the one I will post again will.
New link:
https://plus.google.com/photos/117709155673232102353/albums/6171865454611835153/6171865457377011362?pid=6171865457377011362&oid=117709155673232102353

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So basically I felt like writing another fan fiction.
This is going to be about every character, not just a MaNan fan fiction that you see almost every where.
But yes MaNan will be in here because... no story is complete without MaNan :)
I would like you guys to read and leave your feed back ;)
Title:






I'll write the introduction below...

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INTRODUCTION
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In Mumbai-

Today was the happiest and the most terrified day of Raj Saxena. His three daughters were taking off to college where he too had studied. He was proud for them. Even though, being one of the top industrialists - the busiest man, he had taken good care of his daughters - Mukti, Navya and Alya. All three had got love, care and comfort from their father. There wasn't anything in the world that they had wished and Raj Saxena had not presented it in a split second. Of course, each of the sisters contained a different character

Navya had always been that girl whom everyone adored and worshiped. She was the queen bee. A diva. Her clothes had always been trend setter and the way she carried herself was something to look at. She had always been the center of attraction of every business party, Raj Saxena gave and not to mention the high profile Mumbai elite parties. Although, being pampered like a princess and fleeing around the world of glamour, Navya Saxena never let all that took it into her brain. She kept her feet strongly grounded to the earth.

On the other hand, Alya was a shy one. She wasn't anything like Navya. Clothes never defined her but her simplicity did. Her world revolved around books and her dad. She liked to take care of her sisters and dad. She was like an open book where you can read every emotion on her face. She excelled in studies and volunteered for NGOs. Behind the glasses, there were two beautiful eyes which saw the good in the world. Raj Saxena always worried for her as she trusted everyone. She followed her heart. Alya Saxena was that simple, shy, kind of nerdy and a good heart girl for whom feelings meant the most.

Now, if you're thinking Mukti Saxena might be mixture of Alya and Navya, you're totally wrong. Amber wasn't girly at all. From childhood to youth her clothes were bought from boys' stores. Short hair, torn jeans and attitude of a jackass was her trademark. She was naughty and pain-in-ass for everyone. The only time she listened to Raj Saxena when she was found guilty and that had happened for few times like bike racing on the roads at mid night; fighting with the guys who teased Alya and then slapping a policeman when he said it was her fault to be that beautiful. She had an endless list of mischief she had done. Generally her sister covered up for her as they loved this prankster sister of them. Mukti might not be as smart as Alya in studies but her brain was a factory of wicked ideas. She loved being like a boy and challenging them. Her only weakness was her sisters and father. But at the end, if you have to sum up Mukti Saxena in a sentence, you can say "She was a spoiled brat."


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So how is it?
I chose to type it in a book form since I am used to it from school and stuff.
It's going to be in English only since it's easier to type and to read as well.
I hope you like it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing! Can't wait for an update, please PM me! :)
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Nice story but where is our belived manan r they not going to b part of your story.update soon. And plz pm me next time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI

Nice story but where is our belived manan r they not going to b part of your story.update soon. And plz pm me next time.



Lol everyone is a part of the story... MaNan... Cavya... MukBhi...DhruLya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1: A new beginning
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In Mumbai.

"Mukti, don't wear this. Do you know you look like? A garbage which has been thrown into my room." Navya shouted in disgust when she saw Mukti entering in the room wearing a white tanktop and angry bird printed shorts.

"It's better than yours. Look at you. You probably look like you've just stepped out of ice cream parlor and have showered with strawberry flavor. Besides my clothes have occupied only two bags unlike your five huge ones. And daddy's little princess is not going to lift this many bags so Alya get ready to be a porter." Mukti threw herself on the bed and stuck out her tongue. In return, Navya grabbed the nearest pillow and smacked it on Mukti's head.

"What the hell! I was telling the truth. Now, the war begins." Mukti got up quickly and took Ninja position.

"Daddy, Mukti and Navya are fighting." Alya ran out of the room and shouted at Raj who was in the hallway, doing last minute check. He looked up and smiled at his daughter and signaled that he was coming. Of course, after 15 minutes when he entered in the room, they had already cooled down.

"Daddy, why aren't you saying anything to her?" Navya asked Raj who just gave them hug one by one.

"Let her wear whatever she wants to. I gave her permission. I tried to picture her in your clothes but she looked horrible in them." Raj petted on their heads. "And as you wished I am not coming with you to the airport. So as a gift, I gave her the permission. Princess this is for you." He handed a red box with pink sparkle ribbons to Navya. Navya found credit card in it, she hugged him."And my genius girl, this is for you." Alya took a simple box and opened it.

"Oh my god, dad!" Alya screamed in excitement. Raj had sent her writing samples to her favorite writer and it was a reply from him stating he had loved what he had seen and would like to review the whole work. "DAD..." They hugged him with those big smiles, every father wants to see. Raj Saxena waved them good bye the very last time before starting his regular business life. His daughters were gone for three years and he was going to be alone here except holidays.

At The Same Time In Ahmadabad.

"Babyji, let me do it. You just rest for a while. You've a long journey." Ramukaka said after taking kettle from Nandini's hand. "I'll prepare whatever you want to eat."

"Ramukaka!" Nandini tried to complain but she knew her care-taker very well. So, she sat on the chair and watched him make tea and sandwiches for her. "You know, you won't be in hostel to do all my chores." She said after a while.

"That's the problem Babyji. I have requested your father and brother so many times to let me come with you but they just laughs at me. I'm planning to try one more time. If they agree, I'll come with you. I've already packed my bags too." Ramukaka replied enthusiastically.

"Ramukaka." Nandini stared him in amusement. This man had given all his life just to raise her and her brother. He wasn't that servant anymore who was working for his father from the age of 10. He was their family and had his say in the family matters too. Nandini and Aryaman used to call him their "Male Mother" and he was their mother. He was the one whom their mother had given them before her death and taken promise to look after them. He had never broken it. So, now when today, Nandini was leaving; it was hard for him too.

"When is your flight?" Ramukaka asked, taking seat beside Nandini.

"In four hours." She replied.

"Don't you have to go early for checking and stuff?" Ramukaka asked.

"Yes but I think a little late won't do any harm. I want to say my good-bye properly." Nandini put down the cup and took Ramukaka's hands in hers.

"Promise me. You won't cry when I leave and will be happy here till we come to visit."

"You have never been away from me. And I know it is good for you study but what I will do alone here?" A small tear dropped from his eyes.

"Aww. Come on, you can help dad. He'll be alone to and we will come in December and celebrate Christmas like always. And Aryaman is still staying here for few days. So, stop crying and think that you've got your holiday. You've dedicated your life after us. Now be a little greedy and live for yourself." Nandini patted his hands and gave him a tight hug. For a while, Ramukaka hold her and then let go of her. He took a strand of Nandini's wavy and poofy hair and stared at it.

"We should go now." Suddenly he said. "It's good Aryaman has already reached there with the luggage." At the airport, everyone bid Nandini their good bye including workers from her father's farms. Aryaman told her that he would join soon and then Nandini strolled into the gates to her new destination. Before taking off, she made her last call to kaka.

"I know what you were thinking. You were thinking how in childhood you used to comb my hair and now how big I have become. Don't worry I'm still your little girl. Bye. Love you and dad and Aryaman."

In Kolkata.

"Cabir, you lazy @ss. Wake up."

"Mumma, five more minutes."

"You've been telling it for past half an hour. Now wake up or I'll splash hot water on your face. Think what hot water will do to your handsome face." That made Cabir's eyes open widely. He turned around and located his mother standing at the edge. He grabbed her and made her sit beside him than put his head on her lap.

"Mom. I'm going to miss you." Cabir said with eyes half closed.

"You're just going to miss the girls and your chances of showing off. Delhi has nothing to offer to my lover boy beta since all the girls there are clever and play hard to get." Shivani Kapoor teased.

"Oh, come on. There will be plenty of girls from all over India. Trust this time, I'll bring bahu for you instead of girlfriends." Cabir joked.

"Aren't you watching too many bollywood romance movies?" Shivani

"I took it from my mother and anyway, every girl loves romance. It comes handy to use movie tricks than inventing your own. They'll just say, "AWW. You did the same Shahrukh did in Kuch Kuch Hota Hai, and you get the girl."
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So how was it? I made the first chapter short because I wanted to use it as a preface.
And lol the different places where all the characters come from are random since I have never been to India and I am not from there so I just picked random cities I heard in Bollywood movies 😛

And the next chapters will be uh longer, I promise. 😊
And to the readers:
I just love roses :)
Edited by ElegantRain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is super amazing! I can't wait till everyone else is introduced and I can't wait till the story progresses!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am loving this Story already, liked how for once the First Part focussed on Mukti aliya and navya
I was a Bit confused when You described navya, i thought You used the wrong Name but I guess that was intentional

Anyway waiting for Manik
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chair1992

I am loving this Story already, liked how for once the First Part focussed on Mukti aliya and navya
I was a Bit confused when You described navya, i thought You used the wrong Name but I guess that was intentional

Anyway waiting for Manik



Yes I know I wanted to have Alya as the fashionista sister but because of the pairing with the other characters CavYa had to be together so I made Navya be the fashionista sister and Alya the nerdy one so Dhrulya can be together.



loook pretty flowers <<<<
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a mind blowing start...
navya mukti and aliya all hugs to that scene awesome...😊
nandini scene was emotional loved it
and cabir our flirt was also good
do continue soon
and if possible please pm me too
thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update and also pm me

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