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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for your update.

PLSSS UPDATE TODAY ITSELF...

IN LOVE WITH THS FF...

AND MOST OBVIOUSLY MANIK AND MANVI BOND ..


Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome mind blowing superb update. ..
Manvi isso cute
Her dedective mode on and asking manik questions as to why hesaid yes for concert. .
Smart gal. ..then putting conditions. .hehe manik malhotra ki beti haI akhir. ..
Manik loves her daughter so much that he can't see even one tear in her eyes..
Phrase papa ki jaan se to m fully addicted...
Such a cute cheerful bonding it is. ..
Addicted yo your ffs. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mawara
Darling you're an awesome writer
I have just read a few chapters and I must tell
you one more time that you are brilliant.
They are so realistic!!
Keep up the good work sweety
Keep writing
God bless!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Liked d part a lot just waiting for how ll manik handle neyonika...update soon eagerly waiting :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ty for d pm...
am sorry am late to like n comment...I was stuck somewhere...
d update was awesome...
hehe manvi is cho cute...her sweet antics...r awww...
loved possessive manik malhotra...he is d most protective husband n father...I so love him...
loved d college scene...haw bechara yash...
finally payback time gonna come...
Plz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting witing waiting waiting n waiting...plz update fast...i am so in love with ur story...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was a super lovely update... loved it sooo very much... I know I'm very late... SORRY for that... and the update is was superb... the morning convo between manik and nandini where manik was doubting himself of not being a good father... and then at breakfast table when manik told manvi about going to bombay... she was sooo excited... but she is sooo lovely tooo... she loves her mama sooo much that she asked manik whether nandini is going or not... and how smartly she acted when manik told her that manvi is going to his concert and she asked that last time he denied and now how come he allowed... hehehe sooo cute... and then her buttering antics... awww sooo sweeet... manik getting restless and worried when manvi called and was crying... he cares for her sooo much... and when she fell his heart skipped a beat... and he not thinking about his surroundings was just busy in calming her daughter because he can't seee her cry or hurt... soo adorable... loved it... and manik handling the situation sooo well... first of all clearing everyone's doubts and then warning them to not bother nandini for all this and then his humble gratitude towards mr. Kumar and then being all protective for nandini and manvi in front of yash... manik is just soo perfect... then in aeroplane he consoling nandini and calming her down... and then cabir and mukti and manvi's convo... those kisses and her cute antics... hehehe shooo cute they are... loved it... flawless update... what an update... commendable... uh are a natural... great job... well done... thank uh soo much for the pm... really grateful... please continue soon... will be waiting eagerly... keep up with the great work... best wishes... :) :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 10 A


IshQ Bin Jiya Na Jaye..

IshQ Bin Mara Na Jaye..

IshQ Sang Nahi Guzara..

IshQ Haye Khoon Rulaye..

Chaly Teri Rahoon Pay Chalay..

Humy Par Gham He Gham Milay..

Kabhi Par Shikwa Na Kiya..

IshQ Ko Bhaye Na Gilay..

IshQ Bin Jiya Na Jaye..

IshQ Aansoo Rualye..

IshQ Main Nazar Na Aye..

IshQ Koi Smjh Na Paye..

IshQ Bin Jiya Na Jaye..

(A Small Tribute To MaNan as I love this song..! Wanted to share with you all..!! For All Poetry lovers..!!) '


It was 10 of night when the plane landed on the Mumbai airport. Manvi was sleeping peacefully. She was feeling cold so Manik wrapped his little love in his blazer. The Blazer was too big for Manvi so she was fully wrapped in it. As the plane landed Manik picked up Manvi in his arms and she cuddled more close to his chest. All of them came out of the airport after checking. Manik's driver was already there. Cabir decided to drop Mukti and Dhrulya too went together. Driver came and greeted MaNan.


"Namasty Nandini Didi..!!"Mohan said smilingly.


"Namasty Mohan..!! How are you?"Nandini asked smilingly.


"I am fine..!! How are you? And Choti Didi..?"Mohan asked as he saw Manvi in Manik's arms sleeping as her thumb was in her pouty lips. She was not less than an angel. After greeting each other they sat on the car. Once again all the bad memories of Mumbai started haunting Nandini. Nandini's grip on Manik's hand became tight.


"Mani..!! Wapas chalo..!! Mj..!! Mjy ni jana..!! Please..!!"Nandini whispered and her eyes became moist.


"Nandini..!! You trust your Mani? Hai na?? Tou bus..!! You don't have to be worried..!! It's your house..!! No one has right to throw you out of there..!! Last time I wasn't there to protect you but today I am with you..!!" Manik said in determined tone and Nandini just side hugged him. Suddenly Manvi rubbed her eyes sleepily and then she lazily opened her eyes. Manik look at her and smiled.


"Uth gai Papa ki jaan?"Manik asked kissing her forehead. She too smiled sleepily.


"Papa..!! Hum ghaal(ghar) kab pohanchain gay?" She asked cutely and sat in his lap. She looked out of the window as the lights of the big city were so tempting. She excitedly pressed her nose with the window glass.MaNan were just looking at her excitement.


"Bus 10 minutes..!!"Manik said caressing her head.


"Papa look..!! Play Land..!! Jholay..!!"She shouted excitedly.


"G Choti Didi..!! There are lots of Play Lands..!!"Mohan was so amused with her excitement.


"Papa who is he?"Manvi whispered curiously in Manik's ear. Manik smiled at her whisper.


"Manvi he is Mohan Da da..!!"Nandini cleared her confusion and she nodded.


"Papa..!! Ap mjy in play lands main lay kay jyen gay na?"Manvi asked excitedly.


"Of course..!! Jahan bhi Papa ka beta jana chahy ga wahan chalain gay..!!"Manik said pulling her cheek and she smiled widely. Meanwhile they reached Malhotra Mansion. Mohan pressed the horn and the guard opened the gate. Manvi was very excited but Nandini's breath became uneven. Manik held Nandini's hand and got down of the car with Manvi.


"Please Nayonika...!! For God sake..!! Leave me..!!"Nandini's own screams echoed in her ears she trembeled.


"Get out of my son's life..!!"Nayonika's shout echoed and she palmed her ears.


Where as Manik made Manvi stand on the ground. She was so amazed seeing such a big house. For a second she forgot to blink her eyes. The ornamented doors..!! The shiny windows..!! Everything was so perfect. She look at Manik in disbelief. Manik kneeled in front of her.


"This is my doll's house..!!"Manik said lovingly cupping her cheeks she was just staring at him.


"Mena(mera) ghaal(ghar)?"She asked pointing towards herself and Manik nodded.


"You wanna see it? Go inside..!! I will be there..!!"Manik said smilingly and she run on her toes to go inside the house. Manik went towards Nandini who was standing numb. Manik knew what was her feelings now. He just embraced her in his strong arms. And patted her head to console her. As soon as Manik hugged her she burst out in tears. She was once again breaking she clutched Manik's shirt tightly and cried out loud. Manik let her cry as he thought it was needed.


"Nandini..!! Bus..!! This OUR house..!! Come on my baby be strong..!!"Manik said breaking the hug and she nodded. Manik wiped her tears and she feebly smiled. Manik pecked her forehead and lead her to inside the house. As they entered the house the sight in front of them left them awe. Manvi was shaking hand with the servants and introducing herself. All the servants were kneeling in front of her. MaNan walked towards them. All of them stood straight and look at Nandini. They all greeted Nandini and she smilingly greeted them back. Manik gestured everyone to leave and they all after wishing good night to their new choti didi left. Manik picked up Manvi in his arms and she smiled,


"So Papa ki jaan liked the house..!!"Manik asked smilingly and she bobbed her head excitedly. "You wanna see the whole house?"Manik asked and she again nodded.


"Papa..!! Ab hum yahen rahen gay na? Ap kay pass?"Manvi asked and Manik again gulped his saliva in guilt.


"Yes bacha..!! Ap main aur Mama..!! We all will live here..!! HAMESHA..!!"Manik said smilingly and held Nandini's hand too. Then Manik showed her the house.


"Wohoo...!!! Shiwiming(swimming) pool..!!"She shouted excitedly seeing such a big swimming pool and run towards it. MaNan smilingly followed her. Now she was bending over the pool and Manik was holding her waist in order to restrain her from falling down. She touched the water with her tiny fingers and shrieked.


"Kya hua?"MaNan asked in unison.


"Bohat thaandaaa hai..!!"Manvi said frowning her face and Manik laughed.


"Baby it's night..!! Raat ko pani thanda he hota hai..!!"Manik said and dragged her away from the pool. But again her mood was off. MaNan look at each other and smiled. "Acha ok..!! Don't be sad I have something which you will surely like..!!"Manik said excitedly and winked. She look at Manik with curious expressions and cutely raised her eyebrow to ask what was it. Manik walked towards the room which he specially designed for Manvi. The room was exactly beside MaNan's room. As soon as they reached Manvi's room. Manvi became excited because the door had a big pikachu on it. The background color was blue.


"Mama..!! Papa..!! Pitachuuu..!!!"She exclaimed and clapped her hands. Manik opened the door on the room and made her stand on the floor. The bed had pillows which had pikachu covers. Moreover the duvet also had pickachu on it.


Nandini side hugged Manik and he wrapped his arm around her waist. As Manvi's expression were priceless. She was touching everything. All her toys were arranged in a very well manner. She was so amazed and happy. She even don't know how to express her feelings so tears welled up in her eyes and she look at Manik. And Manik who was happy to see his angel happy saw tears in her eyes and became horrified. He left Nandini and run towards Manvi.


"Aray baby..!! You don't like the decorations? You want something else..!!"He asked panicking bablt and cupped her face. But she didn't said anything but hugged him tightly. Manik was worried that what happened to her suddenly. But Nandini was very well aware of their darling's love behavior. Manik patted Manvi's back to shush her but she was still sniffing. Manik helplessly look at Nandini she came and put her hand on Manik's shoulder.



Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 10 B


"Mani..!! Relax..!! Jab Manvi bohat ziada khush hoti hai na..!! Tou usy smj nahi ata how to express her feelings so she cries..!!"Nandini explained softly and Manik smiled.


"So..!! Papa ki jaan don't know how to express herself haan?"Manik asked Manvi and she innocently nodded her head. "Hmmm..!! You don't have to express yourself jaan..!! Because Papa knows his darling..!!"Manik said lovingly and she smiled. Manik pecked her forehead.


"Mama ki jaan..!! Idar aoa Mama Pass..!!"Nandini said lovingly and took Manvi from Manik's arms. She hopped in her arms and rested her head on her shoulder. Manik hugged both.


"I love you Mama..!! I love you Papa..!! Papa thank you..!!"MaNan heard Manvi's whisper and the both kissed her cheeks.


"Acha..!! Baby you liked your bed..!!"Manik asked Manvi to lighten her mood and she look at the bed and bobbed her head. She run towards the bed and tried to climb it but to her dismay the bed was high for her. Manik felt so much love for her he wanted to eat her alive. As she was now continuously jumping to climb the bed. At last she quit trying she look at Manik and blinked her eyes cutely as if asking him for help. Manik run towards her and twirled around with her in his arms. Then he made her sit on the bed. She hugged one of the pillow. Nandini sat on her other side.


"Mano..! Shoes utarain?"Nandini asked softly and Manvi nodded. Nandini took off her shoes and placed them on the floor. Manik who was admiring them both suddenly got a glimpse of Manvi's feet. Nandini was about to tuck her feet in the blanket when Manik stopped her. She look at him all surprised.


"What are these red marks on her skin?"Manik asked worriedly touching her tiny white milky feet.


"Mani..!! It's just us ny sbha say shoes pehn kar rkhy hain na that's why..!! It's normal..!! Babies have soft skin tou marks par jaty hain it's ok..!!"Nandini explained casually.


"No..!! It's not ok..!!"Manik shouted. "I am calling the doctor..!!"Manik picked up his cell phone but Nandini held his hand.


"Mani..!! Kya ho gya hai..!! It's not for the first time ..!! She will be ok by morning...!!"Nandini said calmly.


"Ni..!! Mjy tension ho rahi hai..!!"Manik said worriedly. Nandini can clearly understand his worries.


"Acha..!! Listen I will give her a massage..!! With some baby oil..!! Ok? Don't take tension..!!"Nandini said assuringly.


"She will be fine na?"Manik asked in a low voice and Nandini nodded.


After sometime Manvi was sitting in Manik's lap munching her chocolate and her feet were in Nandini's lap. As she was massaging Manvi's feet. Manik was looking at her carefully so that she didn't miss any point. Soon the massage was done and Manvi was fast asleep. Manik carefully tucked her in the blanket and kissed her forehead. Meanwhile Nandini washed her hands and she also kissed her daughter. Manik turned on the night lamp and switched off the lights. He held Nandini's hand and came out of Manvi's room. Then MaNan came to their room. Nandini stepped inside and look at the surroundings. Everything was the same. The black curtains..!! The black silky bed sheets..!! The black shiny blanket..!! She was back again. She stood beside the glass window looking at nowhere. Manik came and hugged her from back.


"Thanks to your Aiyappa..!! That you are back..!! I missed your presence in this room a lot..!!"Manik whispered huskily in her ear and nibbled her earlobe. With that he pulled her earring out with help of his teeth. Nandini shivered and held his hands in her waist. Manik roughly turned her and pulled her other earring too.


"Mani..!! I want you please..!! Stay with me..!!"Nandini whispered emotionally as few lone tears escaped her eyes and Manik smiled on her innocent request.


"I am with you honey..!!"Manik said lovingly and kissed away her tears. He softly kissed her lips and she moaned his name as he traced his fingers on her bare back. She broke the kiss and turned. Now Manik was facing her back. He pinned her hands with the glass window and kissed her back. He bite her harshly and she felt weak on her knees. Manik immediately realized it and he picked her up in his arms. He laid her on the bed and came on top of her. He kissed her madly and fondled her whole body covering them with the blanket. Nandini whined and moaned with the intensity of Manik's love. He once again showered her with his eternal love and she closed her eyes in content. Suddenly she realized something and her eyes shoot open.


"Mani..!! Where is Nayonika..!!"Nandini almost freaked out and snuggled her close and put his finger on her lips.


"Nayonika..!! Is not in the country..!! She will be back tomorrow..!! Tum bus relax karo and sleep..!! You are tired..! Nyonika is not your problem

now..!!"Manik explained lovingly.


"But..!!"Nandini tried to object.


"I said baby sleep..!!"Manik said and closed her eyes with his palm. Nandini exhaled a heavy breath and let everything go. She just wanted to feel the moment and soon they drifted to sleep.

...

Next morning Manik and Manvi were almost fighting on breakfast as who will eat Nandini's hand made paratha.


"Papa..!! That's cheating..!! I will eat this palaaatha..!!"Manvi said angrily and pull the plate towards herself.


"No Mano..!! I will eat this paratha..!!"Manik said and pull the plate towards himself. Manvi look at him angrily and Manik had very calm and teasing expressions on his face which annoyed Manvi more.


"Come on you both..!! Myny itny sary parathy banye hain..!! Is waly par he kiyoon lar rahy ho..!!"Nandini was fed up with the fight.


"I am not fighting..!! Papa is fighting..!! This is the first palaaatha you made na..!! I will eat this...!!"Manvi said angrily and pull the plate towards herself again. Manik was intentionally teasing her. He wanted to tease his darling more but Nandini showed Manik eyes to stop. Manik winked at her naughtily.


"Acha ok..!! Aik kaam karty hain..!! Hum half half kar laity hain? OK"Manik suggested and Manvi started thinking about it. "Mano..!! Think..! What if Papa will snatch the whole palaatha? What will you do then? Papa is mole(more) powelfull(powerful) you can't fight with him..!! Hmm..!! Mano shale(share) kal(kar) lay..!!"Manvi was thinking all this and Manik was looking at her she was busy in thinking as usual sucking her thumb. He knew something was surely cooking in her head. Suddenly her face lit up.


"Ok..!! Done..!!"She said determinedly. Both of them shook hand with serious expressions. Nandini divided the paratha and fed her both babies. Soon the breakfast was done.


"Papa..!! Main galden(garden) main khailny jaoan?"Manvi asked Manik.


"Of course baby..!! Ap ka jahan dil kar raha hai ap wahan khailo..!!"Manik said smilignly as he was still sitting on the breakfast sipping his coffee. And Nandini was eating breakfast. Manvi happily left.


"It feels so good to have you back in this house..!!"Manik said smilingly and Nandini just smiled.

...

Manvi picked her ball from her room and was running towards outside when suddenly she bumped in someone. She look at the person. She was a lady very much fashionable. The lady also look at her. Manvi smiled cutely but Lady's expressions turned into furious ones.


"What the hell is a commoner doing in my house?"She shouted angrily. Manvi didn't understood what she said but she guessed something and her smile widen.


"Granny..!!"She exclaimed and hugged her knees. The Lady..!! Nayonika Malhotra..!! Became surprised.


"Who the hell are you..!! How dare you to call me granny..!! Stay away..!!"She shouted and pushed Manvi away. Manvi was about to fall when Manik came on time and held her securely in his arms. Nayonika saw Nandini and her eyes popped out. Manik picked up Manvi and held Nandini's hand. Now it was time for some "Hisaab Kitaab". Nayonika was looking at the sweet family with full hatred.

...

Update is here..!! I hope you all liked this chapter..!! Cuteness overloaded..!! Family moments..!! Face off time now...!! So ab kya hony wla hai? Any guesses? Tell me by your comments..!! I love you all and thanks for the comments on previous chapter..!! Will pm tomorrow..!! And yeah those who don't want to read my stories please please unbuddy me..!! I am sending almost 250 pms asnd still very few readers..!! And it feels you all have lost interest in it's love..!! Ok I will end it..!! But please do comment..!! It's not easy for us writers to pm..!! Try to understand..!! And yeah those who are copying my work without permission..!! Ufff guys really no comments..! Such a bad manner..!! Well..!! Keep smiling..!! Keep shining for your love ones..!!

Lots of Love..

Mawara

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Posted: 10 years ago
hahhah time for some hisaab kitaab
loved it
actually love ur both ffs
plzz don't end them
update soon

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