MaNan SS: Sun Sathiyaa..!!Chap10A,B/Page126/Link To Thread2/Page145 - Page 30

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Manan kitchen romance was...speechless...

I literally held my breath... Gosh!!! So well explained ...

Manivi's innocent question...awww...

Mama ya olphaan(orphaan) tya(kya) hota hai? Am I olphaaan(orphan)?" Manvi asked ever so innocently and Nandini immediately shook her head in a no and hugged Manvi tightly.

"No..!! Mano..!! You are not orphan..!! Papa loves you jaan..!! It's just that he is very busy na..!! Tou that's why he never comes to us..!!" Nandini tried to explain Manvi and control her tears.

( I soobed will reading this part...so innocent so pure)

"Reason? Jo bhi baat ho Cabir but how can she left me so quietly? I was her husband..!! Not a boyfriend jis say jab chaha breakup kar liya?" Manik said sadly. "You know how much pain I am bearing?"

( exactly... He is not a boyfriend but her husband... Ase muh utha kar tjodina chale Jana chahiye... Awww my manik is in pain... He will be even more broken when he will cone to know that he has such a cut little daughter he was not even aware of...)

Manan romance... Sare duniya jahan ke logic de sakta hai manik...just to get what he wants...;p

he look here and there then he saw a adorable girl hardly of four years old coming towards him running fast. An unknown smile crept on Manik's lips and he waited for that girl to come close to him.

( shit shit shit shit!!!! Manik saw his daughter... Hey baba ji sambhal Lena )

Why would I tell you?" She said cutely crossing her arms on her chest and Manik laughed out loud.

"Attitude hmm..!!" Manik thought playfully.

( after all he is the manik malhotras daughter...attitude you khoon mein LA kar paida hui thi)

Don't you know..!! Whenever you give a chocolate to a baby girl tou unwrap kal kay daity hain..!!" Girl said scolding him like a teacher and Manik was going all aww for her.

( junior malhotra scolding the senior on...and teaching him manners...wow...that's something exactly expected from a malhotra kid)

My papa lives in a big city..!! Mama kehti hain that Papa loves me..!! And when he will come back he will bring me a big doll..!!" Girl explained him very seriously and Manik understood that her parents must be separated

(You made me cry again...arghh mawara)

Then suddenly he opened his jacket's zip and with one corner he started rubbing girl's hands soon they were clean.Manik's most expensive jacket was ruined but who cares...!! The only need of this time was to clean the little girl's hands.

( awww... That was super cute)

Manvi Malhotra..!!"The girl shouted and run away.

"Manvi Malhotra..!!"Manik repeated smilingly and got up to leave.

( :( I m crying badly now... That's so touching)

Manik..!!" Nandini whispered.

"Ask me..!!" Manik again said and locked his lips with hers.

(Gosh...that's so sensuous ...I am blushing reading whole flashback)

Yeah..!! We will have a baby girl..!!" Manik said excitedly and Nandini nodded.

"And we will name her Manvi..!!" Manik told her and she smiled.

(Aww...so manik kept his angels name...but that Dah don't get when the girl told her name...not so manikish)

suddenly Manik slapped his hands.

"Don't you dare touch it..!!" Manik shouted angrily and Cabir was taken aback.

( aww... First nishani of his daughter...manik wants to keep it unknowingly...)

I want to meet him again..!!" Manvi's tiny head gave her a cute explanation and she decided to hide her uncle from her Mama.

( not only manik...his Jr malhotra is even more eager to see and meet her father again...oppss!! Hiding from mumna...bad manners)

Story? Are you serious Nandini..!!" Manik's laughing voice echoed.

( hehehe...like seriously story..but our lovestruck manik has to do it...)

If I hadn't left you na..!! Tou Manvi aj is duniya main nahi hoti..!! I am so sorry..!!"

( ohky now that's bit scary...I mean I am not able to make out what was the reason behind it...nyc suspense I must say... But still I have slight guesses...hope they are right)

On the whole superb updates ...

U surely took my heart ...

Stay happy stay blessed

Misha shergill

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Manan kitchen romance was...speechless...

I literally held my breath... Gosh!!! So well explained ...

Manivi's innocent question...awww...

Mama ya olphaan(orphaan) tya(kya) hota hai? Am I olphaaan(orphan)?" Manvi asked ever so innocently and Nandini immediately shook her head in a no and hugged Manvi tightly.

"No..!! Mano..!! You are not orphan..!! Papa loves you jaan..!! It's just that he is very busy na..!! Tou that's why he never comes to us..!!" Nandini tried to explain Manvi and control her tears.

( I soobed will reading this part...so innocent so pure)

"Reason? Jo bhi baat ho Cabir but how can she left me so quietly? I was her husband..!! Not a boyfriend jis say jab chaha breakup kar liya?" Manik said sadly. "You know how much pain I am bearing?"

( exactly... He is not a boyfriend but her husband... Ase muh utha kar tjodina chale Jana chahiye... Awww my manik is in pain... He will be even more broken when he will cone to know that he has such a cut little daughter he was not even aware of...)

Manan romance... Sare duniya jahan ke logic de sakta hai manik...just to get what he wants...;p

he look here and there then he saw a adorable girl hardly of four years old coming towards him running fast. An unknown smile crept on Manik's lips and he waited for that girl to come close to him.

( shit shit shit shit!!!! Manik saw his daughter... Hey baba ji sambhal Lena )

Why would I tell you?" She said cutely crossing her arms on her chest and Manik laughed out loud.

"Attitude hmm..!!" Manik thought playfully.

( after all he is the manik malhotras daughter...attitude you khoon mein LA kar paida hui thi)

Don't you know..!! Whenever you give a chocolate to a baby girl tou unwrap kal kay daity hain..!!" Girl said scolding him like a teacher and Manik was going all aww for her.

( junior malhotra scolding the senior on...and teaching him manners...wow...that's something exactly expected from a malhotra kid)

My papa lives in a big city..!! Mama kehti hain that Papa loves me..!! And when he will come back he will bring me a big doll..!!" Girl explained him very seriously and Manik understood that her parents must be separated

(You made me cry again...arghh mawara)

Then suddenly he opened his jacket's zip and with one corner he started rubbing girl's hands soon they were clean.Manik's most expensive jacket was ruined but who cares...!! The only need of this time was to clean the little girl's hands.

( awww... That was super cute)

Manvi Malhotra..!!"The girl shouted and run away.

"Manvi Malhotra..!!"Manik repeated smilingly and got up to leave.

( :( I m crying badly now... That's so touching)

Manik..!!" Nandini whispered.

"Ask me..!!" Manik again said and locked his lips with hers.

(Gosh...that's so sensuous ...I am blushing reading whole flashback)

Yeah..!! We will have a baby girl..!!" Manik said excitedly and Nandini nodded.

"And we will name her Manvi..!!" Manik told her and she smiled.

(Aww...so manik kept his angels name...but that Dah don't get when the girl told her name...not so manikish)

suddenly Manik slapped his hands.

"Don't you dare touch it..!!" Manik shouted angrily and Cabir was taken aback.

( aww... First nishani of his daughter...manik wants to keep it unknowingly...)

I want to meet him again..!!" Manvi's tiny head gave her a cute explanation and she decided to hide her uncle from her Mama.

( not only manik...his Jr malhotra is even more eager to see and meet her father again...oppss!! Hiding from mumna...bad manners)

Story? Are you serious Nandini..!!" Manik's laughing voice echoed.

( hehehe...like seriously story..but our lovestruck manik has to do it...)

If I hadn't left you na..!! Tou Manvi aj is duniya main nahi hoti..!! I am so sorry..!!"

( ohky now that's bit scary...I mean I am not able to make out what was the reason behind it...nyc suspense I must say... But still I have slight guesses...hope they are right)

On the whole superb updates ...

U surely took my heart ...

Stay happy stay blessed

Misha shergill

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Chapter 2 b

Whole convo between manik and manvi was so cute that I have to quote the whole incident to describe it...

Friend..!! Flom whele did you get this blacelet?(From where did you get this barcelet)..!!" Suddenly Manvi asked him about the tie bracelet he was wearing in his hand.

( common manik...for once trust you heart feeling...)

Manik was again sad now. He had to wait 24 hours to meet her again. He walked back to the hotel all his friends were sleeping he too fell on the bed. But his bedside was empty. He thought of something and a lone tear escaped his eye

( my manik is said again...remvering his nandini and their good time...he is even more sad that he has to wait for 24 hours to see his own kid)

Ab tmhy nend kaisy aati ho ge Nandini..!!" Manik whispered to himself sadly.

(Shit! You made me cry once again)

Manvi was too much stylish just like her grandmother Nayonika. Nayonika Malhotra..!! The Villain..!!

( yes yes yes!!!!! My guess was right...niyonika is behind all this manik nandini separation...hurry...give me credits for this...hehehe...kidding sweetheart)

She saw Manik after four long years. He was the same..!! Same face..!! Same eyes..!! But one thing was different..!! There was sadness..!! Nandini knew she was the reason of that sadness...!!

(Gosh mar gai mai... Baba ji sambhal Lena)

Shit!!!! Song for nandini...that to in front if her... I am getting super impatient to read more...

Stay happy stay blessed...

Mishshergill

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Kya kasoor tha mera Nandini..!! Q..!! Q choor kar chali gai tum mjhy..!! Myny tou hemsha tmhy pyaar kiya..!! Agr mjhy un andheroon me wapas he phainkna tha tou nikala he q..!! Kya itna bura tha main..!!" Manik thought and Nandini was crying badly)

( oh my heart is aching)

MAWARA!!!!!!!! girl you torn my heart...like seriously

Heartless by arijit Singh...

I so love this song...

You know what I was thinking to use this song in my one of previous chapters... But it don't go along with situation so well...

You deserve it