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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...!!!
I have read all three stories of yours they are amazing i just loved it
please cont. its love and tum mile soon
cant wait for their next parts
and this story too
update soon
love you lots
bye ...!!!!!


Samiah fazal
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Posted: 10 years ago
Baap re Ladki how can you do this it's super awesome yaarrr

I tooo cried myself 😭 to emotional yaar 😊 loved it thnks ..
Keep continue love you
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Posted: 10 years ago
so u here again with new and an amazing story...
beautiful wrote d adorable parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am in love with your writing!!! Awesome!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww...

its awesome...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was eagerly waiting for ur update
But it made me speechless
I really don't know how to express
It was awesome
I loved it
Manik and injured Manvi scene was awesome
How unknowingly they called each other papa bacha
Then MaNan met...oh I loved it
MaNan romance was amazing
I could really feel their situation
U described each thing so beautifully
Please clear their misunderstandings
Thanks for pm
Please update soon
Thanks for the awesome long update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow fabulous beautiful chapter
It's beyond anything
Just loved every bit of it
N I love it how u r expressing it in ur writings
I knew it that the villian will be nyonika only
So Yaa the curious question how does manvi know about her dad being manik ??
I won't to know that first then the truth of manan separation
It's very happy to see you back
N ya Tum mile epilogue is also left u hav to upload that also
N plzz do continue soon
Can't wait to read next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Take a bow girl👍🏼
What an amazing update.
Thanks for the PM.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks itni jaldi update karne ke liye😊
Update was Emotional but full of love
I just loved every scene of this update😳😳
You are a really good writer..Hats of to you👏👏
Please update your another story It's Love
Waiting for next part
Take care😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Manan kitchen romance was...speechless...
I literally held my breath... Gosh!!! So well explained ...
Manivi's innocent question...awww...

Mama ya olphaan(orphaan) tya(kya) hota hai? Am I olphaaan(orphan)?" Manvi asked ever so innocently and Nandini immediately shook her head in a no and hugged Manvi tightly.


"No..!! Mano..!! You are not orphan..!! Papa loves you jaan..!! It's just that he is very busy na..!! Tou that's why he never comes to us..!!" Nandini tried to explain Manvi and control her tears.

( I soobed will reading this part...so innocent so pure)

"Reason? Jo bhi baat ho Cabir but how can she left me so quietly? I was her husband..!! Not a boyfriend jis say jab chaha breakup kar liya?" Manik said sadly. "You know how much pain I am bearing?"

( exactly... He is not a boyfriend but her husband... Ase muh utha kar tjodina chale Jana chahiye... Awww my manik is in pain... He will be even more broken when he will cone to know that he has such a cut little daughter he was not even aware of...)

Manan romance... Sare duniya jahan ke logic de sakta hai manik...just to get what he wants...;p

he look here and there then he saw a adorable girl hardly of four years old coming towards him running fast. An unknown smile crept on Manik's lips and he waited for that girl to come close to him.

( shit shit shit shit!!!! Manik saw his daughter... Hey baba ji sambhal Lena )

Why would I tell you?" She said cutely crossing her arms on her chest and Manik laughed out loud.


"Attitude hmm..!!" Manik thought playfully.


( after all he is the manik malhotras daughter...attitude you khoon mein LA kar paida hui thi)


Don't you know..!! Whenever you give a chocolate to a baby girl tou unwrap kal kay daity hain..!!" Girl said scolding him like a teacher and Manik was going all aww for her.


( junior malhotra scolding the senior on...and teaching him manners...wow...that's something exactly expected from a malhotra kid)


My papa lives in a big city..!! Mama kehti hain that Papa loves me..!! And when he will come back he will bring me a big doll..!!" Girl explained him very seriously and Manik understood that her parents must be separated


(You made me cry again...arghh mawara)


Then suddenly he opened his jacket's zip and with one corner he started rubbing girl's hands soon they were clean.Manik's most expensive jacket was ruined but who cares...!! The only need of this time was to clean the little girl's hands.


( awww... That was super cute)


Manvi Malhotra..!!"The girl shouted and run away.


"Manvi Malhotra..!!"Manik repeated smilingly and got up to leave.


( :( I m crying badly now... That's so touching)


Manik..!!" Nandini whispered.


"Ask me..!!" Manik again said and locked his lips with hers.

(Gosh...that's so sensuous ...I am blushing reading whole flashback)

Yeah..!! We will have a baby girl..!!" Manik said excitedly and Nandini nodded.


"And we will name her Manvi..!!" Manik told her and she smiled.

(Aww...so manik kept his angels name...but that Dah don't get when the girl told her name...not so manikish)


suddenly Manik slapped his hands.


"Don't you dare touch it..!!" Manik shouted angrily and Cabir was taken aback.

( aww... First nishani of his daughter...manik wants to keep it unknowingly...)


I want to meet him again..!!" Manvi's tiny head gave her a cute explanation and she decided to hide her uncle from her Mama.


( not only manik...his Jr malhotra is even more eager to see and meet her father again...oppss!! Hiding from mumna...bad manners)


Story? Are you serious Nandini..!!" Manik's laughing voice echoed.

( hehehe...like seriously story..but our lovestruck manik has to do it...)


If I hadn't left you na..!! Tou Manvi aj is duniya main nahi hoti..!! I am so sorry..!!"

( ohky now that's bit scary...I mean I am not able to make out what was the reason behind it...nyc suspense I must say... But still I have slight guesses...hope they are right)


On the whole superb updates ...

U surely took my heart ...

Stay happy stay blessed

Misha shergill

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