MananSS: Chupke Chupke Chori Chori ||COMPLETED|| ( Ch 10 : Pg 22 ) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chal.. Main tujhse katti! Sirf do chapters mein tu ye wrap up kaise kar sakti ho??
Vaise i have an idea in my mind ki MaNan ki family bhi chori chupke friends ho and they r being 'professionals'! Aur woh log inn donom ki shadi karwaye.. He He He! 2 chapters mein ye kaise hoga? Par mujhe bas Manan saath mein chahiye! And jaise mera tu:) wow! Accha wala happy ending sochke rakhna ok?
Love
Ayisha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a short nd cute love story awww😳
Loved all the cute confessions written by manik
amazing 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing confession!!!
Happy ending needed...update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago

oh gosh!!!!

this was just so so awesome!!!
a brilliant story with an amazing concept!!!
every bit of your story was impressive, and too awesome
it just managed to bring a smile on my face
why are you ending it so soon????
we all would love to read more!!!
you have magical hands!!!
and your story clearly reflects that!!
wonderful and incredible writing!!
loved each and every bit of your story!!
continue soon
waiting eagerly
thanks for the PM
update soon
lots of love
-ananya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing...
wow... their sweet N cute love story...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Both chapters were amazing. Sorry for the lte rply. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 10:

"But mum please listen to me, don't over react. " for the first time ever, hw was pleading to her.

"Over react? Are you serious?" She responded.

Manik understood situation is out of control now.

He quickly took out his phone and called her.

Nandini was sleeping and answered his call.

"Nandini?" He said in a dark serious voice.

"Good morning babbyyy!" She was bubbly as always.

Manik: acha ek baat hai but promise me tum stress nahi karogi.

Nandini: kya hua?

Manik: vo..mum, mum ko pata chal gaya!

Nandini: kya pata chala?

Manik: that, that we're together.

Nandini: WHATTT!?!

Manik: listen relax, I'll try to handle

He quickly cut the call.

Nandini became restless listening to all this.

Meera ma came up with her morning tea.

Meera ma: good morning nandu.

Nandini faked a smile.

Meera ma came and sat next to her and held her hand.

Meera Ma : kya hua?

Nandini : kuch nahi

Meera Ma : dont lie

Nandini burst out into tears. She wasn't scared. She was worried.

Meera ma: arre kya hua beta please tell me?

Nandini : maa, vo mai and manik, i love him!

Meera ma: so?

Nandini's eyes widened in shock.

Meera Ma : tumhe kya lagta hai i don't know about you both? Ofcourse I do.

Nandini: ma apko isse problem nahi hai?

Meera ma: dekho nandu, i know you're grown up and if manik makes your life better then why not

Nandini: I really really love you maa. Thanks for accepting us.

They hugged each other.

Nandini then quickly rushed to her almira and took out clothes to change.

Meera Ma : where are you going?

Nandini : manik ke pass, he needs me.

She smiled seeing her daughter being so happy.

*****

In malhotra's mansion.

Raj: nyonika listen calm down. I don't think its a big deal

Nyonika : he is in love with nandini! Nandini moorthy.

Manik: ma but that's personal na. Kaam ke time pe we never let love interfear.

"He is right aunty!" A voice ecoed.

Nandini, there she was for her love.

Nandini : I am sorry ma'am i know i shouldn't be speaking here but the person i love the most seems to be fighting a battle all alone, I promised I'll be with him always,so, yes, I'm here. I'm here for him.

Manik felt so proud of his girl, sooo proud.

Raj: dekha tumne? How she stood up for him. And I completely trust my son. He won't let this affect work.

(Nandini & manik entwined their hands)

Raj: I'm with you. (He smiled and hugged manik & nandini)

THE END.
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So that's about it. Another short and sweet story comes to an end.

Sorry i had to wrap it up early as i am really occupied with college stuff. :$

Thankyou for all the love. I'm overwhelmed. Take care, keep smiling.

Love,
Isha :*

Edited by Ishaaaaaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i hope we get some nice manan scenes in next updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was a sudden wrap up...but its ok...
i can understand ur situation...so last part was awesome...
loved the way nandu supported manik...
beautiful end...
thanks a lot for the pm
take care
all the best for ur studies...!!!


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