Strings Attached/Manan FF / CHAPTER 50 page 147/ 05th may - Page 89

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

275.8k

Users

176

Likes

5.7k

Frequent Posters

nikinidhi thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Great story plot.. Just loved it.. Hope that its just abhi plan to get manan back.. Nandini too realised his presence is most important.. Thanks for the update...

Stay smiling.. If possible do add me in ur pm list..

I will send buddy request..


sreesri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update..
Manik left..
Nandinis feelings..
Teddy bear..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pm
NeysaSingh thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
You know your story is so good and heart touching. I read all the updates in just one go. Please update the next part soon,will be waiting. Stay blessed and Keep smiling. Take care
Dishaag thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Plz dont make nandu cry so much
sosweetsumi thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
wow i am sure this is manik and abhi plan
hope everything will be fine
please do continue
bye sumi
Ragingleo thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NeysaSingh

You know your story is so good and heart touching. I read all the updates in just one go. Please update the next part soon,will be waiting. Stay blessed and Keep smiling. Take care


Thanks a lot..
Ragingleo thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago


CHAPTER 47A


Nandini got into her car and drove towards Manik's flat. In between she kept on calling him but his phone was off. Her tears were not stopping even for a minute.

She then called Cabir.

"Hello, Cabir, where is Manik?" She instantly asked Cabir as soon the phone was answered and didn't wait for him to say anything.

"Nandini, relax, what happened and why are you crying?" Cabir got worried when he heard her incoherent cries.

"Just answer me Cabir." She shouted on him.

"I don't know. I didn't had a word with him after I left for the party. I don't know where he is." Cabir answered and this made her cry even more. She disconnected the call and by the time, she reached Manik's building.

When she inquired about him with the guard, he told that he hasn't returned since yesterday.

She felt devastated. Her tears were in no mood to stop. She wasn't able to understand what is happening and what she should do.

To her luck, Mukti came across her mind. She quickly took out her cell to call her.

"Hi Nandini." Mukti answered the phone.

"Mukti please tell where is Manik. I am sure you know. Please Mukti, please tell, where is he?" She pleaded her.

"Relax Nandini, bhai has gone to Jaipur, he is having his flight in one hour. Some important work as he told me. Rest I don't know but what happened, why are crying." Mukti informed her and she sighed in relief and immediately disconnected the call.

She turned her car towards the airport and within minutes she was in front of the airport.


***************


She rushed out of her car and searched for him. She was praying that he should not be inside as it was impossible for her to enter without ticket.

She was running from one gate to another when suddenly she was finally able to release the struck breath in her throat. He got out of a cab and then moved towards the counter.

She wiped off her tears and rushed towards him. Making him turn towards her, the first thing she did was to give a tight slap on his face.

Manik was unable to register what has happened with him.

"How dare you Manik Malhotra to go away like this. Just a letter and all done. All over? Not for once you tried to at least meet me or talk to me. Since yesterday like an idiot I am trying to call you, to meet you but you, you just planned to get disappeared. Just like that? How can just leave me like that Manik, how could you?" Nandini shouted in between her tears and ended up by collapsing on his chest.

He with misty eyes and a wide smile, encircled his arm around her and said, "You were the one pushing me away right? You only didn't wanted us to be together. You only wanted I should stay away from you and that is exactly what I am doing. You still aren't happy?" Manik asked her and she snuggled more into him and cried hard.

"How could you do this Nandini to me? You were all the time running away from me, without even letting me know the reason. Wasn't I was worthy enough that you could have shared your worries, your problems with me? You made me a stranger just in a blink of an eye. How could you Nandu?" Manik spoke softly in a sad and hurt tone into her ear and she cursed herself even more for her every stupid deed.

"I am sorry Manik for what I did. Please don't leave. I can't live without you. Please don't go. Please." She pleaded him, her face still buried into his chest.

He smiled listening to her and broke the hug. He looked at her face that was full drenched with tears. He wiped her face, nodding a no to stop her from crying.

"Don't cry. How can I go now when you are with me. Don't worry. I won't go anywhere." He said with a smile.

Tears made their way again through her eyes but she smiled amid them and hugged him again. Manik gave a long kiss on her head with closed eyes but couldn't stop himself from shedding few tears.

They stood their for some time after which Manik broke the hug.

"We should move I guess." Manik said and Nandini nodded in yes.


*******************

Manik and Nandini moved towards Nandini's car.

"Shall I drive?" Manik asked as she was about to sit on the driving seat.

"Ok." Nandini replied and moved towards passenger's seat and Manik sat on the driver's seat.

Manik turned back to place his bag on the back seat when he saw the teddy bear and the letter on the seat. A sheepish grin appeared on his face seeing the stuff and he turned towards Nandini but the next moment his face was covered with worrying expressions.

Nandini's face was getting pale and she was flapping her eyes more than required to keep her eyes open.

"Nandini, you okay?" He caressed her hair, putting his hand at the back of her head. She could only manage to nod her head in reply.

Manik searched for water in the car but it was not there. He wrapped his hand around her shoulder and within moments, she was unconscious.

"Nandini.. Nandu." He tried to wake her up but failed. "Shit." He murmured to himself and started panicking seeing her in that condition.

He lowered her seat more down to make it flat and carefully made her lie on it. Taking out his phone from the pocket he ignited the engine and dialled Abhi's number at the same time. Abhi picked up the call and Manik drove off towards the hospital.

"Abhi, Nandini, she has fainted. I don't know how but she fainted." Manik was panicked and worried.

"Relax, just relax yourself. Bring her to the hospital. If anyhow she gains conscious, then also bring her. I am waiting." Abhi replied to him but was himself stressed with the news.

"Yes I am coming there only." He replied and disconnected the call.


*************************

After half an hour, Manik was in front was of the hospital. Abhi too reached as soon as the car was parked.

Nandini was taken to emergency and Manik's tension was increasing with each passing second.

After 15 minutes, a nurse came out and Manik seeing her coming out rushed towards her.

"Please go inside, Dr. Moorthy wants to see you." Nurse said to Manik before he could have asked her anything.

Manik rushed inside, unaware the storm coming towards him.

...


Edited by Ragingleo - 9 years ago
Ragingleo thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago


CHAPTER 47 B


Manik entered the room and was relieved seeing her awake.

"Thank God you are up. You scared me." He said to her while moving towards one side of the bed as Abhi on the other side was checking her blood pressure. She faintly smiled at him and Manik looked at Abhi.

"Is she fine? What happened to her?" Manik asked Abhi and he looked at Nandini who averted her gaze from both of them.

"Manik, Nanhi is fine for now but not really fine." Abhi said to Manik and he frowned on his statement.

"What do you mean? I didn't get it." He asked him suspiciously. All the while Nandini was fidgeting with her fingers in nervousness, unsure of the reaction Manik will give after knowing the biggest truth of Nandini's life that she has kept hidden from him and everyone.

"Manik, Nanhi wants to say something to you and I request you as her brother to let her say what she wants to and try to understand her. Please, it's a genuine request. " Abhi said in a pleading tone to him and Manik was confused. He looked at Nandini and found her staring her hands that were in her lap.

He came to the other side of the bed and stood in front of Abhi. "Abhi, why are saying all this? This request and all? I trust you guys, please don't say all this." Manik said to Abhi and he just nodded his head.

He looked at Nandini and then at Abhi. Both were fighting with their own emotions.

"What's it guys, will anyone speak up. You both are scaring me." Manik spoke anxiously. Abhi looked at Manik who with eyes again asked him. Abhi turned towards Nandini and saw her taking deep breaths to avoid crying.

"Nanhi, speak up. Trust me. Just go ahead." Abhi assured her and she looked at him. He blinked his eyes in assurance and Nandini took a deep breath to gather courage.

She looked at Manik who was looking blanking at her.

"I want you to know something Manik. Something that is related to me which for sure will affect you too." She said looking at Manik and he just stood there trying to get the meaning of her words.

"Manik, you were right. There was a reason why I was pushing you away from me. The reason I didn't wanted you to come close to me was because I didn't wanted to hurt you." She stopped in between and Manik with confused expressions nodded his head to continue.

"Manik I am not well. My health conditions are not good and I have very less time left with me." She managed to say and Manik was speechless.

"What?" He was able to utter only a single word after minutes of silence and looked at Abhi and Nandini in shock.

She then narrated all the incidents starting from one year back when she met with an accident and came to know about her problem.

"On the day we were supposed to meet, I saw my reports at bhai's place which clearly indicated that I don't have much time left. Even less than what was known to me earlier and that this time surgery will also not help. I was shattered Manik. How would have I come to you knowing that I will be leaving you soon." Nandini ended up in tears and Manik was clueless how to react.

Abhi looked at Manik who was standing numb trying to register what Nandini revealed just now.

"I didn't wanted her to know this. But she saw the file in my room." Abhi added and Manik looked at Abhi with teary eyes.

Abhi patted his shoulder and left the room, sensing they need privacy to talk.

Manik felt short of breath hearing the dreadful news of his life. Tons of molten lava seemed to be poured on him. Just month back, he experienced the fear of loosing her and now he was about to loose her again.

He had already gone through the pain and trauma of losing the love of life and yet again almighty was testing his patience.

Nandini was crying badly recalling the tragedy of her life. How ironic it was that when she didn't wanted to get cured, she was living and now when she wanted to live life and live with the love of her life, she was slowly pacing towards her demise.

Her sobs brought Manik out of his trance. He immediately sat in front of her and pulled her for a tight hug to which she responded instantly and snuggled into him and much as she could.

"shh.. quiet. quiet." He rubbed her back trying to stop her from crying, which by then had become vigorous, but he himself was in tears.

After few minutes, he broke the hug, controlling his tears and wiped her face with his palm. He cupped her face and said while rubbing his thumb over her eyes, removing the tears that her eyes were still holding, "Don't cry bacha. So what if you don't have time, we will live every moment of the time we have with us. We will make every second a memorable one. Trust me."

She cried more listening to him and hugged him with all her force. She hid her face in his chest, drenching his shirt with her tears. He kissed her hair numerous time and rested his forehead on her head but couldn't stop himself from crying as well.

*************

They remained like that for long, fighting with their own emotions and trying to support other. Manik knew he needed to be strong for her. He broke the hug slowly, and fetched water for her from the side table. He himself made her drink it holding the glass and sat beside her.

She rested her head on his shoulder and held his hand firmly in between hers. He kissed her temple and she closed her eyes feeling it. Both sat there in silence, not knowing what to say to other.

After minutes of silence, Manik titled his head to look at her and saw her shedding silent tears.

He wiped the tears with his free hand and said in a stern tone, "That's it. No more crying and tears." She raised her head from his shoulder and composed herself not to cry more.

"Come on now lie down and sleep for while." Manik said and she without any tantrums laid down and he patted her head to make her sleep. Due to intensive crying, she was asleep within minutes.

Manik made sure that she is sleeping peacefully. He glanced her face and caressed her cheek with his thumb. Her words echoed in his mind and he again felt shattered but then composed himself and walked out of the room to talk to Abhi.

***************

Abhi was in appointment with his patient and Manik entered his cabin. After few minutes, Abhi was free and Manik sat opposite to him.

"Abhi, Nandini." Manik couldn't manage to say more and Abhi nodded in understanding what he wants to ask.

"Manik, Nandini's condition was already bad and after that fire accident it has worsened." Abhi informed him.

"But Abhi, there has to a way out right." Manik asked him lots of hope and Abhi sighed.

"Surgery. A surgery needs to be done but we are not sure. Where the chances of survival was 40% before, this time its merely 10%. There is a huge, really huge risk involved." Abhi informed him and Manik closed his eyes to gulp down the lump formed in his throat listening to him.

"Why did she fell unconscious?" Manik asked after the silence of few minutes.

"That was because of stress. She was advised earlier also that she should not take any sort of stress or it will effect her health but guess she didn't took it seriously." Abhi informed him and Manik cursed himself for making her cry by his rude behaviour all the while.

They both continued to talk about her health and Manik made sure to know every single detail related to her health.

After an hour, Nandini was awake and after getting few tests done was discharged, from where Manik took her home.

******

Manik drove towards Nandini's home in her car but didn't talked further to her regarding her health. He tried his best to divert her mind by talking about random things and was successful in it.

They reached at her place and Manik made sure that she does stress herself more thinking about it so he involved her with himself in cooking.

They together prepared lunch for themselves with lots of fun fights and teasings. Both for that moment forgot about the dreadful reality they faced today.

They had their lunch together as after a long time they both were normal to each other, unlike the past days when they deliberately tried to avoid each other.

Post lunch, Manik saw her taking medicines and took a full account of her course. He carefully read her medical fine that contained details about her medicines and diet.

Manik convinced Nandini to take a nap and himself slept while making her sleep.

*********

In the evening, Nandini opened her eyes and found herself alone on bed. She searched for him in the entire house but he was no where, when suddenly her eyes fell on a note stuck on the mirror of her dressing table.

Sorry for leaving like this but had a really really important work and you were sleeping so didn't woke you up. I am locking the house from my set of keys. Take care and proper rest and please don't stress yourself. Will call you once I get free.

Manik.

She smiled seeing the note and kept it safely. Few hours passed by watching TV and on net, when it was time for Navya to return.

Navya came back from work and Nandini decided not to tell her about today's incident right now.

**********

A/N - just a piece of advice. DO NOT MISS THE NEXT UPDATE... ... Enjoy!


ps_angel thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Finallyyy the truth is out

Manik ko ptaa lgg hi gyaa

Bss abb i wanaa knw k manik nandini ko kasa bchata h

Bchana hi pdega use

Awesmeee ch

Dun mkr us wait fr too long :)
Aashna_chawla thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
Hy your old reader is back sorry for late comment actually i was busy in my exams, still going on but finally got the time to read your story. Well to be honest i love it, the way you are taking it i like it changes twist turns everything is perfect good job plus the writing skills you have improved a lot its a big thing a plus point for manik's pov wala update jha par wo accident ke time par nandini ko hospital lekar ja rh h it was awesome his inner turmoils u showed it very well so all over perfect work put more efforts u will get more response well according to me u deserve more but it will take some as its your first attempt so or another point for early update it always connect reader with u r story over all good job
Keep writing
Update soon

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".