Manan FF - What is Love? #Updated Chapter 9 on pg25. 3/03/16 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Awesome story line
Nandini and cabir😲
Tqvm for the pm dear
Will be waiting eagerly for your next update
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Though m university student now but m remembering my school days hahaha hostel and canteen spoon fights,etc... Love the story yaar.. But seems like you hardly update..!! Do update regularly yaar.. It will go on swing if you update regularly.. Thanq for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Hey dear...thanx fr the pm...
N I really liked yur story...
It made me remember of my school days...amazing...
N cabiraa...he rockss yar...!!
Continue soon. ..
Tc...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Read all parts in a go.. Its realy sweet & a cute story.. Eager to knw hw d story develops further ! Keep up d gud work & continue soonish !! Stay Blessed ! #OkThanksBye ! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
loving your story..
but do clear is he committed with Alya or no.
Cont.soon :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice ...
thnx for the PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Clearing the Confusion. .!!!
Frnz.. Many of you people r confused wuth Manik n Alya's relationship status. Aren't you? ?

So here's the answer:-
Manik n Alya aren't committed ! They're all friends.

N haan Manik is not the rude, arrogant, rich spoilt brat types guy. He's a happy go lucky types of guy. No sadness n darkness in his life.

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Chapter 5.
#School_Dairies

ManBir reached their table , where Alya n Mukti were busy bitching about some of their female classmates. N Dhruv! He was sitting admiring the nature n sipping his coffee.

Hey Guys !!! Cabir said with a wide grin.

Hooo!! Wait a sec! Tu to humare liye sandwich lene gaya tha na ?? Mukti retorted.

Haan na !! Cabir said moving his head vertically n then horizontally.
Ye, haan na kya hai ?? Mukti queried quenching her brows . N where's our sandwich?

Ye to raha ..!! Cabir said.

Cabir.?? Alya gave a confused look!
Arre yar! He snatched the sandwich which Manik was happily holding few seconds back . N said .. Ye to raha !! Le na . Have it . Saying he passed it to Mukti.

Thanks! Mukti n Alya said gleefully.


Wat the. .before Manik could finish the sentence ... Cabir interrupted.

Chal na Manik! ! Chal.

Kahaan? ? Manik asked making a face.

Arre chal to sahi .. saying Cabir dragged him to the corner.

Offo ! Coz of u na.. aaj I would've gone. Cabir charged Manik.

What? ? Cos of me ?? Seriously? ? Manik retorted.
Haan ! Who else? Cabir said. If I wouldn't have come to see u na thn they would've come. So u should thank me . He added with a slight smirk.


Ohhh!! Right! U'r right. Than to .. I should Thank you yar. he wrapped his arm around his neck.

Cabir trying to get off his grip...nai nai . Freindship m no Sorryyy no Thanks .


Ohh!! Right. Manik said making a complete " O"

Hmm(ed) Cabir.

Chal yar! Let's have something. Recess bhi over hone wala hai . So let's go! Manik suggested.

Cabir happily gave in n they marched to the canteen.

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Navya saw Cabir near canteen.

Navya's p.o.v.
Oh God! I wanted to talk to him yar .. Wat do I do? .


Nandini! ! Ek baat sun! Navya called Nandini who was busy chit chatting with Soumya, Shaheer n Shahid.

Hmm.. bol. Nandini said.

Chal na yar. I want to have coffee. Navya requested.

Arre I had Coke yar. M coffee nai pee sakti abhi. Nandini denied.

Chal na yar. Plzzz Navya pleaded.

Ok baba! Chal , let's go. Nandini agreed n they moved to Canteen.


Cabir n Manik were having noodles when Navya n Nandini reached.

Nandini saw Manik standing n having noodles n within no time he too felt her presence n looked at her . They shared a sweet little eye lock .

But soon Nandini remembered the scene few minutes ago. She held Manik's arm n pulled him so close. Being a shy soul, she at once broke the eye lock n started looking everywhere else ,but him.


Manik understood , why she reacted this way , and in no time started smiling at her cuteness.

Navya left Nandini n went to the counter. Of course, for getting coffee .

As soon as Cabir saw her there. He went to her leaving Manik alone.

Heh Navya! How's u ? Cabir asked gleefully.

Ahh . M good u tell ? Navya replied a bit shyly.

That's great. So u'r liking your new subjects? Cabir asked.

Yeah , I'm liking the subjects. Navya replied.

Well u can see the awkwardness in there conversation , it was more bcoz they both wanted to say something but can't.

Manik tiptoed to Nandini who was busy looking the ground just to avoid his gaze. Little did sge knew he'll come to her.

He tapped her shoulder.

Navya! Itna tym lagata hai kya koi? She blurted as she turned. N to her surprise or u can say shock .. it was Manik Malhotra! !

Aiyyappa! ! She mumbled squeezing her eyes which was quite audible to him ..

N he bursted out laughing at her antics.

Hearing him laughing, she opened her eyes.

What ?? What r u laughing at haan?? She asked scrunching her nose.

Haha hahaha .. look at you. .. he said poking her nose in between his giggles.

Hahah, Manik Malhotra! She said infuriated making a poker face.

U know wat?? Manik said. N she glared at him furiously.

Are ask na Wat? Manik siad making a cute face still controlling his giggles.

What? Nandini asked reluctantly.

When u make such face na.. I mean when u get angry, u'r nose turns red .. he said poking her nose again .. n once again bursted out laughing.

Ho gaya? ? She asked sarcastically.
Hmm.. Ok! He said controlling his laughter.

Nandini gets annoyed n started leaving. Looking at her leaving Manik grabs her wrist n pulls her to stop

Arre yar! I was kidding na. Manik said while pulling her. His pull was quite strong coz of which she bumped into him . Her hands were placed on his chest n her hair bangs fell on her cheeks covering her eyes. He held her waist ,so that she don't fall.

Manik was completely lost in her innocence and he also didn't know when her finger trailed on her cheek, n one by one tucked her bangs . While Nandini kept her eyes closed. They both were completely lost in each other's company, when all of a sudden bell rang.

Nandini opened her eyes n saw him so close . His hands were wrapped protectively around her waist. She looked around n saw all students were returning tk there classes while Manik was still holding her. In fact, he was still lost .

Manik !! She called his name .

Hmm ( ed ) Manik

Manik, recess over.. ! Need to go back to class. Nandini informed him.

Only then he realised he was still holding her. He left her n bent to her level n said : Listen! Agar class nai hoti to.. u wouldn't have mind ?? Saying He winked at her n left smirking.


N Nandini. . Slapped herself mentally for not thinking before saying. N rushed to her class.

The next period was business studies, n fortunately business teacher was absent so 11th standard got a free period.

Good afternoon students, u'r business teacher is absent today. So.. it's a free period. All of u move to the ground. U can take your study material along or if u want u can play too. Teacher announced.

The class jumped out of excitement.

Aiyyappa! ! Thank u sooo much. Aapko pata hai . I was not in a mood to study right now. Nandini thanked her Aiyyappa silently.


Nandini! ! Kya tum padhogi?? Are u taking books ? Navya asked.


Nai yar. I won't. I'll play na. It's been long time. We'll play. Nandini suggested.

Haan yar. Waise bhi m too worked up with this accounts. Shaheer added.

Guys! M also in. Will join u guys Soumya said.

Shahid? ? Nandini asked.

Haan yar .I'll also play with u guys. Shahid said with a slight grin.

Soon they all reached ground.

Guys.. wat r we gonna play ??? Nandini asked curiously.

Badminton? Soumya suggested.

Naah.. m not gonna play yar Shaheer said.

Soo?? Shahid asked.

Basket Ball..!! How abt Basket Ball?? Navya suggested.

Sounds cool !! Nandini agreed at once .
Okay ! Soumya also gave in. N gave a "Wat abt u ?" Look to Shaheer.
Yeah! Of course M in ...Shaheer said.

Ok Guys! Thn it's decided we're gonna play basketball. Shahid declared.

All moved to Basketball court. As they reached they found their Seniors playing. Who else ??

They were : Manik, Dhruv, Cabir, Mukti n Alya..

Nandani's eyes widened as she found him ( Manik) playing .

So R u guys excited about What will happen next ??. Stay tuned.

Ok Guys! Enough. I wrote quite a big part. Need long comments oks ?? Ok guys achche se comment karna . It really takes a lot of efforts to write.

Plz guys I need your feedback on what u guys think about this Chapter? ? So do leave your lovely comments. Appreciation n Criticism both are welcomed.

Love
Myra
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
aweome chappy dear
obvio wr are excited manan playing football together
continue soon
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
It's a cute si love story .. loving it ...
Excited for next part .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Owww..this is such a cute story..
Update soon 😊

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