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Posted: 10 years ago



chapter 8

soon enough after a warm hug i walked off to my home , although a sudden awkwardness filled the spaces between us .

it was almost midnight when nandini's phone buzzed with a text from manik

Monster Manik -

" be ready ...figure it out urself ;)

she was excited , the thrill the sudden rush of exhilaration filled her , but at the same time she found in herself a shy smile creeping her lips with the thought of being away from the hustle bustle and spending and enjoying time with him .

.just him .

there was something so warm about him , she thought . Playing the hug memories in her mind , she fell asleep .

The city changes every few minutes , the downtown flicking between the contrasts on populations to lush green lands with winds hitting your face early morning . A soft music played while manik drove and in between every few minutes we shared eyelocks.

watching him hum and engrossed was so endearing , I could feel loads of my nerve ending feel electricity , something I hadn't felt ever .

It felt nice, he felt nice

With him , I felt warm , just a kinda of beautiful warmth , I would love all my life .

finally there we were as I navigated through my phone . It said "Karnala "

We parked the car and lifted our heavy bagpacks and flung our camera's around our necks .

maniks' pov

she looked a beauty in the simplest hiking clothes and I could literally feel a dream becoming to reality. I was here , with her for an adventure trip . what could be better than exploring the beautiful fort and mountain edges with the person you love the most . Heaven or may be even better than that.

I offered her my hand as we climbed, her eyes just looking at me as she nervously slid her hand in mine, smiling and looking away .

I could feel the change in us, some beautiful ball of emotions between us flowing as we walked hand in hand all the while to the top.

Was I falling with her more? Or was I falling in love all over again, I didn't know

The place was beautiful. we both talked about how rebirth was brought by the warmth of spring, darkened foliage from summer's kiss, the onset of fall and then the keen bite of winter and about how nature grounds us in a place where ticking of clocks is unregarded.

We both were deep .

I loved how I could have deep converstaions with her . tell her all the poetics and words that came in the late nights or such moments in nature

it felt blissful , blissful to have connect to her , her soul on level so high .

After reaching the top I could see her a little tired and decided to rest for a while . We sat on the edge, watching over the deep valley in between us.

It was silent, like a Free therapy.

And while we both were engrossed in the beauty , letting it sink in us while my fingers subconsciously entangled hers .

I looked at her, scared .

She smiled and held on to my fingers a little more tightly , again breathtakingly looking at the plunging valley down while I held my breath , just looking at my girl .

.Just mine .

Life's over in a flash .it's true. The years fall away like grains of sand while your hopes and dreams escape you,

but breathe easy .

the beginning of the universe came to in just a fraction of a second , you don't need much time to create something magnificient , all you need is

just a second of living in the moment .

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hey guys , there i' m back ..i m continuing this work and will give lots of updates whenever possible . it feels really nice to get messages of how you guys loved my work , hope you guys love this part as well

waiting for all the reviews 😳


Edited by drnidsur - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
woww wat an update yaar
u're an amazing writer
the smile which crept on my lips never left its place
such a lovely update loved it
plz plz plz continue soon
plz update next parts as soon as possible
keep writing nd smiling😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
U are an amazing writer...I'm sure many people must have complimented you thus... Not surprising at all!!!
May I tell you what was that one thing in your writing that struck the chord with me???... Well among many other things, your words flow... as a gentle brook, with its own music, in its own speed... giving life to its surroundings, quenching thirst but the greatest thing it does is soothe your senses... transport you to the land of serenity, fills you with optimism and enlivens and invigorates you... Your writing is such Doc...

U ask should you continue writing... Well!!! its upto you, your brainchild, your privilege and I know Medicine is one hell of a subject. But if you decide to discontinue, the loss will be mine... Rest.. a word to the wise is enough..

Good luck and continue conquering hearts with your words... You (with your words) are already a cardiologist for me..

#God Bless
Edited by bitasta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for being late in reply..
but now read the update...
chapter 7..
was full of emotions of their togerthness..
they being friends...
they both now how calm the other person...
thats why in darkness nandini held manik hand to make him feel that she is with him..
and nothing dark can touch him...
very nicely penned down...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 8...
such beautifully penned down...
describing the serene beauty of nature..
and with this the changing feelings of manik and nandini...
awesome...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Main pichhle chapters bhool gayi.😛😆
I'm tired so res😆
Will unres after reading from the start😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
You write the most beautiful stories one can ever write! Your stories make my day! I am looking forward for how Nandini falls in love with him😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelyyuvi10

woww wat an update yaar

u're an amazing writer
the smile which crept on my lips never left its place
such a lovely update loved it
plz plz plz continue soon
plz update next parts as soon as possible
keep writing nd smiling😊

tysmmm ...i m sooo glad that you loved it ...n yes i m updating another part today as well 😳
hope u like that too
drnidsur thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bitasta

U are an amazing writer...I'm sure many people must have complimented you thus... Not surprising at all!!!

May I tell you what was that one thing in your writing that struck the chord with me???... Well among many other things, your words flow... as a gentle brook, with its own music, in its own speed... giving life to its surroundings, quenching thirst but the greatest thing it does is soothe your senses... transport you to the land of serenity, fills you with optimism and enlivens and invigorates you... Your writing is such Doc...

U ask should you continue writing... Well!!! its upto you, your brainchild, your privilege and I know Medicine is one hell of a subject. But if you decide to discontinue, the loss will be mine... Rest.. a word to the wise is enough..

Good luck and continue conquering hearts with your words... You (with your words) are already a cardiologist for me..

#God Bless

wow!...tysmmm ..
u have no idea how @bold those words touched me , i feel soo pleased that you've loved my work sooo much
really , ur comment just made my day
n yes ! i m continuing writing , maybe nothing better than penning ur emotions to feel light , hence
tysmmm once again for such lovel words 🤗
drnidsur thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Sorry for being late in reply..

but now read the update...
chapter 7..
was full of emotions of their togerthness..
they being friends...
they both now how calm the other person...
thats why in darkness nandini held manik hand to make him feel that she is with him..
and nothing dark can touch him...
very nicely penned down...👏

tysmmm
its k ...i m soo glad that u loved it ..😳😳

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