MONSTER N ANGEL TALE. part 13 ON PG20. 6/02 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey
just now read ur ff
its amazing
update after ur exams
waiting for this wonderful story to continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Cuteprincess6

Hey
just now read ur ff
its amazing
update after ur exams
waiting for this wonderful story to continue


THANKS A LOT DR
M GLAD U LIKED IT.
WIL POST AS SOON AS M DONE WITH MY EXAMS😛😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its okk dear
All d best for xams
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting storyline dear...
n its ok dear...
all the bst fr yur examzzz. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubhshash

Interesting storyline dear...
n its ok dear...
all the bst fr yur examzzz. ..


THANKS A LOT DSEAR,,
GLAD U LIKED MY FF STORY.😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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MONSTER N ANGEL TALE.
PART 5.
Manik kept lukin @ her n saw her going to Nyonika! !!
Manik : Ye Nyonika k pas kyu ja rahi h ??? Well let it b ... jane do mjhe kya...???
He left thinking she might b 1 of her frnz daughter.
Nandani : Pari Maa...!!
Nyonika : Oh Nandani! !!! Aao..na.! Baitho...
She sits on d couch. . When she sat in d couch she saw a ring. .. n it was of Manik... in tht ring there was a small letter M n a .
Nandani : Ye Manik ki hi hogi...kya kaeu..? Pari Maa ko de dun.? Nai...pata nai kyu I think I should keep it! !!
She kept tht ring.
Nyonika : Haan Nandani. ..!!! Kuch baat karni thi...??
Nandani : Pari Maa... wo actually m Navya k sath kuch din rehna chahti hu...
Nyonika : Navya k sath kyu???
Nandani : Wo...Navya aaj bohot pareshaan thi..Cabir bhi aa gaya h...!!
Nyonika : Ok! !! Tum reh sakti ho uske saath.
Nandani : Thank uuu soo much Pari Maa!!!
Nyonika : It's ok Nandani! !! Ab jaao Navya needs u.
Nandani : Ok...!!
Saying so Nandani left.
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Sry guys frgt to tell u...
Navya lives in 1 of d Nyonika's guest houses. N 4 this she needs tobtake permission frm Nyonika.
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While going back Nandani stopped in her way...on a river bank... she sat down. .. n thn she took out d ring!!!!!
Nandani : Ye kya ...this star is shining. .!!!!.*The star in d ring was shining red * .. Manik ki ring..h.? Jab milega to m use de dungi. smile emoticon Par kya wo mjhe milega ???

Scene changes--------'
Manik searching sumthin. ..
Manik : Where d hell iz it??? Kahaan gayi...abhi to mere paas hi thi...!!! I hope wo Nyonika ko naibmili ho! !!!.
Cabir : Kya hua Manik? ??? Itna pareshaan kyu h???
Manik : Cabir. ..achcha hua tu aa gaya...
Cabir : Haan m aa to gaya ...par tu kya dhoond raha h...??
Manik : Meri ring! !!!
Cabir : Wat? ??? Teri ring? ??? OMG. ..!!! Kahi Nyonika ne too???
Manik : Wahi to tension h... pata nai kahaan hogi. .? Agr Nyonika ko mil gayi too! !!!
Cabir : Don't worry! !!! Teri ring mil jaayegi! !! N Nyonika k paas nai hogi wo...
Manik : Achcha. ..tjhe kaise pata???
Cabir : Kyaa..? Kaise pata??
Manik : K wo ring Nyonika k pas nai h..??
Cabir : C'mon yar Manik. .agar uske paas hoti to abhi tak kuch na kuch to kar hi chuki hoti wo.
Manik : Hmm. .!!! U'r ry8.
Cabir : Haan M always ry8 wink emoticon *winks*
Manik : Seriously! !! smile emoticon

Scene Changes------
Nandani : Navya! !!!!! Navya. ..Navya. ...
Navya : Are baba kya hua h...?? Itna khush kyu ho rahi ho..??
Nandani : Guess what? ??
Navya : Wat ????
Nandani : Pari Maa ne mjhe tumhare saath rehne ki permission de di h...kiki emoticon
Navya : Kyaa.? Sach mein? ??
Nandani : Haan baba sach mein...m abui Pari Maa se hi mil kar aa rahi hu.. smile emoticon
Navya : Yesss!!!! kiki emoticon
They both hug each other in excitement !!
Navya : Matlab ab tum humare sath rahogi...??
Nandani : Han kuch dino k liye. .!!!
Navya : Nandani hum tumhe bata nai sakte k hum kitne khush h.
Nandani : I know. . M bhi bohot khush k m tumhare saath raahungi...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
MONSTER N ANGEL TALE.
PART 6.
Nandani shifted to Navya's room...
At ny8...
Manik was standing in d garden when he saw sumthin. ...
Manik : Wo kya h ????...
There was a ly8 cumin frm sumwhere... he moved in d direction of tht ly8...
Manik : Unbelievable! !!!* He was moved by d beauty of d place. . *
N than he saw a grl standing .
Scene was lyk this ----
A grl was standing n dancing round n round n there were so many fireflies all around her...
Manik went close to tht grl...n d scenic beauty was increased. ..
U must be thinling How ????...
When Manik went close to tht grl..d stars started shining. ..n d whole sky was glowing.. n down the land was glowing coz of fireflies. ...
Tht grl saw d sky... n was mesmerised by d glow all around. ..n Manik...he was mesmerised by d smile of tht grl...
Manik : Nandani! !!
(Yes guys d grl iz Nandani)
Nandani : Manik. ..tum yahaan...??
Manik : Haan wo yahaan ..ly8 dikh rahi thi too. ..!!
Nandani : oh..ok!!!
N she started to leave. ..Manik held her hand n pulled her towards him.
Nandani : Manik ???
Manik kiss emoticon In a husky voice* Tum dance kar rahi thi na ???
Nandani : Manik...us se kya fark padhta h..?? *in a low tone*
Manik : pulled her more closer. ..Dance kar rahi thi k nai ???
Nandani : Hmm..!!
Manik : So y r u leaving. .???
Nandani looking down...!!! : Wo..
She has ntn to say..
Manik : So dance! !!
Nandani : Wat? ??
Manik : Yes...dance...dance wid me !!!
N thn they both started dancing
Couple dance... (Manan tune) ... *
N after few minutes Manik realised tht he's dancing. ... wid Nandani
Manik left Nandani n went away in anger. .
Nandani kept lukin @ him n he went away.
Nandani : Aiyyappa! ! Ise mya hua ...??? Wo aise kyu chala gaya ??? *teary eyes*
Manik : WTH? Main ye kya kar raha tha...?? M uske sath dance...kaise kar saktaaa hu ???
Cabir : Kiske saath Manik? ???
Manik : Kya...kiske sath. ? Haan ??*hesitating*
Cabir : Are kiske sath tah tu...?? Mukti ,Alya ,ya Dhruv?
Manik : Oh..ye ...m kisi k saath nai tha .. wo m bahar gaya tha...
Cabir : Wahi to...sab se puch lia par tu tha hi nai..
Manik : kuch kaam tha kya ??
Cabir : Nai bas aise hi..
Manik : Yu Navya se mila ???
Cabir : Nai abhi tak nai!!
Manik : U will meet her???
Cabir : Pata nai yar...!!!! Abhi kuch socha nai h...is bare m ..abhibsote h. ..subah baat karenge.
Saying so Cabir went to the bed n slept.
Manik : Kab tak bhaagega tu usse Cabir!!!
So guys r u excited about the secrets tht r yet to be revealed. .?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
i think i read this story in fb!!...i searched a lot fr this story!!...
thanks for updating it here!!...

plz do pm me fr next updates!!...

i wd love to read more!!!...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
I really liked this story..
It's interesting. ..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm.

Very nice story. .

Looking forward to seeing more. .

Thanks for sharing this. .


Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.




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