MONSTER N ANGEL TALE. part 13 ON PG20. 6/02 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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ONSTER N ANGEL TALE.
PART 3.
Manik n his frnz (Fab5) were abt to cum to d Paristaan...
Angels talking about Manik...n Nandini was listening to all their conversation.
Angel 1: Suna h Manik aa raha h.?
A2 : Haan aur uske frnz bhi aa rahe h!!!
A3 : Kya matlab. ..Fab5 aa raha h??
A2 : Haan ..aaj hi aa rahe h.
A1 : Manik to bohot hi gud lukin h ..naa?
A2 : Haan n wo 1of d bst musician h...Paristaan ka...
Nandini : talking to herself. ..: Kya Manik. ..bohot achcha musician h???
Navya : Musician hi nai bohot achcha singer bhi h...!!!
Nandini : Kya..sach m*excited* ???
Navya : Haan baba sach m!!!
Nandini :Wow!!!
Navya : Wow mat kar zyaada! !
Nandini : Kyu kya hua???
Navya : Nandu. ..abhi tu unhein jaanti nai h...they're nt gud people. I heard it somewhere.
Nandini : Navya. ..suni hui baaton par tune vishwaas kar liya .. u'r trusting wat u heard? ?? People say watever they feel lyk.. Zaroori nai jo wo kahe sahi ho.
Navya : Achcha baba thik h.. wen we'll meet them na tavhi koi final decision lenge k wo log kaise h!!! Ok???
Nandini : Hmmm ok!!!
Day went by n in d evening Fab5 arrived. All were excited to meet them.
Fab5---
Manik, Alya, Mukti, Cabir n Dhruv.
Pari Maa : So u'r finally here??
Manik : Nyonika! Yes we're here.
Pari Maa : To tum apne frnz ko leehi aaye..
Manik : They aren't my frnz...they're mah family! !!
Pari Maa : Watever Manik..ab jao jake sab se mil aao ..sab wait kar rahe h.
Manik : Ohhh..Wo Angeles. .?
Pari Maa : Hmmm!!
Manik n Fab5 left to meet the angels,
Manik saw tht all d angels were dieing to get 1 look of him...bt who's there. ..tht grl hiding behind d tree...??? N now he just can't stand. ..he hav to see who's she???
Manik left d crowd n walked towards d tree...bt wat he saw an angel running away.
Manik : Kaun thi wo??? Aur ..wo aise bhaag kyu gayi???
He had never seen anyone running lyk this ..specially wen he was coming to the grl.
That ny8 he kept thinking who was that grl!!!
Nandini : Manik!!! *she murmurs*
Manik felt that someone called him..he was lying on the bed n he got up . Sitting. ..: Kisi ne mjhe bulaya..? Don't know Wat's happening? ?? ...
Nandini : Y am I thinking abt him.. ???
That ny8 while sleeping Nandini again saw that dream...n woke up bewildered.
The same ny8 saw a dream in which he saw a grl... wearing white dress..running n he running after her..he caught her n was abt yo turn her n see her face when his dream broke n he wokeup.
Manik : Kaun h ye ladki? ??? Who's she? ?
Nandini : Aiyyappa! ! Who's tht guy??? N wo mjhe aise chod k kyu chala jaata h?? *Sobbing*
Myra
Edited by Fairy_Manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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MONSTER N ANGEL TALE.
PART 4.
Manik went to Nyonika to discuss abt d reason y he came here.
Nyonika : Aao Manik!
Manik sat on d couch.
Haan bolo kya kaam tha?
Nyonika : Zaroori h k m tumhe kisi kaam se bulaun? ?
Manik : C'mon Nyonika! !! Hum jab milte h to koi kaam se hi milte h! ! So just cut the crab! !
Nyonika : Ok Manik! !! U wish..! I called u here...!! Taki tum mjhe us ladki tak pohocha do jo k Pari Maa ki Grand daughter h! !
Manik : Wat?
Nyonika : Haan ...tumhe uske sath relationship banana h..
Manik : WTH? M aisa kyu karunga ??? Hav u lost it??
Nyonika : C'mon Manik...u hav to do it..n u know that.
Manik was nt liking it. But he agreed to it unwillingly :M use pehchanunga kaise..?
Nyonika : Jab tum aur wo ladki saath hoge thn uski right hand ki sabse choti ungli ka nail tumhare saathhone par shine karega.
Manik : Hmm..bt tim ye san kar kyu rahi hoo??
Nyonika : C'mon Manik!! Do u really think k m yumhe banaungi? ? Kuch tym ki baat h yhn tum use chod k chale jaana !!
Manik : Huh Watever! !!
Saying so Manik left.
On his way back...
Manik : M aisa kaise kar sakta hu..kisi k bhi saath? ??? Uski galti kya h??

Nandani was cumin to meet Nyonika (Pari Maa)
Manik aur Nandani takra jaate h..n girne wali hoti h..wen Manik use pakad leta h. Both of them got lost in each others eyes! !
For d frst tym Manik ko aisa laga k wo Nandani ko jaanta h .. pata nai ...
Majik in his thoughts: Ye kuch jaani pehchani si lagti h...b
Kaun h ye ...???
Nandani : Manik! !!
Manik : Hmmm... u know me???
Nandani : Haan wo kal...
Manik realises tht he's holding her in his arms so he made Nandani stand...
Manik : Wo actually m ..I mean mera dhyaan kahi aur tha. ..!!
Nandani : Its ik koi baat nai...!!
Saying so she left...
Manik abhi bhi Nandani konhi delh raha tha.
Manik : kaun h ye...n mjhe aisa kyu lag raha h k m ise jaanta hu..???

Myra
Edited by Fairy_Manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
awesome update...
loved it so much...
manik is an angel along with FAB5...
can't wait for manan to meet...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This looks interesting ...
Do let me know when u update next
And all the best for the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...so dreamy
Angels fab 5 n paristan
Superb
Nyonika is pari maa...
Bt who was she taking abt?
Pari maa's granddaughter
Nandu na?
Thnkz 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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July se sidha oct tum sayad khud apne story k ware m vul jate hoo n jab man karta hai tavi update karte ho...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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pari land n ol
hmm nyv concept :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aree...pariyon ki kahaani..⭐️

Different concept.. 😊 very well written..continue soon !

Cheers ..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: A12609z

July se sidha oct tum sayad khud apne story k ware m vul jate hoo n jab man karta hai tavi update karte ho...


M soo sorry yar!
Actually busy , m currently writing 4 Manan ffs. 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Hey frns

M so sorry to say that I won't be able to update my FF for some time . there are various reasons to this.😭😭

Firstly , n most important is my EXAMS ' my exams r just starting this 15th . so m busy with preparations as I haven't started with my studies yet . Need to work really hard for it.🤢

Secondly, my PHONE' My phone is not working so I have to use PC . which is next to Impossible during Exam time.🤢

SO M KEEPING MY FF ON HOLD.

WILL POST AS SOON AS M DONE WITH MY EXAMS.

M really really very sorry for the delays . Sorry for keeping u all waiting.

Hope u all understand .

Love

Myra😭😊


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