MaNan-Love or Revenge?? Ch21-Pg90 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Yea Roshni sure

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Hey Chaitra.

So another story...
Nice start

Looking forward to read the FF.

Cont soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Character sketch:
Manik Malhotra:The M.D of Malhotra indusries love his mom a lot respects her can't evn withstand to see a tear in her eyes a very good business man...keeps a goal in his life to keep his mom happy he is a bit grey

Nyonika Malhotra:Mother of Manik chairperson of Malhotra industries she loves her son a lot she is a person who lives more for her respect

Cabir dhawan: Best friend of Manik guides him what is wrong what is right what is wrong..he just tries to keep Manik happy and always suggests him the best

Alya Saxena: Friend of Manik just sees the world in one side that is on her side she just says the things which comes onto his mind she just decides a persons character with one glance which she thinks is right diva

Nandini Murthy: A girl who lives her life simply she stays with her chacha chachi and her elder bro rishab they own a lot of money but due to some relatives there money went in custody of others so there case is running in the court she is a social worker can't withstand with any injustice

Dhruv Vedant: Best friend of Nandini understands her more than anyone else stays in US cool guy who has a crush on nandini

Mukti Vardhan:Bestieee of Nandini infact her soulsister she comes from a rich background she just keeps Nandini suggesting about every thing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Hiii chaitra !!!!!
Wow another one fabulous story
Plz PM me
Nd now u updated CS
now can't wait long for first chapter
update soon

Lots of love,
SAMRUDDHI
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Thank you dear it means a lot to me I was a bit nervous whether anyone will like this thought or not but coz of your cmmnts it gave me a new spirit thank you will try to upload!! :)

Originally posted by: Sanskruti16499

Hiii chaitra !!!!!

Wow another one fabulous story
Plz PM me
Nd now u updated CS
now can't wait long for first chapter
update soon

Lots of love,
SAMRUDDHI

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Chapter-1:
Malhotra Mansion:

Manik:Mommm wake up maa you are getting late for your women empowerment programme

Nyonika:Manik beta jao yaha se mujhe sone de you have a meeting to attend..so please go there..

Ma:No way mom you are a bit weak and top of that you are going to a programme so please have your breakfast get ready and go please I need your blessings please..get up naa soon

Nyo:Actually mothers wake up there son but here son is waking up his mom accha okay go get ready I will also get ready beta..

Ma:That is like my mom and pecks on her cheek and goes to his room..

During breakfast:

Ma:Mom so you are going to attend the programme na I mean how is it going to be mom I mean you can't take that much stress on yourself

Nyo:Manik chill baccha I can take care of myself and what about the meeting you are going to attend are the clients satisfied

Ma:Mom ofcourse they are so let me handle this okay mom I am getting late btw Alya also wants to accompany you itseems you know about her madness about dressing naa she is thinking that this programme gives a lot info about style but man it is about women respect but she atleast I think this programme can give a bit brain to her..

Ny:Manik ugghh fine I need to bear your dumb friend now but it is okay darling go best of luck for the meeting..

Ma:Okay mom take care bye

In the programme:

Host: It is a pleasure to have you all here social workers many powerful women and our very own chief guest the chair person of Malhotra Group of Industries Mrs.Nyonika Malhotra so let us start the programme..

During the programme:

Alya:Aunty don't you think it is so boring lectures goddd I mean like seriously aunty why didn't the topic of dressing started

Nyo:Alya will you please shut up this is a very important programme and I am the chief guest here so please be calm

Al:Okay aunty sorry

Host:So everyone as the programme very succesfully came to an end I want Mrs.Nyonika to give few words about women and her experience..

Ny: It is a pleasure to be present here in this great programme I feel very honoured to be a part of women empowerment in my words a women coz of whom the society is like this I mean like seriously everything is not so good as power of women I just think women need money and fame to prove themselves.. I mean women is powerful but without a bit fame nothing is gonna be so useful for women so I suggest women first to make there fame and I automatically think power will come in there hands..so I therefore say that...

Meanwhile a hand raises in the crowd..

Nandini:Excuse me Madam I know what all you said is correct but can I say something?

Nyo:Huh?You are not of my age and who are you to stop me in the middle

Na:As you just said ma'am the power of a woman which gave me such courage to speak up and age doesn't matter so can I

Nyo:Fine and gives the mike to her..

Na:So as you said Mrs.Nyonika the power comes to women when she gains fame but can I tell you onething madam this fame everything doesn't come on its own and ppl call you Mrs.Malhotra and this is the entire fame gained by your husband madam I am not saying you are wrong Madam but the way you said when women gains fame power automatically comes to you I am sorry madam but I am objecting this madam many women with there hardwork proved themselves and the power came to them but later on the fame came I think fame is not any barrier to prove a strength of women I am sorry Madam if you thought I offended you but sorry Madam this is my nature and I can't withstand any wrong sorry!!

The whole place was filled with loud claps for Nandini and a shocking face of Alya and embarassed face of Nyonika

Host:That was a great speech Miss..can I know your good name please

Na:Nandini..Nandini Murthy

Then Nyonika comes and takes the mike and tells the audience to just not to become a laughing stock and was controlling her anger..but was feeling very humilaited..

Nyo:Miss Nandini it was a very good speech God bless you and left the place with a fuming Alya behind...

Meanwhile in Manik's office:

Ma:What happened to Mom? I mean I think till now the programme must have been finished I didn't get a call from her and she isn't answering my calls something is very wrong I need to rush to home right now..

In there home Nyonika was very angry Alya was waiting outside Nyonika ordered everyone to not enter into her room she was very angry she threw all the things in her room and was very disturbed she was frustrated..Meanwhile Manik came to his house and directly went into his mom's room..and was shocked to see his mom sitting on bed like that and was confused to see the entire room which was very shabby

Ma:Mom what happened?Just tell me did anyone say anything to you?Mom I am not gonna spare them just tell me..

Ny:Beta nothing like that just go from here I will be fine please

Manik know his mom wasn't going to tell him so he went outside and saw Alya standing there..

Ma:Alya what happened you were with mom naa tell me what happened??

Al:Manik woh actuallyyy a girl...and narrated the whole incident which was making his blood boil with anger..

Ma:How dare she?How can that girl behave with my mom in such a way?What is her name?

Al:Nandini Murthy..

Ma:Nandini Murthy you are gone now I am gonna show you that my mom is right I am gonna make your life hell woman power right I will make your life useless

He goes to her room:

Ma:Mom I know everything I know what to do but promise me onething that you are not gonna say no to me and one more thing it is mainly for my satisfaction and your happiness

Ny:Par Manik..

Ma:Mom please trust me..

Ny:Fine beta as you wish

He comes out and calls his PA

Ma:I want details about Nandini Murthy fast..

PA:Okay sir

After 5 mins the PA comes with the details..of Nandini

PA:Sir she is a social worker she works for the welfare of others she conduct charity programmes volunteer for bluecross and currently right now she is in the makeawish foundation programme

Ma:Fine I am coming there just talk with them

PA:Okay sir and here is her pic and gives Manik the pic of Nandini

Ma:Hmmn dikhne me bure nahi hain yeh bohot beautiful hain par I am gonna make her life hell but first I need to plan how to get close to her..

In that Programme as Nandini was the main volunteer she was in a hurry..

Na:Guys fast it is very imp and you need to work fast and while she was in a hurry she accidentally collides something and was a about to fall but a strong pair of hands caught hold of her by waist and she closed her eyes in fear...

Guys that is Chapter 1 do give reviews suggestions criticism is welcome please do long comments lambawala and like the chapter please!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Hey Chaitra.
Awesome update.
So this the reason why Manik wants to take revenge on Nandini
Wanna know how Nandini falls for him
Cont soon
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Hi Chaitra,
Nice start dear..👏
the storyline seems to be promising...
do continue...
and your other stroy is also very nice...
keep up the good work..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
seems interesting...
with out thinking manik is jumping into conclusions and doing things
poor nandini
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
wow! amazing! loved it.and plzz continue soon..👏😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Hiii
fabulous update
what a start its awesome
Nyo ki bolti band kar di
hahaahahaa
but feeling sad for nandu
b'coz Manik gonna to make her life hell
hope soon everything will be Normal

Update nxt part soon
Thanks for PM

Love,
SAMRUDDHI

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