MANAN FF::JO TU MERA HUMDARD HAI!!! chapter-23(PG-85) - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
amazing update
love it

please next time long update dena

continue soon

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
wow..this so awesome...loving this story a lot...
so slowly the past is revealing...so harshad is nandu's boy friend...!!!
u penned beautifully...especially flashback scene
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
awesome...
so harshad is nandu's boy friend...
manan moments was cute...
beautifully penned...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
wat the hell? harshad!! pls nandu ko jaldi samjhao ki harshad uskeliye galat Hai! mera bechara manik!! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Nandu love harshad...ohhh
Btw nice update... flashback was superb
It's going to be interesting... to see how manik going proof himself right
Plzz update soon...thnk uh for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Chapter 7::

With the arising of the sun many things had changed..she was no more a Murthy but a Malhotra..Mrs.Nandini Manik Malhotra..as soon as the first ray of sun touched Manik he opened his eyes and the first thing his eyes did was searching Nandini but she was not on the bed..Manik thought she must be in the washroom but she was not there also..now Manik got a bit tensed..he moved downstairs and saw Nandini heading towards the main door.."Nandini.."screamed Manik..on the other hand Nandini got up early in the morning got ready draped a light yellow coloured saree which complimented her chuda and the wet hair falling on her back.."Nandini where are you going that too so early in the morning??"asked Manik being tensed "and why do you think I will answer you about my wherabouts??"questioned Nandini and paved her way again towards the main door "Nandini at least for the sake of our friendship..please"pleaded Manik "hah!!friendship right..the friendship where my best friend put my boyfriend behind the bars just because I don't love him..wow!!and you say for the sake of friendship..Mr.Manik Malhotra oops!! Sorry sorry Mr.Monster Manik Malhotra stop showing your fake concern for me and ya I m going to jail to meet Harshad to say him that I still love him and trust him too..you get that"irked Nandini and made her way out of the mansion..leaving behind a shattered Manik who fell on his knees crying hard..screaming hard to let go the pain which he was enduring..every part of his body was wincing in pain..every bloody damn part of his body was screaming as if it was asking someone for aid..waiting for someone to come and heal the pain..waiting for someone just to caress his pain and assure him of being fine..it felt as if every organ of his was groaning in pain asking someone for just little care..no no just a bit trust..ya a bit trust only..he asked himself"is it too much to demand??"every of his tissue was falling apart as if asking someone to hold it together so that the organs in him still maintain their position allowing him to breathe..at least inhale just an aroma a little aroma of trust.."Trust me Nandini I can never hurt you..please trust me..please please trust me..trust me"echoed Manik's voice in the entire Mansion..not only his words but his weep also echoed around even for the mansion to know about his pain..at least someone could feel it..he was turning mad..he didn't know what to do..he just pulled a dairy kept on the table and started scribbling hard..he didn't even move his eyes just continued scribbling..after an hour and half he heard a noise and raised up his head to find Nandini entering the mansion..Nandini was directly heading towards the room but stopped near Manik..Manik directly looked into Nandini's eyes and so did Nandini..Nandini found Manik's eyes completely red she knew that all this time he was crying..she didn't know what made her ask this but she herself asked Manik "do you still have something to say to defend yourself" Manik was still lost in Nandini.."trust me"he slowly muttered but that was enough loud for Nandini to hear..saying this Manik left..don't know why but Nandini's breath hitched..she started moving when she saw a dairy lying on the floor..she picked it up and opened the page dated Jan-1 were in big bold letters it was written PLEASE TRUST ME ..she started turning the pages to find the writing in every page..she rapidly stated flicking the pages to find "TRUST ME"on every pages..Nandini flipped the pages so rapily that the crackling of sheets was getting louder..she finally turned the last page dated Dec-31 which engraved "PLEASE TRUST ME..JUST ONCE..PLEASE"a lone tear escaped Nandini's eye when she closed the diary..in reflex when her hand reached till her cheeks to wipe her tear she realized that she was crying..she felt someone stabbing her heart..she felt bad for Manik..her bestie.."NO"..screamed her mind.."you can't feel pity for him..he is the one you did put Harshad behind the bars..you hate him Nandu..you hate him"said Nandini's evil conscience to her which made Nandini come back to reality where she blamed Manik for making her life hell.

huh!!!ur updte s hre...sry 4 bein late bt believe me my test ws goin on..i m pretty tired by nw..my fingers r litrally tired as dey had a sex wid d keyboard..n bout d updte.guys i ws litrally cryin whle writin bout manik's condison..i wtu 2oo 2 cry ooderwse i wnt suceed in writin..plz shre ur emotions..guys plz cmmnt dis s ltrally an imp prt n if i dnt gt gud response i cnt proceed...guys plz atleast 2 pages of cmmnt n a lamba..plz yaar
Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
part 7 was so emotional ...manik's pain ..oho...poor guy...feeling so sad for him...
no one was there with him to share his pain...
u penned so perfectly dear...
nandu is blindfolded with harshad's fake love...hoping that soon she will realize the worth of manik's love and friendship...
her heart and mind is fighting and making her more aggressive...
thanks a lot for the pm
continue asap
take care


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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Wow awesome update dea...
Emotional too poor manik
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
It was an awesome emotional update
even I had tears seeing manik condition
nandini is seriously blindfolded with harshad love that can't she see the pain nd love in manik eyes
he is feeling so guilty to see nandini his beat friend his love in pain. ..
but he can't do anything
he is just asking for trust..
nd that too he scribbing it in diary his companion
nice work 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
wow...again awsm update as always...
but its too emotional...m crying like hell...plsss make nandini realise her feeling for manik...not that jerk harshad...i hate him...
we want manan scene as soon as possible...
plsss bring them together...i cant read enotional part anymore...plsss its a request...
.n thanks for the lovely n wonderful story...
u penned it so well dea...the way u write is outstanding...
ur such an awsm writer...plsss try to update regularly...eagerly waiting for next part...
continue soon

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