MANAN FF::JO TU MERA HUMDARD HAI!!! chapter-23(PG-85) - Page 7

awsum update...good

It was superb ...
Thamsk for the pm

wow...amazing story...i jus love this story...u penned it soo well dea...i read all part in one go...its jus fab dea...ur such an awsm writer...
the way u write is outstanding...
must say u blessed with writing skills...keep it up...each and every part u described beautifully...n thanks for the lovely and wonderful story...
finally they got married...hope everything will sort out soon...plsss i want manan cute n romantic scene...update soon dea...desperately waiting for next part...once again thanks for the amazing story... 👍🏼

update na plzzz

amazing story..
update soon waiting for nxt update...
ur story is too interesting...
update jldi nd big wala prt...

Chapter 5::

On the other hand the boys were giving a hard time to Manik by not letting him inside the room..all these days so many things happened in one go that Manik could not interact with Nandini..he tried a couple of times but Nandini strictly instructed him to stay away from her..he was very much hurt..because of him Nandini had to endure all this..what pierced him more was not that Nandini hated him but the fact that Nandini was hurt..he could not see Nandini crying that too because of him..Manik cursed himself infact hated himself more than Nandini did but what he did was just for Nandini..his Nandini..his best friend Nandini..his life Nandini..for his LOVE Nandini..Cabir and Dhruv helped him come out of the situation by dragging him towards his room..although Dhruv was an introvert kind of guy he instructed Manik regarding his first night but on getting a call he excused himself leaving ManBir all alone in the corridor leading to Manik's room..realising Dhruv's exit Cabir let out a deep sigh but Manik was still lost somewhere deep down his heart cursing himself..

"Manik kitna kose ga aapne aap ko??tujhe bhi pata he isme teri koi galti nahi he..tu bas Nandini ko help kar raha tha n ye baat Nandini bahut jald realize karegi dekh na" "Help..hunh!!she hates me Cabir..she hates me..she does not even want to see my face..she had so many dreams for her marriage and you saw her today she did'nt even smile once and all this is because of me Cabir..all because of me..but he was not right for her..how could I leave her in the hands of a murderer??"said a shattered Manik "control Manik agar tu aise behave karega to usse kon sambhalega..you need to be patient Manik..she will very soon understand your true love for her and distinguish between you and that murderer"said Cabir pulling Manik into a bone crushing hug..after wiping his tears Manik headed towards his room..he knocked the door but on finding it open he entered closing the door after him slowly..his eyes searched for Nandini who he saw was standing before the mirror just like a doll..a doll whose key is yet to turn to blow life into her..Manik again cursed himself under his breath for making her a key-turning-doll..Manik saw Nandini struggling to remove her choker so he forwarded to help her n was about to pull its string when Nandini screamed"don't Manik don't..don't you dare touch me"

What Manik loved Nandini and Nandini is busy all the time saying "I hate you Manik"??what is forcing her to hate him??we all just crave to get one glance of Manik and Nandini's hating him despite the fact that Manik is her best friend??i mean like seriously..how can she hate him??what can be more good than falling for your best friend??n y was everyone addressing her lover as a murderer??Nandini..she can't love a murderer..no way..a lot more twists awaiting for you

To know more stay tuned...

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Lovely update dea...

Sweet awesome superb update

How much he loves her that he cant bear her pain even its coz of him. He can suffer for her as he is her best friend yet she is so blinded by that creep she is not realizing it

Hoping for the suspense unfolds and mystery solved asap

Continue soon and thanks for pm

dam gd update...manik love her a lot...still d suspens nd mystery to b sorted out...waiting for unfold of these secrets...fab update..plzz update long part...v will loved dat..nd comment too..
ur stry is dam interesting..
waiting for nxt update...update soon :-)

thanks for the lovely update...but its too short...n i jus loved this story...u penned it so well dea...continue soon..eagerly waiting..