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Teja

@himateja249

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Posted: 10 years ago

#981

It's a heart wrenching update. Guys like rahul should be punished very severly.😡

Anyways nice update. U penned the inner turmoil of a girl very nicely.👏👏

Continue soon. Waiting for the next part eagerly😊

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Didiaish

@Didiaish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#982

Hey I m silent reader of this forum
I literally cry so much when I read you story
I read your story in one go n I love it
Waiting for next update

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dhrits_24

@dhrits_24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#983

Its amazing...how u give such long updates...

n ur dis update it truly made me cry...

U started it wid romance😳...they b sooo cute...n d promise he asked for...to keep smiling always...how cute😊 n her honest confession while crying...dat she was given a new life by him...can she gt n xpct nethng more...😊😳

N Cabir's teasing😆😆

N Manik's plan - in - action...Rahul falling for it...

But Manik's anger...n freak...Rahul saw Nandu...i can't imagine wht wud b Nandu's state of mind then...

The fear of Being through that again...that jerk kidnapped her...hurt her to bleed...so cheap man...disgusting...

N Manik searching for her, all tensed, crying n worried...maybe wid a guilt too...

Nandini going through that humiliation again...it made me cry...so painful...its not easy to bear dat...to stand dat...Thank God dat Manik came at the right time...n finally that jerk confessed his crime...apologizing to Nandini wont reduce her pain n all d sufferings she had been through...

Nandu's state...she is so vulnerable...hurt...n Manik all trying hard to make her feel better...to get her out of that trauma n shock...N Nandu asked him to marry her...she is shaken...she needs assertion...n Manik's being wid her wud giver her dat comfort, protection n ease...

Its commendable how u write such intense story...it literally made me cry...it must hv been so difficult for u to write...

Bt u hv written it amazingly...wow👏

Plzzz cont soon...tc😉

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Ashmita18

@Ashmita18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#984

Their morning romance was super cute... and the teasing session was awesome... and now the plan... it was going too well... that rahul was actually horrified... and it was just about to blurt out the truth... but his words that he used for nandini,, manik just couldn't take anymore... he couldn't hear all those filthy words for his love and he just punched rahul... and plan got ruined... and everyone was sooo engrossed in calming manik down that no one noticed that rahul took nandini with him... he is sooo cruel... he cut her arm with knife, then snatched the locket from her neck bruising her neck and holding her soo tight mercilessly... and manik on seeing blood on the floor and nandini missing he heart just stopped beating... he couldn't breathe and when he saw nandini in such a state where that rahul was slapping her, was holding her soo tight, and was again gonna rape her... manik felt his heart sinking... but then they taught that rahul a great lesson... he deserved those punches, getting arrested and losing all his wealth... but nandini was again broken... she just wouldn't get out of manik's hold... it's as if he is her only solace.. if she leaves him she won't be able to survive... and now only manik can cure her, heal her... it was a damn amazing update... I sooo loved it... FLAWLESS... MIND BLOWING... MAGNIFICENT... uh are superb... HATS OFF... thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it... please continue soon... will be waiting eagerly... keep up the great work... best wishes... :) :D

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Zara Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#985

Haaah done with 14 chapters in one go

I only know how I did it cuz tomorrow i need to submit 3 of my projects and have 2 tests but still i must sau u are an excellent writer'

Back 2 tge update i thought that either of them would be drunk But this was more blissful (cuz getting drunk is now common but still i love it)

Damn exicted 2 read the next chapter wats gonna happen?? Dying out of curiosity

Let nandu handover herslf to manik and that would be a blessing

Waiting 4 the update tryna do it asap cuz if i die out of curiosity u will be responsible. Hahahahahahahahhahahaha

(I know i an insane)

-Mananholic982

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#986

wow finally rahul arrested
sad for nandu
please do continue
bye sumi

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#987

hey it was awsome

soha part was funny

but hope she wont create any problems for nandini

manik s always there protecting nandin

loved to c the lovely nyonika

holy party ???????????????/

manik s planning something ...

manan holy was superb

fab 5 teasing nandu

fab 5 supporting nandu

fab 5 protecting nandu

coool

mind blowing story

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Aleena

@cute-aly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#988

Originally posted by: thamannamanan
hey it was awsome
soha part was funny
but hope she wont create any problems for nandini

manik s always there protecting nandin

loved to c the lovely nyonika

holy party ???????????????/
manik s planning something ...

manan holy was superb
fab 5 teasing nandu
fab 5 supporting nandu
fab 5 protecting nandu

coool
mind blowing story