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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzzz
Plzzz
Plzzz
Update the next part sooonnn
Waiting eagerly...
Whhy do u make us waiting for soo sooo long plzzz update na
Plzz ( puppy face )😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzz update soon
U said u will update today
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Nanadni was amazing
Loved it
That jerk stupid idiot
Namdu so much scared but manik with her always
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzzz update the next part na jaldi se
We r waiting eagerly
U updated sun saathiya day before yesterday so can we expect its love update today
Plzz say or update the next part
Ur story is amazing we just can't wait for the next part
I eagerly want to know that how will manik take his revenge
And also that how will he gain all of nandini's trust
So please please please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its love...i really fell in love wid dis story...so touched nd pure relation n love...i was bz dese days wid my xam so i didn't read dis stry nw i read it again frm d strting...wowww yr u wrote dis stry so beautifully dt i cnt xpress hw emotinally m touchd wid each n evry incidnt n manan momnts...i wish i cud find a manik lyk dis fr me too..awww...he cares so mch fr her...nd nyonika s a sweetheart in dis one so mch in luv wid hr thoughts n d way she cares fr nandu...so good n adorable...n dt rahul creepy man...i wud luv to see him begging fr his lyf in frnt of nandu hw cruel he ws.cheee gnda insaan...i really feel so bad abt scg ppl prsnt in our society n his mom hw cruel she was...idiot lady...n hw cud rishab n her bhabhi didnt trust her...vry bad ...bt ovrall it was all made up wid d love n care manik gave to nandu...she dont need ny1 lse odr thn him...nd fab5 is also awesm...luvd d stry...nd ya post soon na plzzz i saw its too long u hvn't updated...plzzz plzzz jldi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I finally read it!
And loved it! Specially the fact that nyonika is also accepting Nandini whole heartedly
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 11 A


"Are you ok baby?" Manik asked Nandini lovingly and she nodded.


"I am ok..!!"She said smilingly and Manik pecked her forehead. Suddenly they heard Fab4 coughing. Nandini tried to got up from Manik's lap but Manik didn't let her go.


"Manik..!! Let me go..!!"Nandini whispered.


"No..!! Tum logon ko koi problem hai..!!"Manik said to fab4 and they all burst out in laughter.


"Manik..!! Tujh say ziada sharam tou Nandini main hai..!!" Cabir said laughingly and all joined him. Nandini was now red tomato she hide her face in Manik's chest and Manik wrapped his arms around her. Fab4 were watching all this in with awe.


"Nandini..!! Your things..!! Tum nay gira di the..!!" Alya came forward and gave the things to Nandini. MaNan got up.


"Happy Friendship day guys..!!"Nandini exclaimed and all look at her in surprise."What? Why are you all looking at me like this? Aj friendships day hai..!! I have got gifts for you all..!!" Saying that Nandini gave fab4 their keychains and one white rose each. Then she turned towards Manik who was just looking at her with love.

"Mera gift?"Manik said smilingly. Nandini too smiled and gave Manik his keychain and a red rose. Manik happily took it. Fab5 opened their gifts and all of them shouted happily seeing their keychains.


"Thank You Nandini..!!"They all exclaimed and hugged Nandini.


"Waisy Nandini..!! Hum sab kay liye white rose aur Manik kay liye red rose q?" Cabir asked naughtily and Nandini again blushed.


"Cabir..!! Stop it..!! Look at her face..!!"Alya slapped Cabir. Manik side hugged Nandini and she smiled.


"Thank you so much guys..!! For loving me..!! For supporting me..!!"Nandini said in a low voice.


"We all are always with you..!! You don't need to be worried..!!" Dhruv said and all nodded.


"Guys..!! Chalo kuch fun krty hain..!! I mean let's sing..!! Nandini you will join us na?"Manik said cheerfully and she nodded. Fab5 quickly too their positions


Hume tumse mohabbat hui hai
Hume tumse mohabbat hui hai
Oh jaan-e-mann! Do u know?

(Manik started the song looking at Nandini naughtily and she shook her head laughingly)


Haan hume tumse mohabbat hui hai
Oh jaan-e-mann! Do u know?

(Dhruv sang twirling around Alya and she smiled loving)


Iss dil se shararat hui hai
Oh jaan-e-mann! Do u know?

(Cabir sang looking at Manik and Nandini they both shyly look away)

Kaise kab ho gaya!
Kya ghazab ho gaya!
Hume kuch bhi pata naa chala

(Nandini sang smilingly and came towards Manik. She put her hand on his shoulder)

Meri nafrat bhi chaahat hui hai
Oh jaan-e-mann! Do u know?

(Alya sang poking Dhruv's shoulder and he blushed)

Hume tumse mohabbat hui hai
Arey! Oh jaan-e-mann, Do u know?

(Manik sang and held Nandini's hand. He winked at her and she playfully hit him)

Kar loon, main something-something
Aaj itni ijaazat toh de

(Manik sang holding Nandini's waist and nodded his head to which she also nodded)

Let me do thinking-thinking
Mujhe itni si mohallat toh de

(Nandini sang and pushed Manik away. she scratched her head as if she was really thinking. Then she look at she was really asking time)

Tell me, tell me-tell me
Tere honthon pe jo baat hai
(Dhruv sang dancing with Alya)

Itni jaldi kya hai
Haan abhi toh yeh shuruaat hai

(Alya sang encircling her arms around Dhruv's neck)

Dard mein bhi toh rahat hui hai
Dard mein bhi toh rahat hui hai
Oh jaan-e-mann! Do u know?

(Cabir sang dancing crazily with Mukti)

Hume tumse mohabbat hui hai

Chori toh humne ki hai
Par churaya hai dil pehli baar

(Manik sang putting Nandini's hand on his heart)

Jhootha thoda jhootha
Thoda saccha lage mera yaar

(Nandini sang hugging Manik tightly and he encircled his arms around her)

Doori kis liye hai
Kis liye hai bhala faasla

(Dhruv and Manik sang boldly pull Nandini and Alya closer)

Aaaun baazuon mein
Pehle sehra toh sir pe saja

(Nandini sang encircling her arms around Manik's neck as if really asking him)

Kya kahoon kaisi haalat hui hai
Kya kahoon kaisi haalat hui hai
Arey! Oh jaan-e-mann, Do u know?

(Cabir said looking at the both lovely couples)

Hume tumse mohabbat hui hai
Oh jaan-e-mann do u know
Iss dil se shararat hui hai
Oh jaan-e-mann! Do u know?
Oh jaanemann do u know

(All sang dancing crazily and ended the song.)


Couples ended up hugging each other. Mukti look at Cabir and Cabir look at Mukti they both smiled and hugged each other.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 11 B


"Thank God that me and Mukti are not in love..!!"Cabir said mockingly.


"Woow Cabir..!! Have you forgotten the Thakar siblings..!! Navya Thakar and Abhimanyu Thakar..!!"This time Nandini teased Mukti and Cabir.


"Wo..!! Chupi rustam..!!! How do you know?"Mukti said smilingly and all look at Nandini for an answer.


"I can see it..!!"Nandini said smilingly. "Love is a thing you can't hide..!!" Saying that she look at Manik who was already looking at her. "I saw love for you both in their eyes..!!" Nandini said smilingly. And suddenly Mukti and Cabir's phone buzzed. They have got messages. They both checked their messages and look each other.


"Kis ka message hai?" Manik asked curiously.


"Abhimanyu ka..!!"Mukti said looking at Nandini and she gave her an I-Knew-it look. "He is asking me for a date tonight..!!" Mukti said in a low voice.


"And I have got a message from Navya..!! She is also asking me for a date tonight..!!"Cabir too said in a low voice. MaNan were standing there side hugging each other. Nandini broke the hug and walked towards Mukbir. She held their hands.


"Guys..!! Love na aisy he hota hai..!! And jab aisy love baar baari ap ka door knock kary na tou us ko accept kar laina chye..!! Mukti you don't like Abhi na? Because he irritates you a lot..!! Suppose agr aik din Abhi ka message nahi ata hai..!! Tou will you miss him?" Nandini said smilingly and Mukbir were just listening to her.


"Of course I will miss that idiot..!!"Mukti said in her all time favorite attitude and all smiled.


"And Cabir you? Will you miss Navya and her roses jo kbhi bhi achanak tmhry bag say nikal aata hai?" Nandini asked Cabir. And he look at her in disbelief that how come she know about the roses. He even didn't told that to Fab4. It was Navya's routine work she daily put a red rose in Cabir's bag.


"Salay..!! Tu nay ya baat hmy q nahi btai..!!"Manik asked and slapped Cabir's shoulder.


"Manik..!! Relax..!!"Nandini said putting her hand on Manik's shoulder.


"Nandini..!! Tmy ya sab kesy pta hai?"Cabir asked looking at Nandini.


"Because I saw you..!! When you were scolding a rose and was murmuring that"Ya Navya bhi na pagal hai roz ya red rose mery bag me rakh jati hai..!!"Nandini said smilingly and for the first time CABIR DHAWAN felt embarrassed.


"Nandini is right..!!"Alya and Dhruv said in unison. All look at them. Dhruv had Cabir's bag in his hand and Alya was holding the red rose.


"So tell us Cabir..!! Will you miss this?"Nandini asked.


"I will..!! I remember last week I checked my bag and there was no rose inside..!! I unintentionally became worried and look for Navya then I came to know that she didn't came that day..!!"Cabir confessed lowering his head and all smiled.


"Actually Cabir is right..!! One day Abhi didn't left any message for me and I also became worried...!! And ussi frustration me I fought with him..!!"Now Mukti was also confessing.


"So..!! There is something..!! Come on guys..!! Say yes to them..!!"This time Manik said and all nodded.


"You know guys..!! After Rahul..!! I thought kay me kabhi kise par trust nahi kar paoan ge..!! But Manik gave me everything..!! Love is very special..!! Please guys..!! Accept it..!"Nandini said side hugging Manik and he smiled.


"Of course...!! Look at us..!! How much happy we are..!!"Alya said smilingly.


"Yeah..!! Being in a relation..!! It feels so good..!!"Dhruv too said and all smiled. Mukti and Cabir nodded. They texted a yes to Abhi and Navya. They were talking to each other when suddenly the room banged open. Abhi and Navya came running towards Mukbir. They hugged them immediately. Mukti and Cabir were shocked for a moment but then they hugged them back. Thakar siblings were the craziest siblings of the campus. Abhimanyu Thakar was crazy for Mukti and his sister Navya Thakar was madly and deeply in love with Cabir Dhawan. They both were the only child of the great businessman Thakar Singhnia. Their mother died when they were children. Their father brought them up with lots of love. They were crazy but cute. Mr.Thakar had always fulfilled all the wishes of them so they were happy with their life.


"Thank you..!!"They both said in unison. All smiled.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 11 C


In the night after dinner Nandini was sitting beside the pool side. The heart pendant box was in her hands. She was constantly opening and closing it's lid. She wanted to give to Manik but she didn't gave it to him in front of fab4. She was lost in her thought when she felt two arms putting a shawl around her shoulders. And the owner sat beside her Nandini didn't had to look who was he because she knew it was Manik.


"Why are you sitting here?"Manik asked taking her in a side hug.


"Just aisy he..!!"Nandini said in a low voice.


"Acha..!! Waisy you were looking stunning in clothes of my choice..!!"Manik complimented her wholeheartedly and she smiled.


"Thank you for everything..!!" She said and kissed his cheek.


"My pleasure..!!"Manik said lovingly and pecked her forehead. Suddenly his eyes fell on the box in her hands. "Aray you have got another gift for me?"Manik asked and snatched the box from her hands. He opened it and saw the necklaces.


"Manik...!! These pendants will be symbol that we belong to each other..!!"That's all Nandini managed to say and lowered her head. Manik was just looking at the girl in front of him. How much he love her..!! And why? No answer..!! He just picked up her pendant from the box and with one hand he held her chin to made her look in his eyes.


"You are very special to me..!!" Manik whispered huskily."Will you give me the honor to made you wear this..!!"Manik asked lovingly.She smiled and nodded her head. She too picked up his pendant from the box. Both gently made each other wear. Manik seductively bite her neck and after that he licked the place to sooth the pain Nandini moaned and held his shoulders.


"I love you so much Nandini..!!"Manik whispered seductively and nibbled her ear lobe.


"I love you too Manik..!!"Nandini said lovingly and kissed Manik's cheek. Manik look at her eyes full with desires. Nandini shivered on noticing the look in his eyes. Manik held Nandini's waist and pull closer to him. He gently pushed the shawl away and the shawl fell of her shoulders. He bent down and kiss her shoulder.


"Hold me tightly..!!"Manik whispered. Nandini became surprised but did what he said. On feeling his tight grip Manik slowly fell in the pool with her in his arms. It took some time for Nandini to adjust. She was breathing heavily. Manik held her tightly. Both were completely wet now.


"This song is just for my love..!!"Manik said lovingly tucking her hair behind her ear. She smiled and Manik started.


Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada

(Manik sang with so much intensity and the look in his eyes was setting her on fire)


Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada

(He repeated tracing his finger sensuously on her face and rubbed her lips with his thumbs)


Saya bhi tera mein
Hone na doon juda..
Maine theh kar liya

(Manik sang and feeling the depth of the lyrics tears welled up in her eyes. Manik wiped the tears and engulfed her in a hug)


Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe..
Bas haq hai ik mera

(Manik sang cupping her face possessively)

Teri rooh pe..Tere jism pe
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera

(Manik sang roughly pulling her in a fist which did nothing but increased the desires in both of them)


Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada

(Manik sang and kissed her eyes)


Aa..aa..

Baahon mein tujhko rakhoon
Dhadkan mein teri sunoon

Aa itna nazdik aa zara

(Manik sang and put his head on her heart to listen her heartbeat all the time caressing her hair and she closed her eyes to control her ragging an uneven breath)

Ho..jisme duaaein rahein
Hur dum wafaaein rahein
Du tujhko aisa ik jahan

(Manik sang and Nandini cupped her hand to fill them with water. Manik held her hands taking her in a back hug and left a trail of wet kisses on her back. She arched her back and turned to him)


Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe..
Bas haq hai ik mera

(Manik sang and Nandini knew that he really mean those words)

Teri rooh pe tere jism pe
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera

(Manik sang and slammed his lips with her. With that he pull her with him under water. The kiss was intense and passionate. Soon they came back on the surface gasping for air)


Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
(Manik sang and came out of the pool picking up Nandini. Nandini was still in the trauma of their just happened intense kiss. She can't take her eyes off his face)


Manik entered the bedroom and laid down with Nandini on the bed. He kissed every corner of her face not living a single cell untouched. Nandini knew what was coming. Manik pinned her hands above her head and she shivered. This sensation was different but still she was afraid of it. Manik was about to kiss her lips when she unintentionally turned her face. Manik immediately realized his mistake. He left Nandini and got up. Nandini felt bad and she too got up. Suddenly Manik realized that they both were wet.


"Freak..!! Nandini..!! Get up change your clothes..!! Tmhy thand lag jye ge..!!"Manik said worriedly but Nandini held his hand.


"Manik..!! I am sorry..!!" She said in a low voice.


"Nandini...!! You don't have to say sorry..!! I am sorry..!! I knew that you are not comfortable with all this..!! Still I lost my control...!!"Manik said in an apologetic tone and Nandini was surprised by his confession. This man respects her so much."Chalo now don't waste your time..!! Change...!!"Manik said cheerfully and she nodded.


After sometime MaNan were lying on the bed. Manik was resting his back with bed board and Nandini was lying cuddling to him. She was playing with their pendants and Manik was telling her about random things. Suddenly something came in Nandini's mind.


"Manik..!!"She called him curiously.


"Hmm?"He asked playing with her hair.


"Manik..!! What was Rahul doing in our college..!!"As soon as she asked Manik gulped saliva and look at her. As if he got caught doing some crime.


"Wo..!! Nandini..!! He is the one who is sponsoring us the album..!!"Manik said in a low tone and as expected Nandini's eyes popped out in shock.


"Manik..!! You don't know him..! He is a very cunning Man..!! Wo na..!! Wo tmhy koi nuksaan pocha day ga..! No you are not signing the album with him..!!"She shouted worriedly.


"Nandini..!! Relax..!!You trust me na? I will take your revenge from him..!! Wo tmhry qadmoon main gir kay maafi mangy ga...!! I promise..!!"Manik said in a determined tone but Nandini was least satisfied with Manik's explanation. She very well knew Rahul. The most selfish person ever...!! She didn't said anything to Manik but just hugged him tightly. He patted her head until she fell asleep.

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Sorry for a late update actually very late update.. Apologies..!! So I have wrote this romance for all of us because I know kay aj kal bht jaeeb rumors chal ray hain..!! So enjoy it..!! From next part you all will see the MONSTER MANIK VS RAHUL KHANA..!! Fingers crossed..!! Hoping for the best and as ky2 is ending only I know how I am controlling my emotions..!! Well Let's smile and cherish these last days..!! Keep smiling..!! Keep shining for your love ones..!!

Lots of Love..

Mawara

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update mawara ,you really rocked it and it feel soo good that u update at this time bcoz really what is happening now adays these updates are really helping and calming us soo please update as fast as you can i dont know about what will happen to our manan but pleasee keep manan alive in your stories as it will always made us remember our fabulous manan

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