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HTA111

@HTA111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#711

Omg outclassed totally heartfelt amazing update

Manik knew something is not right the way that jerk was getting over friendly with his Nandu he dint like it at all that's why he was keeping close watch in her but to manan bad luck that nightmare happened she was devastated and when he couldn't find her he was getting restless and when he heard her scream he just lost it and trying to save her

Nandu blame him for her condition as now she is like a toy and every man like to have her and manik forr first time is ashamed and wants to apologise to her

This will change the equation between manan now

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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riyana7

@riyana7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Very emotional yaar...
It was very heart touching update...
But it's not @ all a crap...It's awesome :)
Update the next part soon...

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#713

I guess this was my 1st comment on this ff of urs...

This part completely left me speechless...
It was damm emotional, I really feel like crying seeing nandini's condition...
Being a girl I can understamd how it feel...when a guy harass a girl. Nandini is harass not only by physically but mentally also...
I guess after this manik realise his mistake, about misbehaving wid girls...
I really loved it.
And ya ur story is damm amazing dear..

Loved it.
Cont. Soon. Cant wait.
Love...mini

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#714

it was nice updte

the way u pinned the girls feelings was simple super

it was too emotional

through this manik may change in his behaviour

continue soon

thnks for pm

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Manya

@manya_189

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#715

I really liked it!!
The way you have portrayed the scene was good!
Manik needs to realise his mistake now!

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ateeqa

@ateeqa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#716

Awesome plz try n do daily update it's so interesting can't wait continue soon

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Kritika_05

@Kritika_05

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#717

Hy dear it was amazing nd yeah it was needed 👏
But soon wana see something light some spark which was there in beginning
Manik used to feel nd want her to feel same for him
Update soon 😊

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salma

@sparth

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#718

Indeed it is an awsm stry yaar...u penned it well...i like the way manik realize his mistake and ya nandu 's condition is really horrible ...i cant imagine hw numb i am feeling ur stry ..each and every word are runing in my nerves...it is an indeed awsm update...

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starflee

@starflee

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#719

maybe this will now make manik realize his mistake and he'll accept nandini wholeheartedly. nandini is so broken and only manik can console her they need each other continue soon as this was the turning point of their relation I want next update very soon plzzz