Devil's Bride Manan ff thread 2 link on page 150 - Page 51

It was Awsumm...fantastic😛👏

Fantastic! Loved it!
yeah yeah I've got idea that there is lot of drama is remaining before actual make out!

Wow wow wow. This manik and nandini are chance less. By every update this story getting more interesting. Waiting eagerly for next update. Wondering who got the victory at the end.

It was nice...i know what will happen next. Manik will get angry and would try to take revenge by putting more work pressure on her nd will be rude too. But seriously NO MORE HOT SCENES. plz let their be little little cute scenes btw our Manan. Plz post the next part early.

Omggg ... That was something amazingly different ...n sizzling too ...

Wow dear it was too happening
All the while i was literally biting my nails and actually i was it was so nice na
Poor nandu
Plzzz continue soon

ufff!!! maine puri update kitni tension mein padi tumhe pata hai? nandu se zyada main nervous thi! mujhe Dar lag raha tha ab kya hoga? manik kya karega nandu kaise bachegi!!! Ashna, baby u scared me! ye update aisa hai toh original suhaagrat tak toh main mar jaungi lol!!!
love
Ayisha

Originally posted by: rimsha01

It was nice...i know what will happen next. Manik will get angry and would try to take revenge by putting more work pressure on her nd will be rude too. But seriously NO MORE HOT SCENES. plz let their be little little cute scenes btw our Manan. Plz post the next part early.

well obvio manan scenes to honge hi coz story is abt manan but thode different type ke not extra bold and abt revenge you will came to knw abt this things in future updates so you have to wait fr it thnk u for u r comment dear

Originally posted by: Sm0405

Omggg ... That was something amazingly different ...n sizzling too ...

Manik's plan worked bt Manik also lost himself in his plan for sometime ...

He was also mesmerized by our nandu ... Hayeee

Wo notes Manik k ... Not only nandu it has affected me tooo ... Each n every word was sooo ... I was imagining Manik saying all those wordss ...

Bechari nandu ... She was soo nervous n tensed ... Finding ways of how to get out of that situation ...

All those lines of Manik were making her all more nervous n lose her control ...

Finally she gave up n accepted her defeat ...

I'm sooo excited fr the next part ... U r amazing writer lyk the way u write it all is soo amazingly ...

Plz plz update soonnniiissshhh ...

thank you so much dear n there is lots of drama which i have stored for you all in future updates so wait for it n will update the next prt asap

Originally posted by: Smileygirl23

ufff!!! maine puri update kitni tension mein padi tumhe pata hai? nandu se zyada main nervous thi! mujhe Dar lag raha tha ab kya hoga? manik kya karega nandu kaise bachegi!!! Ashna, baby u scared me! ye update aisa hai toh original suhaagrat tak toh main mar jaungi lol!!!
love
Ayisha

chill darling u dnt need to be scared in my ff nandini is not weak so she cn fight wid everyone dnt worry trust me i you wont die till real make out coz i want let this thing happen coz i luv u alot as my reader so i dnt want to loose you