Manan SS ZAHENASEEB chp #22 pg 133 link/thread2 on pg 1 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Yayy !
Super update
Waiting for Nandu's confession and also their engagement !

Update soonn soon !
Cant wait much !

Can you please PM me for chapter updates !
Edited by lakshita03 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
superb update...jus loved it
u penned it so nicely..
thanks for the lovely n wonderful update...the way u write is jus awsm dea...hats off 2 u...
plss update soon...
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Wow dey r gtng married yippee ab mazza agya ...
Bas ab Nandini bhi i love u bolde
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Hhaayeee...sooo cuteee yrrr.. 😳
Manik's confession was best yrrr...aur alya bechaari sochti rh gyi ki wo dono much bol ni paaye 😆
It is the best thing, when your bestest friend who knows everything about you becomes your life partner. 😊
Thanx for pm dear.
And update soon plzzz...cant wait for next part yrrr 😊 😛
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Omg they are getting married that is awesome update soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE 👏👏
LOVE IT
CONTINUE SOON
THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
A super quick update isnt it... ;) Thanks to all those who like my story and comment.. :)...your comments force me to write...
But those who can like plz do comment too yar I know I'm being greedy here but that's all I want in return.. If we can sit for hours to write..can't u just put a comment or write few words plzzz..
Sorry if I have hurt u...
Okk so heresss the update
Happy reading ...

Chap#7

ROKAA:

At nandinis place
It was 12:00 in night ..when she was laying on the bed..but sleep was nowhere..she was constantly flipping on the bed ...thinking about how merciful her ayiapa was ..that without making any much efforts she got what she actually wanted...yes she nearly got it ..tomorrow is gonna be the day when she'll be officially maniks ..
Not as a besst friend but also as a life partner... Mere thought of getting married to the most handsome hunk alive on the earth made the entry of tiny butterflies in her stomach and she could feel the tiny hairs on her nape spike out of that thrill...they were best friends but she never ever thought of getting married to him ..yes she loved him but getting married was yet so far ...she never even thought of being his girlfriend... Only what she knew was that she loves him...thinking all this she don't even know when sleep took over her...

On the other side manik was flying ...he thought he is the mosttt luckiest men in the world...

...

Next morning
Kajal :nandini beta get ready and come for pooja...
"MOM I'm just coming..."
Beautiful girl wearing a pink long kurty with purple churidar ...wearing her earings replied sweetly to her mother
She joined her mother for pooja both the mother daughter offered prayer and as soon as kajal turned she saw the most beautiful girl standing infront of her...
"Beautiful "saying this kajal hugged her tightly
"Tum kab bhary hogai pata bhi nhi chala"
And both smiled

...

Nyonika:ramu kaka plz ap ye shagun ki cheezein table per ready rkhei or mujhei 2:00pm tak sab ready chaheah ...
"Ye viren kaha chalei gai "(viren malhotra maniks father)
Or manik ufff ..what r they upto aj function hei or mujhei akela chor ker dono baap bete gaib hei..kia kerun mein inkaa"
Said nyonika irritatedly
When suddenly manik back hugged her and said:so u were looking for me...
And all the anger flew away...of course why not having a best son in the world is called being the luckiest parent in the world
She placed one of her hand being in the same position on his ear pulling it...
"Kaha they haan...??"
"Ooouucch..MOM plz .." He said faking a crying face
And nyonika smiled
"Sorry MOM ratko late soia so couldn't get up on time "
Not able to see his sons sad face nyonika kissed on his forehead by cupping his face..
"It's OK" said nyonika smilingly
"Acha MOM koi kam tha ..any help.." Asked manik
"No no ...bus itna he k be ready we will leave by 2:30pm" nyonika ordered
"OK" manik replied and went to the pool side to get an other surprise

. Cabir ..mukty..??? Tum log India mein..???said manik shockingly
And ran to hug both of them they reciprocated

"Han sallei ham India mei tu bata ...tu to ab hamara dost he nhi raha na..??hena mukty" said cabir sadly
Han sahi kaha pata nhi ham yaha kiun aey"replied !ukty leaving "manik numb
" so u guys know..."manik said
"Yes we know that u r soon getting engaged" cabir retorted
"And that too with nandini like seriously apni zindagi ki itny baryy khushi mein hamei shamil nhi kerna chahta tha tu..." Mukty said
"Guysss aisa nhi hei sab kuch bohat jalde mein hua I'm sorry really very sorry yaarrr.." But batao tum log achanak kese aye or kisne bataia.."manik asked
"Ham to aj tujhei surprise dere they but yaha aker khud surprise hogei thanks to viren uncle unho ne hamei bata dia" mukty replied
"Acha sorry guys " manik said embarrassingly
As he didn't tell the biggest thing to his friends...
Well they hugged him chucking every other thing...
Congratulationsss dudeee...both said in unison
He thanked ...

...

Nandini was sitting ..kajal came in..
Kajal:nandu ye dekh nyonika ne tre Leah ye bheja hei... Kitna piara hena
Nandini: yupp
Kajal :OK chalo get ready ...wo log anei walei hongey...!
Nandini was about to get ready when her phone rang
N:hello
M:hey whatsup
N:umm..nothing just going to get ready..
M:ahan ..umm..ready for whom..??(he started teasing her)
N:as if u don't know..?
M:han na to plz tell me..??(he said with a smirk)
N:okk ...aj mera roka hei Usk Leah...!!
M:oh really so whose the luckiest oneee..!!??
N:well I guess I'm the luckiest one...!!
Manik smirked on hearing this confession of her...
M:really..???
N:hmmm(she hummed in assuring tone)
And he smiled..
M:well then I shouldn't make u wait isn't it...!!!
N:oh ...thanks for reminding manik u have to go get ready ...so bye hann...?
M:OK OK ...see ya then byeee..!!
And don't forget that ...
N:what manikkk..????jaldeee boloo
"That I..LOVE..YOU"confessed manik
Leaving poor girl all flushed like a red tomato
"Bye manik" she smiled and said

nandini self talk:I love you more manik but you'll have to wait for hearing this from me cauz I wanna make my confession the most memorable one...
(I wouldn't have been saying this rn if i wouldn't have realised my love for you 2 years agoo ...)

...

All the guest have arrived only the special guest were on their way...

"Rama sab kuch complete hena" asked the worried kajal
" g g ma'am sab pura hei"he replied

There comes the most awaited guests ...
Mr and Mrs malhotra and of course manik
...
Manik was getting restless to see his nandini...
Where nandini also had the same situation...
"Nandini wo log agyeii" said alyia
Nandini: her heart started beating it felt like it'll come out...
They were best friends but today they were gonna get reserved for each other forever...

Mukti:cabir hamto nandini se kafeee sal pehlei miley they usei hum yaad bhi hongey naa..??
Cabir:mukty bhul gye wo mujhei bhara bhai manty thy to yaad hogey ...

"Wowww"escaped from cabirs mouth as he saw the most beautiful lady ...well lady of the evening... nandini murthy
"What happened"asked both manik and mukty
"Khud dekhlo" he replied to which they turned to see
Nandini coming down wearing blue and peach net panel frock ...that had little embroidery on the neck...with light party makeup ...she looked simple yet elegant...
Manik was just admiring nandini...and was smiling ...she came near them after greeting elders..along with alyia
Nandini: cabiirrr..!! Muktyyy.????what a beautiful surprise... They smiled ear to ear and hugged each other..
"Mene kaha tha na k usko ham yad hongey" said cabir
They met alyia ...mukty was really impressed by her dressing and all...
After few mins of talking they excused as to leave the couple alone

"U look beautiful" said manik huskily... Tho he had said this plethora of times before but today it was special ...she blushed..
And he smiled..
"Thanku"
"Wese u aren't looking less,"she said..
He was wearing a shirwani of blue color similar to nandinis dress
He smiled and said:I had to u know to compliment you...
And they laughed

...

It was time for roka

They were called for pooja...manan sat together
Nyonika gave her the shagun ...
They took blessings from elders...
And the couple was being admired...
Alyia cabir mukty were taking pictures an selfies
All of them took a group selfie with the couple...

Manik so wanted to be alone with nandini... He wanted to spend time with her And here he got it ...nandini excused herself as she wanted to get freshen ...so manik quietly sneaked out from there as well...

.Lost in her thoughts she was getting out of the loo ... when suddenly a hand pulled her in to the room itself

Manikkk..."she said being so sure it was him.
He twirled her around to pin against the wall very gently and put his one hand at the back of her waist so that she don't get hit hard on the wall and holding her arm protectively by his other hand...

"Manik what are you doing..." Leave me koi ajaei ga"said nandini trying to get out of his grip but in vain
"Umm noo ..anei do jisko ana hei..bhai mujhei koi der hei???u gonna be my wife ..."he said sheepishly

"Manik I'm gonna be ...per abhi I'm not na...so plz"she was shushed as he put his finger on her lips ...oppss ..her pouty and glossy lips...
And suddenly his eyes went to her lips..in all those years he had never seen her lips ...how yummy they look..he wanted to smack his lips with her...he came close to her very very close to her lips ..she closed her eyes in anticipation...and tightened her grip on his shirt...he smirked on seeing the effect of him on her which he has never seen before...
"Open your eyes nandini I won't do anything that u don't want me to.." He said huskily in her ears while blowing in it
She shivered and immediately opened her eyes..looked into his eyes and smiled gesturing a thanku
"Hannn but aik bar tum officially mere wife bhan jao phir mein guarantee nhi de skta.." Said manik naughtily
On which she slapped slightly on his shoulder to which he chuckled...
"Chalei" he said gesturing her to hold his arms...which she held and they headed back to the hall where everyone was...

To be continued...

Precap:dholki...

Pllzzz tell meee how was it plz plz plzzz do leave comments...
OK sorry guys I don't know much about roka so couldn't write too much of it but I PROMISE I'll make sure that I entertain you in their wedding.. Next update will be more mazei ka ...want me to write to comment I need 3 4 pages of comments... Hahahahahaha!!sorry for being mean but I need it..OK that's it zada nhi bolu GI.xD xD...

Love my readers alottt those who comment I love them moreee :****
Edited by Fati.crisp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
loved it
maniks sudden proposal was awesome
update soon
keep up the good work
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
wow awesome update
love it
toh roka ho gaya ab jaldi se sadi karwa do dono ki
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow our manik is gem of a person hw he always so sweet...

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