manan - i wanna be with u hamesha (DISCONTINUED NOTE ON PAGE 9)E - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plzzz continue soon...
d wait is killing...
update soon...
'll b waiting...
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Chapter 1b

After dropping nandini to science college manik went to office n on the other side nandini's friends ayesha n sunny saw her hugging manik in the car but manik's face was not visible to them clearly as they were standing a bit far away inside the college...as soon as nandini met them n said hi to them but instead of replying they bombarded with lot of questions on her

Ayesha - tum kiske saath ayi nandini

Sunny - aur WO ladka kaun tha jiske saath tum ayi

Ayesha - yaa n why were u hugging him

Sunny - is he ur brother or some relative?

Nandini was irritated n listening to the word brother she became angry - shut up yaar guys...n he is not my brother he's my bo...

Ayesha - he's ur what ?

Nandini - my best friend

Sunny - what ?...best friend...but I thought after navya only we r ur friends...iss ladke ke bare me kyu nahi bataya

Nandini - woh...main...

Ayesha - acha leave it aur bata uska naam kya hai

Nandini - umm...uska naaam...woh

Sunny - arre itna time kyu laga rahi ho bol na jaldi

Nandini - santok malhotra

Listening to the name both ayesha n sunny burst out into laughing

Sunny - itna ajeeb aur purana naam hai

Nandini - Stop it yaar itna acha naam to hai...n what's so funny about it

Ayesha - OK sorry ab nahi hasenge theek hai...aur ha ek baat to batana hi bhul gayi main

Nandini sunny - what?

Ayesha - Saturday ko eid hai

Nandini - arre ha

Ayesha - ha to tere santok malhotra ko bhi saath me Lana ghar pe OK

Sunny - ha waise bhi navya to atti hai tere saath na to santok ko bhi lekar jayenge

Nandini - are par WO nahi aa Sakta

Ayesha - arre of course aa sakta hai

Nandini - arre WO zyada logo se nahi milta hai...thoda shy type ka hai

Sunny - ha to hum usko khaa nahi jayenge

Ayesha - nandini agar tunne santok ko humse nahi milayi na to main tujhse kabhi baat nahi karungi

Sunny - ha aur main bhi

Nandini - this is not fair yaar...mujhe usse puchna padenga pehle

Ayesha - Jo karna hai kar I don't care...mujhe bas usse milna hai

Sunny - ha bilkul

Class bell rang n ayesha sunny walked towards the class n nandini was holding her head n thinking how to tell manik about it

Nandini said to her self - ayyapa ab main kya karu...main to puri tarah se fass chuki hu

Nandini joined them for the class n all the while she was thinking about it

In the other side manik finished his work in office n he went to aliya's place where fab4 were waiting for him

Manik came inside the house n find fab4 sitting near pool side with all their instruments placed properly

Manik - hey guys what's up

Mukti - tu itni jaldi kaise aa gaya

Cabir - office me tha na?

Manik - woh Maine kaam jaldi khatam kar diya tha isiliye jaldi aa gaya

Cabir - ha aur nandini to college me hai isiliye jaldi aa gaya

Manik - acha tera teasing session start mat kar...

Aliya - ya guys let's start practicing

Cabir - kyu...aryaman ke pass Jana hai

Aliya said sarcastically - ha ha very funny cabir...ab start kare practice

Cabir - OK...to ye Bangalore concert ke liye kitne songs prepare karna hai

Dhruv - humne ek to already practice kar liya hai

Cabir - ha to next apne songs me se Kaunsa select karre

Mukti - I think humme na 4 songs practice karne chahiye

Manik - ya n Jo humara 1st album ka song tha usse we will end our performance

Aliya - fir to fans pagal ho jayenge

Cabir - absolutely...so let's get started guys

Fab5 group hug then start practicing n without any break they kept practicing for a long time n after 2 or 3hrs they came to an end

Cabir - n that was amazing

Manik - yaar I think we should always jam at the pool side

Mukti - ya It was so much fun jamming today

Aliya - absolutely

Dhruv - but guys humne aaj kuch zyada hi practice karli...so kal break le

Manik - ur right buddy

Aliya - so let's party tomorrow

All of them agreed for the party n aryaman enters n aliya go n hug him n he ask about what plan they were talking about...n they told him about the party n ask aryaman to join them

Aryaman - so tomorrow night is gonna be fun...waise bhi u guys haven't party with each for a long time haina

Aliya - ya I m so excited...mukti let's go for shopping na

Mukti - OK let's go aur main navya aur nandini ko bhi inform kardeti hu

Manik - I don't think ...nandini will join u for shopping...uska kal class test hai

Mukti - so she won't come for the party also?

Manik - u don't worry about that WO to main kaise bhi usse party me lekar aa jaunga

Cabir - arre yaar kavya ko party me kaise lekar jayenge

Manik - come on yaar of course lekar ja payenge...after all we are fab5 aur kavya the great cabir dhawan ki beti hai to usse andar kaun nahi jane denga

Cabir - u idiot mere kehne ka matlab hai ki she is only 1yrs old aur waha itna loud music drinks its not good for her aur mom bhi nahi hai wo Delhi Gaye hai warna wo kavya ko sambhal sakte hai

Aliya - ur right cabir n since she has started walking na tabse to bas idhar se udhar bhagti hai aur navya kitna sambhal payengi usse

Dhruv - arre cabir kavya ko meri mom baby sit kar sakti hai aur kavya unhe bhi to bohot pyaar karti hai

Mukti - ha yaar cabir...dhruv kya sahi idea diya yaar tune ur too good yaar

Cabir - ha OK I don't have any problem

Manik - so its decided kal sab 10 baje olive hotel pe mil rahe hai

All of then agreed n manik gets a call from nandini n he excused himself n went to a corner n picked up her call

Manik - hi...class khatam ho gayi?

Nandini - ya n it was really boring today

Manik - kyu aaj koi experiments karne nahi mile meri scientist ko ha

Nandini - ha aaj sirf lectures hi hue aur tumhari practice kaisi chal rahi hai

Manik - we just wrapped up the jam session n it was so good today

Nandini - that's really good to know

Manik - acha where r u right now

Nandini - I'm in a cab heading towards home...why?

Manik - main aa raha hu

Nandini - ya even I want to talk to u about something

Manik - what is it

Nandini - terrace par aao pehle fir batati hu

Manik - see u soon then

Nandini - OK bye

They hung up the call n manik made some excuse n left from their to meet nandini

Sorry for no manan moments together but next chapter will be full of manan...n pls do comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
No manan :( waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Thank god u updated...
loved d update...
hehe santok malhotra...hahahaa...
plzzz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Chapter 1c

After reaching murthy house
Manik straight away went to terrace where nandini was already sitting on the edge of the wall

Manik silently without letting her know came behind her n wrapped his arm around her shoulder n she looked at him surprisingly

Manik - I missed u

Nandini didn't say anything n just smiled...manik unwrapped his arms n sat next to her n tangled their fingers

Manik made a sad pout n said - didn't u missed me

Nandini was looking towards the view from their terrace in front of her

Manik got tensed as nandini was not replying him n she herself in the morning told him not to meet tonight but how come she changed her decision

Manik - nandini clg me kissi ne pareshan kiya kya?...mujhe nahi bataongi?

Nandini - aaj mera class me dhyan hi nahi tha n I was just thinking about u all the time

Manik - to teachers ne data kya

Nandini - umm no nothing like that

Manik - to fir bolo to what happened

Nandini - Saturday ko eid hai

Manik - ha mujhe pata hai so

Nandini - aaj ayesha aur sunny ne mujhe tumhe car me hug karte hue dekh liye but thankfully ur face was not visible to them

Manik - ha to kya ho gaya

Nandini looked at him with hesitation n said - ayesha wants me to bring u at her house to celebrate eid aur jab dono ne mujhse tumhara naam pucha to Maine unhe santok malhotra bata diya

Manik n nandini looked at each other quietly for some second n manik laughed loudly pointing towards nandini face

Manik said while laughing - oh go nandini ur too cute

Nandini - what is wrong with u

Manik - itni silly si baat ko lekar tum itna stress le rahi thi ha...aur iski wajah se tumne aaj class me concentrate bhi nahi ki...agar aisa hi chalta raha na ms murthy...tum top se bottom me aa jaongi aur tum teachers ke hit list me aa jaongi

Nandini - manik tum samajh kyu nahi rahe ho...ayesha n sunny wants to see u aur agar aisa nahin hua to WO dono mujhse baat nahi karenhe

Manik - ya so what...main chalunga na tumhare saath

Nandini - manik tum bhool rahe ho ki tum kaun ho

Manik gave a confuse look said - kaun hu main?

Nandini - ur a celebrity

Manik - ha to

Nandini - tumko kuch samjhana na bohot hi mushkil hai

Nandini pushed away manik n got up to leave but manik followed n grabbed by holding her waist

Nandini - manik just leave me

Manik - OK I'm sorry...if u don't want me to meet ur friend I won't

Nandini - its not like that manik...tum bhool gaye humne decide kiya tha that we won't disclose about our relationship to this world

Manik - but hum apne friends ko to bata hi sakte hai na

Nandini - ya we can but I don't think its a right time

Manik turned her around holding her shoulder n pulled more closer

Manik - u trust me right?

Nandini - yes I do

Manik - so don't worry now...bcoz hum saath me Saturday ko ayesha ke ghar jayenge OK

Nandini - but manik...

Manik - no arguments now...n I'm sure ayesha aur sunny will like me

Nandini - they will not like u they will love u ...kyuki dono hi tumhare fans hai

Manik - acha...aur tum?

Nandini - main kya?

Manik - arre meri fan!

Nandini - huh I'm not ur fan ha...pllss

Manik - to pakka nahi ho meri fan

Nandini - nope

Manik - theek hai fir Jo kaam subah khatam kar diya tha WO ab pura kar deta hu

Nandini - WO kya hai ?

Manik smirked n started tickling nandini

Nandini - no manik pls don't it na

Manik - pehle bolo that u r my fan

Nandini - nahi bolungi

Manik - then I will not stop

Nandini - acha...acha...fine main bolti hu

Manik stopped tickling her n wrapped nandini from his one hand n made her chin up from the other hand

Manik - bolo

Nandini circled her arms around his neck n dig her fingers in his hair n pulled closer whispering seductively against his lips

Nandini - I...m...

Manik whispered - yes...you

Nandini - i...m...your

Manik - yes...u...r...my

Nandini - love

Manik smiled n without signaling pressed his lips against her n she responded with equal desire n after some time they broke the kiss n nandini hugged him tightly n manik was patting her head sweetly...then nandini broke the hug

Nandini - acha manik ab tum jao...mujhe kal ki test ke preparation karni hai

Manik - kal tumhara last test hai na?

Nandini - hmm

Manik - so gr8...hum sab kal party kar rahe hai n u will also come with us OK

Nandini - OK

Manik - wow I'm surprised mr murthy itni jaldi haa kardi

Nandini - WO isliye mr malhotra kal Saturday n Sunday ko fir main rest kar sakti hu party karne ke baad n apko time bhi de sakti hu

Manik - arrre wah kafi samajdar ho gayi ho tum

Nandini made an angry pout n said - WO main pehle se hi hu samjhe

Manik pecked her pout n said - I know

Then both of them laughed n then nandini forcefully send manik to home n resumed her studies


Sorry for a small update n pls do like n comment

Thank u for reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
nice update
if manan r together they cn overcme frm everything
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Lovely update
continue soon
waiting for long update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Ty for d pm...
aww d update was really cute...
loved it...

I hope u r fyn dear...
take care...

Continue soon...
'll b waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
awesome storyline...waiting for ur upcoming updates...plzzz continue sooonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
That was such a cute update...
Exclusively MaNan...
Plz cont soon😉😊

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