manan - i wanna be with u hamesha (DISCONTINUED NOTE ON PAGE 9)E

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So guys here I m am with a new story on manan n this is the second time I m writing on manan so pls do tell me it's nice or not or should I continue it further


Prologue

Manik is 20yrs old n completing his last year in space academy n also managing some business work as a beginner n takes out time for nandini as well

Nandini is 19yrs and she is in 2nd yr in space academy n she is also studying astrophysics In one of the most prestigious science college in Mumbai n she is in 1st yr n she balance her love life n studies very well

Fab5 have done few music albums n they r extremely famous especially manik n manan n aliya n aryaman has kept their relationships secret as they don't want media n fans to ruin their relationship

Aliya is in a relationship with aryaman n both of them r happy together n fab4 has accepted him n forgave him for his mistakes

Dhruv is single n has moved on from aliya n accepted aryaman as aliya's true love N he helps her mother in restaurant business

Cabir n navya got married got 2 months ago on cabir's birthday n navya has a daughter name kavya who is 1yr old n they all stay together with cabir's mother n cabir is also an owner of a radio company

Mukti works with an NGO for cancer patients n helps them a lot as it remembers her of abhimanyu


INDEX

Chapter 1 - pg 1
Chapter 1a - page 3
Chapter 1b - page 4
Chapter 1c - page 5
Chapter 2 - page 6
Chapter 2a - page 7
Chapter 3 - page 8
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept cont son n wjat kind of relationship does manik n aliya kept hide??
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hey nice concept and really different
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Beautiful concept :))
Please continue n keep us updated
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Chapter 1

Chapter 1

It was 6am n nandini was sitting on her terrace reading her books putting her spectacles on n she was looking extremely angry as she was waiting for manik also as he was 1hr late

( since fab5 has become celebrities manik n nandini daily meet each other at 5am early in the morning n go to space together n then after completing her main class nandini goes to her science college n if nandini don't have any test or exams n if manik don't have to attend any events or perform anywhere then they also meet each other during night at 11pm secretly as he don't want media to caught them together coz it will lead nandini disturbed n manik also come to have lunch with murthy family every sunday )

Nandini got really annoyed n she got up to leave when manik came running towards her with some chocolates n flowers n continually said sorry to her but she didn't listen n turned to go n manik held her hand

Nandini - manik theirs a limit of everything...aur tum 1hr late ho main kabse tumhara wait kar rahi thi

Manik - I know nandini WO main bohot late soya tha n then tumhare liye flowers bhi lene gaya to bohot mushkil se mile pls forgive me pls

Nandini forgave manik n took flowers n chocolate from him n then they sat down tangling their fingers n manik removed the specs from her eyes n opened her hair which was tied in a messy bun

Manik - so my scientist kitne experiments kiye tumne kal

Nandini - only one n that because professor ne ek stupid ladke ko mera partner bana diya tha jisko basics hi nahi pata the

Manik - its OK nandini ab tum hamesha to full marks to nahi la sakti ho na aur rahi baat wo stupid ladke ki ab har koi to meri nandini ke jaisa intelligent nahi ho sakta

Nandini - acha meri chodho aur batao how was the event

Manik - mmm it was bore to the core

Nandini - why...I thought it would be fun

Manik - are the newcomers were just roaming around us n that lead heroin of the movie wo to bas mere hi peeche ghum rahi thi...I don't know why

Nandini - because Mr malhotra tum ho itni smart handsome aur talented ki har koi tumhari attention grab karne ki koshish karenga

Manik - acha

Nandini - hmm...oh shit I forgot

Manik - what happened

Nandini - chalo room me

Manik got excited hearing the word room n smirked - wow nandini room me...kya karne ka irada hai

Nandini - what nonsense manik...bas chalo mere saath

Nandini took manik in her room n showed him her new experiment n manik was surprised as she has repaired his star lamp which nandini gifted him during diwali party n which he broked a long time ago...manik just turned her around n kissed without giving her a chance to say anything n she got shocked at first n then she also gave in with equal passion n love...they didn't want to brake the kiss but after some minutes they broke the kiss n were panting heavily... Nandini turned around n manik back hugged her kept his chin on her shoulder

Manik - I love u so so much nandini

Nandini - I love u too manik

Manik - kaise kar leti ho tum ye sab

Nandini - are ye to bohot easy tha n look i have covered it with a net n inside their r fireflies n tum agar chaho to isse bina electricity ke bhi pure time glow karte dekh sakte ho...ha but abhi utna nahi dikhenga coz abhi subah hai but during night na it will look damn good


Manik - u know iske tutne ke baad I felt really guilty but ab tumhari wajah se I won't feel that gulit anymore coz my star has given it light

Nandini - acha manik u forgot to bring our hope tree...maine tumhe sirf 2 din ke liye apne pass rakhne diya but had hoti hai tumne usse 1 week apne saath rakh liya

Manik - acha I promise aaj raat ko main wapas tumhe de dunga

Nandini - no kal college me de dena

Manik - why

Nandini - woh I have to prepare for my test that's why

Manik - what yaar nandini tum dinbhar to padhti ho raat ko nahi padongi to kuch thodi na honga

Nandini - manik u know na mujhe top karne ki adat hai

Manik - OK fine...acha nandini tum next week free ho kya

Nandini - ha main free to hu but Electromagnetism professor kabhi bhi surprise test le sakte hai

Manik - ye tumhare professor ki to ek din main band Baja dunga kitne shock test deta hai

Nandini - are unko Jane do n u tell me kya hua

Manik - woh actually next week fab5 r going to perform for a concert in Mangalore n I want u to come with me n tum amms se bhi mil paongi

Nandini - waise to I would love to come but pehle college ka time table dekhna padenga n then leave letter dena honga

Manik - ha toh u don't worry main sab handle kar lunga

Nandini - no no no pls tum kuch bhi mat karna n then agar tum college aa gaye to sabko pata chal jayenga that...

Manik - that I m the love of your life aur Jo chup chup ke apni girlfriend se milta hai

Nandini - n fir media humare peeche pad jayengi n I don't want that

Manik - don't worry nandini aisa kuch bhi nahi honga

Nandini - I know tum Jo ho mere saath

Manik smiled at her answer n then both of them lie down on bed nandini resting her head on his chest while manik was creasing her hair

Manik - I don't feel like going to college today

Nandini - manik u daily say this line

Manik - but I mean it coz I want to stay with u all the time

Nandini - even I like to spend time with u manik but abhi tumhara last year khatam hone me sirf kuch hi weeks bache hai then u will be a graduate

Manik - I just can't wait for the college to get finished then I'll be able to spend much more time with u

Nandini - oh hello college tumhara khatam honga mera nahi

Manik - I don't care...n waise bhi I know how to spend time with u very well

Nandini - manik tum fail hone ka plan to nahi kar rahe ho na...

Manik laughed - what no...not like that I mean to say space mera hi to hai ab college khatam ho ya na ho no one can stop me from coming their anytime

Nandini - acha to tum to fir mere saath class me bhi baith jaonge haina

Manik - of course

Nandini - of course ke bache abhi batati hu tumhe

Nandini got up n started tickling manik n he rolled n the bed laughing
N trying to stop nandini n both of them were laughing n enjoying so much that the noise was spreading all over the house when Chachi loudly asked nandini

Chachi - beta nandu tu uth gayi kya aur koi hai kya tere saath

Nandini stopped tickling manik n kept her hand on his mouth n answered - nahi Chachi WO main TV dekh rahi hu na to uski awaz hai

Manik removed her hand in shock n said - r u crazy tunhare room me TV nahi hai

Chachi - hain par beta nandu tere room me to TV nahi hai

Nandini - woh mera matlab hai mobile me online videos dekh rahi hu

Chachi - acha theek hai tu jaldi neeche tayar hokar aa ja fir manik bhi ata hi honga tujhe lene

Nandini - ji chachi

Manik - nandini tum jhoot bolti hi kyu ho ur really bad in lying n TV ye bhi koi bahana hai

Nandini - acha tum ye sab chodho n just go

Manik - let's spend time at my place na today pls

Nandini - no manik u have an important class to attend n tumhe aaj office bhi to Jana hai

Manik - these things r not so important for me aur ek din ke liye nahi jayenge to koi farak nahi padenga

Nandini - manik hum thodi der ke baad to fir se Milne hi wale hai ab woh college ho ya ghar kya farak padta hai

Manik - fine as u wish

Nandini - ab tum ghussa mat ho

Manik - no I m not angry

Nandini hugged him n said - manik I don't care where we r as long as we both r together

Manik broke the hug n kissed all over her face cutely n then he got up from the bed n offered his hand n she held it n got up n slide her arms around his neck n pecked on his cheeks

Manik - OK I should leave now...tum ready ho jao I'll come to pick u up in 1hr

Nandini - ok...come soon

Then manik pecked on her cheeks n left quietly without letting anyone know then nandini got ready n came downstairs to have breakfast n greeted good morning to everyone n went to kitchen

Nandini - wow chachi ye kaunsi dish hai...dekhne me to bohot achi hai

Chachi - Chinese samosa aur sirf dekhne me hi nahi khane me bhi bohot tasty hai

Nandini - Chinese samosa ye kaunsi dish hai kabhi na sunni na Dekhi

Chachi - arre iske andar noodles ki filling hai isiliye Chinese samosa

Nandini - lao do Chachi main sabko serve karti hu

Chachi got confused with nandini behaviours as she helps her but never comes in kitchen early in the morning n she don't even like to cook n she never served everybody randomly in fact she don't even eat breakfast properly n hurry to go to college

Chachi held nandini hand n said - kya baat hai nandu aaj tu itni shant lag rahi hai aur aaj tujhe jaldi nahi ho rahi hai Jane ki

Nandini - nahi Chachi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai WO bas aaj main jaldi ready ho gayi na isiliye aur abhi tak manik bhi lene nahi aya to Maine socha apko help karti hu

Chachi smiled at her n cupped her face with one hand n said - nahi beta theek hai aur tu jake baith main lekar ati hu waise bhi tu din bhar padhti rehti hai jaa aram se baith

But nandini insisted n took the tray from chachi hand n placed the dish n table n chacha made faces looking at the dish when he got to know that its a Chinese samosa...then everyone sat n they were hesitating to eat the dish as chachi experiment with food is really dangerous

Chachi - are murthy ji dekh kya rahe ho khao na

Chacha looked at the nandini n rishab n with eyes asked them to taste before him but both of them hide their smile n ignored

Chacha - shanoo ji mujhe na itni bhuk nahi lag rahi hai to main baad me khalunga

Chachi - bilkul nahi tum abhi yahi khaonge warna main fir tumhe khana nahi dungi aur agar dungi bhi to sirf chole milenge

Chacha got scared n unfortunately he had to taste it n the food was really good n then nandini n rishab also started eating it n they really liked it n they complimented chachi then all of them had their breakfast n manik came n horned n nandini went saying bye to everyone n sat next to manik giving him a Peck on his cheek n they left for college

Pls do comment n tell me what u liked
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
loved the story
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice Update.
Continue Soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yaa plz cont
its amazingg... đŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its awesome dude .. I just love the story ... ...plz continue

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