'WHEN MANIK MET NANDINI'(Ch-11 UPTD; 2/8/15, PG:41)

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#121

awesome part...so finally goa trip is gonna begin...
loving the way u shaping up the characters...so finally navya and cabir and abhi and mukti met...!!!
so new relations r slowly developing...
eagerly waiting for manan scenes...
u penned so beautifully...loving this story a lot
continue soon
take care

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devika

@suv-kriyaansh

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

wow.. awesome update

so manik is jealous of aryamann ? sooo cuteee 😉

cant wait for the trip... i hpe this trip will give us manan

update sooonnn...

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BlueJayFire

@BlueJayFire

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Totally love the pace of your story and how you are capturing each and every feeling..The blushing..the jealously..the unknown feeling of attraction between them..very nice..and feel like watching all the episodes from the beginning...Awesome interaction between friends Navya and Nandu..how little things matter to keep us going..Keep it coming...You have a very thoughtful writing skill..

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OhMeriJaan

@OhMeriJaan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Lovely update!

I am so loving the way you have conceptualised Manan in this! So different from the real them!Their unknown feelings for each other and the way you have portrayed it is very nice!

Also love the different bond btn the four-Nandu, Navya, Abi n Aryamann!

Super excited for the Goa trip now!

Update real soon!😃

And thanks tons for the pm!!🤗

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rithanya

@rithanya

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Awsm update
Manik feeling jealous of aaryaman was so looking
Continue soon

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

amazing...
beautifully written...
slowly new relations developing ... our MaNan too
... manan scenes...
thank you for the beautiful story...😊
continue soon

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Wow...such a beautiful story

Lovely...it's going so well

Manan were so nice...adorable

Manik such a sweet heart...he cared so much everyone his employees n in this ff his bonding with his mom...so good liked it!!!! Nandu as alwys so cute...her little funny mistakes...aww

Perfect girl Nandini n handsome boy Manik...awsumm

Manik helped nandu to get rid of aadi...superbbb manik called aadi as her elder brother...haha 👏

Sowly slowly they both r falling for each other😉

Very beautifully written😛... great

Eagerly waiting for goa trip...update soon