Okay...so finally uh updated...
I m really glad dat uh updated..
Da wait actually pissed me off...
As I hav said before also...
Dat dis ff of urs z actually very close to my heart...
Wenever ...I read it...I actually feel jitters in ma heart...
It's an amazing feeling...
Da update waz super awsum..
I really liking da slow n steady step of falling for each other..
Or I shud say...manik falling for his beloved wife..
I really liked la last two paragraphs of ur 12b..update...
Da depthness of da words...took my heart away...
And I fell for ur ff once again..
Da middle descriptions dat uh give...
Z really worth reading...
Well done...uh deserve acclodes...
Now as uh asked for suggestion...
I really wanna say dat I want to see da possessive side of Manik...
Till now nandu z alwaz available for her...be it at night in his arm or for his any other nessicity...
I want to see dat aggressive jealous side of manik...
Plzz do show it ..,..it will really be very fun to watch..
Lets see how he will react wen she z not available...
Or wen any other person z showing a great interest in her...
Den at dat tym how Manik will react..
As uh have described dat he haz anger issue...
Really wanna see dat jealous possessive side...
Rest I will leave it to you..
I kno uh r a fab writer...uh will definitely right sumting brilliant...
N yes one more thing...
I hope uh will update soon...and will not make us wait longer...plzzz do so...
Thnx for dis lovely update.. Take care
Seher Hone Ko Hai
