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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW AWESOME UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE ON DAILY BASE I CANT WAIT TO READ NEXT CHAPTER

THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIAGHOSH

WOW AWESOME UPDATE

PLEASE UPDATE ON DAILY BASE I CANT WAIT TO READ NEXT CHAPTER

THANKS FOR THE PM

yeah :) i 'll update daily #😊thanks for reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
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YOUR_DARKNESS_LIGHTS__
MY_WORLD
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I was scared i am going to take help of a person because of which all this is happening !! Will this be turned out to be a foolish step or this will really work !!! I saw him i saw manik i just ran and hugged him tight so tight you cant even imagine !! He too hugged me back !!
Manik~kya hua
Nandani~(crying hard)manik wo..wo.manik !!
MANIK~first you stop crying okay !!!
Manik made nandani sit on a bench wiped her tears ! Kissed on her forehead and thn carresing her cheeks asked
Manik-tell nandani what happened
Nandani~manik .(she told him about the whole incident that happened in the forest ) manik i dnt know why did i come here took help from you but please save me i promise i will never tell this to anybody please please manik

Manik~shhh..okay you are safe with me !! Okay !! Calm down ! Just calm down !
Nandani~but who was he ? Didnt you send him?

Manik pov -
No nandani i didnt send him but i know who was he ! Cabir ! But if he was cabir then he must not leave you like this !! You are not safe !! I have to be with you !!
Pov ended-

Manik~i didnt send him i also dont know him !!

Nandani~what if he cones again..plss manik .help me

Manik~do one thing pack your bags !! You will be living with me !

Nandani~what but i cant

Manik~dont you trust me

Nandani pov:
Dont know why but yeah i trust you manik ! I trust you more than i trust myself ! what is happening to me ?? Oh god !! Why i trust him so much!
Pov ended

Nandani~yes ! I am ready ! I will come with you

Manik~so do 1 thing dont go home take your books and and other stuff clothes and all you will get at my place !!

Nandani~okay !! But what will i say to mom and my family

Manik~thats your business ! I am not responsible for that

(Nandani called her family and lied about a college trip she took her stuff and was waiting at the college gate for manik)

Nandani~ye manik ! Manners naam ki cheez nhi hai ek ladki ko aise intezaar karate hai kyA

Manik~ek to mai tumhari help kar raha ho Aur tum !!

Nandani~help? Seriously ye sab tumhari vajah se hi hua hai

Manik~acha !! Vo kon tha jo bol raha tha manik manik please help me pls help me
(While saying this manik laughed like a small child and nandani just smiled looking at him so lovingly)

Nandani~pov
Oh lord !! Ye kya ho gaya hai mujhe mai smile kar rahi hon aur wo bhi manik ko dekh ke !!
Pov ended

Manik~chale ab !!

Nandani~haan !! Chalo !!

(In the car)

Nandani:: waise mAnik you know you are good at heart

Manik:: what ??thats just an illusion ! I lost that goodness long time ago

Nandani::people can give us bad memories but they cant kill our humanity

Manik:: seriously !! Then watch out !!
(Manik asked the driver to stop he came out of the car nandani too came out mAnik took out his gun and shooted that person! Nandani cryed at the sight of driver she was now really scared of manik)

manik: now miss murthy you must have understood that i like killing innocent souls ! ;)

Nandani::how could i ?? Noo i am definately not going with you !! Yes i cant

MAnik: oh god !! Nandani listen
Nandani was constantly crying and keep on reapeating no no manik i cant no i cant manik was now frusturated he slapped her really hard ! Shut up ! You are safe with me got damnit ! I wont kill you nor i would let anyone do that !

____________________________________nandani sat in the car whole way she was quiet she was scared she was left with no option but to go with manik they entered malhotra mansion it was really a big place there were gaurds at the gates full security was there they checked nandani and manik AND THEN they entered !!

nandani entered maniks place ! Her life is really messed up !! She is doing what manik is saying to her !! Just following the directions !! What her life has stored for her ? Will her life be sorted ? To know wait for the next part !

For all readers who read it ! Thanks a lot for reading if you liked it and want me to write more please dont think and just comment ! Criticism is welcome !

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow that was amazing. But why is manik killing innocent people is he out of his mind or what. Well manik and cabir's cherecters scare me alot. Bechari nandu phas gai in sab mai.Continue soon and plz pm me next time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI

Wow that was amazing. But why is manik killing innocent people is he out of his mind or what. Well manik and cabir's cherecters scare me alot. Bechari nandu phas gai in sab mai.Continue soon and plz pm me next time

well in the story manik is a gangster 😉 and thanks for reading i will definately pm you next time 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
but short update that's why please update today and that also long update

aur manik ne kamokha driver ko kiyu mar diya ?

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...nice story...!!!
read all chapters in a go
continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love your stry alot
Plzcont soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
thanks for PM
I think that driver was came to kill manik but manik killed him nd lied to nandini about that nd I think he is secret agents or officer...
don't know what is in store
let's see what happens?
till that story is written in beautiful manner. .
keep it up. .

Love,
Samruddhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awesome it's really interesting. Manik style is just awesome. Eagerly waiting for ur update. Take care
Edited by arshnz - 10 years ago

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