MANAN FF:CAN IT BE REAL.................part 16 pg 25 5/10/15 - Page 11

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Originally posted by: NAVYA64

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part 13
there was a pause
manik shook his shoulder and dislodged pryia's and on his shoulder...
and he stepped towards nandu with a straight face
nandu was worried
manik: hey... (With a smile)
and nandu's worry was gone...
nandu: hey
manik took her hand in his n intertwined their fingers

manik: pryia U remember nandini...
pr: ( wicked look) ya soha told me that u are dating her...

manik: ( no hesitation ) ya...SHE IS MY GIRL FRIEND...
( he shot a glare to aryaman ... as if to remind him also)
nandu(smiling): that's right he's with me ( she gave a glare to pryia) . . . .

the door opened again and everybody came in with soha...
soha: ok guys lets play truth and dare...

manik: ohh come on it's a childish game...
soha: not if u play it right ok every one lets sit
manik: ( whispered ) nandu its ok we can go home if u are not comfortable
nandu: no its ok otherwise people will think something is wrong
manik: hmm
manik took nandu and both of them sat on a bean bag
manik put his hand around nandu in a protective way nandu felt comfortable

soha: ok let me explain everyone can choose one person for truth or dare
U cannot repeat
soha: ok I'll start... nandini...
nandu wasn't surprised at all she knew that soha THE WITCH will choose her
Manik gave her a smile ( I'm with u )
nandu: truth...
soha: ok So tell us how long u have been in love with manik?
nandu went numb She looked towards manik ...
he was staring at her but before nandu can look away manik tightened his grip on her shoulder and rub it a bit to make her feel comfortable
nandu decided that whatever happen she is not going to lie about that ...
soha: come on nandu answer we are w8ing Or should we consider u don't love him...
manik shoot a angry glare at soha
nandu: as long as I've known him since school
soha: ohhh how pathetic
manik: no its not EVEN I FEEL THE SAME WAY...
nandu's started at manik then looked away quickly
nandu: ok my turn pryia
pryia: dare.
nandu: ok u have to eat a whole big bar of chocolate

nandu knew that pryia is that health conscious dieting type
Manik winked at nandu they both giggled
pryia: no way...
manik: come on yar its ur dare...
pryia: (fuming ) f9 she ate the chocolate and after that ran outside to get warm water everybody laughed
soha: I don't think she is coming back
pryia came back rushing ...
pr: who said I'm not coming back ok manik
manik: hmmm dare

pr: ok off all the girls in this room who do u think is the prettiest one? Kiss her?
nandu was shocked manik stood up went in the middle
manik: the most prettiest hmmm its ofcourse nandini
nandu blushed
pr: come on be honest don't take her name cause she is ur girl friend
manik: no it is true She is the most beautiful girl in the whole universe
her eye are like stars, her long black hairs , her cute smile ,
and her cute little nose that become red when she fight
nandu was stunned and started blushing
soha: ohhh hero u gona right a whole book on her beauty come on
pr: hey w8 kiss her 1st
nandu was blushing but she was scared also

B.G Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke Mere
sapno ke khidki pe aa gaya Aate jaate

phir mere dil ke Inn haathon mein woh
khat pakda gaya Pyar ka... lafzo mein

rang hai pyar kaBahara bahara Hua dil
pehli baar ve Bahara bahara Ke chain
toh huwa farar ve Bahara bahara Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

manik started walking towards nandu...
All eyes on manik and nandu.
nandu's heart beat was super fast manik was giving her a passionate look
He came near and bent towards her face she can feel his breath on her face

but manik just sweetly kiss on her cheek and ( whispered in her ear)

manik: its ok ur highness

then he turned. and sat next to her leaving nandu all blushing
manik :ok now my turn
manik: aryaman...
arayman: dare...
manik: ok u have to kiss soha...
soha: what the...
arayman: ok cool...
aryaman got up and went near soha he bent to kiss her...

Manik whispered to nandu...
manik: lets leave
nandu manik got up and they were about to leave when soha got up
soha: where r u going b.day boy

manik: today is my b.day so have a dinner with my family
soha: ok then u go but ur nandini should stay...

manik: she is my girl and its obvious that

she is chief guest manik grabbed nandu and before soha could say anything they rushed out

nandu: manik. (no response )
nandu: manik. u angry with me
manik:hmmm
nandu: m sorry manik that soha she just forcefully put me into it i know u don't like parties. all my fault she was almost crying
manik started laughing looking at nandu tensed face
manik: come on girl friend its ok m not angry but i'll be angry if u don't come with me
nandu: where i thought u r going home...
manik: its only 8:00 pm now we have to reach for dinner at 9 but before that i want to take u somewhere...
nandu: manik but...
manik: no but u want me to be angry
nandu: no ...no my prince charming
manik: that my girl lets go...

manik took nandu to a ice-cream parlor
manik: ok here u go with ur choco chip caramel fudge

nandu: and u ...
manic(cutely): helooo. its ice-cream date so we are eating in one bowl...
nandu: ohhh I-C-E-C-R-E-A-M date... hehehehehehehe
manik: g han...
they both started eating laughing and talking

B.G
Woh kabhi dike zameen pe Kabhi woh
chand pe Yeh... nazar kahe usse yahan
Mein rakhloo bandh ke Ek saans mein
Dhadkano ke paas mein Haan paas mein
ghar banaye Hai bhoole yeh jahaan

Bahara bahara Hua dil pehli baar ve Bahara
bahara Ke chain toh huwa farar ve Bahara bahara

manik dropped nandu home after dinner ...
nandu: ok bye manik...
she turned to leave manik pulled her and hugged her tight
manik: this is my best birthday ever and u made it special
nandu blushed...
nandu: hmmm after all m Cinderella and u are prince charming
manik: ahhh han...
bye nandu g.nite...

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It was saturday so nandu was sleeping soundly when suddenly cabir came in he jumped on the bed and started shaking nandu

Cabir : get up sleepy head chacha is here
Nandu : come on cabir... let me sleep plzzzx
Cabir : Idiot chacha is here

Suddenly nandu jumped out of bed
Nandu : what..
cabir : ya... lets go u know na he will not give the present unless u come
Nandu : ok give me 2 min

Nandu freshened up... She wore usual shorts and t-shirt
Nandu : ok lets go bro... They both raced downstairs ...chacha chachi were already on the dinning table...
chacha :slow down racers Both cabir and nandu hugged him missed u chacha...

chacha :missed u too my champ and princess .
Cabir : ok chacha now plzz my gift...
Nandu : ya plz...
chacha: ok but my superstar is not here yet...arre manik is not here yet...

manik's father and mr.murthy were good friends when mr.malhotra died chacha

always stood beside manik he always treated him just like cabir
cabir: come on chacha now that's not fair if he didn't come that mean we also have to w8...
chacha: ya ...
nandu: chacha...
cabir: ok then lets call him...
chachi: cabir today is Saturday at least let him spend a day with his mom...
cabir: chachi but...
chachi:no but u can call him in eve...
cabir nandu sat on there chairs and started eating quietly.
chacha saw them like that...
chacha ok i'll give u ur gift on one condition...
nandu & cabir: really ok ...what...
chacha: actually my car is very dirty so how about a car wash...
cabir: nooo yar chacha ...
nandu: come on chacha...
chacha: ok if u don't want then w8 for superstars arrival ...

nandu & cabir : okkk

both nandu and cabir went out side with there tools ready ...
nandu: wow bro the car does look dirty
cabir: hmmm let get started...
nandu: let me open the water hoses
smurffy also came out wagging his tale...
nandu: ok get aside m opening the hose...
suddenly smurffy came infront nandu quickly moved the pipe to the other side of the drive way nandu didn't noticed but someone was standing there... by the time she closed the hose it was too late nandu noticed it was aryaman all drenched with water
nandu quickly ran towards him
nandu: ohhh m very sorry i didn't see u
arayman: hey dude u soaked me...
nandu: ok w8 here...
nandu ran inside and brought a towel for him when she came back she saw aryaman took of his wet shirt and put it on the rope for it to dry... nandu felt awkward to see him like this... nandu: m sorry... so what are u doing here? and how did u find my home address
arayman: ohhh no i didn't know that u lived here actually
was just passing by saw u so thought to say hi...
cabir: hey ...
arayman: hey dude so what u guys r doing
cabir: just playing chess ...can't u see washing the car...
arayman: ohhh can i help to...
cabir: ok...
nandu gave cabir a wana kill u look no which he just smiled sheepishly
cabir gave aryaman the water hose... aryaman smirked naughtily n moved towards nandu...

nandu: aryaman don't even think ab it... aryaman don't u dare...

aryaman turned on the hose and started chasing nandu... the driveway was all wet nandu was running suddenly she slipped and dashed in someone's chest he hold her elbow before she could fall they both were caught in water spray... it was none other than manik
manan EYE LOCK...

nandu shoved her wet hairs behind laughing manik was staring at aryaman
he wasn't smiling
arayman: opsss! sorry i just stopped by to help the wash the car
manik put his hands around nandu's waist
manik: may be i can help to...
he was still holding nandu close to him... even i am wet now ( he gave nandu a sweet smile) cabir stared three of them... confused
manik: hey girlfriend... ( he gave her a wet squishy hug... she hid her smile in his chest)

manik(whispered): i was jogging at the park i saw aryaman coming this way ... so i thought to come and make sure he don't bother u hope that's ok ur highness...
nandu: sure at least u have a good reason mr. charming...

manik nandu and cabir were having their usual film music notes talks where aryaman was totally pissed off...
suddenly chachi came out she saw aryaman half bare nd wet...

chachi:who is he nandu?
nandu manik and cabir who finished there work already were now washing their hands... nandu: chachi. he .. is a college friend...
chachi:ok. come on kids lunch is ready...
arayman: wow even i was hungry...
cabir: aww... u r staying too i thought ur mum will be for u on lunch table
manik give cabir a( thank GOD look)...
arayman: ( sad) ya i was just going home
chachi:if u want...
manik: come on chachi his mum wl be w8ing...
aryaman gave manik a glare said bye to them and left...
nandu was quite she was confused all this time... what to answer...
cabir: thank GOD u r here dude otherwise we had to w8 untill 2moro for our gifts...
nandu: ya...
manik: gift ...what gift ...oh that mean chacha is here
manik: man why u never called me ...
manik ran inside nandu and cabir followed manik came in and hugged chacha...
manik: what yar chacha why u never told me that u r back..
chacha arreee superstar because. i knew u will come by urself...
chachi:ok enough of this hug and all lets eat.
...
cabir&nandu: we want our gift 1st...
chachi:no after lunch...
nandu cabir made and annoying face ...
at the lunch table all off them were happy chacha was telling them ab his trip
finally they finished their lunch...
nandu: ok chacha its to much...
cabir: i want my gift nw
chacha ok ...shano G give my bag...
chichi brought the bag...

chachi:here...
cabir: m so excited...
chacha: ok so the curious guy ( cabir) here is ur gift...
cabir: dude the packet is big lets see...
nandu and manik were looking excitedly tooo see whats inside...
cabir: OMG...

chacha: its the new electronic drums chacha i know m little drummer wanted it

cabir hugged him...
manik: come on yar now my turn...
nandu: no me 1st...
manik: come on yar nandu .plzzz
he make a puppy face ... nandu wanted to pull his cheeks
nandu: ok ... what ever
manik: thnx girl... he stoped half way...
cabir and nandu gave him a WHAT THE HELL look...
chacha:ok superstar this is for u...
manik: yar why my box is so small ok let me check manik quickly opened it manik got this big smile on his face...
FLASH BACK... ( keeping in mind in my story manik is not so rich will reveal that later)
manik ,cabir and chacha in the mall cabir and chacha were busy buying some shirts where as manik was just staring at one rolex watch...
chacha: hey super star u want that..
manik didn't noticed that chacha was behind him...
manik: no chacha i was just looking but one day when i'll be super star i''ll by this... PRESENT DAY...

manik: chacha this the same...
chacha: yes its the same watch why do u want to be super star when u r a superstar already...
manik hugged chacha ... since his father died
chacha is the person who treated him just like his own son
nandu: ok cut the emotional scene now my turn...
chacha: ohhh ya he put his hand in the bag trying to search something ...
cabir: what happened chacha...
chacha: i think i forgot to bring nandus gift...
cabir and manik exchanged a glance ... they knew what will happen now...

nandu: its ok chacha... nandu ran up to her room...

TO BE CONT...
WAIT N WATCH

Loved the chapter very much!
Manik kissed nandu on cheek
so sweet!
This aryaman is a trouble
but liked the way Manik threw aryaman out of the house
he was the haddi between kabab
chacha's and Manik's bonding is like a father-son
I think nandu's gift will be in her room
something big!

Awesome update...
I lyked how manik walked upto nandu n introduced her to priya... The truth n dare game was fun...
Hehehhe ice cream date...awww
Wow chacha n chachi r here...
Car wash... N then dat aryamaan uff...
Thnk god manik cme...
The gifts wow...
What will nandu do???
Thnkz 4 the pm

Superb part...
loved it...
waiting for next..