ROOMMATES FRIENDSHIP FF (part 1on pg2)14/6

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<font size="4">FRIENDSHIP BASED FF</font>

While watching a show..this idea struck in my mind...so I thought of writing it..
I have went many awesome ff is and ss...on this forum ...many of them r based on manan...so thought a new thing...so its purely based on friendship..and..one more thing soon to blossom in love...so I hope u enjoy it...
It's light hearted comedy also...
NO SEPARATION...NO SPACE ...NO NYONIKA...NO FAB 5 ...NO DRAMA...NO TRAGEDY...BAS FRIENDS...

don't misunderstand it as to be a show like F.R.I.E.N.D.S...its purely
PROLOGUE


Hi everyone...u all must be thinking who am I ...
Actually..i m actually Sam...u all must be thinking who is Sam???..Sam I owner of a small dhabba owner..know to them as Sam's katta...now who is "them"???..
This them includes..the well known music composer Mr.manik Malhotra...his lovely sweet and intelligent among everyone wife Nandini...then Dhruv ...well Dhruv ..in their words "scholar" and chubby sweet yet sexy..wife alya...and then Mukti..do damn hot...voh not in that sense..meaning is that...the girl who talks only with her hand..and her unexpected love story ..with our kanjoos Mr.abhimanyu Thakur...and the weirdest Jodi..mr.cabir...for world rj beera..but at house Mukti's punching bag...and joker of their house and Navya..uff..cabir's"madhubala" and bit annoying with zero G.K ...so I m going tell u the story of this ROOMMATES...who were just pieces of puzzle..who got completed when they met here...at room no.405...so lets enjoy journey from unknown to friends to besties to life partners..
In this flat...that one bhk...(everyone belongs to middle class family...)
CHARACTERS


Manik Malhotra: In short MM, a musician or composer ..who gives his music ad agency..
. (Manik is different one from the show)...he loves his life ..his guitar..and his swing yes swing ...the swing were no one other then him can sit and well sarcastic commenter for world Nandini's husband

Dhruv vedant: "scholar" a employee in I.T sector ...intelligent among all of them and flat owner...who also enjoys his life and job ...and bestie of Manik...and also the rent collector ..he has reserved place his arm chair where no one allowed to sit..on phone Nandini's husband(why I meant this slowly will be revealed)

Cabir Dhawan: Rj beera ..at well known..station 91.5 FM ..joker of the.house and full time entertainer...
Very sweet guy...and consider Nandini as his sister...

Abhimanyu Thakur: An arts student..a big time lazy ..who just wants to eat ..enjoy and sleep..he left his village came here for his education actually to move from his boring family..

Mukti Vardhan : Strong headed ..short tempered who dislike boys..and tomboy ...who super saviour of women's rights...and she is a jr.artist..struggling artist...

Alya Saxena: A fashionsta...and cute chubbly bubbly girl...who separated from family..coz of her parents divorce issues..who can't hear a word against her fashion sense...in a worshipper of THE MANISH MALHOTRA

Navya naveli : Works caf @ love..and simple girl ...enjoys her life and independence..and have less IQ level ( 😃 )

Nandini Murthy: Married to guy named Raghav..who has left her who lands up with these roommates...revealed in parts...they both one connection ..he just lands up to collect money from her account..as his dad's send in her account...a best chef..and only cook of their house...a sweet girl and who can't open up to anyone..biggest strength her tears..

Other characters

Mr.kulkarni : Chairman of their society...and hates these people..just wants to throw these people out

Soha : Have crush on Manik..whom she calls manu..and also called as prem chopra of their society these roommates calls

Raghav: Nandini's husband ..and stays with his girlfriend nisha(who knows he is married)..abhi and cabir's jiju..manik's headache..and Dhruv's ignorance..

Kinjal: A Gujarati girl..who is abhi English teacher plus his love interest..and hates Mukti due to her boyishness'...and

Here its goes if u want me to write it plzz comment..i know I have not wrote my manan ff...i will soon but plzz do comment and let me know..you loved it...

Thank u ..
Love ..epicangel(niyati) 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is such a lovely concept
I am so very looking forward to it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept...
Continue soon...

Pm me if u can...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii
niyati
awesome concept
plz continue it nd pm me also

love,
Samruddhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyy its quite interesting. ...
a different concept...
I really pike it bt I jus don like 1 thing...
Y do dey have to belong to a middle class family??
I jus din like dis oder than tat I love it... n waiting fr d nxt part
srry if u felt bad... I was jus trying to b frank!
Update soon... n I love yur oder ff!! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazzy_girl1999

Heyy its quite interesting. ...
a different concept...
I really pike it bt I jus don like 1 thing...
Y do dey have to belong to a middle class family??
I jus din like dis oder than tat I love it... n waiting fr d nxt part
srry if u felt bad... I was jus trying to b frank!
Update soon... n I love yur oder ff!! ❤️


Bcoz..they all r going to stay in a rented apartment...u ll see what their friendship blooms..into..how..with small adjustment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow that's sounds great
cont soon
Plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The plot seemed very interesting..
Plz post the first part waiting for it eagerly..
just a little confused, as of now Manik n nandini dono each other right?? She s raghav wife ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1


So guys here the story starts...u all know me...arey Sam baba...okay..here we go
It's a normal day for everyone..but soon to be turned nightmare someone...and dream for someone
At apartment

Dhruv: Yaar abhi jaldi nikal yaar...office keliye late Ho jayuga..yaar plzz
(shouting outside the bathroom)
Abhi comes out...
Abhi: What a relief...u can go(to annoyed Dhruv)
Dhruv: Move u idiot...(and enters)

Manik: Arey yaar cabir...yeh sweet si smell..voh bhi jasmine waley shampoo Ki kaha se aarahi hai...
(stringing his guitar )
Cabir:(enters in Ranbir Kapoor's style) ..arey haa dewane...(touches abhi's hair)
Abhi is trying to shh them both
Mukti:(comes with empty shampoo bottle) abhi..u used it..no
Abhi nods in no
Mukti: Agar main to tere liye hi lya thi...(grinning her teeth)
Abhi: Sach main..u r so sweet.. I only used it...aahh..(Mukti starts hitting him)
Mukti: Tumhe thodsi aakal hai bhi ya nahi...kitni mahgi thi...idiot...ab main kya use karungi...

Dhruv: So ladies what's in breakfast..
Navya:kuch bhi nahi..
Dhruv: Kuch bhi nahi..god
Manik: Manik baba ..ke pass iska solution hai...baby(cups his chin)
Alya: Baba..plzz kuch toh batao...
Manik: Sam ka katta ..zinda badh..
Cabir: Lets hit it...

At Sam's katta..
Manik: Sam..chal 7plate laga...aanda burji ke..aur 5cup coffee...fast jaldi...
Sam: Okay(noting down)..chalo nikalo..850..
Cabir: Abey..saale..khane se pehley paise..
Alya: Aur kis baat ke 850...we don't eat much..we r on diet..
Dhruv: Aur haa..kal hi toh..humney1308 bharey they...ha
Abhi: Haaa..
Sam: Woh apka bill tha..2158...so apne aadha hi bhara hai..
Manik: Yaar dosto se ghaddari...yaar chal...(everyone please him..but he is no mood)
Mukti: Manik!!! She shuts him up) Sam..hum tumhe soha se intro karva saktey hai..u know voh humarey..manik..sry..manu ke bff hai..toh phir..
Sam: Deal done...munna inka order serve kar...

Sam pov..(@present) ha..soha..voh mera pehla pyar thi...arey rukiye...ab Bari hai Manik ke Nandini Ki entry Ki...
Pov end


@evening
Everyone comes home and r astonished to see their house..it's clean..
As Mukti opens the door..
Cabir:(touches her forehead) mera he-man thik hai na..ghar itna clean
Dhruv: I m impressed ..
Mukti: Yeh main nahi kiya
Manik: Toh..
Navya: Kahi bhoot toh nahi..hey matarani..
Mukti: Chup..madhubala..

Nandini comes outside
Manik is just lost in her

...manik's pov a chudidaar with perfect fitting..a pair of earrings..makes her look elegant..and her bit swallonen eyes..wait swollen eyes...is she crying but why...and that mangalsutr..gives her complete look..wait mangalsutr...
Cabir: Yeh kon hai..
Mukti: Meri friend..aur aaj se yeh yahi rahegi...
Dhruv: What..aur yeh decision kisne liya..excuse me..i m the owner of the house...
Mukti:(in convincing tone) Dhruv ji..yeh ghar Nandini ne clean kiya hai..aur toh aur..she made dinner for us..
Navya: Really..
Abhi: Toh pehley kha lete fir discussion kareygey...
Everyone loves and relishes the food..
Dhruv: So decided
Manik: Pack ur bag..u r leaving..
Dhruv: Ur staying here..
Manik: Voh married hai..
Dhruv: What..tum married Ho..
Nandini: Ha..
Navya: Where's ur husband??
Nandini: (sobbing )actually he left me...i mean main ghar chodkar ayi Hu..
Alya: Maltab..
Nandini: Humari shaadi ko just a month Hua hai...i mean not a month..just two days..
Dhruv: What kind of calculation is that??
Nandini: Nxt day of r marriage he left..saying he had work pending..uske dad ne bhaut force karne key baadh..he came to take me ..aur phir hum yaha aye..(looks towards Manik)..then jab main unke ghar phauchi...i was shocked he lives with his girlfriend..that bitch Nisha..urgg..she broke my small world..crying (cabir handover a tissue to her)..we had a fight and he selected her instead of me...so main ghar chodkar chali aye..aur phir..
Mukti: I met her on station and I bought her..
Manik: Wow..i salute your kindness Mukti..par yeh yaha nahi rahey Sakti..aur vasey bhi..humney dharamshal nahi khol kar rakhi..damn it
All of them gather and talk at aside..
Alya: She cooks well
Dhruv: Ghar ka khayal bhi rakhti hai..
Abhi: Aur sweet bhi hai..she reminds me of my sister..
Cabir: Chup bey..isliye kinjal..teri gf nahi hai abtak..
Manik: Guys topic..
Dhruv: (declaration tone) mainey...I mean humney..decide kiya hai u will stay with us..
Manik: No..kis aur Ki responsibility hum kyu sambhaley...
Mukti: Manik..bacha..majority wins..
Manik: Fine (and goes outside and brings a beggar inside)


Dhruv: Yeh kon hai???
Manik: My..friend..
Mukti: Aacha..naam kya hai..
Manik: Voh..ha..
Beggar: Kamal..
Alya: Kamal..euu..
Navya:Manik u keep friendship with beggars..
Manik: Yeh yaha hi rahega...
Mukti: No he won't
Manik: Yes tumhari frnd rah Sakti hai..toh he can also..
Nandini: But he is a beggar..
Manik: U r a thief..
Nandini: Excuse me..
Cabir: Manik..bas..yaar..
Manik: She is...tujhe yaad in morning main jab main late hogaya..and I said I lost my wallet..and afterwards I got it
Cabir: Hai..kisne chura tha..a woman and u got it too.
Manik: Ha.she is the woman..
Nandini: Look main kaha tha..it was fallen I just picked it up
Manik:ha..aur usey check kar rahi thi..
Nandini: I wad checking..to check Kiska hai..
Manik: Oh plss
Dhruv: Enough..everyone to bed..now

All girls slept in bedroom and boys in living room with beggar..

Nxt morning..
Everyone wakes up and are busy in their daily chores
Manik: Arey yaar abhi tuney meri ghaadi dheki kya..
Abhi:aarey Manik..tera dost nahi dikhai de raha...
Manik: Voh Gaya hoga..apne kaam par
Navya: Kaam..kya begging..
Manik: At least bhek toh mangta hai..atleast useless tohnahi hai...kiski ke ghar main rahne keliye..
Dhruv: Chill Manik..i don't know where's ur watch..
Manik:(goes towards Nandini) give my watch back
Nandini: I don't know..where its is
Manik: Pehle chori..phit sina chori..seriously..give it back..i know tumne hi churaye hai..thief..
Nandini: Plzz mujhe nahi pata..

Everyone starts quarrelling..
Nandini quietly moves out of house..

Mukti: Nandini no need to be scared of him..(she's no where) Nandini..Nandini..
Manik: Dekha..i said no she's thief...wait main ussey iski saza jarur duga..i m filing complaint against her..
(he leaves with abhi towards police station)


At police station,
Manik: Sir..meri ghadi koh Gaye hai..
Police officer:toh..main dhoodu
Abhi: Matlab..kisney..
Manik: Kisney nahi...uss ladki nay churaye hai..
Police officer: Voh watch. Ko.black belt ..with some diamond studed..gio ka hai..
Manik: Haa..
Police officer: Yeh lo..(hands over watche to him)
Abhi: Sir meri comb bhi kho gayi hai..(Manik shuts him)
Manik: Aur voh chor..
Police officer:yeh.(pointing towards a person) ..wanted thief hai..
Abhi: Manik tera dost..
Police officer: Dost(suspiciously looking at them)
Manik:bye sir..thank u..

At home
Manik is standing guilty
Mukti: Tera dost chor hai..
Manik: Nandini kaha hai..
Alya: We don't know..
Manik runs outside..
Navya: Kaha ja rahe Ho
Manik: Humari roommate ko laney..

He search's her every where..but she's nowhere
Mukti calls him
Mukti: Milil kya bey saley..
Manik: No yaar..main guilt se maar jauga..
Mukti: I think you should check on railway station..
(Manik cut's of the call)

At station
Tc: Ticket dijiye ma'am..
Nandini: Arey main kaha na..nahi hai..(crying)
Tc: Ma'am asa nahi karte..ticket nahi toh..police station chalna padega..
Manik: Nandini..
Nandini looks at him and starts crying more...
Tc: Aap jantey Ho inhe..
Manik: Haa..she is my wife
Nandini nods no..
Tc: Par yeh toh na kahey rahi hai...
Manik: Voh gussa hai..we had a fight..(puts hand on her shoulder) jaan i m sry..plzz
Tc: Ma'am asa nahi kartey..in marriage life chotey motey fighting toh hoti rahti hai...
Manik: Thank u...bye..
Tc leaves
Nandini: I m not ur wife..and I r not my husband..
Manik: Ha..koi ghadha hai na...

At house..
Everyone settles down..
Cabir: Manik..tujhe mere behen kuch kehna hai(pointing towards Nandini)
Manik: Sry..i m really sry Nandini..mujhe voh sab nahi kehna chahey tha..
Nandini: It's okay..
Abhi: Arey..itne jaldi..
Mukti: Kuch toh maang..
Nandini: Okay. will you be my friend..(moves her hand forward)
Mankk: Friends..(they hug)
Dhruv: Guys tooth pado..(all jump to hug )

Manik:so today my treat..at Sam's katta..
(and looks at Nandini to whom he is still holding..and they have eye lock)
Cabir: Ahem ahem(coughing)
and they separate..


Here's first part hope u like it...
Plzz do comment...
And like like it too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii
awesome start
post nxt part soon
This story remind me one serial which is in marathi language Dil dosti duniyadari
thanks for such beautiful update

Love,
Samruddhi

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