Different Manan/ The Unspoken Feelings part 10 on pg 7;21/07

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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

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All three reached nandini's home and left from outside only as they knew she that point wanted to be alone. After talking to her mom for few minutes without letting her know her pain and condition ; soon she was left all alone in her house as her mom went out for work. She rushed into her room and threw her bag on bed and sat there just like a lifeless body, when tears started brimming in her eyes and within a moment she bursted out crying. It was all the Pain that she kept in within her from 7 months which was coming out in the form of tears. She couldn't understand what she should do. She then realised something and opened her cupboard and took out a bag which had a shirt Which was all scribbled with lots of messages. She held that in her hand and sat on the floor. Her eyes were gazed on one message which was from Manik...
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Manik.. Who was her best friend.. Her buddy..!! It took them really a short period of time to achieve that special place in each others lives. The bond they shared was special . Neither of them in their lives had been friends with a guy or a girl before they met each other. That time was special.
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Moments flashed in front of her eyes..!!

7 years ago..!!

Nandini passed her 10th boards and took admission in a new school . She opted for commerce stream.
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[ this Nandini is not a science lover but is really creative ]
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[ We got to knew everyone ; but not our heartthrob . Lets see who is he ]
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MANIK MALHOTRA : - A tall handsome boy of his school who is the crush of almost every girl of the senior section. Senior girls took advantage of their seniority and tried to talk to him and junior girls took advantage of his seniority and try to talk to him . So basically every girl wanted to talk to him at least for once. But he kept himself away from girls and communicated only when he required to . Not that he was arrogant or had attitude but he tried not be over friendly with girls. Good in studies but had par excellence in basketball ; his passion , weakness , strength , everything . Captain of school's basketball team.
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[ yes this Manik is bit different not arrogant not with attitude but definitely with a golden heart ]a

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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Thought to restart it with a hole that u all will like it

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Sanskruti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Hiii

continue plz

PM me for this

Such a beautiful story

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haritha2108

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

awsomeee read all parts in one goo
cont soon

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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PART - 7

Nandini joined the school. It was a totally new atmosphere and a new experience . She tried her best to cop up with the new phase of her life. And she did.2 months passed after joining her the new school and everything seemed to be going perfect. Only one thing was there she didn't made any new friends in these 2 months . She communicated with every classmate but was not able to be friendly with anyone. Everyone had their respective friends , so it was a bit awkward for her to join any group. She had no friends. She sat alone in class and during lunch break she went to the small kids to play with them. That's how Nandini 's new school life was going..!!

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Manik was not her classmate. He was a maths student. He has his two friends Cabir and Dhruv . The trio was together since kindergarten and was really close to each other.
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The two were unaware of each other until one day Navya ; classmate of Nandini approached her just before the classes would start .

Navya Naveli :- Nandini's classmate and a very sweet girl. Only one problem she has ; never thinks before speaking and regrets it afterwards.

"Nandini" ; Navya called her . Nandini turned around and saw Navya standing . She had a wide smile on her face when she saw her .
" hi Navya; Gud morning. " she said to her very joyfully..

"Gud morning ; tum Hume ek baat batao itne din ho Gaye tumhe class mein aaye par tum ab tak akeli rehti ho . Class mein bhi akele baithti ho Aur break mein bhi akele rehti ho. Kya Humara school Pasand nhi aata ya phir yahan ke log .?" Navya asked Nandini in a very concerned manner.

"Aisi koi baat nhi hai Navya school bhi bahut aacha hai Aur yahan ke log bhi it's just ki sabke apne friends hain Aur main Aisi hi kisi ke beech jake usne dosti nhi karna chahti.." Nandini tried to explain Navya.
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"Arre to tumne dekha nahi Kya hum bhi to akele baithte hain.. Bas decide ho Gaya..aaj se tum Humara saath baithogi Aur Humare saath hi rahogi.. Friends..?? " Navya literally ordered Nandini and forward her hand for a hand shake.
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Nandini had a wide smile on her face and was overwhelmed with Navya's words. She too forwarded her hand and completed the hand shake with with extreme joy and that wide smile replied "Friends...!! " .
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Nandini then moved with her bag to Navya's seat and the class started.
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The bell rang and it was now there lunch break.
" Nandini ; chalo hum tumhe kisi se milate hai.. " Navya said to Nandini
"Kisse" Nandini questioned her back..
" arre tum chalo to.." Navya said
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They both were about to exist when Navya almost banged herself into a girl..
"Aaram se .. Aaram se.. Kahan ki jaldi hai..? " asked that girl from Navya.
"Arre hum to tumhare hi pass aa rahe the.. Par tum ye batao tum Subah Kahan thi humne kitna dhoonda tumhe assembly se pehle Aur assembly mein bhi." Navya asked that girl in a concerned manner..!!
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" Arre haan wo Subah aankh hi nahi Khul Rahi thi Aur phir gaadi band pad gayi so I got late." Replied that girl.
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"Aacha chalo koi nahi.. Khair isse milo ye Humari nayi friend Nandini ; Aur Nandini ye Humari best friend Mukti. "
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Mukti and Nandini looked at each other ; smiled and greeted with a "hi" .
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MUKTI VARDHAN :- Mukti and Navya are best friends from class 9 when Navya first met Mukti. Mukti is a tomboyish girl and has got herself addicted with some bad habits of teenage ; drinking and smoking. As a person she is nice but not easily talks with everyone which makes people think she is arrogant and egoistic . Navya knows all secrets of her and keeps a regular check on her so that she doesn't lands up in any mess because of her habits and addictions. She too loves to play basketball and has opted for maths. Which means Manik and Mukti are classmates..

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asmi.6

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey :)

I just wanted to know have you already posted this story somewhere on Instagram ? I have read it there. I didn't know this one is also yours.

I'm already reading your current story love: the conquerer of hearts on Instagram. I've always been a silent reader and I was glad you started it here too so that more people can have the opportunity to read an awesome work of fiction !

Keep up the great work! :)

Loads of love. :)

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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: asmi.6
Hey :)
I just wanted to know have you already posted this story somewhere on Instagram ? I have read it there. I didn't know this one is also yours.
I'm already reading your current story love: the conquerer of hearts on Instagram. I've always been a silent reader and I was glad you started it here too so that more people can have the opportunity to read an awesome work of fiction !
Keep up the great work! :)
Loads of love. :)

Yes I did posted it on instagram..!! Thank you soo much for reading it n liking it..!!! Loads of love dear..!!! Thanks..!!

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mahima_jain

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nice start..a different one...looking forward to d story!! :) :)

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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part - 8

All three were about to leave the class. Navya and Mukti were walking togther and Nandini was behind them. Suddenly Nandini noticed the strap of her watch is open and it may fall from her wrist anytime. She started to tie it back again but was still walking looking down at her wrist. And then suddenly... "BANNNGGG"
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"Ahhh..." Nandini sighed..!!!
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Mukti and Navya turned back to see her..
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Nandini banged herself into a person who was hurriedly trying to enter her classroom and she could not see as her eyes were fixed on her watch.
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"I am sorry" ..!! Said the person
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Nandini who rubbing her forehead which got banged , turned towards the person and said " it's okay.."
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" ooohh Toofan mail ; bhaag Kahan raha hai..?? " Mukti asked the person , but that person didn't responded.. " Manikkk ; tumse hi Bol Rahi hoon .. Kya hua..?? " Mukti again asked..!
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"Kuch nahi to Harshad se kuch Kaam tha." Manik replied as he was searching for Harshad inside the class .
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Sooo that was the first meeting of our MANAN ... Did u guys expected a fight after that bang..?? Well not every story starts with a fight.. Some start on a good note too..!! N yes.. I told u na this Manik is different..!! He says sorry for his mistakes..!!

Nandini , Navya and Mukti became good friends. The trio met before their classes ; in the lunch break and after school gets over till the three headed towards their respective places..!! As Navya and Nandini spent more time togather ; they became more close and Navya got her second best friend . All went good.. Nandini was happy..!!
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This trio was formed after 2 months of the session got started. Lets see what was happening within that 2 months in the Maths section means in Manik's class or rather in Manik's life.
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After 15 days of the starting of the session.
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Manik and Cabir sat together and Dhruv with Shahid sat behind them. Shahid was there classmate since kindergarten so all four were pretty like a group but the ultimate one was only the trio .! Manik , Cabir and Dhruv.
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It was the first period and their class teacher came in. They all greeted her and she started with the attendance. After that she took out a slip from back of the attendance register and read from it .
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" Aliya Saxena " she read out a name.
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All the students were bit surprised to hear the new name. A girl stood up after the teacher announced the name and all heads turned towards the girl.
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" Manik Dekh na .. " Cabir poked him who did not turned back.
But Cabir kept on poking him and finally he too turned his head..
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His eyes were glued on her. He was constantly staring at her while she was giving answers to her teacher.
He came back from the strance only when Cabir gave a pat on his shoulder to listen to what the teacher was saying. But he kept on looking looking back after them and now.

Manik was fascinated with Alya's beauty. He developed a secret crush for her . It was something completely new for him ; a whole new feeling for him . He then and now kept looking at her. She too got indications that Manik was interested in her and which girl would mind that a guy like Manik Malhotra should not get interested in her. .
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As time and days passed by they both became a couple. Almost everyone knew about them.
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After almost 4 months from the start of session.
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Like usually Nandini and Navya were standing at their spot where they daily use to hangout during lunch break. They were waiting for Mukti. They saw her coming but also saw that she was disturbed..
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" Kya hua hai ..? Itna sada hua mooh kyun bana rakha hai.?" Navya asked her keeping her hand on her shoulder.
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"Yaar ye inn teachers ki problem ka Kya hai .? Kyun itna interfere karte hain ye students ki life mein.? We know what we have to do . Who are they to tell us what we should do and what not.? I am telling you they all are just jealous because ye log kuch nahi kar paaye and now when their students are doing all these right under their nose how can they tolerate it .."
Mukti who seemed to be really pissed off on something said in one go.
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"Chill chill..!! Relax..!! Hua Kya hai..?" Navya asked her.
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She then told the whole story to Them . Manik and Alya's relationship talk reached to one of the senior teacher of the faculty and then got spread among all the teachers. Their class teacher rose this topic in front of the class and scolded both Manik and Alya really badly and also instructed both of them to cal their respective parents.
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Mukti was the only girl Manik interacted with as a friend even before Alya . she got really upset from this. She saw Alya crying really badly and Manik was all helpless..!!
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After Mukti told them the whole drama of the class there was a silence . Neither of the three said anything. Just then Nandini saw Manik. She looked at him as if she was trying to read his face ; trying to read what's going on his mind. He was standing there with his trio and was obviously very disturbed. Nandini kept on looking at him . She felt the urge of going there and talk to him but she could not do so. But she kept on looking at him till the time the break got over.

Edited by Ragingleo - 10 years ago