Different Manan/ The Unspoken Feelings part 10 on pg 7;21/07

Hii guys I see a number of readers who desperately wait for manan story.
I have also tried one as writing was one thing I always wanted but never got chance of.
I hope my work entertain you guys.!!
Hope you all will like it..!!

Posting my first part with the hope of good response.!


It's a totally different story of Manan. Nothing related to ky2 except the characters.


Part 1 , character sketch & part 2 - page 1
Part 3 - page 2
Part 4 & 5 - page 3
Part 6 & 7 - page 4

PART -1


"I don't know anything... Tum chal Rahi ho matlab chal Rahi ho ; I don't want any excuses.." Priyali shouted from one end of the phone
"But I won't get permission" replied nandini bit irritated n in a low tone.

"Listen nandini u also know n I also know that no one will stop you from coming because you hardly go anywhere except the college so please stop giving this stupid excuse n if u wish I can talk to Aunty." Priyali very angrily shouted on nandini

Nandini had no other option other than to say yes n of course she knew it very well that no one will stop her from going so she agreed for the outing..!!

On the other hand Priyali kept her down n hugged Naina while shouting "yesss she is coming she is coming yesss... Finally ..!!!"

Both Naina n Priyali were really happy that Nandini said yes for the outing because they both knew whatever happend 7 months before was still there in her mind and she was get able to get normal although she tried her best to do so..
She then picked up her phone and dialled a number..
"Hello... Haan she said yes..! Wo aa Rahi hai finally. Theek hai ok.. Haan haan hum time par aa jayenge . Ok bye.. Arre thanks baad mein bolna pehle Kaam poora to hone do. Ok bye "

Ok soo before we move further let's see why Priyali and Naina are soo happy and why they forced Nandini to come for outing..!! And much before that let's see who all are they.!!


NANDINI MOORTHY - a simple college girl with a very helping nature and has lots of love for her family and friends but deep down she feels alone at times but never tells it to anyone.. She has a loving family ; her mom her dad n her loving brother rishab . Nandini's father was in Air Force as a doctor but is now retired n now works in a private hospital as a senior doctor . Her mom is punjabi n a typical Bollywood films lover. Her mom dad did a love marriage which fascinates nandini a lot..!! Rishab her brother is her life .. More than his actual mom nandini is a mom to him..!

PRIYALI MISHRA - A banker and Nandini's friend from class 11 and now her bestest friend..! They both understand each other so well that sometimes their other friends tease them by saying they should be lesbians and become a couple ..!!

NAINA RASTOGI - basically Naina n Priyali were best friends from childhood but unfortunately they did not got admission in same college in graduation. Naina and Nandini are friends because of Priyali but they both love n respect each other equally..!

PART - 2



Nandini dressed herself up and was looking at herself in mirror when suddenly she gazed at her face and started to recollect when did she last went for an outing with her friends. Suddenly a glimpse of a meeting came in front of her eyes where she was talking , laughing and clicking selfies wid someone. She closed her eye and held her head with both her hands.

" nahi nahi nahi... No Nandu u will not recollect those days ; nahi no..!! "

N again started adjusting her clothes and arranged her purse.

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After 10 mins door bell rang..! "Nanduuu Priyali hai..!!" Her mom said from outside.

" haanji madam ... Waahhh Kya baat hai on time .. Good" ; Priyali happily said .

" ohh madam I am always on time ; par tum ye batao achanak se ye outing ka program kyun..?? Aur tumhara office .? " Nandini asked

" aaj bunk maara..!!" Priyali exclaimed..

" whattt..??? Bunk..?? Really..?? Tum bunk karke ghoomne ja Rahi ho..?? Like seriously..? Hamesha Kehti ho ki bank waale kitna Kaam karate hain hamesha Khoon peete rehte hain and now instead of relaxing tumhe ghoomna hai .. What is wrong with you Priyali ..??? Nandini said in one gooo

Priyali :- "Tum apni bakwaas band karo Aur chalo bas late ho raha hai."

Nandini :- " par hum ja Kahan rahe hain..?"

Priyali :- "marine drive"

Nandini :- "whattt...?? Marine drive..?? But wahan kyun..?? I have never been there.. And it's too far."

Priyali :- "haan to hum aaj chalenge na waise bhi mausam dekho kitna aacha ho raha hai.. Romantic types . Wahan aise hi mausam to Maza aata hai. Aur drive Hume krna hai tumhe nhi to just relax n ab chalo "

Both nandini and Priyali after few mins left from the house on Priyali's scooty. After 10 mins of drive they reached Naina's house and gave a call on her cell from outside. She looked out from her window n disconnected the cal . Naina took her bag n scooty keys and came running down and after 5 mins both the Scooties were on road heading towards Marine Drive.


After around 45 mins of drive they reached Marine Drive and actually the weather was very very pleasant. Cool breeze was blowing softly making it a really romantic one.
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Girls reached there and started to roam about . Meanwhile Priyali took her cell out and typed a message.
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The three of them started to enjoy. Talking laughing clicking selfies and eating ice creams.
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Naina was standing by taking the support of wall while Nandini and Priyali stood facing Naina.
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"Nandu" Nandini heard her name and turned towards the direction of that voice only to find the biggest surprise of the day or rather her life.
She found a person standing right behind her looking straight into her eyes. She knew those eyes. She knew to read them ; she knew what they wanted to say. Those eyes were of a person she trusted the most in her life. The person she was the most happy with . The person who hurted her twice yet she never blamed him for anything .
"TUM" nandini replied shockingly and with anger in her voice.
She then turned towards her friends only to find them smiling but a bit worried too.

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