''MaNan FF - Rekindling The Romance'' Epilogue - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Please drop in comments, feedback,criticism..
I donno whether i've taken a good turn or just wasting time for empty audience..
..Gracias..
Edited by abnimathur9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
i really like ur story dr...
its different and iteresting.
waiting for ur update
take care...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
very nicely written...
pls do continue...dear...
loved it...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
beautifully penned...
loving ur story a lot...nice concept...rekindling the romance...!!!
continue soon...
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Chapter 7
''ek aur''
''are you planning to kill me"
at villa..
''This really getting lame jaan'', stop it..''
''Well just because your hands are cuffed, you can't call it lame, i very vividly remember, you loving this game of yours, a lottt''
''Yeah i still do, i just don't appreciate mine being the ones cuffed''
"Yeah, i can very well see..''
''waise, what for, what are you planning, what is going on in that crazy-paris brain of yours now''
''Tell you love me''She said slowly.
"I love you honey, why do you even doubt that?''
''Well your actions speak otherwise, you let me walk away the other night, you didn't speak up, you didn't come for me''
''Did you really think i was gonna let you go jaan, you are my life, i wouldn't spare anything to lose you in my life.No matter however you deny the fact, you are kinda stuck with me forever'', ''Dont ever forget that''
''Whoa, why didn't you say this before?''
''well, i thought, you might had your reasons and i sorta hadn't been myself so i shouldn't blame you for putting up me, I felt guilty, i thought i should give her what she wants if she really hates me that much,that night was a realitycheck and how in a few minutes my life faced an impending doom, i don't know, i was scared, you wouldn't know the amount of relief i got when you came next day''
''Manik, i love you so so much'', i'm sorry that i ever thought of breaking us.''
saying that she started kissing him in frenzy..
"Jaan, jaan, i would like touch you too, please'' he said gesturing to his handcuffs''
''Not yet Mr.Malhotra, not after that speech of yours'', I just understand something did affect you, but right now it doesn't matter, and we are back''
"I want some honest answers to these questions btw''
''Did you really think i was gonna leave you forever?''
''Well, i know you can't stay away from me, if you wanted to, i would have just dragged you by hair and tied you up until you agreed to, caveman style''
"whoa, scary image, anyways i know, you wouldn't dare to do that'' she giggled at his possessiveness..
"Why do i get images of you hitting Ronak and Sahil, the night i got trashed?''
''Well, i didn't touch them, why are you even friends with them?''
''Whoa, jealous, Mr.Manik Malhotra is jealous..Hahahahah..he is actually jealous of 2 gay guys hanging out with his wife..waise, they are like my best buddies'' so don't you dare speak ill of them okay..''
''How would i know they were gay, all i saw was my drunk wife dancing with 2 guys, my brain got triggered more like shutoff and pissed off''
''Haha, good to know that still your possessive side all your immature tactics are intact Manik''
''jaan, you just gotta provoke them, which ofcourse you excel at, because pissing me off is ur task no.1 in your mindbook na''
''not really''
So when are these coming off, ''you've done good so far, figure the keycode too'' and find me'' saying she threw her shirt on his face.
Sexcapades do really are limitless once you are in love.
Hours went in haze.. Their groans and moans filling the villa..
"Will you ever get bored of this?''
''No, will you?, dont dare you say ''yes'' mrs.Malhotra, i'll throw you right here and make you believe else wise..''
He filled 2 flutes of champagne..
He raised them, '' to us, to jaan for this wonderful trip, to god ofcourse for letting these two crazy souls find each other''
she giggled at his comment..
After keeping his glass, want some more? He asked..
I havent finished mine
well i do..
Saying he poured the foamy part of champagne and started sucking on her.. "Manik,stop it''
She pushed him away.
"Wow, and you doubted, i would get bored of you,this..''
Chase started and ended up in cuddling next morning to each other.
"Morning Jaan'', saying that he placed a kiss on her forehead..
"Whoa, Jaan, you are having a fever'',
''Yeah, i've been sick ever since the flight landed.. Flu i guess, have taken tablets'',no need to worry Manik''
"Its good to be precautious jaan, don't take things lightly, we'll run down to a hospital, it's better with the hell of upcoming MERS,SARS,H1N1 and all..''
''okay Manik,'' she didn't protest any further.
In few hours..
A young petite woman greeted me, ''Bon soir'',
Manik led her in.
She asked me what were my symptoms in a faint french accent, i told fever, nausea and vomiting.
She took my vitals.
She asked what my temperature was to Manik,
He said,''Environ, ah, trente-neuf ? Trente-neuf et demi?..
I didnt understand, i was just admiring my man speaking french.
"Is it possible that you are pregnant?'' she asked..
My eyes grew wider.
"maybe'', ''could be'', ''can be'', ''wait a second'', she recalled their lil rendezvous few weeks back in bathroom..
They both turned to themselves rendering the same memory..
"whoa'', thats big..''
anyways its better to take a pregnancy test..and check in if some problem is there. Saying she left.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Chapter 7 contd
''Well, i guess , now you really are stuck with me''
''stop kidding around jaan..what does it say.''
''It doesn't say anything Manik, it just shows + sign indicating a mini-monster growing inside me''.
"Well atleast there was a reason why my dramamine didn't work in plane. It was definitely not because of motion sickness i retched up..she laughed..''
Btw..
Just be expressive for once.
"No joking right jaan''
Nope.
Omfg
''we are gonna be parents?''
Yup
''for real''
yup.
We are gonna be the craziest parents alive.
Thats a truth.i gotta agree..
Lucky kid to have us. Monster dad who loves anything more than his own life if he just gives his heart to..
And the mom is no less, she just is a sunshine, snowflake, one of a kind.
Whoa..sucha big news.
I'm having goosebumps, see..he showed her like a kid..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
I am loving it..can't wait for another surprise.. Plz do update.
Della.
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Epilogue
Malhotra Villa
@ 7am
Entire house blasted with Led zeppelin's "Stairway to Heaven'',
it was like jurassic park in there.
Woofers sure did their magic amping the sound and vibrating the house almost giving the assumption of ''Earthquake''..
"Not again,Who does this'', Which 5 year old listens to these songs!, aiyappa!''
She peeped inside his room..
"'Gawd, Rey, What the ..'', get up, you've to get ready for school..''
''how can you even sleep with this noise around?''
when she turned to switch off his clock radio, he sprung up, and said..''Mom, don't you dare call this noise, and waise, today is tuesday so go to your room, it's ma Man's turn''
''Thank god'' ..She was giggling all the while and when reached their bedroom, she found him blissfully sleeping..
For a second, adoring his baby face, ''awww, so cute'', not for long honey..''
she took a pillow cushion and threw right at his face..
"W*F, jaan. Not again!''
''haha..your mini monster is waiting for you...go fast fast..it's your turn today..''
''No no no..jaan.. Please please.. Today..i've an important work and yday i had late-evening meeting, just for today''
''Nice try, Mr. MONSTER, i know you went for drinks with Dhruv and Cabir..'', so go..
He groaned and went ahead ..
"jaan''
''wat, wat , wat..''
nothin..you gave your morning cushion punch..but forgot my kiss.
"Go freshen yourself and that minimonster of yours'', then you'll get a biggg reward..''
Avni007 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Finally put you all outa misery..
Edited by abnimathur9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
I feel like this ended too soon.. but I still love it... great job!

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