Originally posted by: poopymaster
The problem is just that the writing has started to simmer out. It almost seems liek that passion and enthusiasm that the writers had initailly is starting to fade away. They seem to be writing it just for the purpose of writing instead of passion. And if they actually do have that passion and the problem is caused by internal issues, its not translating well on screen, and they really need to do soemthign about it. its unfair for kyy to take the toll of someone else's mistake.
Initially they had their main arches and plots all clearly planned and laid out. Every single scene in the show had a connection with one of the main archs.. but somewhere along the way, they just started adding more and more tracks according to their convenience instead of focusing on the main plots. If the plot and the characters are well sketched out, then the show should still be captivating, regardless of editing glitches.
One thing that got me hooked is they tackled issues the KYY style. These are the same people that set the benchmark for Cabir's openign out. In that single scne alone, you can tell SO MUCH about the characters. Manik love for cabir, cabir's fear, his insecurities. These writers are the same people that pulled at your heartstrings with their simple yet powerful dialogues and scenes, a good example being the first jeena jeena scene. It was simple, they were in a staricase, she was crying and he was comforting her. Nothing else, but the impact it had was immense. Whats missing is the deepness and subtility in the tracks.. no I don't want melodramatic Love confessions and everysingle bloody track being linked to MaNan and their love. Yes, they might be the main lead (lately even that is doubtful) but that doesn't mean you turn everysingle track int to love test for them. That isn't how it works. This is supposed to be Nandini's story, why drag his track so much?? Why butcher nandini's character just to show her trauma? you spent 200 episodes building this strong independent woman, and then the nest second, you turn her into this marysue who can't make up her mind. and then her SUDDEN recovery. And Ams today... where the hell did that come from.. seriously cvs. Yes I agree, we didn't like her because she was being irrational, but that doesn't mean that out-of-the-blue you make her all happy and accepting.. You could have showed that transition nicely. Same with nandhu. she suddenly went from depressed and scared to happy in a matter of 2 epis.. this kidnappign drama started nearly 2 months ago! You could have showed nandhini's progression slowly and logically which would have made it more impactful. Instead you left it at the last minute and rushed through :( Seriously, apart from the gay track, they've COMPLETELY RUINED every other "issue". navya's pregnancy- JOKE. neither cv's nor navya seem to care about that. CAMPAIGN: LEL an even bigger joke, but.. in nadus kidnappign trauma was supposed to be different. Navya n Mukti were secondary characters.. but in the kidnapping scenario, we are talking about the MAIN Lead here. They should have NAILED it.. they should have made explored her, given her scope, given her feelings and emotions and fears. Given her intelect and connect and her pursuit for hope.
But nope.. Made a joke of the issue as usual. Well Done CVs.